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Part 5 (Last Part)

He saw her standing in front of his door. Hair disoriented, face flushed and her breathing was rapid. Clearly she was anxious about something. 'you drove very fast and very recklessly , you know that?' she asked him coming inside. 'may be I wanted to be reckless' he replied back. 'why are you here Arohi?' 'I want to talk to you' 'about what? I think you have said what you wanted to earlier already?' 'You are talking about yesterday, yes I was carried away, now I am back to my senses, I am here to help you' 'yesterday? no what you said today, this evening, it is all clear now, I was right, this is how it is going to be' 'I dont know what I said Arjun, but all I know is this is not how it is going to be' 'then how will it be Arohi' he asked trying to be as composed as possible. He wanted to scream but he was not able to seeing Arohi like this, so close to him, in his house. 'tell me who she is Arjun, I will talk to her' 'what?' 'yes I will talk to her, I will convince her how good you are and what she will loose if she gives up on this second chance'. Arjun was completely shocked at what she was saying. He slumped down on his couch, his other leg did not support and he held on to the couch before dropping on it. By then arohi was at his side. She did not utter a word, while arjun sat watching her, she slowly sat down and put his leg on the step stool. While her fingers carressed his left foot from ankle to toe , her tears dropped on it.

'Arohi' he called out to her with a gentle voice, how wrongly he had interpreted her sentence, it was his own fear that made him think like that, the fear of losing her but now her carress said it all, that how much she cared for him. 'I wont let her say no this time to you Arjun, you deserve all the happiness' she said getting up. 'and why did I come to know about this now that she too lived in the same place as us? why did you not tell me earlier, this show how good a friend you found in me' she said with a shaky voice. He was perplexed, 'how did you..' he asked standing up again walking to her. 'Sahil told me, it is okay now you can tell me, whoever she is, I will convince her' 'why would you do that Arohi' 'because I care for you damn it' she almost yelled. 'because I ...' she held back, what is the use?. He came close to her 'because I know how deeply you love her, and she is so fortunate that you are still there for her' 'will she agree' he asked looking deep in her eyes. fixing her eyes to his she replied faintly 'she should' 'she will have to live with my disability all her life' 'that is not a disability, it is what you think, I think that is your strength'. Arjun heart filled with love that could not be explained , this is what he wanted to hear. 'will she love me like how I am' 'she should'. 'how will you talk to her?' he said with a smile. 'well I know all three ladies who lived at that time there and who got married 2 years back apart from me' his eyes glittered when she said me, but she missed the clue. 'Is it Chaya?' he nodded a no, 'Maya?' another no, 'Divya?' she said with a quivering voice, what if he said yes to that. he nodded a no again. 'who else then...' she said as her heart beat faster and butterflies filled her stomach. She had an intuition and it was giving her a spin.

He moved his hands up her cheeks to wipe the tears that had flown down earlier. 'you missed mentioning yourself' he said slowly catching her eyes in his, her eyes widened as the words sank in, 'what are you saying' 'I am saying, her name is Arohi, will you talk to her' , seeing her in disbelief he continued 'I found the girl of my dreams two years ago, she had the attitude that she owned the colony, she loved the elders as much as she loved the kids, they loved her back too, when all of them could fall in love with you, how cannot I? , I too fell hopelessly in love' he stopped, and whispered to the shocked Arohi, 'with you' . A shiver passed through her when he said that, She involuntarily took his shoulders for support, while he cradled his hand around her back lightly. They were immersed deep in the thoughts and talk that they were oblivious to the proximity. 'before I could tell you, you got married and had left the place, how I spent the time there on only I know, I was lonely , I was empty. and then you walked in again. You have no idea how happy I felt when I saw you, how sad I felt when I knew you were unhappy. Then I slowly started finding my happiness again. I thought I saw that you too had started to like me. I felt that in your eyes. But I was scared I might be wrong, I was scared of falling down the second time, earlier today when your cousin suggested my name you stopped at not, I inferred it wrongly, I thought you dont think of me suitable to you, I was broke, hurt. But I was wrong, now I am not worried anymore, If I dont tell you now that will be wrong, after seeing how much you care for me, you have every right to know, now even if you are not ready I will be contented that at least you know who it is and how special she is to me'. He waited for an answer. Arohi took everything in with shock. She regained her senses finally and moved away from him.

Arjun watched her go towards the door, arohi dont leave please, he silently asked her. As she took her steps she recalled everything he said. It had been her all along, it was she with whom he was so deeply in love, so much that he had no intention of moving on even when he knew she was not going to be his, even after she came back he did not make a move, he was a good friend, a good listener, never wanted to take advantage of her. All that love she saw in his eyes was for her?. and how it had deepened ever since he knew she was single, how he had been protective about her, how sad he had become thinking she would reject him, he lived for her? Even when she fell deep in love with him and wanted to express, he stood by his words, he said there cannot be another woman in his life. there cannot be?, there cannot be anyone else in his life other than her?.

