Mature content in FFs

Page

Next Last

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Call me old fashioned or plain old for this forum but I am completely amazed at the FFs and OSs that seem to break-out on this forum every alternate minute I think...

But even more than that, I am amazed at the content. I have, arguably, found it a fairly ardrous task to find too many FFs which have not been peppered with a liberal use of sexual adjectives and descriptions.

It would, honestly be a nice change to read a compelling story which does not involve graphic description of the private parts or the act of having sex 😭 the beauty of story telling lies in the story and not in sexual episodes strung together.

Even lovemaking, can be described beautifully and integrated in the story, but more often than not, I swear sometimes I get the impression that poor Arnav and Khushi are pereneially on heat, 😆 and that's really having to work hard and long for their popularity, lol!

I think the makers of IPKKND set out to make an intense yet innocent love story but much of that essence I find is lost in the stories! Sex is an important part of being in love but its not THE main part! In real life, if you went for it as often as these two poor tortured souls are forced to do, they would be spent, even before their story really began 😉

I would love to read a story that tugs at my heart strings, causes goose bumps, and gives me reason to go mooney eyed rather than simply appealing to the lower part of my body! 😳

So hoping there is someone who is willing to write / has written a beautiful story! I am sure there are, its just that I have not found too many of them! So I guess I am just hoping that I might by some good fortune come across more of them!

P.S. No offense meant to any of the FF writers on this forum. You are all good at story telling and creative in your own way, and I understand it takes a lot of effort and imagination to come up with stories, and I have read some good ones! I agree sex sells but even a "Black" has a loyal audience!

P.P.S Apologies if I have inadvertantly offended anyone!

Quote

Frequent Posters

SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

I agree with your each n every Word of this Post.👏 👏 👏 As a writer I understand your POV Its very logical. 👏 Especially,in this line-

I think the makers of IPKKND set out to make an intense yet innocent love story but much of that essence I find is lost in the stories! Sex is an important part of being in love but its not THE main part! In real life.

A very very honest Post.👏 I respect you for your true opinion. I don't think,Its offensive for any1.Some time,I feel...I M visiting A 'po*n' Forum.They crossed all limits.IPKKND is not for Adults only...Its a simple 'Love story' based Family show. U R saying about only follow the IF-Rules.

@ Moderator n FF Writers : Guys Please,Read IF Rules again.

India Forums does not permit posting of any content or material which is or can be construed as being

sexually explicit, po*nographic
offensive to any religion, race or community
abusive language or Derogatory Expressions.
violative of anothers Intellectual Property

We encourage discussions more than just a "Thank you" post, so say more than just that. Thank You only posts will be deleted, at admin's discretion and member may face temporary ban to discourage such practice.

Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Keanufan

@Keanufan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Agree with every word..Even i m shocked...

Quote

sndhy84

@sndhy84

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Even I feel the same.I am new member to this forum ,but I used to visit this forum before too.Those who write those kind of FFs should think that its a sweet ..even cute love story...not a MB

Edited by sndhy84 - 13 years ago

Quote

Sunaina Mitra

@sunaina02

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

I wish I had the time to write .

I would have written exactly the way you want it to.

If you have seen BHPH - please read my unfinished FF...

Where I have described a "scene" without any graphical description:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/baat-hamari-pakki-hai/1563675/mr-shravan-jay-updtd-23-and-24-pg-32-33

An excerpt here replacing the names :

Have you ever heard the birds chirping at your window sill and felt the freshess of the air at early sunrise?

Have you ever sat on ths sands of the sea-beach and witnessed the grandeur of sunset on the sea?

Have you ever marvelled over a single red rose spurting its petals out ?

Have you ever witnessed the dancing of water from a mountain spring on the natures own staircase of stones ?

Have you ever been in state of intoxication after drinking glasses of champagne and know what illusions of ecstasy it creates in you?

Have you ever felt the ferro-rochers dissolving and melting in your mouth the way chocolate lovers do?

Have you ever passed a Starbucks on your way to work or school and sniffed in the glorious aroma of coffee coming out?

