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Sunaina Mitra

@sunaina02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Can you pleaaase do me a favour and come out of hiding? Thats beautifully written! I am sorry which is this show? I watch a few here and there - whatever catches my fancy. Am not a regular.

Thanks for liking my write-up .

I am a very vocal member in the forum and ahave equal number of people loving me and hating me for what I write

But yes , I have never tried to write any FF for IPKKND . THough I have two unfinished FFs of Left Right Left and one of Baat Humari Pukki hai (BHPH) . In BHPH Barun was playing the role of the male lead - Shravan. It is a story how the leads had a contract marriage and then the husband gradually fell in love with the wife . For the wife it was sort of love at first sight. If you like Barun Sobti and not just ASR then you may like it . A channel called thespecialgal has all the episodes .

When I write a ff - I write it as if will be shown on Indian TV , therefore all bedroom scenes will be more of imagination than graphical .

If i get readers like you - may be I will start writing again .

In fact I once started one like this ...

Mrs Khushi Singh Raizada

The Raizada empire depends on her .

Since that fatal day she had held it all together and never let it fall apart. She bowed down and took over the golden mantle with determination written all over her ashened face. She knew she had to continue the work.

Since last twelve years she has continued to rule the empire as he had planned and dreamt it . She knew to which direction every single step should be taken, which deal was to be accepted and which not , whicch factory to demolish and which one to build.

Today , standing in front of the garlanded photo she reminisced the twelve years with him and the twelve - without.

Today the day has come to pass the mantle to Arjun Singh Raizada.

So that she can devote herself to do what she had wanted to do since last 12 years and never had the time.

To revisit each and every moment of their epical love-story ...

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

@ TM - I want to salute your guts.A very true n honest Post. I totally agree with you.

@ Sunaina - Hey ! Very interesting Story Plot dear. Please,continue It. We'll love to read it. I am also a part of writer Group [S3J] and I really believe that Strong story content is Main USP of any FF/SS.

But,Problem is some writers can't take criticism in Positive way.I read some replies here...amazingly...They want appreciation for 'That' content. from every1.😲 Dude ! Its not matter of individual personal choice...Here,We are discussing such type of content in a social Forum.

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Sorry Double Post.😳

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Why are we talking as if we are living in some puritanical Victorian age?
Sex or love making between two consenting non-adulterous adults is perfectly normal and fine. Why are we trying to Demon-ize the writers who write stories that involve, yes, Sex and descriptions of act of SEX.

There is no need to police anyone, not in the least by any of the readers of the forum. Now IF has rules regarding posting sexually explicit material, then let the developers of the forum decide how to handle the FF/OS. The writers are making their choices as we speak. They are removing their works from IF. So relax, this little corner of web will soon be sex-free. We can all go back to talking about love scenes in hushed and veiled tones.

You do have a choice, just like you dont read or comment on certain topics, dont read and comment on other shows in the forum, dont read and comment on FF/OS you dont like.

Not everyone has same sensibilities when it comes to sexual literature. But for heaven's sake, stop throwing Holier than Thou claims. You are no better than those writers and those writers are no worse than you. They are all human beings with a desire to express themselves, some do via writing, some do via reading. Please don't try to make them look like a bunch of pariahs who suddenly invaded this earth from outer space. Please don't.

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Sunaina Mitra

@sunaina02

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: serialjunkie
Why are we talking as if we are living in some puritanical Victorian age?
Sex or love making between two consenting non-adulterous adults is perfectly normal and fine. Why are we trying to Demon-ize the writers who write stories that involve, yes, Sex and descriptions of act of SEX.

There is no need to police anyone, not in the least by any of the readers of the forum. Now IF has rules regarding posting sexually explicit material, then let the developers of the forum decide how to handle the FF/OS. The writers are making their choices as we speak. They are removing their works from IF. So relax, this little corner of web will soon be sex-free. We can all go back to talking about love scenes in hushed and veiled tones.

You do have a choice, just like you dont read or comment on certain topics, dont read and comment on other shows in the forum, dont read and comment on FF/OS you dont like.

Not everyone has same sensibilities when it comes to sexual literature. But for heaven's sake, stop throwing Holier than Thou claims. You are no better than those writers and those writers are no worse than you. They are all human beings with a desire to express themselves, some do via writing, some do via reading. Please don't try to make them look like a bunch of pariahs who suddenly invaded this earth from outer space. Please don't.

Smriti I understand what you are saying and in a way agree with you. But similar to the topic maker i do not like reading ( and do not read) explicit sexual scene descriptions for TV characters because when I think of ASR or KHushi - BArun and Sanaya comes to my mind, and excuse me, I shudder imagining them in such positions 🤢 It is just my personal choice , therefore I avoid reading FFs and OS s

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

I'm writing this solely from the point of view of an adult FF fan.

I'll just say that it's easy to say read something if you want, don't read something if you don't, but one needs to understand something clearly. Many are questioning "the need" to have the sex scenes so explicitly described repeatedly, in an otherwise fantastic FF.

I love FFs that are well-written and depict love and emotions superbly amongst the characters. I'm a sucker for romance, but I draw the line at torrid sex, especially if they hold no substance to the storyline.

I know for a fact that sex does not need to be described explicitly for people to know that the characters are madly in love and can't keep their hands off each other.

