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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 12 Flashback Cont...


Chadha house


Ananya woke up and attacked on her wardrobe... she was talking to herself "oh what should I wear..." she started throwing all the clothes out... "no...not this one...hmmm ...no...oh its too bright...no...ooofff..."

Mitali saw the room flooded with clothes... "what are you doing Ananya??"

Ananya "mom I am looking for a suitable dress..."

Mitali "why???"

Ananya "i have a function at a friends place..."

Mitali "oh my God...look what you have done...i am tired of your dresses...wear what you like but don't throw your clothes untidily"

Ananya "mom have you seen my pink skirt??"

Mitali "i don't know which one you are talking about...you have so many skirts Ananya...please wear any of them..." she said while picking up the clothes...

Sulekha entered "no Mitali how can my Any wear anything...she needs to look special...after all she's my Grand Daughter."

Mitali "oh mom now you only handle her...i am leaving...and Ananya have your juice" she kept the glass on the table and walked out of the room...

Sulekha "Any which color are you looking bache??"

Ananya "Grandma you remember my pick skirt...??? the one which had flower on it"

Sulekha "oh that one...yes yes...so you can't find that skirt"

Ananya "no..." she made a sad face...

Sulekha "i can't see you sad...come I will buy a new dress for you...lets go"

Ananya "really Grandma..."

Sulekha "yes really"

Ananya hugged her Grandma... "yeah...i will buy a new dress...you are so sweet"

Sulekha "and you are my sweetheart"


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Priya's house

Priya "thank you for coming on my birthday"

Rahul "hey happy b'day"

Priya "thanks Rahul...where's Arjun??"

Rahul "he's coming with Veer..."

Priya "ok...come enjoy the party"

A big car stopped outside...it was Veer...

Baldev "Veer I will come and pick you up after the party finishes"

Veer "ok Grandpa."

Veer and Arjun entered...it was a huge party...a big birthday bash...Priya was turning sixteen...

Veer "happy b'day Priya for your sweet sixteenth b'day..."

Priya "thanks Veer...please come"

the party was started...there was loud music and all the school boys and girls were dancing...and enjoying the party...

"you look like a princesses..." Sulekha said while Ananya was getting out of the car...

Ananya "really Grandma..."she said happily...

Sulekha "my Any...now go inside...i will come to pick you up..."

Ananya "bye Grandma" she walked inside...she was indeed looking very pretty...

her pink dress till her knees was looking most elegant...

She entered and wished Priya...

Priya "wow Ananya you look so pretty...lets dance"

Ananya started dancing when Veer saw her and the moment he looked at her he stopped drinking...

Rahul "hi Veer" but Veer was lost in Ananya...

he thought of going and hugging her...but something stopped him...and he came back to his senses...

Ananya saw Veer and she approached him "hello Veer...how are you...hey what are you drinking??"

Veer "soft drink"

Ananya "i hope its not coke" she laughed... Veer laughed as well...

Veer "No I won't drink coke in front of"

Ananya "why??"

Veer "then you will run away from me??"

Ananya "wrong...i will make you run Veer...i never run from anyone..." she smiled and Veer gazed at her...

Veer "hmmm impressive..."

Ananya "that I am...anyways I go and dance...see you later"

Veer kept on gazing at her while she was dancing...he thought he would never confess his feelings...then he thought feelings??? he said to himself "feelings for Ananya...no way...she's completely different from me...no I like shy girls...yes...and Ananya is not shy...she's very bold...i must say bold and beautiful"

Ronit "hi Veer whom are you talking with??"

Veer "no one...talking to myself.."

Ronit "wow...what???

Veer "nothing yaar...you tell did you tell her??"

Ronit "i don't think so Meenakshi likes me...i should forget about her...and I think its just a crush not love"

Veer "what's the difference between the two"

Ronit "well crush is something that stays for some period of time while love stays forever"

Veer "wow...then I need to test as well"

Ronit "test??? what??"

Veer "nothing...lets enjoy the party" this time he didn't looked at her assuming Ananya was just his crush and he did not fall in love...

It was time for cake...everyone gathered around a huge table with a nice chocolate cake...Priya was about to cut the cake...Veer was standing near Ronit...he suddenly jerked by a touch of a soft hand... he looked on his side and saw Ananya clapping and singing happy b'day for Priya... Veer looked at his hand as if he got something special on his hand...he went on a side and lifted his hand and kissed it with his lips...

then again he thought "no this is just a crush...how can I think like this..." he joined the party...

