KoRag love gone wrong...chap 4 jan 18 pg 3

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I hope you all like this FF. I am going to try and go a different direction with why our Koki is the way she is...Enjoy and please comment and give your opinion...it is always welcome😊
A KoRag story...

Koki knew her husband was nothing short of a romantic poet and a lover of music. He did not earn too much but what he did not earn in money he made up in his love for his wife and children. Thanks to Parag's dad, Parag was left with enough money to support his family and pursue his own dreams. His investment in the Modi empire did not hurt either. One day when Ahem was 15 years old and Kinjal had just started school, Koki decided she needed to buy some new clothes for Ahem and Jigar. Those two were so close. They would not allow their mothers to only buy for one. If it was bought for Ahem then Jigar got one too and vice versa. Otherwise the brothers refused to wear it. Koki smiled when she thought of how close the cousins were. No one could find one of them somewhere without the other being very close by.

She loved her Mota Bhabhi as well. Mota Bhabhi had helped her adjust to a life in the Modi Bhavan. Koki always thought she was the unwanted child to her mom. And here as a Modi bahu her opinion was respected and wanted and always welcome. It was a whole new way of living in so much love and admiration. Mota Bhai was more like a father figure to Koki. Ahem had admired his kaka and always said I want to be like kaka when I grow up. Koki always wanted her kids to dream and pursue their own paths in life and not be pushed into anything.

So here she was entering a shop where you could find clothes for men and women and boys and girls. Basically everyone under the sun. Koki decided just for the fun of it she would go see what the latest design is for the sarees. She asked the lady at the counter to show her some in her and Mota Bhabhi's favorite color. She was looking around and saw a couple who were so into each other that they were lost to the world. The husband, she mused, insisted his wife buy a pink saree because it was his favorite color. The lady just giggled and said you always buy me a pink saree. This time I want a blue saree. The man then said as you wish my love. Koki was for some reason taken by the voice of the man. Then she realized why. The man sounded like PARAG! Koki thought that was not possible...Parag was in Mumbai at a poetry convention. So Koki moved a little to get a better look at the man and sure enough that was Parag. Koki just stood there stunned and did not know what to do. She felt her whole world shatter around her. The man she thought the world of and loved with all her heart was here with another woman and acting like a newly wed. Was she seeing things? Was her mind playing tricks on her?

She did not even realize the lady at the counter was calling her and asking if she is ok. Koki just looked at the lady and said I am not feeling well so I am going and I will come some other time. Saying this Koki left. While leaving she passed by the couple to double check her suspicions. And sure enough it was Parag. By this time Koki had tears in her eyes and walked out of the store without her purse that she had set on the counter. She got in the car and told the driver to drive straight home and to hurry.

When she came thru the doors of the house Baa and Mota Bhabhi were preplexed to see Koki coming home empty handed. Koki always bought something for everyone when she went shopping. When Baa asked if Koki was ok...Koki looked at Baa and said I dont feel good I am going to go and lay down for a while. And then she turned to Mota Bhabhi and asked if she could pick the kids up from school and bring them home. Mota Bhabhi with her sweet smile said of course I will. You go rest and don't worry about anything. I am here for you if you need anything. Ok. Koki nodded and gave the best smile she could muster and went to her room and shut the door and cried. She cried till no more tears would come. She just sat on her bed and moaned in the inside thinking why is this happening to me? She then just laid down on the bed and closed her eyes to sleep. Maybe this will all be a dream and when she wakes up everything will be as it was before her nightmare started. Parag and another woman? Why? Did she not give him everything he wanted? Was she not always supporting him in all his dreams? Was she not the one who said just fulfill your dreams and don't worry about what others say? This is not right. Something was going on...But what? 😕😲

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start. He is such a hussy!!!! let me know when you update. X xx
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Thank you Xarina...your support lead me to this FF.
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Interesting story!!! I'm really enjoying it!!
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awesome story.. update soon 😛
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Pl continue. I always imagined parag to have another wife and family.am surprised to c even u thinkin the same! Do pm me when u update would love to c ur take on it
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Great start... Can't wait for Part 2! 😎
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I absolutelly loved it!!!!