My first thought when a whole update contained only sex was- was it really necessary? Where's the story? I missed the amazing story about the two characters. Do I dump that beautiful story because of the sex? No. I would read the next chapter.

But, I would hope and pray that the writer will not drown her beautiful story by highlighting the explicit sex scenes... especially if they were not required- we already know that they were in love, they had mind-blowing sex, it was fantastic, they had a great time, they can't keep their hands off each other, etc, etc... Do we need to know the details of the various positions they did "it"? Do we need to know what they did to each others sexual parts- other than what's usually required?

I had all these in mind.

Was I wrong?

Am I a prude who doesn't understand the feelings of a writer?

I am a writer myself. I see the point of a writer, but I understand that there are many ways to describe things and we have to be prudent when chosing the correct one. Sometimes, too much of something can overwhelm, and so the need for balance.

Writers can be mature in their content, but they also need to be even more mature in their thinking... and they most definitely need to see the bigger picture.

Stopping their FFs as a protest will only result in readership loss. Readers lose interest and forget the half-done stories, no matter how beautiful they were. The FFs are a part of IF- IPKKND and shifting them will not have the same readership following.

I will not be requesting for updates from FF writers who have stopped their updates abruptly and have disappointed their fans in the process. Difficult as it may be, I will consider the stories rudely discontinued.

Just my thoughts. Sorry to offend.

Edited by Chimpsy - 13 years ago

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER
I agree, IPKKND Is a very soft n cute Love story...but,surprisingly...how can any1 imagine ARNAV-KHUSHI in IMRAN HASHMI-MALLIKA SHERAWAT type scene...??😲😕

Love making scene is not bad...(If described it beautifully,with a very mannered way😳) but,some time they crossed the line. And a very Funny excuse is... " If you don't like mature contents in a FF, then don't read it ", Definitely,why not??😊 But,my question is... Are I-F allowing 'That' type of 'Mature' content ??😕 If,Yes...then Please guys write more n more...with more passions.😆

Well said Bro. And funny part is... They don't want to read any thing against such type of Content. Yaar ! Koi zabardasti hai Kya...?? We have to right for discussing our view. If,any1 don't want to read criticism...Its not our problem.😳Definitely,they are very talented...but,here we are only talking about such particular 'Over' scenes not their writing talent.

Edited by Joseph_A - 13 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Chimpsy

I'm writing this solely from the point of view of an adult FF fan.

I'll just say that it's easy to say read something if you want, don't read something if you don't, but one needs to understand something clearly. Many are questioning "the need" to have the sex scenes so explicitly described repeatedly, in an otherwise fantastic FF.

I love FFs that are well-written and depict love and emotions superbly amongst the characters. I'm a sucker for romance, but I draw the line at torrid sex, especially if they hold no substance to the storyline.

I know for a fact that sex does not need to be described explicitly for people to know that the characters are madly in love and can't keep their hands off each other.

My first thought when a whole update contained only sex was- was it really necessary? Where's the story? I missed the amazing story about the two characters. Do I dump that beautiful story because of the sex? No. I would read the next chapter.

But, I would hope and pray that the writer will not drown her beautiful story by highlighting the explicit sex scenes... especially if they were not required- we already know that they were in love, they had mind-blowing sex, it was fantastic, they had a great time, they can't keep their hands off each other, etc, etc... Do we need to know the details of the various positions they did "it"? Do we need to know what they did to each others sexual parts- other than what's usually required?

I had all these in mind.

Was I wrong?

Am I a prude who doesn't understand the feelings of a writer?

I am a writer myself. I see the point of a writer, but I understand that there are many ways to describe things and we have to be prudent when chosing the correct one. Sometimes, too much of something can overwhelm, and so the need for balance.

Writers can be mature in their content, but they also need to be even more mature in their thinking... and they most definitely need to see the bigger picture.

Stopping their FFs as a protest will only result in readership loss. Readers lose interest and forget the half-done stories, no matter how beautiful they were. The FFs are a part of IF- IPKKND and shifting them will not have the same readership following.

I will not be requesting for updates from FF writers who have stopped their updates abruptly and have disappointed their fans in the process. Difficult as it may be, I will consider the stories rudely discontinued.

Just my thoughts. Sorry to offend.

Perfect! Couldn't have said it better!

Edit: Actually, in all honesty, didn't say it better! 😊

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Whoa seem to have opened the proverbial Pandora's box, lol!

Having said that, read a few really well written OSs and SS courtesy this post, some of which contained sexual descriptions that were beautifully scripted, fitted in well with the story and made you feel and understand the character's passion! Surprisingly, they didn't need to graphic despite having conveyed immense passion and intensity.

For all those suffering from receptive aphasia in this forum, this is what I am talking about. You take a concept, a thought, a feeling and described it beautifully, but the whether it's kissing or making love or even having sex (yes they can and often are different), it feels natural and so much a part of the story that you don't register it differently - am I making sense?

Frankly, freedom of speech, creative license and all that jazz is great but one wonders about the creativity that seems to find only one way of expressing it! As Chimpsy said, do I really want to know which position and what parts and how? We all have a fairly good idea about that esp if we are all, above 18 😉

But since I grow weary with trying to elucidate my point of view (yes it is elucidate not complain and as someone said, lol, it quite annoying when people don't understand the difference 😆), hum to aise hain bhaiya!

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