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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure continue, sounds interesting i hope the dialoges are in english and the grammar is proper that is all. its difficult to read the storie with hindi dialoges sorry. but please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
nice one!! plzz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey interesting starts lolz cant stop laughing
shyme lavanyas dad
hahahah btw plz pm me i'll add u to my buddy list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2

next day shyam gets to know that her daughter has taken such a big step with the help of their friends and the main reason behind this big step is guy arnav and he gets the pic of his and give it too the goon and say him find them at any cost i want all of them with my daughter...On the other side arnav and khushi decide to leave the love birds alone as the goon will be searching them so they both go to bring some food and some other things needed but they are unaware of goons searching for them too...in the city goons recoganize arnav and catch him and khushi too and they hit arnav too know about lavanya they keep on hitting him and khushi tries to help him when aranv tries to hit the goons they catch khushi and put knife on her neck threatning him to kill her as khushi gets scared and says arnav to give all the information,arnav sees the cut on her neck which is beeding and he gets very angry and hits the goons and he also saves khushi and escape from there but the goons follow them but they find a safe place and goes there as khushi sees arnav cuts and bruises trying to reduce his pain by apllying sum medicines as they buyed it for some other reason and she shouts on him as y he did so much fight for her if something would happend to him??arnav is shocked by her this gesture he ask her same question if something might have happend to you...the both share a strange felling of others safety and try to avoid each other and after some they both safely go back to their peaceful place far from city..as arnav is confused what happend to him why he did such behavior with goons as he dont feel anything for him then he consoles himself by saying she is a girl and if any other girl would be in her place he would do same
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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like the prologue nd chapters..

And haha shyam is lav dad, very funny.
Omg thy found arhi, very interestin.

nice nd cont soon
Edited by Jalebibaby - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
nice os yaar waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting ya!
Shyam baua as dad - lol ..
thanks for the pm- will be waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it. Shyam is Lav's dad. Really cool and different. Thanks for the PM>
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3

as the night passes khushi and arnav both are unable to sleep they thinking about each other and try to ignore their feelings as nothing ever can happen like this between them ,khushi thinks about his angel and arnav thinking about his miss perfect and goes to sleep next day shaym gets to know about arnav fight with his goons and he orders them to find them at any cost and hen arnav calls shyam to inform him that his daughter is going to be married in other 24 hours. you do anything you cant stop this marriage and shyam gets more angry..on the other side they all four are sitting and discussing tomorrow plan and decide to go somewhere out for eating as akash says we all will go together, if anything will happen we will face all alone..they all go to a normal place nearby a small cafeteria after finishing their dinner they are about to go when thay are surrounded by lavanya das goons again they are succesful in escaping from there but the goons follow them and they get seperated in pairs and arnav and khushi are running together suddenly there is a crack in the road and many stones and khushi gets hurts on her leg as she cant run and goons are following them...he picks her up and carries her and search for a place so that they can hide while carrying her they reach a place they both are having a big eyelock for few minutes and after that arnav makes her sit on a chair and sees her leg which is bleeding he tries to see the whole wound by folding her jeans by which she is getting uncomfortable and he goes out for help and bring some bandages and then try to give her some aid and she is gettig hurt and suddenly she holds his shirt without even thinking for a movement. after this they both share a eye lock and suddenly some voices from outside bring them back to senses...
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4

As the time passes then they both safely moves from there as khushi cant walk arnav carries her in his arms and makes her sit in cab both have strange feeling..but they try ignore the eyelock between them as they dont talk to each other..while in cab both are silent no one talks but both of them trying to gaze at each other without letting to know the other..as they reach the place..akash and lavanya are waiting for them as they see khushi they both ask what has happend to her how did she get hurt and arnav says nothing serious just a small thing and make her sit on bed and on the other side khushi says him thankyou for helping her as true friend and i really had many misunderstanding about you... you are truely a nice person by hearing this arnav gives her a smile and sits with her and says her thankyou for helping mee and your friend she says that she know that her friendly truely loves akash and also i know the feeling of love as i really love someone so i can do anything to help the people who are in love and arnav says same to her too that he also loves someone truely..but somewhere deep inside both of them dont like the other person love someone else..and saying khushi to sleep and take care arnav goes from there...arnav is confused about his feeling towards khushi as what is it as he knows he loves miss perfect then why he is feeling bad when khushi said she loves someone else..on the other hand she feels the same when arnav said her same..as they both tried to sleep but were thinking about the confusion in their mind..as arnav thought of tomorrow as akash and lavanya were going to be married as it was big thing to do to be safe from lavanya dad
Edited by siya03 - 13 years ago

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