NEW FF:LOVE AFTER MARRIAGE update part 10 page 35 NOTE pg 38

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

awww, it was a really cute update nd a cute ff

plzz continue and pm me😊

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keetha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

this is not fair plz... update it😔 yar... we r really waiting for it...

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

note:

hey guys since kosha is temporarily inactive (due to her xams..) i will updating this ff...

she asked me to update at least one chapter... so here am with the update... n dont know whether she would like to continue it or not..(due to shakti leaving news) ...

i will ask about it to her wen she is back... then inform...
sorry guys can't send u pm as i don't know the pm list...
plz check this ff for yourself

Edited by crazysky - 13 years ago

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

chapter -10

kria was working in her office , checking out few files...suddenly rey called on her mobile...
k: hello??

r: hey sweetheart..hwz u??

k: rey pichle 10 min mein aap 12 times ye ques mujhse puch chuke ho... i am really busy dad kuch pending files chod kr gaye hai..
unhe complete karna hai...

r: par...

k: par war kuch ni mujhe bahot kaam hai ... please dont disturb me...

kria put down her mob...

r: such a baat cutter shaadi ke pehle ye haal hai to baad mein kya hoga?? chal beta rey kaam par lagja...

kria was still struggling n fighting with her files...

just then kria's phone again rang...

k: rey maine kaha na...

but it wasn't rey's phone...it was receptionist's phone...

recept: hello mam its the manager from verma's construction phone call

k: ok connect to it...

rec: ok mam...

k: hello sir, i was looking at the contract between our and your company.. we r ready to sign it...it'll be in your office tommorrow

v: well mam i called you for this matter only...no need for such an hurry... we can sign it when ur dad comes...

k: but u gave us dead line till tommorrow...

v: ya mam but we can manage it don't worry...

k: ok thanks..

v: u r welcome mam... n have a nice day..n yes mam one more thing...

k: yes..???

v: u r very lucky to have such a caring fiance in your life ...don't let him go from your life...

kria put down the receiver ...n was thinking what the manager has said...

suddenly she received two three similar calls...from different companies...

kria called up the rec..

k: did rey called u??

rec: m...mam ...w... wo...

k: yes or no??

rec : yes mam ?

k: why??

rec: he asked me what are the files u r working on right now...

now kria understood why all of the sudden all companies gave her a time to complete the project...
she called him...

on the other side rey was very happy wen he saw kria's name flashed on his phone screen

r: hey baatcutter...

k: rey how could u do it..u called all my parteners... n what did u say to they... its so embarressing ...u know mujhe aapse baat hi nahi
karni...

r: but ab to tumhara kaam to khatam ho gaya na..

k: ha but ek file baaki hai

r:oh...

k: rey is company ko call karne ke baare mein sochna bhi mat..inhe kal hi inki files chahiye..

she cuts the call...

rey to himself..."lagta hai kuch jyada hi care kar kardiya...baat ni karni thi toh phone kyu kiya"

after some time...

sharon called rey

sh: jiju di aapke saath hai kya???

r: nahi toh!! woh abhi tak ghar nahi aayi...??

sh: nahi ..its almost 10pm n still i there is no sign of her...di ne kaha to tha ki wo thodi late ho jayengi but itni late wo aaj tak kabhi nahi hui...

r: sharon dont panic ...main dekhta hu...swayam kaha hai??give him the phone..

sw: ya bhai!! ye faltu hi panic kar rahi hai... main isi ke saath hu...

r: but..

sw: wo iska fashion show cancel ho gaya n vicky n neha ka bhi mood thoda off hai isliye ye hyper mode mai hai..

r: ok i see mai kria ko pick up kar ke ghar aata hu...

rey to himself "ye kria bhi na sab ke liye khaas kar mere liye itni important ho jayegi maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha"

now hurriedly rey reached kriya's office...
he could see kria's cabin's light switched on..

rey sighed in relief n said to himself: " light on hai means...she is inside"

rey reached her cabin... he knocked the door but no response..

he again knocked

rey slightly pushed the door...
he could his angel sleeping peacefully...with open files under her head on her table..

he took the file from under her head...put back her strand back after her ears...lifted her carefully to not to wake her up..n made her
sleep on sofa placed in her cabin...he looked at her n smiled...
"oh god she looks damn innocent while sleeping"

he looked at the file which she was completing...
he sat on her chair n worked on the file.. he was searching for pen ...while searching... two files fell down from table..with a loud thud
on the ground ..with that his sleeping beauty woke up while rubbing her eyes like small kids do she asked "aap itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahe hai??"

