MY LADY LOVE.. ~~A VIRMAN SS-IMP NOTE-Pg30 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -RabiaKSGKaJen-

OMG! maanvi; hoopee shee iss okaaayy. arwwwhh viraaat, feel soo baaadd.

ii lovvee all 4 bondinnng sweeet. update soon x



Thank You fr d comment!!
Well that's a suspense if Maanvi wud get cured or not... so keep reading the next parts... :)

Next Update is on its way... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonika1988

I read all parts u wrote till now and trust me I have no words to express how amazing it was .
Specially the last part it was truely amazing and emotional too.
So I am waiting for the next part so plz add me in your pm list
Thanks



Aaaw ur comment has made me smile ear to ear... 😃
Thanks a lot!!
The next part is on its way!!
will surely PM u!!
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thank You!!

will Surely PM u!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank You!!🤗

I am very Happy and Would Thank Every One who has liked the previous Update!! To the ppl who commented... You all have been replied to!!


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Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Friends!! This my last update till March 2 as i have my Final Exams starting from 18th February. Please Pray for me so that i can Do well in the exams and give You happy updates thereafter!!
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Jeevika:- Viren ji what happened..?
Viren:- Maanvi fainted and Viraat is taking her towards the car... we should immediately reach there... Lets steer back towards the shore..

Jeevika:- Mannu fainted... Viren ji please do something fast... I want to be with my Mannu... Please take me to her... Please Viren Ji... (Tears falling down her cheeks)

Viren:- Ha... Dont worry Mrs Vadhera... We will reach the car in no time... Have faith in god... Every thing would be fine... (He takes jeevika into a side hug and they head towards their car.)

On the other hand... Viraat is trying his best to wake up Maanvi, He sprinkles few drops of water and Maanvi does wake up but only to vomit... Viraat is hell scared and keeps on trying to keep Maanvi awake and reach the car... But he does not succeed in doing so and tears trickle down his cheeks as he holds Maanvi close to his heart...

Maanvi You cannot leave me... Please wake up maanvi... see I am there with You... Maanvi please get up... and he falls down on the floor along with Maanvi...

Viraat... Kya hua mere Bhai... Uth jaldi... (He also gets worried on seeing stains of blood on Maanvi's face)

Viraat jaldi se car me baith... lets take her to the hospital... Jeevika chalo... baitho...

He turns around and finds jeevika lost in her own world so he himself takes her to the car and helps her in sitting...

Viraat, tu Maanvi k saath baith... or ghar pr sabko call kr de...

M car chlata hun..

Viraat:- ji bhai..

Jeevika:- Viraat, try sprinkling water on her... Usko uthane ki koshish karo... Aur fr sbko call kr do... Main nhi kr paungi... please tum hi kardo...

Viraat:- Ji bhabhi... Main call kr deta hun... Dont take tension...

Viraat dials every one's number and informs them about the condition of Maanvi and tells them to hurry up and reach the nearby Hospital...

Swamini and dadaji create a fuss about the situation and try keeping shlok with them but he gives them a taste of their medicine by saying that maanvi is his sister and he needs to be with her...

All Vadhera people rush into their cars and head towards the car...

In the car Vanshikha calls the Chowdhary people and asks them to reach Chandigarh as soon as possible...

PRECAP:- Maanvi is on the Ventilator, Doctor comes out of the OT and the Machine makes a lot of beep sounds...

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hahaha Guys I know I am evil But i cant really Think of writing a Maha Update when my exams are just 10 days away from now... So Please keep up your thinking caps and tell me what all should i include in the next update... Will try and reply to each one of you but the next update would be either on 2nd March or 3rd March... :)

Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
please can you pm me when you update :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really good
All the very best for ur exams n hope u do really well in ur exams
And do pm me the next time u update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
looking forward to ur next part..
pm me when u update..
And best of luck for ur exams..hope u do best..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love it and it was a short update but it was great please PM me soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part..
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...

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