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will u update today ?
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part 7
sameera..geet ..bahut raat ho gayi hai beta..ap log ab apne kamre me jao..sare mehmaan vi chale gaye ap dono thak gayi hogi..said daima. meena
ji..goodnight ..
good night beta..
geet & sameera went ascended the staircase together..their rooms were in different direction..so they parted..bt before going geet wished sameera good night..
goodnight di..at first sameera did not replied & started to go towards her room then she turned back with a sly smile....
good night geet enjoy your SUHAG RAAT she said stressing on the word & winked to her & went towards to her room laughing..geet stood their dumbstruck..then with brimming eyes she went towards her room slowly..
she entered the room & saw maan looking at the moon with his back towards her..maan
maan looked at her
dekho geet main janta hoon ki hamari shaadi kin halat me hui hai..aur main ye vi janta hoon ki koi vi ladki apne liye ek paralyzed pati nahi chati hogi..maan paused..she looked down not knowing what to say..he came near her regulting his wheelchair,
geet..meri taraf dekho...
she looked at maan with tear of pain & guilty flowing from her eyes..main janta hu ki har ladki ki tarah tumhare vi sapne honge apne jivansathi ko leke..tumhe sarminda hone ki zarurat nahi geet..tumhari koi galti nahi hai..mere iss halat ki zimedaar tum thodi ho..sarminda to mujhe hona chahiye..
nahi maan isme apki koi galti nahi hai..humdono hi halat se majboor the..
the lekin ab nahi ..
matlab..??
matlab ki jab mamla thoda shant ho jayega to hum divorce le lenge aur me khud tumhare liye tumhare rajkumar ko dhunduga..
now geet started to cry..she couldn't hold back anymore..all the pain of years..all the abusing word from society..she was a mere human too..
sshhh..is me rone wali kya baat hai geet mujhe bilkul bura nahi lagega..bura to tab lagta hai jab log sympathy jatate hai..
ab rona band karo..
she twisted her nose hickuping..ek sart pe..
kya..?
jab tak hum saath hai tabtak hum pehle ke tarha dost rahenge..in sab ka asar hamari dosti pe nahi padega..mere pure jivan me ek hi dost mila hai..main use khona nahi chati..
maan smiled inwardly bt made a stern face..hmm..sochta hu..
she hit him lightly MAAN..
are thik hai thik hai baba..aakhe kyu dikha rahi ho..iss tarha aakhe mat dikhao ..tumhare ullu jaisi aakho se muje daar lagta hai..
ha aur apki tote jaisi naak se mujhe hasi ati hai..
GEEET...
MAAAN...
& they went on & on...
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next morning..
it was 7 am..geet & sameera were with meena in kitchen after the arti..it was done by meena as before the BADI PUJA.which was after one month...daughter -in-laws in their house was nt allowed to do the arti...
geet ..sameera beta ap dono ka aj pehla din hai ghar me ap dono ka aj rosoi me breakfast banana padega..hamre ghar ka riWaz hai..ki shadi ke baad pahle din ghar ke sare member ki din ki suruwat bahu ke hat ke bane khane se hoti hai..waise hum is rasam ke baad mehndi na utar jane tak bahu ko rosoi me ghusne tak nahi dete..she said laughing..so khabardar agar breakfast bana dene ke baad mehndi utar ne se pehle meri madat karne ke liye rasoi ke as pass vi vatki to..
geet smiled listening to this lovely lady..who treated with so much love..par maji ..
while sameera thinking..bach gayi.aj kisi tarha ye breakfast ka pala chuk jaye to jaan chute
choti ma kaho betaji..maan dev vicky misha ye sab vi to mere bacche hi hai..
choti ma kya banau..sameera asked extra sweetly ..🤢
jo ap dono ka dil chahe beta..
choti ma ..app kya rasoi me hi rahegi..??
ha beta..tum dono ki madat jo karni hai...
nahi nahi ap jake aram kariye na..waise vi ap thaki hui lagti hai..sameera said hastily..
then almost pushed her outside the kitchen..then said ap jaiye na..hum dono hai na..sambhal lenge..kyu geet..
ha choti ma..hum hai na..ap jaiye...
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waise geet ..sameera said munching on a carrot sitting on counter top..kal raat kaisi thi???mast na??she said with a smirk..
geet was chopping vegetables ..for one moment she stopped chopping then resumed ..smiled saying .ha di..kal raat bahut hi accha tha..
sameera freezed for a moment..she thought..geet will become upset & start to cry..bt nothing like that happend..she fumed..taunted her..kyu??aisa kya hua ??veerji ne sari raat sone nahi diya kya??
nahi di..wo hum bate kar rahe the ..baat kar te karte kab time guzar gaya pata hi nahi chala..
thik hai thik hai..zyada bolne ki zarurat nahi hai..acche se paka ..aur kya paka rahi hai bol..mujhe unhe batana vi to hoga ki MAINE kon kon si dish banayi hai..aur khabardar jo mu khola to..
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hmmm..smells good!!!pratham said..
are wah ..aj to special breakfast lagta hai...vicky said..
hmm..kya kya bana hai..dev asked to meena,..