She left out a cry which was more like a laugh, tears sprang down when she turned back and almost ran to him. 'Arjun I ... I was going to say that you were not ready to love anyone else' she said not knowing how to frame her words. 'that is right Arohi, I am not ready to love anyone else, there cannot be anyone else in my life, it can be only and only you' his eyes were moist and before she could respond he pulled her and kissed her. She pressed herself closer. Pulling her by the waist, he kissed her showing all his love. He kissed her tears. She looked at his face and said ' I too Love you, as deep as you love me'. 'oh I love you Arohi, I love you so so much' he said kissing her again as if he will not get the chance again. Then they became aware of how close they were and that they had both confessed their feelings and that they were in the arms of their lover. He slowed down and the kissed slowly and liesurely. She flet her body shiver under his touch. Her heart leap at his kiss. When they pulled apart , her face was all red. She had no idea that his embrace would be so warm and the passion filling his eyes in place of love would kill her. She hid her face in his chest which was beating faster than she imagined. He looked so calm and quiet usually, but now he looked like he could consume her in his love. He remembered he had forgotten to say something 'Welcome Home Arohi' he said holding her tight, 'Happy Valentine's day' he added. She wished the same with her hug. She tightned her grip around him, lest she looses him if she leaves. It was raining again. The season had changed. Autumn had gone , the rainy season, the season of love, had arrived to fill the barren trees with life again. Akhir Pathjad ke baad Saawan ko aana hi tha.

It was a festive season afterwards. Friends and Family came together to see them get married. Sahil and Shefali were the happiest of all.

That night as he entered their room. She was sitting on the bed waiting for him. He entered and closed the door. Arjun acted like he was going to fall she got down and ran to him to hold, as soon as she reached he picked her up, an action she did not expect. 'Arjun you dont have to' 'sshhh, I got this chance after a long wait, I dont want to miss it', He walked with her in his hands with his eyes fixed on her face all the time and at one point she had to cover her face with both her palms. He set her down at the foot of the bed and before she could flee from there caught hold of her, instantly burying his face in the nook of her neck and shoulder, making her rest the back of her head where his shoulders and chest met. 'I love you Arohi, I love you, you have no idea how much' she had and idea, she turned around and said 'I love you too, more than you do' 'really?' 'yes' 'convince me' 'huh?' 'I will show you how much I love you, and you show me the same, then we will decide who loves whom more'. This sudden change in him was also unexpected. To prove his words he kissed her. Kissed her deep, so deep that their souls met, their hearts beat together, their mind was numb. when he was done she had to gather all her wits to think again, 'your turn' 'what? this is not how we should prove' 'this is the only way you can prove' 'I know what you are doing' 'you do? good, it makes it easy' 'haww I didnot know this Arjun before' 'well there is a surprise hidden in everyone, now you surprise me'. She had to prove her love and with that determination she kissed him back. The way he did, when she wanted to pull back , she could not, he had taken it to the next level, from where their return was almost impossible. Their perfumes mingled, their souls united, their bodies found eternal bliss, their love surpassed all bounds. They found the pinnacle of love together. There were tears in her eyes and content in his, there were dreams in her eyes and assuarance in his. There was his life in her eyes and her breath in his.

The next morning arjun felt something at his feet, It was Arohi, She was awake and had his feet in her hands, she was caressing it. He put both his hands under his head and watched her. Then he moved his hands towards her legs that were stretched in his direction. He tickled her feet. She moved them, he moved his hands slowly up her leg, 'oi' she said pulling it again. But she wasnt ready to leave his. He made his two fingers walk to her feet again to climb up. She bent down and kissed. He tought he felt something in his lifeless foot when her lips touched it. As love filled his heart once more, he stretched his long hands and pulled her to him, to return the kiss. 'Is this all a dream' he asked her, 'please dont tell me this was all a dream, I will die that instant if it turns out to be'. He put a finger on to her lips 'no it isnt dream. but it sure is a Miracle' 'yes and it is destiny' she said, falling once again into his warm embrace.

With her love and care may be one day she might make what he felt in his foot real, you never know, Miracles happen.

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Few years later, Arjun was driving his car back home. Arohi sitting next to him. Their kids sitting in the back seats. Arohi turned around and gave them both a flying kiss while they were busy looking at the new books they got. The roads were fairly empty. Just then a car jumped the red signal and sped up the road perpendicular to them. Arohi immediately looked at Arjun. He sighed and said 'allright' and turned left following that car. The car had pulled in a parking lot of a store. Arjun followed and parked his car close by. Turning off, he leaned back and relaxed watching arohi get down and walk to that person. He watched the argument go on, with Arohi moving her hands and face indicating how intense her lecture was. After 5 ' 10 minutes he saw that person walking in frustration and heard him say '... she thinks she owns Delhi, but baapre I will never speed up again, who wants to fall prey to her'. Arjun chuckled.

