dil kahin hosh kahin

hi prians😃😊

how r u all

i hope u all r watching PR& may be also enjoying PR.

Although leap has happen in the PR but I haven't seen any dramatic changes in it

There is hardly any improvement in the script of PR only thing is happen is that by bringing some new characters .leap is an old tried & tested formula which is used by the creative team for to retain its current audience & also looking for the new audience sometime it works & sometime its not, but in case of PR its too early to comment on it but even BT is only focus on its other serial rather on PR sometimes I feel pity on the condition of PR.

But I salute to the actors who r still giving their best effort & its also work somewhere that's why PR is still in the top 10 serials in terms of TRP chart & also the leading serial of zee tv, but its script which is not helping them at all.

Now lets talk about the two central characters of this show Archana & Manav.

They both still travelling in the same boat once again they both r separated but this time is only thing different their time period was in double digit figure i.e 18 years. Hope they will both reunite soon & the focus of script also little bit more on new generation characters .

If Don's friends have think that Don will stop writing its compositions than its their biggest mistake.🤣

After more than 7 months I m back with a new topic post so its quiet obvious my topic post mostly contains my compositions after all I m too possessive of my shayars Image.🤣

Hope u all will likemy this new composition.

Till then take care all & thanks😊😃

As usual Awesome, Superb yaar :)
waise bahut dino ke IF mein tumhara koi post dekhne ko mila...dekh kar accha laga.

Wowww acre..ahem ahem ;-)
I just loved it to the bottom of my heart...
Beautiful poetry...mein tau fan ho gayi :p :D
Awesome superb love each and every word of your shayari
Chalo yeh raha ek shair...meine Nahin likha par aap dekhte hi samjh jao ge ke yeh meine kis keliye likha hai :D

Khushion se naraz hai meri zindagi,
Pyar ki mohtaz hai meri zindagi,
Has leti hoon logon ko dikhane ke liye,Varna dard ki kitaab hai meri zindagi…..

nice job, thanks for sharing. 😃

Hey Shikhar, how are you doing? You've posted after so many days!

I think this is your best shayari till date, in terms of concept, composition and lines. The ending was bitter sweet.

Really nice work!

Acreji kaise hain aap... 😛 Nice to see a post from you 😳..

awesome as usual acre
brilliant post
loved each and every part of it
grt job

Originally posted by: acre

beimaan mausam mein hum dono ek doosre ke itne paas aa jaye

siskiyaan leti hui kaash woh bhi ek baar meri baahon mein aa jaye

taqleef mein hum kuch yun hain yeh saare mere khwab hain

unke dard bhare sawaalon ke mere paas nahin koi jawab hain

is shaher mein unki khoobsurati ke deewane bade behisaab hain

pyaar mein nakaam hone ke liye logo ne diye humein kiee khitab hain

woh humein kabhi padhkar ki bhi na samjh saki hum un ke liye ek aisi kitab hain

unki bahakti aankhon ne humein ishaaro mein samajhaya hain

woh mere naseeb mein nahin hain phir maine unse dil kyun lagaya hain

kitna ajeeb sach kaha hain unhone is sach ne mujhe bahut hasaya hain

waqt ne mujhe lakar kis jagah par fasaya hain

dil mein ek chhoti khwashish baaki hain kaash unse ek mulaqat ho jaye

mushkil yeh nahin hain woh kuch samajhti nahin hain

mushkil tab hogi jab who mere pyaar ko samajh jaye

haqeeqat mein na sahi kaash kabhi khwaboon mein hi woh mere saath ek shaam bitaye

is dil ko thoda sa sukoon tab milega jab mushkiloon se bhari meri zindagi thodi si asaan ho jaye

hum ab fikkr nahin hain unke pyaar mein hum apni zindagi bhi har jaye

mere paas sirf pyaar ke alwaa aapko dene ke liye nahin koi aur nazraana hain

main to shayad aapko kabhi nahin bhool paonga

par aap se guzaarish hain aapko mujhe hamesha ke liye bhool jaana hain

aapse kiya hua yeh waada mujhe hamesha ke liye nibhaana hain

galti se bhi hum kabhi kisi raaste par mile to ek nazar dekh kar mujhe phirse aapko aage badh jaana hain

zindagi mein pyaar se badhkar aur cheezein bhi hain ab kahin jaa kar yeh baat mera dil maana hain

jo kabhi aapke dil tak nahin puchha hain yeh woh khoobsurat fasaana hain

wowww !!!!! i mean .. wooowww!!!!
and .. what else ... oh yeah .. wowww !!!!
the above lines describes manav's state after archana leaves him on that satyanarayana puja day .. describes manav's after archu knows the truth .. and comes back to him for the three month stay ...and manav's state after the one year leap .. that whole jaywant engagement phase ..

how do you write like that ?!!!!

@ramya