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Hii friends this is the last part of this SS. Plz tell me ur opinions about this SS. I request all of u to comment.

~~ DIL LI BATEEIN~~

Last part:


Good morning geet.

Geet sighed in relief. She too wished him.

Good morning maan.

Maan is happy to listen her sweet voice in the morning.

Baito geet.

Geet sat beside him. Its almost 6 in the morning they both sat silently there n watching the sun rise. They both felt so pleasant feeling the early sun rays. The closed their eyes feeling so pleasant. Geet opened her eyes n turned towards maan. His eyes r still closed n looking pleasant.

Pata hain geet when I was a kid every summer main, mama, papa, dev aur annie hum sab hamara pent house jaate the. It is near the river bank. Tab hum sab sun rise aur sun set dekhte the. But after many years I saw sun rise.

Geet didnt utter a single word she want him to speak. She was just staring at him. Maan opened his eyes n saw geet who is looking at him lovinly. Geet assured him to continue.

Yeh baat tho sach hain geet ki mama papa ki death ke baad main badal gaya. I was not able to digest the fact that they left me. I was so depressed that I didnt come out of my room for many days. But I one dev n annie came to my room crying. I never saw them crying annie hamari princess. My heart broke into million pieces when I saw my princess like that. I went n hugged them that day maine wada kiya ki main kabhi bhi dev aur annie aankhon mein aansu nahi dekhna chatha. Isiliye main KC join ki. But to my luck it in the verge of closing. But maine aisa nahi hone diya. I worked day n night to bring it againNO. 1 position. N today I am successful. Dev n annie r happy n settled in their lives.

Geet had tears in her eyes after listening to him.

Par tum yeh poochna chati ki jab main sab kuch thik kar diya tho yeh nafrat kyun? Hain na geet?

Geet just nodded her head in yes.

Darr geet. I am afraid. When I was a kid I love my daadi very much but unfortunately she left us. I was shattered at that time but uss waqt mama n papa r there. They gave me lot of support to come out of that tragedy. But now even they left me. I became all alone n I have siblings to take care of. The people whom I love the most left me. Kyun mere saath hi aisa hota hain. Uss din se main kisi se bhi pyaar se baath nahi ki. But it doesnt mean that I hate them. Mujhe darr hain ki agar main kisi se pyaar ki tho wo bhi muje chodke chale jaate hain.

Maan looked at geet. Tears r flowing down her cheeks. Maan cupped her face n told

isiliye geet main tumse aise baat kiye the. So that u hate me. But when I saw hurt n tears in ur eyes that too because of me I died hundred deaths. But again I thought its necessary. But pata nahi tumko kya hua next day u came all smiling n started taunting me. But then meera is my doctor but not u. that one month is like hell for me. Tumse baat karne ka bohot mann tha but I never accepted the fact. But when u came yesterday I thoght my life came back again. I trird to ignore u but when u r in my heart how can I do that.

Geet smiled through her tears. Maan continued.

Tumko pata nahi in these how many times I thought of coming to u but I never did that, but unfortunately we met in the hospital. I loved u from the college days geet I thought of proposing u after our studies. Tum london gayi thi MBBS karne ke liye uske baat mama papa ki death. Sab kuch ek saath ho gaya. Main tuth gaya geet. Uske baad I didnt contact any of our friends. Yash called me many times after that but I didnt talk with him. Uske baad adi ne mere company join kiya tha. Main usse sirf professional relation maintain kiya tha.

School main main, yash aur adi were best friends but adi was shocked to see me. Aaj wo darta hain mujse baat karne ke liye. Main kya karu geet all these incidents made me MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Away from all relations. Uss dukh se baahar aane ke liye main din raat kaam karta tha. See the tragedy even dev n annie muje dekke darte the.

Nahi maan they r not scared of u. they love u. adi bhi aapse nahi darte infact he respects u. We all love u maan. But humko dukh hain ki aap itne change ho gaye ki humse baat karna hi nahi chate ho.

Aisa nahi geet infact muje bhi aap sab se milke, puraani din yaad karna chata hu. The day I met u muje aisa laga my life came back again. But I didnt admit the fact. Main apne aap se ladne laga.

Aapko pata nahi maan, we all r shocked when we saw ur changed behaviour. Muje pata nahi tha ki annie aapke behen hain. When annie n pari came back from london after ur accident that day I came to know annie is ur sis. After ur parents death ek din annie hamare ghar ayi thi. At that I was in london. She told about her parenta death n her changed brother to pari. Pari muje phone karke bohot royi thi. Main annie se baat ki but uss waqt muje nahi pata ki that person is u. muje pata hota tho main turant wapas aa jati.

Maan placed his head on geet's lap. He felt so peaceful after so many years.

Meri galti bhi ahin maan. Muje pata lagana chahiye tha.

Maan kept his finger on geet's lips n nodded in a no.

no geet dont tell like that isme tumari galti nahi hain. I hurted u all.

Maan felt so light after sharing everything to geet. Its like he is in heaven.

