Naina Barse (maaneet Os) EPILOGUE page 36 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jssood

this is for you bcoz u give us such cute update

love this ss

thank u dear,, and this is really cute 😊😊

Originally posted by: yashviagarwal

obivously as ss
this part was awesome
vase geet is maan's dauhter na ???
an ha wanted 2 tell u will u be able 2 cope up wid 4
kabhi kabhi u become so tired
i mean can u ???

wo dekhna padega is she maan's daughter or not,, and i'll not fetch this story,, pehle se tension kam hain jo aur ek lu,,😆😆

part 3
Maan is a jerk of first degree...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

great part!
poor geet
will be waiting for more past and present

Nice parts!! don't stop..turn as SS..Why Geet left him..

Thank u for the huge support frnds,, I m really touched with the response, I have decided what to make it,, It will be an OS only,, I m not turning it as ss but I will end it with sufficient part,, whether its need 1 more or 2 more.. that will goes with the story only'.

Naina Barse''..

Avi: maan kyun nahi lete maan,, u can never love any other girl than geet'. Maan looked at her but couldn't say anything,, indeed this is true,, he always lost in her, when she introduce avantika with geet, that was the last day he called her as GF,,,, that was only for the collage, he never meant that' but now he know what geet meant for him,, he can act as he is in a relation with avantika when he is not,, 5 months separation and every day seeing geet like that only increase his craving for her' but he didn't wanted to accept it,, but not now' he want her and he should confess that suppress his ego'.

Maan saw geet was talking with some girls,, she was looking as beautiful as the 1^st time he saw her' but this time a little change in her, she is smiling but not her eyes,, she was hiding something' he wanted to talk to her right then,, but before he approach to her someone tapped her shoulder,, she looked at him with smile,, he was her class mate, he was asking her for dance and she was denying it,, maan just wanted to punch that idiot who wanted to touch his geet, but he can't do it as shock ran through him,, geet joined him in a close dance,, she was not showing any reluctance or any uncomfortable that's she is feeling,, maan'blood boil to see the guys said something in her ear and she laughed loud,, avantika smirks at him,, and goes towards him'

Avi: what happen man, look like she has gone from ur hand.. I think she was never interested in u,, and now she found her perfect partner' maan glare at her with red furious eyes, but instead og shutting her up, he drag avantika to the dance floor' geet saw that' but she smiled at him meakly,, maan just ignored her and pulls avantika close to him,, he has made the resolution to confess her but when he saw her smiling with another guy he just can't help it,,

Both were facing each other while holding their respective partners,, stealing glance,, maan saw the guys was nearing her ear and said something,, she smiled at him warmly but that was not a pleasant sight for maan,, he pulls avantika in his arm and places a kiss near her lips, it didn't touch near her lips just a small peck the corner of her lips,,, but from geet vision its clearly indicating a kiss, he was looking at her,, she felt her heart will explode in any moment,, her knees were shaking and her petite body felt numb'. Her tears rolled down silently but she lowered her head and wiped it without noticing it'

Maan was busy in dancing with almost every girl without giving any importantce to geet's existence,, and she felt her heart is sinking every moment see him like that'

After much time maan saw there is no sign of geet' he went to search for her but she was not there,, he felt alone in the crowd' frustrating hand ran through his hair' he went towards sumit and his gang'

Maan: sumit did u see geet? Everyone saw him like they have witnessing a ghost with two head' what u r guys looking at me like that?

Sumit: why did u want to know about her now maan? where she is,, what she is doing how does matter it to u?

Maan: sumit just answer me what I ask'. Where is she?

Sumit: maan I just wanted to say don't trouble any further,, she had have enough of u'

Maan's anger was just increasing time by time: will u tell me??

Sumit: fine'. She have gone to her home,, she was not feeling well so ronit(their clg mate) dropped her at home,, and she called me that she reached safely' maan didn't wait a second there as he walked away from the party,, leaving a flabbergasted audience,, sumit smiled as he knew maybe maan has realized his mistake and took the u turn to geet'

Geet opened her door with tired eyes' and saw the most dangerous sight,, he was standing one hand beside the door leaning over that,, his eyes were red like blood,, he has drank a little but no one can say that with his ease of walking' geet smell that' before she can invite him he enter the house,, geet sighed and lock the door'

Geet: maan what r u doing here at this hour?

