FF-REMORSE-~maaneet-~THREAD 2

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thread 3…. new parts… :)

part 22

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Niki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1042

Inteah ho gayi intezar ayi na kuch khabr humare updte ki!omg more 5 min!ya!gr grr...!

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1043

Thread 3…. new parts… :)

part 22

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BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1044

this is absolutely appalling!!i just started reading this FF coz i liked your other works and am shocked beyond repair!!!how can u write an FF where the girl is getting raped by this man every day for months!! she has no voice , no reason and is a complete doormat! he abuses her, rapes her, aborts her child and freaking walks all over her!!! at all times! i dont care how much remorse the bugger has later on....the charachterisation of the girl is this FF is completely unacceptable!! nobody can be treated in this inhuman fashion......

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1045

OMG I have no words to describe this ff....it just touched my heart......its filled with soooo much of pain...........i am just loving this FF so much....how can somebody treat someone like this and make the person life miserable just because they are poor and don't want to see their face.....Thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for such an awesome ff dear.....looking forward to see how Maan will makeup for all this or will ho be not able to......

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1046

i didnt get ur pm after the 17th part........................😡

part 18
sam shot her????????????? but Maan reacted in some way.......................now his remorses are starting.......................and learns a good lesson for life.....................

part 19
deserves him right for the rejection.......................ohho Geet is so cold................whats gonna happen to her?????????????

part 20
feel very sorry for Geet.......................Maan is so cruel........................now what is his fear?????????????????

part 21
what the hell????????????????? kya Maan kum tha now this pervert..........................uggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh.......................