he smiled n chuckled by seeing her...

he came close to her, hugged her lightly n cupped her face.. n said "ghar chale its already 11:30 pm??"

at the mention of "ghar" her eyes opened wide...now she was in hyper mode..."oh shit... mujhe tofile complete karni thi...ghar par bhi
pata nahi sharon n neha ne khaana khaya hoga ya nahi?? wo dono ghar pe akele...he universe ji..."

rey pulled her n keeping finger on her lips..."shhh... bahot jaldi stress le leti ho tum... main hoon na...tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye tumhare universe ji ne hi mujhe bheja hai..tumhari file complete kar di maine.."

kria looked at him blankly...
r: baatcutter... tumhari file...

k: ha...
"tumne puri complete kar di??"

r: ha puri...

kria in excitement huged rey " thank u thank u so much... tum best ho... thank u..."

rey was amused at her...he too joined the hug after a min kria realised what she did n said.. she broke the hug n was blushing very
badly...

rey too felt awkward but was smiling inwardly...to coverup the awkwardness he said" ya complete kar di file but tumhare signature

chahiye... kuch jagah par..."

k: oh kaha par...

r: here

kria without looking sighned it...

r: are ek bar dekh to lo ..

k: tumne dekh liya na bas i trust u... n with saying that she walked out of the cabin..chalo chalo ghar nahi chalna hai...??

they drove back to home...

at home...

viha n swaron

n: "tum tumhari wo boyfriend chor maya use to mai chodungi nahi...!! samajhti kya hai apne aapko??"

v: shutup tum apne us boyfriend ko samjhati kyu nahi??ullu ka patha vivek!!

n: tumne vivek ko kya kaha??

v: ullu ka patha...

n: tumhe to mai chodungi nahi...

they ran like tom n jerry in the whole house...
swaron was tired , they were still waiting for kriyansh..

kriyansh entered the house

swaron n kriyansh lightly hugged eachother..

sh: di aap kaha reh gayi thi pta hai kitni tensed thi mai...

k: relax sharon...wo office me thoda kaam tha... n tell me how was your fashion show...??

sh:(sadly) di wo toh cancel ho gaya??

just then neha n vicky came...

neha: hey rey jiju...

rey: hey neha !!
n they hi fived..

vicky stomped n hugged kria hey kriya bhabhi missed u alot... n aapke parathe ko bhi..

k: "parathe kyu??"
tumne khana abhi tak nahi kaya...??

v: khaya but abi bhi bhook lag rahi hai...

n: bhookad kahi ka saara khana toh kha gaya phir bhi ise bhook lag rahi hai...

sh: neha!!!

n: sorry di!!

sw: sahii to keh rahi hai ye bhukad hi toh hai...

r: accha accha ab fight mat karo ... kria waise bhi thaki hui hai...use araam karne do...

v: par mujhe to kria bhabhi se bahot saari baatein karni hai...

sh: main di ke liye khaana lagati hu...

k: nahi sharon man nahi hai mujhi bhuk nahi lagi..

r(seriuosly): are bhuk kaise nahi lagi...tumne subah se kuch ni khaya...chalo kuch kha lo...sharon tum jao.. n khana lagao..

sw: ha chalo mai tumhari help karta hu...

v: ha bhabhi kuch to kha lijiye...aap chahe to mai aapko khane ke liye training de sakta hu...

n(naughtily): yup di thoda sa waise bhi rey jiju keh rahe hai...

kriyansh blushed at this...

sh: ha di waise bhi mom dad ghar par nahi hai n agar unhe pta chala toh hamari khair nahi...

k: ok ok mai fresh hoke aati hu...

hope u like it n plz comment...

Edited by crazysky - 13 years ago

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Smriti

@dazzlerfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

thnks god you updated chetna.. it was good...👍🏼

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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

im so happy you update and its really good if you update soon please can you pm me :D

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Its very sweet. Plz update the nxt part soon.

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

wow it was rly sweet update...n kriyaansh hug awww...plsss update nxt soon

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chsripriya

@chsripriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

it was awesome plz update next part soon

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#240

thanks a love u a lot for this and thanks for kriyansh a lot and after hearing that they will come to an end i think and that shakti has already left it is so sad