FF MAANVEER: Humko Pyaar Hua (Pt 4 UPdated pg 7)

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yay im a senior member now FINALLY!*does a little dance*

hello DEK fans, i was bored, so i thought of writing an FF, here it is.

Part 1:

Manyatas room

Manyata was still lying in her, she felt tired but she didnt want to go to sleep just yet. just then uday enters the room.

Manayata: dek uday, im not feelling well and dont have the power to fight or argue with you so just leave me alone.

Uday: i know princess, thats y i came to check if you need anything.

Manyata: no, i dont want anything so just leave.

Uday: ok fine but if DS askes y i came out of the room soo early then you'll have to answer her ok? he said with a smirk on his face, he's about to leave.

Manyata (thinks for a second) : you can stay here for a while i guess but wat are we gunna do? arent you gunna get bored?

Uday sat on the bed and being his usual self replied: well, agar tum chaho to hum sab tuch kar sakte hain! with a wink!

Manyata (little confused at first but she got wat he meant): chi, kitna kamina hai na tu? were you born like this?

Uday: dont know if i was born like this but all i can say is ever since you left he said in a soft tone.

Manyata: haan, yeh bhi hosakta hai. agar koi zimmedar insaan ka sar se haath uthe toh adni bigad jata hai, haan nai toh! she said while smilling and he smiled back.

Uday: and you know you were always like this, like how your so stubborn, cheeky and a drama queen.

Manyata: acchha? lekin mujhe toh kuch yaad nahi.

Uday: pata hai, magar kyun yaad nahi yeh mat pochna because tumhe already pata hoga.

Manyata (remembered her 'baba' and got upset), she washed away that thought and said: i cant belive i used to get along and play with YOU!

Uday: not just get along and play we used to eat together, if one of use were not there then the other one wouldnt eat... we were that close, suprising right? and those were the best days of my life he said getting teary and facing down.

Manyata noticed those teary eyes and felt something prickly in her chest. she tried to brighten his mood but couldnt think of anything to say. then out of nowhere uday said : Manyata im ... im really sorry.

Manyata: wah! im impressed tujhe srryy bhi bolnaa ata hai? but for wat?

Uday: you know the mark on your back?

Manyata: haan, how do you about it?

Uday: well, when we were little we were playing with swords not the real ones but it somehow still managed to cut you. you cried a lot that day and i dont know why but i started crying as well, it felt as if i could feel your pain. but because of that i found out you were manyata, remember when you came to my disco on its opening? and i tried too um .. mm.. thats when i saw the mark on your back and realised you were manyata... still with teary eyes.

Manyata felt angry but she couldnt help but smile and say: haan haan, thik hai ab itna senti bhi mat ho.

Uday felt reliefed, he felt as if finally a big burden of guilt has been taken off his shoulder.

Haa --- haa --- chyu *manyata sneezes* and rubs her nose. uday looked at her adorly and thought shes soo cute. he thought maybe she needs to eat something warm so he told manyata i'll be right back with a smile. manyata smile back at him and with that he left and headed towards the kitchen.

In the kitchen

the moment udayveer entered the kitchen maharaj and his helpers started at him with a shocked expression and someone said: yuvraaj, aapp ?

he was about to tell maharaj to cook some chicken soup for rajkumari but then again he thought y dont i make it myself instead?

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INDEX
Part 2 : page 1
Part 3 : page 4
Part 4 : page 7
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HAYE HAYE HAYEEE
udayveeer was so cute
and manyata trying to make him feel better
Awesome chapter ..
Loved it
If possible please PM me 😃
Pleassse continue soon!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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uff...manyata ne uday ko cook bhi bana dala...hayeee...very nice...do pm me the update...so cute interaction...😛
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Thanxx guys glad you liked it,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...loved the manveer talks...update soon
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loved the start
do continue soon
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Heres a short update for you guys. Thanxx forr those lovely comments and likes <333
Part 2:

he was about to tell maharaj to cook some chicken soup for rajkumari but then again he thought y dont i make it myself instead?

so he got an apron saying *kiss me* and told all of them to help him when its needed without any questions, get it. everyone nodded. he told them to bring all the ingredients needed to cook chicken soup. they bought it all and left it on the side table. he started boiling the water. he always had this strange interest in cooking, he remembered how he always wanted to be a chef when he growed up but because he was already a prince and the future king he didnt take cooking as a profession. even though he enjoyed cooking he hardly cooked because he used to remeber those moments he shared with manyata in the kitchen, when they used to share each others food and basically everything!

Manyata's Room --------------------

manyata was getting bored, she never liked staying alone, it creeped her out. even when she was living in that chawl she always used to talk to someone and now in this big room she had no oone to talk to. she was getting bored aswell since that jayghamandini had to go to the movies today! she was wondering why uday was taking soo long. i know i know youm must be wondering why am i even waiting for uday right? but in a way he's not that bad. she got up from her bed and walked out of the room in search of uday.

Manyata- uday ... uday! tum kaha ho?

she asked one of those lady in the red saree said he was in the kitchen.she was confused, udayveer in kitchen? wat was he doing in the kitchen at this time she thought. so she started heading towards the kitchen.

In the Kitchen ------------------------

manyata entered the kitchen , took a deep breath in and said : arey wah! kya khushbu arahi hai.

uday was chopping carrots. he was soo lost in her thoughts that he didnt even realise manyata comming in. he looked at her and accidentally cut one of his finger.

Manyata saw the bleeding finger and ran towards him:uday tum kya kar raheho, dekho kya kardiya tumne. ye saab karne ki kya jarurat thi, haan? with a sad and worried expression on her face. she holded his hands.

it was bleeding uncontroably so mayata riped off a piece from her kurta and slowly tied it in his finger. she made him sit down on the side and said see this is wat happens when you try to be nice. it doesnt suit you character you know, with a million dollor smile on her face.

uday was suprised how he didnt even realise it and seeing manyata worried about him was like a cherry on top of a cake. he quietly wished that he should get hurt more often and she takes care of him like this.

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Edited by N33MA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww cute...😳
Nyc update...
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I liked it so much!! MANVEER rock
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part but too short...loved manyatas concern 4 uday...update soon...pm me

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