Ananya was carrying a cake in the plate...she was passing through to some girls who were standing in the middle...her foot struck in a wire joined with the speakers...she was about the fall when Veer hold her... "saved you again" he said with a smile...

Ananya "thanks Veer" she looked at him and smiled "and I am sorry"

Veer "sorry for what??"

Ananya got up straight and Veer looked at his shirt and neck...it was cake all over him...

Anjana liked Veer a lot...she said while looking at him "oh Veer should I come and lick the cake on your neck"

Veer didn't say anything and went from there...

Ananya was smiling but soon her smile vanished...she went after him towards the bathroom...

"wait Veer..."

Veer looked behind "its alright Ananya...i will wash it"

Ananya "you know why those girls were saying this...because you are as sweet as this cake"

Veer smiled while he opened the tap to wash the cake...and got some tissues...

Ananya "wait I will help you clean..." she took the tissues and wiped the cake around Veer's neck...as she was wiping...Veer looked at her pink lips...she was so close that he could smell her...

Veer "why do you smell like strawberry?"

Ananya laughed "i don't smell like strawberry...its a lip gloss..."

Veer smiled and closed his eyes for a second...

Ananya "ok Veer...its clean now..."

Veer "thanks Ananya"

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school

Next day

Ananya was busy studying for her house exams...

Veer "hi Ananya...studying?"

Ananya nodded... "come sit"

Veer "no thanks I have to go for my basketball match"

Ananya "oh good luck...but what about the test???"

Veer "i have already prepared"

Ananya "good...ok I will catch you later"

Veer left from there

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb dear
loved da part
plz cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

superb dear

loved da part
plz cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

hi Sim...thanks dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
so first veer fell for her...then why didn't he proposed her first...😕
ananya ...veer u r rite our anu is bold n beautiful...😉
veer it's not ur only crush...it's something else understand...😊
n veer is sweet like cake...well that's true...😳
update soon...
luv u...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear😊...

so veer needs to test whether it is crush or love...hmm...hope he will realize it soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ANANYA A STRAWBERRY GAL...

VEER AS SWEET AS CAKE😳

CRUSH AND LOVE...DIFF- THINGS YAAR...😕POOR VEER CONFUSED.

CAKE PART WAS REALLY TO INNOVATIVE...

MOST ROMANTIC-he suddenly jerked by a touch of a soft hand... he looked on his side and saw Ananya clapping and singing happy b'day for Priya... Veer looked at his hand as if he got something special on his hand...he went on a side and lifted his hand and kissed it with his lips...


UD SOON...NEED NOT TELL DIS...U R ALREADY REGULAR...


U R REALLY A WRITER AND INNOVATIVE THINKER
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice part,😛 loved Party scene😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear😊...loved it😳...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 13 flashback cont...

Malhotra house...

Baldev "alright Khushwant...i will talk to Veer...but don't you scold him"

Khushwant "alright Dad...i am leaving in half an hour...if he can get ready"

Baldev went to Veer's room...

Veer was sleeping peacefully...

Baldev "Veer putar...wake up its almost 11am...you promised that you will go with your Dad to our new hotel..."

Veer "later Grandpa...i can't get up now"

Baldev "Veer...you promised and now you are not listening...we have a big party there...lets go...and I also want you to help there...you will learn from other staff then only you will become successful"

Veer "alright Grandpa...but you have to come with me."

Baldev "ok now get ready"

After some time Veer left with his Dad and Grandpa for their hotel...

Veer "is it something special today??"

Baldev "yes we have a delegation coming from overseas"

the car stopped outside a huge five star hotel...

Veer got down and went inside with his Grandfather...

____*********



Chadha house

Sulekha "Ananya how come you woke up so early??"

Ananya "i have to study Grandma...my exams are coming near..."

Sulekha "that's good...you should study..."

Ananya took one apple from the kitchen...she was about to eat when she thought about Veer...he said I look like apple '..she thought in her mind... then smiled '

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At the hotel...

Baldev "you must go and check the food and other decorations...that way you will have some knowledge..."

Veer went in the hotel kitchen...everyone greeted him...as he walked he looked at so many items... he thought about Ananya and imagined him with her...

he started singing a song...

