ff : confession/ attempted suicide

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its start after rajbeer goes to simi house and hears NA having conversation about all her plan , bad doings
rajbeer leaves the house and the words of NA coming in her mind

rj : yeh preeto ki galti nahin hain , aur maine usko galt maana , apni behn ke liye koi bhi karsakhta joh us ne kiye , mujhe abhi us se baat karni hai
rajbeer dials preeto number

preeto : kya me chahoon uska phone , koi zuroorat baat nahin , she though sitting on her bed , utaalehthi hoon

rajbeer : preeto mujhe abhi tum se milne hai , me tume lene ke liya aarahoon

preeto : kya baat hai , phone me bataana mujhe bohut kaam hai ,

rajbeer , phone par baat nahin ho sakthi hai

preeto : teekhe , bye

preeto wonders to herself kya baat hai

rajbeer stops his car and buys a knife

the bell rings in dhillion house ,preeto door kolthi hai , aur rajbeer hai

rajbeer : tayaar ho ?

preeto : haa chalo

they both get into the car , silence , rajbeer puts on the radio and the song comes on main hoon na chorus

kis ka hai yeh tumko intizaar main hoon na
dekhlo idar toh ek baar main hoon na
khamosh kyun ho joh bhi kehna hai kaho
dil chaahe jitna pyaar utnaa pyaar maanglo
tumko milega itna pyaar main hoon na

preeto turns to rajbeer , and thinks to herself , kitna tume dukh diya hai , and tears drops on hai face

rajbeer stops the car in a deserted place , and comes out of the car , preeto confused thinking why he bought her here

preeto : tum ne kyun mujhe ko yahan laaye ho

rajbeer : sach jaane ke liye

preeto : kaunsa sach

rajbeer : tum ache tareeqe se jaanti hon , kyun tumne inkaar kiya hai

preeto : maine tum se kaha, nahin kar sakhthi ho shaadi , ghar ki zimadaariya hai

rajbeer getting frusturated

rajbeer : khushi milti hai tume mujhe takleef dehna , preeto starts crying

preeto : nahin rajbeer aisi baat nahin , tumhari khushi ke liye me alag ho rahi hon

rajbeer : meri khusi tumhare se

preeto turns her face around ,as she is too ashamed to look at him

rajbeer : teekhe door hona chahathi hon meri zindagi se

preeto turns around and faces him , and nods unwillingly

rajbeer : toh me itna door jaaonga ke tum mujhe bulaa bhi nahin paasakhti

rajbeer takes out the knife out of his pocket , and moves his shirt up , and puts the knife on his wrist

preeto : rajbeer she screams , kya kare hon , pagal ho gaya

she tries to grab the knife but he pulls it away

rajbeer : khudkhushi karoonga , aur yeh galti tumhari hain , tume nafrat hai mujhe

preeto cries , tum kyun nahin samaj rahe , yeh majboori hai

rajbeer : kaunsi , bole warna zindagi bhari par chayegi .

preeto : starts narrating NA convo

rajbeer comes towards her , and says : hum koi aur tareeqe se baat ko solve karsakthe , me simi se baat kar loonga

preeto : nahin rajbeer , ishu di ke liye aur musibat kari ho jayegi , jaise usne kaha waise karna chahiye

rajbeer : pagal ho gayi me tumhare bina jee bhi nahin sakhtha,

preeto : koshish karni hogi

rajbeer , gets the knife again

preeto : kyun kar rahe ho

rajbeer : tumhari dil ki baat suni hai , main mar jaaonga kya hoga, tum waise alag hona chahathi ho

preeto comes running towards him , and hugs him tightly the knife falls

preeto : bohut pyaar karti hoon tumse , tume koi takleef main nahin dekhsakhthi hoon
and she sobs

rajbeer : hum kisi ke liye door nahin jaayenge , kabhi bhi nahi
they carry on hugging
rajbeer then release his arms and wipes her tears

rajbeer : saath hain aur mushkile bhi saath hal karegen

preeto : par rajbeer

rajbeer : ab kuch nahin bola

rajbeer gently kisses preeto on her cheeks , and preeto smile appears , she tries to go ,and rajbeer grabs her hand

rajbeer : izhaar kar ke ab itna nahin sataao , and points at his cheek

preeto blushes

preeto : nahin , hamari shaadi ab nahin hoi

rajbeer : teekh hai meri knife kaha hai

preeto comes back to him , yeh tum kyun baar baar aisa kareho

rajbeer leans down a bit , and she kisses him on the cheeks , he smiles , and they hug again .