Watching Arohi walk to the car he thought 'of course Delhi is hers, and she is mine'.

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Thank you all for the love and support. The real life story that has inspired me to write this ss is mentioned in my next post after this. :). Accha part 4 and 5 are my Valentine gifts to all the readers. Happy Valentine's Day. ❤️
Edited by kavyasam - 13 years ago
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Part 4

It was amazing yeah I remember that Asha Parekh's Song... its an amazing song... completely suited Arohi...Awww Arohi would dress up and go for Arjun.. so sweet...Wow Arjun got a feeling that she likes him..I liked their talk in the car both were telling their feeling for each other but at the same time they were oblivious to the fact...i liked the talk with Sahil he said the right things...
Ohh god those 3 simultaneous things why did it had to happen finally Arjun was going to tell her his feelings.. wow Sahil is truely a good friend he's done really a nice thing by telling Arohi all this..

Part 5

Awww it was superb...
Good that Arohi thought of going to his house... I loved their talks.. the confusion and the clearing the Misunderstanding by confessing the love... it was amazing...
Akhir Pathjad ke baad Saawan ko aana hi tha. Very true...
'of course Delhi is hers, and she is mine'. Aye haye...

I loved the SS... It was amazing!!!
Arjun's Love was very strong... it was soo strong that Arohi had to come to him...
Aur waise bhi Arjun-Arohi ek dusre ke liye bane hai inhe toh milna hi tha..
I'm all smiles now... it was a perfect Valentines Give... Thanks...



Edited by veds_6791 - 13 years ago
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Note :
So like I said this story was inspired by the real life story which happened about 10-12 years ago. In real life Arjun and Arohi did not know each other earlier. She got married , an arranged marraige, and like anyone else she had lot of dreams about her married life. But she came to know that her husband already had a lover and he married her for the sake of his family. He told her to let him stay with his girlfriend. She did not want that. She wanted a normal life and asked him to leave that girl. He was not ready. Families got involved. Inlaws tried to emotionally blackmail her. She was adamant. Then she demanded a divorce and got it. It was difficult since her parent's place was small town and everyone knew everyone. Still her family supported her. And a year later her parents wanted her to marry again. even against her protest they started looking a suitable groom for her. One person, he had a limped leg, I dont remember the reason for that, he wanted to marry a widow or divorcee or girl from very poor family, because the girl would also be compromising to marry him.
they got a proposal from that person's relatives. First the girl's parents did not want that to go ahead since he was physically disabled. But she thought if he can compromise then she can too. and they got married. they have 2 kids now. and are leading their simple and steady life happily.
Edited by kavyasam - 13 years ago
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Okey, Now Finally I Edit My Res.. Sorry Yaar.. I Had Noo Time, School Suckss :D
Comment For Part4:
For The First Time, Arjun Watched Her In Another Way. :) WOOW :D I Looved It How You Described Him In This Situation :) This Was Really Fab.
I Love It How Loyal Arjun Was, When Arohi Aksed Him This Questions.. He Is Really Amaazing.. And Felt Actually Sad For Arohii :) And I Loove Sahil For Sending Arjun To Arohi :))..
Really This Part Is Amaazing.. Alsoo I Loove It How You Described The Scene, Where Arjun Misunderstood Arohii. Really Kavyaa Youre Awsoome. :))
Comment For Part5:
OMG I Looove The Start Of This Update :)) How Suuuperb Is Arohi.. She Is Awsoome.. "I Want To Talk To Her" :)) Loove Her :))
I Really Love It Hoow Arjun Said, That She Is The Girll.. Really Suuuperb :)) And This Is My Fav Part.. Where Arohi Realized, That All The Love Arjun Has In This Eyes Was For Her :) This Was Damn Amaazing..
And The Last Two Paragraphes Where Soo Cute And PERFEECT :)
Really Happy Ending :)) This Was Soo Extremly Amaaazing SS :)
Really Kavyaa Thank Youu SOoo Much For This Amaaazing, Awsoome, Gorgeous, Suuuperb, Perfeect, Fab, Outstanding, Breathtaking Concept :))
And Wooow I Loove The Note.. :) I Really Loove It :))
Thanks Again :))
Shilpa :O)
Edited by ShilpaLuvsKMH - 13 years ago
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kavya, part 4 was super duper - my heart is beating so fast - i need to know whats next kavya - iam pretty tensed - how is this going to end - its valentine day kavya - a day of love, romance, hope u remember that- saawan aaajaayegaa naaah -
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Posting the next update in reserved spot priya :). couple more minutes. it is valentine gift to all from me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u thank u kavya - will wait for it - take ur time dear
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omg!! then me resing too :D
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updated fingers crossed. will edit note after a while. pehle PMs send karke aati hoon.
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part 5 is up lalala!!

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