Have you ever felt like a smoker feels after he has taken the first two puffs of Benson-Hedges standing on the smokers zone ?

Have you felt all these feelings together - in one go ?

If not , then you do not know what it is to make love to someone you love.

Arnav and Khushi also did not know before this night.

Tonight they discovered the meaning of the act. Now they are in deep sleep in each others arms like two newborn babies . the moonlight coming through the windows caressed their faces lovingly - as if showering the blessings of god(s) from heavenly abodes.

There are two aspects in a man's kiss - tenderness and desire. It starts with tenderness, as an outlet to express the tender love he feels for the woman , subsequently turning into passionate desire, ruthlessly demanding , bold in exploration , carnal in form , insisting total submission. The woman's responses are tuned in her mind. If love is there , the woman returns the passion even more ferociously - asking for more , pressing him hard, submitting completely , riding on the waves of ecstasy and vocal in her expression of desire.

The climax is reached as all physical and chemical aspects of human bodies coordinate to create it.

The moments of tenderness and fondness returns again making both feel that the other is the most precious being in this world and nothing will ever keep them apart.

Arnav and Khushi went through these exact stages and would be waking up next morning with a firmer , stronger bondage between them , each one more knowledgable , more loving and caring about the other .

Edited by sunaina02 - 13 years ago

Quote

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER
I agree with your each n every Word of this Post.👏 👏 👏 As a writer I understand your POV Its very logical. 👏 Especially,in this line-

I think the makers of IPKKND set out to make an intense yet innocent love story but much of that essence I find is lost in the stories! Sex is an important part of being in love but its not THE main part! In real life.

A very very honest Post.👏 I respect you for your true opinion. I don't think,Its offensive for any1.Some time,I feel...I M visiting A 'po*n' Forum.They crossed all limits.IPKKND is not for Adults only...Its a simple 'Love story' based Family show. U R saying about only follow the IF-Rules.

@ Moderator n FF Writers : Guys Please,Read IF Rules again.

India Forums does not permit posting of any content or material which is or can be construed as being

sexually explicit, po*nographic offensive to any religion, race or community abusive language or Derogatory Expressions.
violative of anothers Intellectual Property

We encourage discussions more than just a "Thank you" post, so say more than just that. Thank You only posts will be deleted, at admin's discretion and member may face temporary ban to discourage such practice.

😊

I was trying hard not to say that but yeah its almost like that😊...

Very honestly if I had to read stuff like that there are enough free websites on the net!

The charm of the story has been their innocence and the inexplicable yet inevitable attarction that they are scared to accept even to themselves... so its a rather rude shock to read all this 😊

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 13 years ago

Quote

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Keanufan
Agree with every word..Even i m shocked...

I must admit I am a little puzzled that the moderators don't police enough but I guess the stories mushroom so fast that you'd probably need a guy online to check all the time! 😉

And I am sure these must make the actors themselves squirm if they ever raed what their caharcters were being made to do 😊 or probably have a big laugh at the extent of pent up sexual energy that resonates within this forum, lol!

Quote

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sndhy84
Even I feel the same.I am new member to this forum ,but I used to visit this forum before too.Those who write those kind of FFs should think that its a sweet ..even cute love story...not a MB

I guess we are in a minority... Clearly the majority seems to like it given the number of likes that I saw in one particularly descriptive one! 😕

If I was to write something I would something that I amnot ashamed of anyone including my folks, friends and siblings reading! I wonder how many of these would hold up to parental scrutiny!

Quote

rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

I ageee. I have a FF of my own and I do try to keep away from any graphic scenes though I include romantic scenes. But sometimes I would like my readers to tell me if I have ever crossed the lines because I would hate to. Even the few romantic scenes I write I find it very embarassing though I try to keep it sweet..

Quote

..Winter_Soul..

@..Winter_Soul..

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Well... If you don't feel comfortable reading such scenes, you simply don't read them. Sometimes, it's important to describe a scene in depth to give the real essence of story. I don't see anything being wrong with that. Having said that, yes in some of the FFs/OSs, it's overly done... But then again, it's a matter of choice...

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 6

Mature content in FFs

Related Topics

Explore Topics