rajbeer : ab chale , and holds her hand

preeto : lekin ishu di

rajbeer : kuch nahin hoga main hoon na

they both get into the car , and the song plays in the background

jab se mile ho tum toh aisa laga hain ke tum bin naa hum jee sakenge
aisaas dil ko hone laga haI ke tum bin hum nahin jee sakenge
yeh dooriya lagthi satam , aagosh me barloon sanam
jab se mile ho tum toh aisa laga hain ke tum bin naa hum jee sakenge

yeh lamhe yahin pe tehr jaane do
hume toot ke tum bikar jaane do
jawan dharkano me utar jaanedo
khado se bhi aage guzar jaane do
tanhaaayiooon ka ,kehna yahin hai ke
tum bin na hum jee sakenge

rajbeer and preeto look at each other ,and they have an eye lock ]

rajbeer : ab tum meri chunni meeta di ke mehndi din pehna

preeto : teekh hai baba pehnloongi

rajbeer : yaqeen nahin sach me pehna ,

preeto : pehnloongi , agar yakeen nahin toh khud aana mujhe tayaar karne ke liye

rajbeer : accha toh ye baat hai aajaaonga , tume tayaar karne ke liye , aur us ke bahane ...😳
and rajbeer smirks

preeto : rajbeer bohut besharam ho , and she blushes

rajbeer: toh ,
and he comes towards her and kisses her lips passionately , preeto could not object ,and joins in

they were enjoyin kiss when the phone rings of preeto , preeto jumps and moves away , and quickly answers phone

biji : kahan ho tum

preeto : biji meeta ki shaadi ki tayaari dekhne gayi thi rajbeer ke saath


biji : kab aaogi

preeto : 10 minute ke baad

biji : teekh hai bye

preeto stares at him , and have another eye lock ,
after a minute preeto breaks the trance, and says chale

rajbeer smiles : jaana zuroori hai , itna pyaar ka kiss huwa tha , ab tum se dhoor bhi nahin ho sakhtha , tum ne mera andar ka puraa system halaa diya 😳

preeto blushes , and puts her head on his shoulder ,

preeto : chale warna dehr ho jayegi
rajbeer : teekh hai , and he starts the car , throughout the journey of reaching home , preeto rests his shoulder ,

and when they reach home , preeto kisses rajbeer both cheeks , thank you

😉
😳

the END , i hope pasand aayi pehli entry hai agli shaadi ki suhaag raat hogi ,

please comment





Edited by haafizah1 - 13 years ago

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Bobby1810 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well Haafizah for your first FF it is awesome. I loved reading it. Love the bit where they kissed each other so sweet. Looking forward to the next one soon.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He he he HIlariously awesome ...When RB stopped to buy Knife I though he will kill NA 😉
Last part tho BLUSH BLUSH😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I also thought the same that the knife is to kill NA...

Great FF dear 👏 and continue writing next parts...Can't wait for Romance scenes between Rajpreet 😉
Cv's nahi tho FF"s mein hi sahi Rajpreet ko milke kushi manayenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow haafiza...awesum one...
passionate n romantic...gr8 FF...
we fans will get satisfied reading such romantic scenes
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 he better uses knife in the show also...haha...
awsomeee Haafizah jus loved it...haaye Rajpreet are so romantic..😍
Keep coming up with more...would love to read...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is so nice and romantic ..
like everyone else I thought the knife is to kill NA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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romantic and nice , wish he had used to kill NA 😆😆 ... but to scare Preeto to come out with the truth was also nice , do continue with your FF's 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wen rb again asks...meri knife kha he...lol...its sooo funny...🤣

like d way he makes preeto confess...👏

& d kiss is...😍...wat can i say...2 lovely 2 say anythng...

if dis is ur 1st attempt at wrtng...den im sure ur rajpreet suhaag raat...will leave us in faints...🤗

continue sooon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx again lol it never came across my mind killing NA

Maybe her death can be more painful than knife lol

I will write the next part very soon lol just gathering ideas yet 😉

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