Maan: why u leave the party?

Geet looks here and there: I was not feeling well so just came here but any ways I don't have to give u explanation,, she turn to leave for her room when maan grabbed her and pinned her to the wall very hard' his eyes were blood shot,, geet can sense the alcohol.. he came dangerously close to her..

Maan: yeah u only gave explanation to that friend of ur' he slowly traces her face with his nose and whisper dangerously'. Its always me whom touch gave u disgusting feeling, when others touched u where did ur moral flew ha?? She looked at him with pain that maan can never bear,, her tear drop on her cheek but maan licked that,, her breath became rapid to feel the proximity,, she tried to come back to sense,, but a moan escaped from her mouth'

Geet: maan'.

Maan planted a deep wet kiss on her cheek' he freed her hand and cupped her face,, not leaving any space to love, he was in a different world,, not completely in senses not so drunk but geet,, she was in full senses but can't stop him, she knew he is in pain, he needs her love, her touch' her heart cried to see him like that, she thought he never loved her but what he is doing, what is this, love or ? she was confuse but she doesn't wanted to denied him and push him to the edge of his madness' she needs him as much as he needs her, the sight where he kissed avantika torn her apart,, and now his love was soothing her,, her tears was flowing and that angered maan he,, picked her and walked to her room, shut the door with his leg he took the step towards bed,, he place her ever so gently and came on top of her' he wiped her tears roughly, and pressed his thumbs on her lips' rubbing it sensually,, she closed her eyes in anticipation'

Maan: why u r crying? She looked at him,, he was withdrawing himself when she hugged him'. u don't like my touch, I'll never but he found his word lost in her mouth,, she pressed her lips upon him,, sucking slowly his full lips,, that powered him,, he captured her lips with full passion,, she parted her lips to give him the access to enter her mouth,, he kissed her deep' dancing with her lips, exchanging their saliva,, dancing in passion'. His hand goes around her waist'. Cupping the slender curves,,, he pulls her more close,, there is no gap between them'. He leaned on her, they parted form the kiss after long time and he came to her neck, giving wet kisses,, her eyes were drooping in pleasure and passion,, she moaned his name continuously,, he came to her chest and kisses there,, he was pulling her dress material down to have more access, was failing and that angered him,, he ripped her dress,, and that bare her front,, she tried to cover herself with her hand but he pinned her hand to her either side,, she can saw the raw desire in him,, she tried to voice to stop him but that means only to anger him'. he bite her skin and she winched in pain,, fresh tears rolled down and he immediately kissed it away,, slowly whispering in her ear,, sorry, I didn't wanted to hurt u,, sorry, he kept saying sorry and kissing every nerves of her soothing by licking the biting area,, how can she refuse him,, she hugged him tight and ripped all their remaining cloths to get more access her white shin,, his touch was arousing her,, she bite his shoulder to control herself but nothing was in control,, kissed came down her belly giving kisses all around,,, she was full aroused and can't control anymore..

Geet: please maan, he take her command and parted her legs,, one long thrust and he inside her deep'.

Geet open her eyes with a smile,, their moment of the night flash in front of her,, she turn to see maan was fast asleep hugging her,, his hold on her waist was so tight that she has a blue mark on it,, she felt sore between her leg and remember the passionate night that he had made love to her not once but the whole night,, he was so engrossed in her that doesn't wanted to leave her for once'.

She saw his peaceful face a small tears escaped from her eyes,, she kissed his forehead: thank u maan'.

