Eternal Return: Ch 9-16 summary; 26/July/2015; pg 101 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
I am a Chakrit fan and has seen almost all his Lakhorn. He is a very good actor and his series have something different to offer. My all time favorite would be Sawan Biang with Ann and Ken - they make the best couple! I don't know why but Thara Himalaya put me off so I stopped watching it after few episodes.

I am glad that your friend liked reading THVWU...and many thanks for recommending this FF to your friend. Its really sweet of you to do so :-)

I have said it before - Maan and Geet already are in an established friendship and have known each other for a while. Their past is also going to be explored so one can understand their mutual understanding.

Thanks a lot Shaheda for writing..
S


Recommend the name and I shall try to watch it.
I have watched Sawan Biang I liked that too.

I prefer light shows, too much intense drama put me off. Thats why I don't watch too many Indian shows.

Pleasure is all mine, you are an excellent writer for my non-intellectual mind. I have not read serious books so simple things are my favorite. And my friend she loves to read and I shared my few stories with her.

It's amazing how I only put few words to only selective stories although I can't participate in debating.
Waiting for the next one...


Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sookie-


Thank you! Yes, I have retained the characters as they were at the origin of the series and using almost similar storyline. I wanted to keep it simple so that I wouldn't trip and fall and get away from the way I write. Intense romance? Seriously? You are on my thread not Devi's šŸ˜†

Sure, catch up and come back soon!


Intense romance restricted to the mind and heart (given its your thread šŸ˜†) or maybe drama on Maaneet - like you did in Transluscence?


Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just got on to this thread...and it is truly amazing to be here!!

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Guess who is still waiting for recommendations for Thai and Korean shows to watch? Hmm?

Ms. Skipper: What do you have to say for yourself? Haan?šŸ˜”šŸ˜†


So is Mr Guha hiding the wifey's amorous activities or his own?




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Posted: 13 years ago
You know how your FFs always stand out among other thrillers (that is, if there is any...šŸ˜†)? Its the authenticity of the small details that lead up to solving the crimes like that of real life situations.

It was brilliant how Mr.Guha faltered to give it all away.

I have no idea why but the word 'punish' about the first crime scene, put the movie SAW into my mind - as though the killer was punishing the family member who was exploiting the family's support and forbearance for his deferring attitude by taking them out of his lives forever. Like it was the killers gift in teaching him/her to start living in the now.

Of course this is another speculation as Aarya mentioned. We still need to have so many answers.

Great updates S.

Hasini


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Posted: 13 years ago
part 4
wow interesting and very intriguing...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .Stuff.

@Sookie- If you could really catch criminals as fast as you can in shows...there'd be none left!


Could it be the guy who Mrs.Guha was sleeping with or is that to simple? It never ends up being those who we think.

I bet it'll end with some random psychotic milk man who committed the murders šŸ˜†šŸ˜†



Ha! Ha! 😃😃😃 or may be the person(yes, person) BOTH Mr and Mrs were sleeping with?!?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 5:

Maan took out his jeep keys, which slipped a little due to lack of friction because of his gloved hands and broke the yellow seal on the door. He smiled a little when he saw Geet stifle a yawn. He had decided at the last minute to go to crime scene of Mrs. Guha and her son along with case files from the earlier murder. Late evenings worked best for everyone given how their cellphones didn't buzz every other minute. Emily and Satya had tagged along at the prospect of looking at the case from bottoms up.

"Is it me or this place looks damn too creepy at night?" Emily whispered.

"It is a little creepy." Satya nodded his head and whispered back.

"Why are we whispering?" Geet asked, amused. She was very well accustomed to work in dark and like she preferred to look at crime scene at the same time of the day when perpetuator committed crime.

Emily cleared her throat and smiled sheepishly.

Maan opened the door and allowed everyone to enter.

"Mrs. Guha and her son died between 10 PM and midnight. We are yet to receive the specifics but this is the current estimate. According to neighbors and other witnesses, the house-help leaves the family at nine in the night along with the driver," Emily said.

"No signs of forced entry through the door," Satya said observing the locks.

"What about windows, back doors and garage?" Maan said still standing on the threshold.

"There was nothing out of the ordinary. The windows were closed and the back door was locked from inside. No signs of foul entry found as of now." Satya replied.

"Who reported the crime?" Geet asked.

"Mrs. Guha was meeting her friend for brunch. When she didn't turn up her friend tried reaching her and made several calls to Mrs. Guha's personal phone and residence phone. She finally came here to check and she found the crime scene." Satya read out from a report. Geet nodded at that.

"Mrs. Guha might have let the perpetuator in or given the person another set of keys which would make them take the front door and not take any alternate route," Emily replied. Maan hummed at that.

