Short OS: Chudiyaan Khanak Gayee

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

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Prathima

@prathikri

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Like button doesn't seem to be working..
Cute OS 😛

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome os. I really really want the confrontation at the poolside. Keep up the good work. Do pm me for your future works.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Sighhh

Perfect!

The CVs have a lot to live up to now!

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Nigtangle

@rushshri

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited - buhuuu , 😭 I was coming up wid my os wid d same idea. U stole my thoughts.

U fit in dis song - Chura lo na bheja mera, sanam 🤣

Now I hv to think of smthg else.

But yes vry well written n xpressed. But u hv raised ur bar urself so sorry, but I think u hv d capability to write much better dan dis. 😊

Edited by rushshri - 13 years ago

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Purplelicious

@Purplelicious

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow lovely...purrrfectt❤️ hope they show that much intensity when their conflict ends 😉

I loved the part...

"Why, Khushi? What is so special about them?" He whispered, his hooded eyes seeming to pierce her soul.

Khushi felt tears fill her eyes. She had tried so hard to make him admit that he had gifted her the bangles. But he had held firm. When would he realise...? How could she tell him how eager she was to hear him admit that... Her lips trembled.

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Though small it's cute and perfect :D I want this exactly to happen too..atleast not the hug but the former part of it where he denies, she calls it beqar and then he trying to remove them off and both admitting the other that he had given and she loved it and wont remove it!!!