'Zameen-O-Asmaan': Lines (Incld. translation)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone,

I've often seen UV and M's relationship in light of zameen (earth - M), and the asmaan (skies - UV). They are inseperable, yet are miles apart. In that light, a few thoughts came to me, and I've typed them below.

Woh zameen hai, main asmaan,
Jahan zikar hota hai uska, main bhi toh hoon wahan.

Woh jalti hai toh main barasta hoon,
Woh ubhalti hai, main chamakta hoon.

Izat se sar agar uspar jhukta hai,
Toh bandagi se duaon ka rukh mujh par bhi barasta hai.

Kehte hai ke hum kabhi mil nahin payenge,
Ye bhi toh sach hai lekin,
... door reh kar bhi, door nahin reh payenge.


(c) desi chic/ Neetu _ india-forums.com (Jan. 2012)

Rough Translation

She is the earth, I am the skies,
Whenever she is mentioned, my presence is inevitable.

When she is set ablaze, I burst through the clouds,
When she floods, I scatter with [sun] light.

If the devotee's head touches upon her skin in respect,
Then too, the direction heartfelt prayers comes finds my way.

They say that we will never meet,
But it is just as true however,
... that distances can never close the bond between us.

(c) desi chic/ Neetu _ india-forums.com (Jan. 2012)

* The reason I include, (c) in there is because I've come across my work with someone else's name on it in other forums. Please do not copy/re-post without consent.

Cheers,
dc
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Eternized_Blues thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poetry didi,,,,i dont understand anything...as usual...but i think they will be fab
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Rapchik - thank you😊

@ Amnu - uff, some things just don't change na?!😆 Ruk, I'll add a translation bit...

@ Pranita - 😳 Thank you!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: desi chic

@ Rapchik - thank you😊

@ Amnu - uff, some things just don't change na?!😆 Ruk, I'll add a translation bit...

@ Pranita - 😳 Thank you!

Cheers,
dc

how comforting it is that some things never change😉...well di tht miracle is yet to happen which will start making me understand poetrythank you for the translation
desi chic thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^ Speaking of never changing - have you seen my siggy?😳

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^^yup di i have...u really need a new pic...
desi chic thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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^^ Seriously? 😲 I think of it as evergreen...

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bohat he khubsoorat hain. :)
Defining their realtion perfectly.
Aur zarur likhiye gha. :)

.SilentPrincess

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Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Bohat he khubsoorat hain. :)
Defining their realtion perfectly.
Aur zarur likhiye gha. :)

.SilentPrincess



Shukriya, mehrbaani.😳

Cheers,
dc

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