Maan aapko darne koi baat nahi main hu aapke saath. Hamesha rahungi. Even if u hate me tab bhi main aapke saath nahi chodongi.

But geet didnt get any reply from maan. She looked at him, a smile crept on geet lips. He is sleeping peacefully on her lap. Geet carassed his hair.

Yash n meera got up n saw maan n geet's tent they didnt find them. They came near the hill searching for them. They r surprised to see maan n geet like that.

Meera called geet.

Geet turned back n saw them.

They both came n sat beside her n saw maan sleeping peacefully. They both r very very happy for their friends.

Geet???? spoke yash.

Shhh... I will tell u later told geet.

They both nodded n left from there. Meera hugged yash having tears in her eyes.

Today I am very happy yash. Thanku very much.

Yash hugged her back n told main bhi bohot khush hu. Our best friends r happy.

After some time maan woke up n saw geet who is looking at him lovingly n caressing hs hair. Maan smiled whole heartedly. Geet kissed his forehead maan closed his eyes having heavenly feeling.

Maan aaj se aapko chinta hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hain. Main hoon aapse saath aap akele nhi ho. I will never leave u alone. Yah mera waada hain maan. Samjhe aap?

Maan just nodded his head with a smile on his face. He got up n geet too.

Chalo geet we have to get ready.

Chaliye maan.

They both went to their respective tents n got ready. Maan came out n saw his friends waiting for them. He wished them with a smile. Today maan came to know apni DIL KI BATEEIN kehne se itna sukoon milta hain.

Good morning guys wished maan.

All r very happy to see him smiling. But the old maan didnt come fully but atleast they happy to see him smiling n chirpyness in his voice. Adi n yash's happiness have no bounds. Mainly adi he saw the changed maan in the office. He use to pray god daily to get back their old maan.

Maan sir??? spoke adi.

Maan sir nahi adi, maan.

Adi had tears in his eyes he got up n hugged him.

I am so happy for u maan told adi.

Maan too hugged him n told I am sorry adi for my rude behaviour.

Nahi maan dont, I know y u changed. I am happy that my best friend is back told adi.

All the boys had a group hug. Just then geet came out n saw this she is very very happy today. Infavt she is on cloud 9.

she hugged meera n told I am very happy today meera.

Main bhi geet. Bohot din ke baad I am seeing u happy.

All became so emotional. In order to change the atmosphere geet spoke

guys what is this we r very hungry. Dont u arrange breakfast for us.

Ya geet is rite. Hamare baare mein sochte bhi nahi tum log told arohi.

Oh hello we planned for this trip. So now its ur duty to prepare breakfast retorted yash.

Ahaha... yash u wont change na. Chup chap cook food. We will be waiting in the tent told geet.

No way told yash.

Thats it they started their fight once again. They r going on n on. Maan got frustated n went to his MSK mode n shouted

SHUT UP.

Thats is enough for geet n yash to stop. They both turned to maan with horrified expression. But seeing their faces all of them trying hard to control their laugh. But they couldnt control n burst out into laughter including maan. Geet is so lost in maan. He is laughing with whole heartedly.

Even yash n geet too started laughing. They all had a wonderful time. Soo they all milke prepared breakfast.

After having breakfast all went for sight seeing. They all roamed the whole forest. They all r hell tired n went to their hotel rooms. They bud good night to everyone n dossed off imediately. Maan n geet r very very happy.

Its almost 11:30 in the night. Geet knocked maan's door. Maan opened the door n saw geet. He got worried n asked

geet sab kuch thik hain na? Tum iss waqt.

Maan hum abi baahar chalna hain. Plz its urgent.

Kaha geet?

I will tell u everything. Plz chalo na.

Thik hain.

Maan n geet took a cab n geet told some address to driver. They went to the spot after 20 min travelling.

Geet told maan to get down. Maan did the same.

Geet blindfolded maan. Maan didnt understand what geet is upto. Geet took maan to some house n opened the door. Geet took maan inside. N its just few seconds for 12. she switched on the lights n removed the blindfold.

Maan opened his eyes slowly n looked around. Its his pent house.

N he is surprised to see the decoration. The room is filled with maan's childhood toys n pics with his daadi, parents n dev n annie. He had tears in his eyes seeing those things. He went n touched each n every toy n photos. Old memories rushed through him. He immediately hugged geet tight n cried his heart out. Geet just rubbing his back to calm down but didnt utter a single word. He allowed him to cry for the last time. After some time maan calmed himself n broke the hug.

Thanku very much geet.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN.

Thanku geet, I forgot that toay is my borthday,

I told u na maan from now onwards I will be theer for u. u r not alone.

Hum bhi hain aapke saath came voices from entrance.

Maan turned towards the voice n surprised to see the whole gang n dev n annie n pari.

Dev n annie hugged him n wished him.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHAI.

Thanku so much dev. Thanku princess.

Adi, yash, meera, arjun, arohi, sam wished him. They all enjoyed the night. They played various games. Its early morning 4 n all decided to take rest.