Dheere dheere pyaar ki jo aag jal gayi
Jitni masti do dilon mein thi ubal gayi
Iska maza chak to loon main zara
Phir kahoonga main ke daal gal gayi
Dheere dheere pyaar ki jo aag jal gayi
Jitni masti do dilon mein thi ubal gayi
Arre, iska maza chak to loon main zara
Phir kahoonga main ke daal gal gayi


Tum na the to yun thi zindagi yahan
Benamak ho jaise theeki sabziyaan
Ishq ka achaar bhi naa ban saka
Husn jab na laaya tha yeh chatniyaan,
Hai hai, iska maza chak to loon main zara
Iska maza chak to loon main zara
Phir kahoonga main ke daal gal gayi


Aaj tak tum is liye akele the
Kadwe the, kaseele the, karele the
Aaj itne sweet aise nek ho
Birthday ka jaise koi cake ho, hoi
Ho,
Hai hai, iska maza chak to loon main zara
Iska maza chak to loon main zara
Phir kahoonga main ke daal gal gayi


Baldev "Veer...???? what are you doing???"

Veer came back from his dream... "no...no...nothing Grandpa..."

Baldev "you are hugging these vegetables!!!!...what is happening to you???"

Veer "nothing...i...i...i was playing...i was getting bored Grandpa"

Baldev "come out of the kitchen...we have important guests outside...let me introduce you to them"

Veer went with his Grandpa...he thought how could he imagine Ananya with him in the kitchen...was it just a crush or is he falling for her...

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Next day in School...

Veer was looking around for her...Ronit looked at Veer...

Ronit "Veer are you looking for someone???"

Veer "no not at all..."

Ronit "it seems you are...i think you are looking for Ananya"

Veer "stupid...why will I look for her???"

Ronit "because you like her"

Veer "who told you???? I don't like her..."

Ronit "why? Isn't she nice?"

Veer "its not a question of nice or not nice...she's too far from the girl of my choice"

Ronit "it doesn't look though"

Veer "will you stop it now"

Ananya "hi guys...what's up"

Veer "oh hi Ananya...how are you??"

Ananya "good...have you prepared for the exam??"

Ronit "he has prepared far too much"

Veer stared at Ronit "lets go...we are getting late for our class"

Ananya "oh yes...lets go"


Ananya looked at the poster on the notice board...

Trip to Manali

Meenakshi "are you interested to go ??"

Ananya "not a bad idea...i have been to Manali so many times...we have our hotel there..."

Meenakshi "good...then we will stay in your hotel"

Ananya smiled "lets see which hotel they are booking...there are so many hotels in Manali.."

Meenakshi "so you have a hotel...good yaar when you feel like you can go"

Ananya "yes and I love eating...so my Dad has opened a few restaurants for me"

Meenakshi "really...wow...your Dad loves you so much??"

Ananya "everyone loves me...and whatever I want they just give me..."

Meenakshi "which all hotels do you have here..."

Ananya "we have one five star hotel and eight restaurants all over the city"

Meenakshi "let me guess Royal Palace hotel??"

Ananya "no no that one...its Paradise hotel"

Meenakshi "wow Paradise is so famous...but Royal Palace is also famous..."

Ananya "i heard from my Dad...they are our family rivals...i have never been in their hotel"

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outside the school...

It was raining heavily when Ananya was waiting for her car ...she was all wet...she tried to cuddle with her bag and was standing under a tree, when she saw him coming towards her...

Veer "come under the umbrella...otherwise you will be wet"

Ananya "thanks Veer...i was waiting for my car"

Veer "i can drop you...come"

Ananya "no thanks Veer...i have called the driver...he's about to come..."

Veer looked at her wet features... there were little droplets on her pink lips...few drops were dancing on her fair cheeks as she tried to wipe them off...her beautiful eyes were looking around...the big eye lashes were looking more black when wet...her hair was tied at the back...few strings were touching her cheeks...she was hugging her bag so close to her...Veer was gazing at her when suddenly she met his gaze and he stopped and looked elsewhere...

Ananya looked at Veer "you are not going??"

Veer "i saw you standing so I came to help..."

Ananya "my car..." she waved '. "ok Veer...see you tomorrow"

Ananya sat in the car... ...while Veer was just watching her...

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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii i read this cmplet its too good 😊
bt ye kya yr tumne to hme veer ki dost bna diya... Ananya ka nam hi priya kr deti n 😳 chlo koi baat nhi next ff me hmara nam rkh lena 😳
n this ff is too hatke tn others...
Thnx 😊

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