najane kab pyaar ho gaya.pg-103,pt-71

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Characters:vipul & soniya: Aashi's mom and dad.

yashwant dev & suman:Uv's mom-dad

rest all same as like in the show. There are new characters which would be added later…

Aashi and Uv always fights like junglies. They both use to find events to tease and insult each other.

Ranveer and Tia were known as the lovebirds of the maurya high.

Part-1

It was the day Friday{just a day before the weekend starts…}.Aashi just had her physics class. She was all set to go to canteen and spend some time with her friends.

While on the way to canteen she saw Uv flirting with a girl…Aashi thought to pull legs of Uv…Aashi went nearby Uv and…..

Aashi: umhh umhh[clearing her throat]

But Uv avoided her and didn't paid any attention to her.

Aashi{looking annoyed of being avoided}:kuch logo ko toh bilkul bhi sharam nahin aati yuhin khule aam…

Uv{angrily}:hey whats ur problem…main kuch bhi karun tumhe usse kya?

Aashi{pointing the girl with Uv}:can u pls excuse ur friend ohh I mean to say ur bf 4 a while…

The girl leaves from there giving Uv an angry look…

Uv{saying to the girl}:babes pls wait.

But she didn't listened to him and left the place.

Uv: How dare u{Anvesha}…to do this…

Aashi:I can do any thing…u have right now seen that how I had aparted ur gf from u…I just wanted to make u angry and see I succeeded.

Uv:no matters if u have succeeded…now u have to face my anger.

He grabs aashi to a corner and holded her hands tightly …Uv brings his face near to Aashi's face…

To be continued…

This is my first fan fic ever I had writtened. I hope its not boaring…please tell me should I continue or I should stop here itself…

U all can give me suggestions regarding the story and also what u like and dislike.pls comment fast.

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Uv roxs thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its nice.well done.cont fast asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Aditi(rite?)

its really nice👏

not at all borin

continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uv roxs

its nice.well done.cont fast asap

thanks a lot...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya_92

Hey Aditi(rite?)

its really nice👏

not at all borin

continue soon

Divya

thanks a tonnne...yes u are absolutely right...my name is ADITI.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashi912

its vvvv cute..continue

THANXXXXX A LOT...

U ALL GUYS CAN TELL ME WHAT U ALL WANT IN MY STORY...SO THAT I COULD ADD THAT IN THE STORY.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey aditi,its rocking 👏
pls cont soon.
sayanti
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey aditi.....its rocking. plz continue! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ADITI..U HAVE SOME TALENT IN U HUH..KAHAN THI ITNE DIN??RF KO AISE WRITER KI HI ZARURAT HAI 😃 ..CONTINUE SOON!! 👏 👏

-SALONI! 😉
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Originally posted by: sal_remix

ADITI..U HAVE SOME TALENT IN U HUH..KAHAN THI ITNE DIN??RF KO AISE WRITER KI HI ZARURAT HAI 😃 ..CONTINUE SOON!! 👏 👏

-SALONI! 😉

yeah aditi,pls cont soon.

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