Maan's sleep got disturb with the continuous knock on the door,, someone is pressing the bell very hard,, he remember he was with geet, a smile spreads on his face, last night they became one, he smile thinking about their closeness,, he wanted to confess first but things were goes other way' but geet didn't stop him either that means she also loves him, she still loves me, I will confess my mistake and love to her.. aur der nahi kar sakta,, but his smile got disturb to hear another ring of the door,, he thought why geet is not opening the door, least he know what is the last thing he have to face now'. He slipped in his shirt and pants,, and walked to the door' he opens the door and elderly woman walked in the house,, he tried to stop her but she told its her house who can stop her, maan was confuse but then the lady said, is he is maan? he nodded still being confuse,, she said look at the table beside bed,, there is a letter,, she will come after 1 hr'. maan goes to collect that,, but he was hell confuse,, who was that and where is geet? And how does that lady knows him? shrugging all the thought he goes to her room and saw a letter and a red rose there, he frown,, a small fear stretch in her heart' he took the letter and

Dear maan

By the time u will get the letter I'll be far away from u,, though u will be always with me in my heart,,, I have tried to cope up with the situation maan, trust me honestly I tried but every time I failed miserably,, I accept my defeat that time, when u walked out form my life, I tried to maintain my old self but I forgot me myself has walked away with u,, I never thought for a guy i can forget myself, but look I m lost in u, I can't survive like this anymore, yeah u have walked in yesterday but where is the security that u won't go away again' I even don't know why u came last night but that is best moment of my life, I don't regret anything maan, not last night not that day, but u take me wrong, I was only shy and tense as for a girl it was very big thing which I myself wanted to give u in a very special way, but last night I surrender myself as I knew I won't be able to have the choice afterwards, but maan I wanted to thank u, u made me feel complete.. u must be thinking why I have wrote the letter, why don't I confess everything in front of u, but that only make me weak, yes I feel weak against u, when I saw u with other I feel weak, I feel so lonely that once u were there for me but I didn't gave u the importance maybe, that's why u walked away from me, but maan u were always special to , and u will be only, I can't hold myself anymore, I m breaking every moment, if I stays near I m afraid I'll destroy everything, and I don't want to be a throne of ur path, I loved u maan and always will but I wish u forget me,, move on and choose a girl who only loves u and more important whom u love from the very deep of ur heart' maybe we will never meet again, but the one year I spent around u gave the prettiest memory that I never want to forget, thanks for everything maan'and don't blame last night,, I have choose my way from much time before, last night was a gift for me, god has been kind to give u and thank u for the good bye gift'I wish all the happiness for u maan' GOOD BYE,,, and I LOVE YOU'.

Geet,,

Ps: my landlord will be there at morning, give her the keys'

Maan was in tears,, his whole world just crashed down, he sank in the ground,

he had cried that day hugging eth letter close to her heart'. From that day he never went to any girl,, living in his remorse, living in her memory,, he had tried to reach her but 1^st he didn't knew where she lived,, when he get to know about it from sumit, he went to hosiyarpur her family' but they have no clue where she is or what happened to her, as they were least interested in her' he didn't know why they are so angry on her'. her mother cried holding his hand,, she wanted her daughter but no one care for her' maan left hp that night.. he have died thousands time whenever he read the letter,, and at last when his father dies he wanted to give his responsibility to im, and he took that as his dream also went away with geet'.

End of past'''..

Back to present'..

Geet opens her eyes remembering everything, her dried tears falls free,, it was long time she have closed her heart and tears to broke her once again ut here maan has the only power to take her from herself,, maan came to her cheeks and drank the salty water' he kisses her eyes and then her forehead'

Maan: I m sorry'

Geet leaned on the wall: I never wanted to hear this..

Maan: can't we,, but his words never get the chance to get out from his mouth as her cell rang with a loud sound'.

Geet picked it up instantly,, maan makes him comfortable in the chair,, and watched her tensed face'

Geet: I m coming in a while,, she hung up,,, maan I need to go,, she picked her belongings and tried to go, but maan held her hand'

Maan: I m coming with u,, she looked at him unbelievingly' but the look said he will come with her'

Geet: I can manage maan,,

Maan: I think u r forgetting I m ur boss and owener of this company, I can find ur whereabouts in the city,, she rolled her eyes, don't waste ut time in thinking, lets go,, she have no choice, she gave her address and he drove her to her place'

Geet enter the house and tammy ran to her'. she sat on her knees'. And tammy hugged her..