Chalo guys its late told yash.

One min guys told maan.

Kya hua maan asked yash

maan went infront of geet n bent on his knees n took her hand in his n asked

geet I LOVE U. WILL U MARRY ME?

Geet dont know what to tell she is on cloud 9. her heart is jumping in joy. She had tears in her eyes.

She nodded for an YES with teary eyes.

YES MAAN.

All others clapped seeing both of them. Annie n dev r soo happy. Pari is very happy for her sister.

Maan got up n hugged geet. Geet too hugged him tight. Her tears r wetting his shirt. Maan broke the hug n wiped her tears with his thumb.

Di called pari.

Geet hugged pari. Dev n annie hugged maan. They all r happy this is the best day for all of them.

They broke the hug n dev told

bhabhi n bro I want to tell u one thing.

Kya dev? Asked maan.

Dev went to stood beside pari n told we love each other.

Maan n geet r surprised n happy too. Maan told in serious tone

so handa sisters r going to be khurana's soon.

All burst out into laughter, geet n pari blushed. They both ran inside.

Next 3 days they enjoyed exploring different places. After 4 days they r went back to delhi n got busy in their works.

One day geet didnt feel like going to hospital so she decided to go to maan's office n give him surprise. She got ready n left to meet maan. She entered KC.

She asked the receptionist

excuse me. Can I meet maan.

She is shocked to listen his boss name from a girl that with his first name.

Umm.. mam he is in his cabin.

Ok I will meet him.

Just then sasha came there n asked hello miss. Where r u going.

I want to meet maan.

Maan? Do u have appointment, waise MK dont meet anyone without appoinment. So behenji better u go.

Hello miss. Mind ur language. I want to meet maan now. So better concentrate on ur work or else u will be out of this office.

This angered sasha n shouted

hello miss who r u to tell me. How dare u.

just then maan came out hearing some noises. His anger reached peak when he saw sasha talking like that with geet.

SASHA shouted maan.

Sasha frieghtened n turned back n saw angered maan there.

How dare u talk with geet like that.

He went near maan n brought her closer by her waist n told

she is my fiancee geet. Geet se baat karne se pehle socho ki tum kisse baat kar rahi ho.

Maan n geet went to his cabin leaving shocked sasha n office staff behind.

Inside his cabin: geet hugged maan n told

calm down maan.

Maan hugged her tight. After sometime they broke the hug n he started kissing geet. He placed his lips on hers. He started kissing her furiously geet too responsed with same passion.

They r exploring their mouth. Their toungues r playing they both r lost in each other. After a long passionate kiss they broke.

Geet hugged maan n told

I LOVE U MAAN

I LOVE U TOO GEET.

Their relation grew stronger as the days passed. They told about their relation to geet's father he happily agreed. Even he is happy for dev n pari.

Both the marriages r fixed on the same day. Geet's father is taking care of whole arrangements. His wish is going to be fulfilled. His both daughters r getting married. whole gang is looking after the preparations. meera arranged very well. she treated geet n pari as her own sisters. today both her sisters r getting married.

Finally the day has come. Maan-geet , dev-pari had a grand wedding with all rituals. Officially they became mrs.maan singh khurana n mrs.dev singh khurana. Annie happiness have no bounds her best friend n her di n now her bhahis. She welcomed them with full love. They all lived happily ever after.

~~ THE END~~


PRECAP: EPILOUGE.



Hii friends this is the last part of DIL KI BATEEIN. I am very happy for ur reaponse n ur encouragement. So this is the last part I request all of to comment n tell me how is this SS. Plzz tell me ur opinions. Once again thanku very much.friends i need big big comments..plsss 😳

Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.



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-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n beautiful update...
maan n geet got married...sooo happy...true love can change anyone fr d good...maan is d perfect example here...geet's love changed him...im proud of him...
gr8 going...
loved it...
thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...
waiting eagerly fr d epilogue...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww awsome jyothi
Loved it very very much
Love maneet very much
Chalo dev ki bhi setting ho gayi :)
Lol sasha kabhi baaz nahi aayege hehe
Waiting for epilogue
Plz plz update soon
Love ya :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awome


loved it



waiitng for the epilogue...



kaisa hua interview??????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

awome



loved it



waiitng for the epilogue...



kaisa hua interview??????



thanku very much for ur comment dear...😊
ummm not selected out in the last round... :((
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish



thanku very much for ur comment dear...😊
ummm not selected out in the last round... :((

\\

chalo kuch nai hota


its life



kya karna hai aage


job in which field???????/
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

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chalo kuch nai hota


its life



kya karna hai aage


job in which field???????/


basically i am electronic student...
but trying for both core side n software side...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


basically i am electronic student...
but trying for both core side n software side...



ok ok gooddd...



me maths student
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem



ok ok gooddd...



me maths student


oh wow...
in 12th i was also maths student... in graduation i took electronics...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish


oh wow...
in 12th i was also maths student... in graduation i took electronics...



ohk ohk me doing m.sc in maths

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