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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

So for new fan fic it looks like MuraadlovesDD is in the lead followed by Attifa in second...

Here are their ideas again:
MuraadlovesDD:
"maan belongs to royal family i mean raja types geet is simple girl geet ko dekthe hi usse shadi kana chaye aur uski shadi kidnap kare"
Attifa:
Devil in Disguise
Out of those two which would you guys want to read up on?

Also, Saumiya, Nauka, Tamanna, Shalini, Ritzy, Doublecross, nillu and everyone else as well...thank you so very much for your ideas and I am keeping the list with me for the future...in future I will write story on Maaneet based on your guys ideas😳🤗
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 76

Maan paced back and fourth in the living room as he waited for Geet to come down. Today was valentine's day and he planned everything for them today. He looked at the time...half hour had passed and she still was not down...he was about to go up the stairs when he saw Geet coming down the stairs...he looked at her from top to bottom...she was feeling shy...he had gifted her a red dress that went up to her knees..he could tell that she was uncomfortable in the dress and especially the way he was ogling at her...he clears his throat and looks away...

He brings out his hand for Geet..she slowly places her hand in his..he goes on his one knee and puts a ring on her finger and kisses her palm..."happy valentines day Geet...be mine forever..." He stands up...

"Happy valentines day Maan...I only belong to you no one else..."

Maan: Shall we go then?

Geet; where are we going?

Maan: If I tell you then it wouldn't be a surprise now would it? (he smirks...)

Geet sat in the car as Maan drove to their destination...she kept pulling her dress down to her knees...it was a simple red dress with sequenced straps that went around her neck..her bust are was covered with beads and sequences...she looks at the ring that Maan presented her today with happiness but then she frowns...she didn't give anything to him today...she hits her head for not thinking about him about what he might want...Maan stops the car and looks at her...he takes out a blind fold...

"Maan what is this?"

Maan: You cannot see from here on wards..I want it to be a surprised...

"but..."

Maan (leans toward her and turns her around...he puts her hair to one side while he puts on the blindfold...) don't worry I won't do anything to you...yet...(he whispers in her ear and kisses her cheek smirking...Geet felt the car moving again...she puts her hand on top of her blindfold to put it down when Maan held her hand...)

No not yet...I will take it out...(she nodes her head yes...he holds her hand tightly while driving and using her hand to shift the gear...once in a while he would graze her hand making her inhale her breath...) breath Geet...(she breaths and looks his way shocked..he laughs...she turns her head to the window side being embarrassed)

After few minutes, Maan stops the car...he gets out of the car..Geet puts her hand to the driver side to feel him but it was empty...she panics..."Maan..." The side of her car door opens up...she leans back toward the driver side not knowing who it is..."Maan..."

"Sshhh Geet its me...sorry I shouldn't have left you alone..." (he holds her hand and slowly brings her out of the car..he hugs her...Geet smells his perfume and relaxes..it was her Maan...he rubs her back soothing her...) "Are you okay?"

Geet; yeah now I am...can I take it off now?

Maan: Now when you say that...what do you mean? Take what off? Your blindfold or your..." (he runs his fingers on her dress..she hits his chest and turns around shivering...he turns her around and holds her hand...) Okay lets do one step at a time shall we...

Geet knew that he was smirking...he loved teasing her..sometimes she wished that he was a shetan...at least she could handle his anger..his teasing seem to get worse day by day..she prayed to her Babaji to give her some strength for tonight...Maan tugs on her hand...) What are you thinking about?

She nodes her head no for nothing...Geet starts walking following Maan...after few steps he stops...he goes behind her and slowly takes her blind fold off...it took a minute for Geet to adjust her eyes to her surroundings...she looks at the view in amazement...in front of her was a boat decorated with red rose petals from top to bottom...the rails to get on the boat had pink and white rose garland wrapped around and on the floor was various color flower petals making a pathway to the boat...he bows in front of her...