The way you set up Koki's charakter at first with all her hope and dreams and happiness and then destroyed it because of this idiotic, cheating bas***d!!!! Gosh I hate the paragh in your story!!! But I adore the Ahem-Jigar relationship you established!!

Please continue soon😃 can't wait what happens next!!!
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KoRag...chapter two

When Ahem came home from school he found his mom sleeping in the afternoon. This was unheard of. What is wrong with her? He made a point of asking her when she is feeling better. Kaki was really nice to him and Kinjal, but he never felt complete until he had hugged his mom twice daily. Once before school and once after. Even Jigar loved to come and hug Koki when he was down. There was something so motherly about her that no one could resist her maternal charm. Ahem came back down after making sure his mom was ok. He and Jigar went up to Jigar's room and finished their homework. Then it was Ahem's turn to sit and help Kinjal with her studies. Parag and Koki allowed Ahem or Jigar or both to help Kinjal. She responded better with her brothers.
Koki woke up right before dinner and was shocked to see the time. She hurried to the bathroom and freshened up and went downstairs. She kept apologizing to Mota Bhabhi and Baa. They would just hush her and say not to worry. But it was part of Koki's nature to worry about making sure she took care of the whole Modi Bhavan as she was the younger Bahu and this was her job. A job she took seriously. After dinner while cleaning the kitchen Mota Bhabhi asked Koki if she wanted to talk. Koki told her she was at a crossroads and did not know what to do. She is not sure if talking to Mota Bhabhi is even a good idea. Mota Bhabhi didn't push and just said anytime you are ready I am here for you. Koki's eyes filled with fresh tears and she wiped them before anyone saw her. Ahem came to her room as she was getting ready for the night and asked if she was ok. Koki knew that Ahem's world revolved around her, so she just said she was not feeling well. Ahem accepted her excuse and went on to bed. Koki is now alone because according to the family Parag is in Mumbai till the end of next week. So she had enough time to figure out if she wanted to confront Parag or see if he would confess when she mentioned her going shopping at the same store.
Koki was starting to think she just imagined the whole thing. But her broken heart was evidence enough to know it was all too real. She wished she could figure out who this woman was and how long has this affair been going on. Koki just had a thought...what if this has been going on since before I got married? Why O God why would he marry me if he loved this other woman. Now not only has her life been sent into turmoil but she would risk her children's lives and her in-laws reputation if she dared to pursue any further. But could she just let it go? Would this be possible? Living under the same roof as Parag day after day and pretend that nothing is wrong?!? On one hand Koki wished she would not have gone out today, and on the other hand she is glad she went or else this would never have come to light. The next morning during the morning tea Chirag came to Koki and asked if she is ok? Koki said yes, why would you ask? Chirag said since she came into this house as a new bride this is the first time he is not seeing the smile on her face. Chirag also went on to tell her that her smile is like sunshine that brightens up the whole house. Koki now with fresh tears hugs her Chiragbhai and says she is sorry to bring such sadness into others day. Its just that she is dealing with something that she is not sure if it can be resolved without anyone getting hurt. Chirag then told her to go to the study and wait for him. He wanted to talk to her. Koki went into the study and ten minutes later Chirag bhai and Mota Bhabhi entered the room and locked the door. Chirag bhai said the kids are with Baa who is teaching them about the Ramayan. Koki could not hold off any longer and told what she saw to her Jhat and Jhatani. They were both shocked and could not believe what they were hearing. Chirag who had by now lost all respect for his brother promised Koki he would look into it and let them both know what he found out. Koki had mixed feelings about all that was happening and let her voice be heard. They too were perplexed as to what is going on. But Chirag was not going to sit idly by and let Koki deal with this herself. For Chirag and Hetal koki was their ladlee. Seeing her this way was not acceptable. All three made a solemn oath to act normal around the children and to keep this secret between them only. And so, saying that Chirag made a few phone calls and got the investigation started as to where his brother really is!

to be continued...
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Ok...well ur trying to build Koki's background...waiting for the next part !!!

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