ae lo..mujhse nahi budhu..jisne banaya hai unko pucho..she pointed to geet & sameera..
bhabi apne aur sam ne banaya hai itna sab kuch..dev said cheerfully
waise choti ma rahul kaha hai??
wo..wo to trip pe gaya hai beta dosto ke sath..meena replied
meera & vicky both rubbed their hands together & said in unison..are wah bhabio ne to kamal kar diya..aj to mazza ayega..
then they both looked at each other & said to each other at the same time..
hey.. why are u copying me u copycat...
me..no u are copying me..stop that or i will break ue teeth..then they both looked to pratham..
PAPA..
pratham was laughing ..while maan was shaking his head...in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta..sara din kuch ata pata nahi..jab milte hai..har bar ek hi drama..
CHUP... EK DUM CHUP..maan glared at them
they both became silent with thier fingers at their lips..nodding their heads like kids..
Pratham-waise aj tum dono ne kamal kar diya..khana bahut hi laziz hai..hume to lagta hai ki humara pet aj phat jayega..phir vi hum khate hi jayenge..he laughed..jite raho beti..
geet made different dosa,idli-sambar, rasam,rava vada & kheer at the end..
sameera-ji papaji.geet ne meri bahut help ki...waise kaisa laga MERA banaya hua khana???
ye sab tumne akele banaya sam!!!!!..dev asked astonished
nahi ..wo geet ne kheer banaya hai na..she actually wanted to take the whole credit..bt it woudnt sound nice..so she thought why nt give geet the credit of the easiest one..
bt things turned to be different than she thought..
pratham-sameera beti..tumhare haat me to jadu hai..lekin geet ne iss simple se kheer se itna kamal kar diya ki pucho mat..kyu..hai na maan???
ha papa..
vicky was licking hisbowl of kheer then looking at geet sheepishly smiled..thodi aur milegi bhabi..??
geet laughed & ruffled his hair ..laati hu.
bhabi mere liye vi..said meera
actuallu bhabi..dev said itching his head..i think savi aur ek round lenge kheer ki...
meena smiled then asked pratham to give saugat...
geet was given a heavy red gorgeous kundan set..while sameera a green one..
when all went to their work & maan retired to his room meena asked to both to finish their breakfast & take rest & she went to do her works
bt geet went with her part of breakfast to namrata's room & sat beside her..she was not sleeping..geet made her sit & said ...ma...ap yahi soch rahi ho na..ki mere mang me sindoor aur gale me mangalsutra kyun...main apko batati hu...she narated yesterdays incidents...at the end namrata was in tears...geet wiped her tears & said..dil chota na karo ma..main bahut khush hu..maan mujhe kavi dukhi hone nahi dete..
waise ma aj maine breakfast banaya hai..maine socha apke saath khau..apko mere saath khana vi hoga aur meri tarif vi karni hogi..
namrata frowned...are baba ha ha..muje pata hai..ki ap solids nahi kha sakti..lekin liquid to kha sakti hai na..ap vi na..ap vi maan ki tarha mujhe buddhu samazti hai kya??
she made her eat sambar & rasam with spoon then made her eat the liquid part of kheer..then she asked .kaisa hai???
namrata made a stern face..
now geet made a baby crying face..almosr in verge of crying..acha nahi hai kya..
now namrata smiled..
geet now made a baby angry face..ap muje tease kar rahi thi??ap ma bete bilkul ek jaise ho..jao main apse baat nahi karti..hmmpp
..namrata made a pleading face ...like..aisa maat karo..
geet looked at her with the corner of her eyes,thik hai thik hai aise face mat banao
..namrata smiled..& geet continued her chating while eating..
to the rest of the world...namrata did not react..bt to geet ..she reacted a little bit ...bt to geet,it's normal as she doesn't know this fact..

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi everyone..thank you for all your love,likes & comment.i want to request u guys something..can u guys make mg poster which will suit my ffs MY JUNGLE GIRL,Tum dena saath mera...o Humnawaz?? & also now after reading 6 chapters of my ffs..i think u guys have got the essence of them..so pls help me..those who want to help me pls post ur postar in comments..poster for MJG in its thread & poster for TDSMOH in its respective thread.. i will not choose the poster as..i am not so talented to judge others..the poster with maximum votes will be chosen..pls co operate..love u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ITS AWSEM THANX FOR ADDING ME

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!
cont soon whenever u'v time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Only For You
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome dear... loved it... 😊
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing dear
good that maaneet r friends thank god no misunderstanding 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part..
so maneet's friendship started..!
sam s such a shameless woman..

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