"After you...madam"

She slowly walks toward the boat..Maan stayed close behind her in case if she trips...she holds on to the rails as she walks..Maan puts his hand on top of her hers as they walk slowly and very close together toward the boat...Maan stands in front of her before she could place her foot on the boat...she looks at him confused..he extends his hand for her to take...she smiles...very slowly he lifts her to the boat...Geet looks around with happiness but she noticed that no staff was on the boat...he hugs her from behind knowing what she is thinking...

"Didn't want anyone to come between us today...so I will be your host for tonight...would you like the captain steer the boat?"

she nodes her head yes...he leads her to the control room...she stands behind the steering wheel while Maan stands right behind her...both puts their hand on the wheel and turns on the boat...he stops the boat in the middle of the ocean...he then leads her to the center of the boat and puts on a soft background music...)

may I have a dance"

"yes you may..."

He puts his arm around her waist while she wraps her arms around his neck..both move slowly to the music looking into each other's eyes...

"how did you like your surprise?"

"I loved it...but..."

Maan (frowns when he saw a sad face...) But what...

Geet; but I didn't give you anything today...you did so much for me while I did nothing...

Maan (stops dancing) you are right you didn't do anything for me...that is not fair

Geet: I know..am sorry...

Maan: Nope sorry won't do...I want something from you then..

Geet (kisses his cheek) anything for you

Maan: Okay then I want a promise from you

Geet (confused) promise?

Maan: Yes..I want you to promise me that...(he caresses her cheek) we will grow old together...that everyday I would wake up looking at a smile on your face, that everyday we would spend time together, be with our kids, be a complete family...

Geet (has tears in her eyes) yes..I promise...(he hugs her..)

Maan picks her up and brings her to a table...where food was already awaiting for them...he knew that due to her pregnancy she would not eat anything with meat so he cooked all vegetarian dishes for her...he sits on the chair opposite of him...Geet stands up and walks toward him...she sits on his lap...he wraps his arm around her waist...

"I like eating like this by sitting on your lap.." Geet said..."Can I feed you today?"

Maan: You don't have to ask...(he pecks on her lips...she takes a spoon full of food for Maan..as she was serving him food..he was playing with her senses...he would caress her back making her stop midway...she now knew that she made a big mistake of this..now she won't be able to get up unless he decides...she looks at him accusingly...he smirks) what happened? Come on Geet feed me...I am waiting...

she slowly brings the spoon toward his face with shaky hands...Maan's hand that was around her waist..slowly moves up right below her curves caressing just below it...she drops the spoon on herself and stands up...

"woh..uhhh..."

Maan: its okay the bathroom is down the stairs...

She quickly runs downstairs unable to meet his eyes...she runs to the bathroom closing the door behind her cursing at herself for sitting on his lap knowing what kind of shetan he is..."look you ruined the dress now...haye rabba woh kiya kahe ge...itni expensive dress and you ruined it...mama papa were right..they don't give me anything expensive on purpose knowing how clumsy I can get...now what will I tell Maan?

He must be so mad at me for wasting his money like this...but then what was the need for him to give you such expensive dress? Something simple would've worked too..." She quickly cleaned up the mess..now the dress had a big wet spot at the bottom..."Great good job Geet...badi ayi thi romantic banne ki..this is your punishment now..." She takes a deep breath before opening the door..the minute she opened the door Maan was standing right there with his hands on either side of the door looking at her...she looks down

"woh am sorry for ruining this dress.." He steps closer to her..."I know it was expensive and I ruined it..."

Maan: Geet nothing is expensive for you...money doesn't matter to me...(he looks at the wet spot...Geet notices his eyes...) hmm your dress is wet...I will have to do something about that...wait right here...(he goes to the closet taking out something..he gives it to Geet..) Now wear this new dress and come out in five minutes...okay..(he says in a stern voice..she quickly nodes her head closing the door..) Geet your five minutes are up..where are you?

"Woh...uh..." (She couldn't speak...she just kept looking at the mirror...he didn't give her another dress it was a night dress... complete see through...only her curves were hidden behind the thick padding...she looks toward the door when she heard it knock...)