"What about the alternate theory?" Geet asked. Emily looked at her in confusion. "Well, we have to consider all possibilities when we are deriving theories, correct? So while doing so fork out every theory by considering alternate to everything that you can come up with. Our starting point at the moment is – did Mrs. Guha knew the perpetuator or not. You just gave a very probable theory which is highly possible if the victim knew the person. Now hypothesize the alternative. If Mrs. Guha didn't know the person, then how did she let them in?" Geet asked. Emily nodded and then she realized why Maan never entered the house.

Geet closed the door on Maan and waited. The room became completely empty and a second later, the knock came. Geet looked at Emily and Satya nodding them to start creating the scenario – the way the victim would have done.

"If I am Mrs. Guha then I would be walking down from master bedroom," Emily said and took several steps back and then walked a feet away from door. "I need lights. I would…" Emily hurried back and switched on lights of hallway. Geet nodded in encouragement. "Then I would switch on the porch light," she said and switched on the light. "And now I would look through eyehole." She said nodding at Geet.

"This is weird," Emily said taking a step back from the door. "Porch lights are not on," she said and opened the door.

"The person took the light out first," Satya said. "Must have done it just before knocking on the door otherwise Mrs. Guha would have gotten it fixed by driver." He said as he twisted the light bulb which lit up once properly hooked. "See? It's a simple trick and you don't have to be really tall to do this," Satya said.

"Yeah, but would you just let anyone in? I mean the door has a chain and Mrs. Guha would have just opened the door a notch and would have tried talking to the person on other side of the door," Emily questioned. She walked back inside the house and closed the door. She performed the operation which she believed Mrs. Guha would have done. She could see Maan's profile from the crack but couldn't make out his face.

"I still can't see your face Maan. Why would I let you in?" Emily asked.

Geet who was standing next to Maan had her arms out.

"Assume I have a bundle in my arms, okay?" She said. Emily nodded.

"I have an injured animal in my arms. It came out of nowhere and since I found it in front of your house I thought it's yours," Geet said.

"But I don't have a pet," Emily said.

"There are photos found on the boy's laptop which was clearly taken by Mr. Guha very recently because the photos are all dated. Some digital cameras give you that feature and I think Mr. Guha wanted to retain it as he wanted to remember every day he spent with his son. In few photos there is a dog with the boy and the photos are taken in the small garden here," Geet said.

"But there is no mention of pet in any of the testimonies," Satya said.

"No, it wasn't the family's pet; had it been the case there would have been more photos of the dog along with the boy and not just a handful. I think it belongs to someone else and the boy plays with the dog whenever the dog is left in his care," Geet replied.

"I'll interview the neighbors and the house-help again," Emily said making a note of it.

Geet again spread her arms in front of her as Emily went back behind the door.

"I found this dog injured right in front of the gate ma'am, is it yours?" Geet asked.

"We don't have any dogs," Emily replied, playing the part but didn't open the door.

"Oh my God! I think the dog is dying!" Geet exclaimed in desperate tone. Emily shifted wondering what her reaction should be. She decided not to respond at all and waited what Geet or the perpetuator would do next.

"Ma'am, can you please give it some water? The breathing has gotten a little shallow." Geet said.

"Alright, I will get you some," Emily said and walked all the way towards kitchen and came back a moment later. "Here you go," she said handing a bottle she found in refrigerator through the crack.

"Do you think you can take the dog in ma'am?" Geet asked.

"Why don't you leave it by the porch and I will make a few calls," Emily replied. Geet stepped back and looked at Maan. Emily opened the door after switching on the lights.

"Would Mrs. Guha open the door in empathy when something like this happened?" Satya asked.

"I doubt it," Geet said. "But it's quite possible," Geet added shrugging.

"So she might have never opened the door, right?" Emily asked. Geet nodded.

"But what if the boy was the one who was at door?" Maan asked who had maintained silence. The three of them looked at him.

"If the perpetuator used the same ruse as what Geet did just now, he would react more emotionally than his mother would. He would probably open the door to confirm if it's the dog he plays with," Maan said.

"It sounds more plausible especially when his room is much closer to the door than the master bedroom." Geet replied.

"Let's go in," Maan said and he finally entered the house that had started to give him nightmares for two consecutive days. He wondered what was in store for him when he finished up here and went to sleep that night.

To be continued.

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Posted: 13 years ago
If the neighbourhood is a fairly safe one, then I can't imagine the kid being that careful or cautious.

And if it was intended for Mrs. Guha - was the son a victim of being at the wrong place at the wrong time? or a victim of rage?
Oh damn - am speculating again...

Lovely update!
Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Guess who is still waiting for recommendations for Thai and Korean shows to watch? Hmm?

Ms. Skipper: What do you have to say for yourself? Haan?šŸ˜”šŸ˜†
So is Mr Guha hiding the wifey's amorous activities or his own?



Oh please...look who is talking. I thought I did give you some recommendations ?? No? Sorry! šŸ˜†

Nice thought there pixie...you are stringing stuff quite well...

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