Tammy: thank god mom u came,, u know na I don't like to be alone,, in London there was miss bilimoriya but here no one loves tammy,,,

Geet frown: where is pinky masi? Tammy smiled weakly

Tammy: she doesn't love me,

Pinky came from her back, merged in flour, looking like a white teddy bear: yes ur pinky masi doesn't loves u and that's why only for u I tried to make paratha and look my state,, geet ur daughter is a pure devil,, she said flour is on the upper self and when I was holding that she was tickling me and whole flour just crashed on me,, look I m looking like a ghost' geet and tammy looked at her and then to each other and burst in laughing'

Geet: I warn u pinky, u said she is pure angel and now,

Pinky: I didn't knew then na, she is queen of devil'tammy only smirks at her' and pinky gave a murderous look'

Geet: sorry pinky, u go and freshen up, I'll make something for us'

Pinky: nahi, tu ja, 1^st this long hrs journey and then ur khauds boss who just called u after landing here, u only got 2 hrs to rest and to u made lunch for tammy'

Pinky then noticed a handsome man was witnessing their cute argument,, pinky's mouth went to the ground to see his well built structure and hot looks' she hit geet's arm

Pinky: who is this hotty yaar? Then geet remember maan was there'

Geet: pinky he is my boss,, pinky bite her tongue..

Pinky: sorry..

At 1^st maan was giving angry look and the burst into laughter,, pinky smiled embaressed and then tammy give her a mirror,, she screamed and tammy maan bth laughed aloud,, pinky excuse from geet, after freshen up she left as her father was calling her continuously' tammy and maan was comfortable with each other'

Tammy: buddy u r so fast,, u are already here without my phn call.. she gave hima cute smile,, he lift her and make himself comfortable in the unwrapped couch'

Maan: wo I was missing someone for a long time, and when I got her I didn't wanted to leave her for a moment now' geet looked at him understanding each and every word'

Tammy: u missed me?

Maan smiled: yes I missed u a lot, he kissed her chubby cheeks'

Geet goes to the kitchen but maan wanted to help her so he called her: geet take some rest I'll make something'

Geet: no maan,, I can take care of my self,, she was fighting with her died feeling,, she tried to make something but in the process burned her finger,, maan immediately goes to her and sucks her finger'

There was an eyes lock remembering everything when tammy enters between them with a ointment'

Tammy: mamma ye apki purani adat hian, don't know why u got lost,, I think u must be dreaming about ur prince charming,,, maan's eyes popped out,, and geet gave a threatening look' while tammy gave her famous cheesy smile' maan was really confuse with this statement but he chose to ignore and enjoying this cute angel, who talk more like his nani'.

After setting the dinner three went to finish that,, their was only tammy who was talking and maaneet only stealing glances of each other' maan finds it fishy tammy didn't talk about her dad' but its good for him,, he can make some way to their life, he can't lose the opportunity to have both the girl in his life,, he can't afford to lose geet once again, he wanted to turn their past but he can't do that,, so its good to make better present and future'.

After the dinner its time for some dusting and cleaning as the furniture and house is not furnished yet,, she didn't get the time,, after landing india and her apartment 1^st work she get to see her boss,,, god grace was on her that pinky was her neighbor and she offered her that she can take care of tammy when she went to her office'

Tammy was enjoying maan's company where geet was busy shifting her bed and clearing the dut from the wall,, it was the same apartment that she leave 6yrs ago,, but the only difference is she has brought the apartment under name buying it' maan enter the room,, past memory came down in him,, she was having her back'. he stood there without letting her know,, but she felt his presence, how can't she,, she feels him in her,, how can she doesn't recognize his smell' she stopped at her track and he puts his hand around her arms, pulling her close'.

Precap: u r drooling over him mamma..

No,, I m not'.

Do u like him???

Ok I have decided not to turn it as ss but I will end it with sufficient parts, no worry for abrupt ending' and here I m starting new SS, do check it, and tell me hows it honestly'.

Kaisi Kashish hain Yeh (MG ss)

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