"Geet are you okay?"

"ji..." she squeals like a chipmunk...

"Then come on out..."

"woh mein...uhh its ripped...so I can't..."

"Okay then open the door and let me see..."

"what uhh no...its okay.."

"Geet if you don't open this door then I will break it down...I am counting to three...one..." (Geet looked around trying to find a way out...her heart beating faster and faster...) "two..." (she goes toward the door but then walks back feeling nervous...) okay then three...

Maan stops midway when he saw the door open..Geet stood there with her bathrobe on looking down..he comes closer to her...) did you not like the dress I gave you? (he winks at her...she pushes him away to move but Maan corners her against the wall...his hand go down to the waist where the knot was...she holds his hand to stop him...) I want to see how the dress looks on you...won't you let me see...(she nodes her head no...) really? Geet you know I can be a shetan when I want to be...and I will see the dress no matter what...

He picks her up and lies her down on the bed...he kisses her neck biting it until she called out his name in pain and pleasure..."I love my name from your mouth...it sounds so sweet..." his hands again goes to the knot on the bathrobe..she tries to stop him again but this time he pulls the bathrobe ...opening it..he then uses the knot that was attached to the robe to tie her hands...she kept her eyes closed when she felt sudden chill around her...

Maan opens her bathroom fully exposing her night dress...she gasps when she felt him putting his manhood right near her feminine part letting her know what he intended to do...he kisses her neck, moving down in between her cleavage...he slightly bites her on her curves through the materials...he rips her dress apart bearing her just in her underwear...he sucks on her curves slowly making her moan with pleasure..he removes her pantie while rubbing his hands in her inner thigh..he enters inside her with his fingers...

"please Maan.." she screams when she felt her first orgasm hit her...

"this is just the beginning babe..."

He slowly withdraws his fingers and enters her...she sits up holding on to him for support as he moves back and fourth...

"Always be with me Geet..."

"I will..."

"happy valentines day.."

"I love you Maan..."
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWSEM PART MANEET ON BOAT celebrating velentines day and i love muraadloves idea
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
no words to describe dear
superb

ehy dear
why u wont show that this time geet isa a gilr how wont smile
and she is enigma
maan want to find what is abt her?
and abt the character MSK a tycoon
and geet too
or may be geet works for him
he should be same msk as serila
but he wann to know what is the reason of geet like this dear
may be u ll be the best who can do thhs
waiitng for next prt dear
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shinonome

Gosh I didn't get any pms from you for some time and. Ow I find that this is about to finish... Anyways good job and would love to read it to the epilogue

I only send out pms once a week now...have you added me as a buddy?
yeah this is ending becuz I don't want to drag the story and its better that I end it now then l8r when it gets boring😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it... Passionate, thoughtful and loving.. That is what my valentine dream it:D sorry for not commenting earlier but I been so busy with uni dat I have hardly had time... Amazing x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it that was so hot maan is so sweet and caring but still a shetan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dat was an awesum surprise for geet..
Loved the promise part made by maan..
and about the story i vl go with the first one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
very romantic update...

this cruel shetan is turning into a naughty shetan...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: teddy500

hello,


me teddy500.

You still haven't commented on my works yaar, not fair.

I just read part 76.

Awsum part, loved it too much.

Want another chapter full of maaneet love only.

And yes, about your new fic!

Well! me would like you to take the devil in disguise lead and write a dark love story of maan and geet.

Maan should be a filthy rich and powerful businessman who must marry a simple and innocent geet, and our geet should also be a rich widower's only kid.

Their marriage should be based on a business merger deal.

Then the love shall blossom well enough.

Please consider my request if you see it's worth it.

Ciao,

take care,

teddy500


Hey teddy sorry for the delay but I just caught up on ur works and amde a comment..love both of hte fan fics...😳😳
hnmm nice idea as well...i like it...

so many things to go thru😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
ufff it was so romantic
lol shetan was in full preparation
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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