Lovestories...2011 !! MG !! pt 15 pg 124 - Page 37

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aww he closed his eyes coz he cant see her in pain
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maan let her win...aww...

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recap :

he sighed and closed his eyes...feeling relief from dat magnetic pull which no longer haunted him as he closed his eyes...

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Part 9



his sudden movemnt...made her startle...
like dat magnet which was pulling her just vanished...
she came back to her senses..only to her screams of happiness and excitemtn from all d gals who pounced on her..
geet closed her eyes..and d tear rolled to her cheek...
she opened her eyes aftr a deep breath..only to find..his eyes looking at her cheek...
she tried to read his eyes...but it was lost sumwhere on her cheek..
she touched her finger in her cheek and felt dat tear...
she immediately wiped it bringing him back to his senses...

boy patted wishing better luck nxt time...
maan smiled at looked at geet who was by now lost on dose gal...
but dat smile on her face made him relax..coz she looked more beautifull wid dat smile...

...
d same way...many more comptitions took place like acting competition , salsa competition , comedy sections , stunts , and many many more...
in sum games...gals were d winner...while in sum...boys..
while samay won in singing competition and piya won in dance...
as as all knows..geet was in staring...
gals overpowered boys wid more numbers of wins and so d winnin team was GALS..

as d day ended...
every left wid a last bubye and all...
piya samay geet and gazal were walking through d corridor...while abhay and maan were further dem...

geet's eyes were sumwehere still lost in maan's who walking just footsteps ahead...
samay - btw geet...
geet was brought back to senes wid dat...
geet - umm..haan..haan samay...
samay made baby face - tum mujhe sam kyu nahi bulati..sab sam bulate hai...
geet smiled - yahi toh difference hai...mujhe tumahar naam samay hi achha lagta hai...
samay liked dat..ohhk he loved it..
samay - as u wish princess...
gazal rolled her eyes - sam tum kuchh keh rahe the...
samay - haan..wo me keh raha tha ke next week se project work strt ho raha hai...so v all vil b in 1 group as d limit is 6 and we r 6...
geet puzzled - but we r four...
" mujh etni jaldi bhul gayi " , came a sudden question..and d ownder of d voice was none other dan maan singh khurana...
geet looked at him confused..wat did he mean...
abhay - geet..u four and we 2...like dat 6...
geet smiled - ohhk...kal to chhuti hai...so topic monday ko he select kar lete hai..so we can strt wid work soon...
piya - geet..tujhe padhayi ke alawa kuchh aur sujhata bhi hai...
geet rolled her eyes...
maan - piya is right...lets plan sumthing for tom...
sam - movie...
abhay - dat vil b great...it vil b so fun..
geet - guys...m sorry but i cnt cum...
every1 face felll wd dat...
gazal - me too...
piya - dats not done gals..dnt be spoil sport..it just a metter of sum hrs...
geet - its not like dat..plz dnt force me..
sam - cum on gals..gazal tujhe kya problem hai..mujhe toh laga tu hum sab ki help karegi geet ko amane me...
maan rudely - attention seeker...
gazal - wattt
maan looked at geet wid very different emotions..kind of angry..kind of confused...sumthing different...
geet looked at him confused thinking y he is saying dat...
maan - u know wat...geet..all u want is attention..u r such a ttention seeker...do 1 thing dnt cum..
geet's eyes suddenly filled wid dat...
no evert talked to her in such a rude manner...
how vil she tell him..she was her papa's princess...
he never let any wish of her go incomplete...
but his sudden accidental death..changed dere lives completely...
how vil she tell him..she cnt just waste her money on dese stupid things...
how vil she tell him...her mother works day and night...just to fullfill her daughters every wish..her fees...
how can she becum so selfish by wasting money on dese stuff...
she hated to even think of it...
she looked at him wid teary eyes and left from dere...
d whole surrounding becma silent for a min...
gazal looked at maan angrily and left from dere...
piya - dat was rude maan...aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai..ke use sach me koi prob ho...
sam - piya is right..how could u just insult her like dat...
maan - enough...
his 1 word was enough to shut dem...
both shook dere head and left from dere...
abhay - lets go...

...
both reached home...
maan angrily left to his room...
dadi noticed dat...
dadi - abhay...
abhay stopped - yes dadi...
dadi - watz d matter wid maan..sumthing happened...
abhay - no dadi..just uska mood jara oof hai..he vil be fine...
dadi - i hope nothing serious...
abhay cleared his throat - relax dadi maa...u r over reacting..
...

maan banged his bag on floar..thupping his body on bed...
he was angry//not sure y..not sure on whom..
on geet...or on himself...
he knew he was rude..and dose tears in her eyes made him more angry...
but its her fault as well..y she alwz wants attentions..
y she cnt just say yes in anything...
dat day wen he asked her to cum to canteen...she denied...
and 2day..wen he said movie..she denied...
y she cnt just cum along..
y she alwz hav to spol d mood...
she is attension seeker..im right...
he banged him hand on bed angrily...
damnnn
he is looking his focus...
dat just striked him..
maan maan maan wat r u doing...u r suppose to effect her and u urself is getting effected by her...
dats not like u...
u fought wid her unneccessarily...
u hav to play good wid her...she was in tears bcoz of u 2day...
y u needed to be so rude...
ough...hav to make up to her now...

...
geet hide her face into d pillow...and d tears made its way out...
she cried and cried and cried...
no1 ever dared to be so rude to her...
she still rember how much angry papa would bcum wen her mumma would scold her..
papa would get angry on mumma telling her not to scold his princess...
see papa..u left me..no now..who vil threaten dat maan..not to be rude wid me...
m i an attention seeker papa..tell me na..no na..noh can i waste dose money...
mumma wokrs so hard to earn dose money...how can i so seifish ...
im doing right na papa..tell me na...
babaji...aap plz papa ko vapas dedo na..i need him..i need his support...i need papa to scold dat maan and tell him not to be rude wid papa's princess...
she was lost in her thoughts wen gazal came to her...
get wiped her tears n looked at her wid smiling face...
gazal hugged her...for sum reason..gazal started feeling of geet as her litle sister she never had...
gazal knew..how neive geet is...and she hav to take care of her...
gazal - geet stop crying..agar aunty ka phone aaya to kya aise roti huyi awaz me baat karogi...
geet immediately changed her mood hearing mumma name...
no way she can let her mother worry fir her anymore...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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