Hello guys, I'm sure some of you know me for liking your stories and commenting on them always.. But today I'm here with a story. Surprised? Hehehe even I am.. But but but I'm wrote this because of 2 of my wonderful and awesome friends! Firstly MINA H! You ppl would have read her stories? The super HOT ones? Haha I'm her fan!! I love them a lot!, she was the first one to ask me to write, she really encouraged me and that's why I'm here today with this... And second is lakshm, LAKS!! Lol u all would have read her stories, they are so beautiful and I truly admire them, Laks helped me with a rough storyline without her this was impossible :) Thanks ALOT Laks!
Okay this is a sad one with happy ending, it's a ONE- SHOT.. Hope I have reached all your expectations and especially Laks and mina's.. And pls like it if you liked it and comment too!! All your likes and comments are very precious to me.. Criticisms are my favorite as they make me better and chappals are fine too so don't hesitate and tell me how you guys find it.. Okay I have a bad habit of talking a lot so now I shall stop my non-stop bak bak and present you my one shot ...
It was the day of Virat's marriage and manvi and the entire Rishikesh family was at Chandigarh for the wedding.. Virat was getting married because he was forced by family members and also because manvi rejected his love ( you will know why very soon). But actually manvi loves him ALOT but rejected it because of swamini bua's threatens about jeevika's future, her pyaari behna, ( the person because of who she is alive) . Just before marriage, manvi was crying on the terrace when virat passed by there and overheard manvis conversation to her mama and Pappa the stars in the sky particularly 2... Upon hearing the conversation, Furious with anger virat walked away.. Manvi did not realize that virat had overheard and realized that she loves him but because of swamini bua, she rejected him.. All virat could think of is HOW DARE BUA DO THIS?? To me? To manvi? Did she never think about how I would feel? I know bua does not like manvi but this is too much! With these thoughts, virat proceeded to the wedding venue with viren. Viren realized something was wrong seeing virat but thought that he and his saali sahiba would have fought again. And therefore, they reached there and viren made virat sit.
Everyone was present there including manvi as she had no choice, she had put a stone on her heart and controlled her tears but seeing virat becoming someone else's, was as good as death for her, but for her Di, she had to do it.. No one else noticed manvis sadness as she had a fake smile on her face but virat noticed it all, virat could see her pain through her eyes.. Aww...
And just as the punditji was going to start with the rituals, virat stops him, gets up and announces that he is calling this marriage off..
Everyone was shocked and were speechless that was when virat slowly walks towards manvi and looks into her eyes and says, " ded-foutiya, mujhe pata hai ke tumhe mujhe kuch kehna hai lekin bol nahirahi ho" And just stares at manvi, waiting for her reply..
Seeing the situation, manvi immediately says " yeh sabh kya hai CHEP? Tum kehna kya chate ho? Mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hai.."
Virat knew why she was doing all this is so told himself that today no matter what happens, I will make her say that she loves me and that too in front of everyone present here and the marriage will take place as per arranged just that the dulhan changes.. Everyone was looking at them some with anger while the rest shocked..
Breaking the silence, virat said manvi both of us very well know what u want to say, and just because of some people and their dhamkis, you are not saying it, but today I will do everything possible to make you say it. Manvi totally shocked by what her Chep just said and asked " Tum kehna kya chate ho virat? Mein kiske dhamki se chup rahongi? Aur wo bhi kisliye?" this time tears rolling down her cheeks, virat had the urge to wipe off the precious tears but did not as he wanted to make manvi say her heart out..
All this makes dadaji and swamini very angry and the rest shocked!! Meanwhile, Manvi's face showed surprise and questions while in her heart she was happy thinking she has chances of getting virat? But just then, she sees swamini and before she could smile and say anything, she stops and was about to walk away as she could not control what was happening, her feelings and wanted to confess her love to virat tell him hiw much she loves him and cant stay without him but she also could not stand seeing her Di unhappy or her didi's future being ruined because of her...she took one step back with tears rolling down her eye continuously, not able to stop.. It killed virat as he hated to see tears in her eyes and hated himself as he was giving it.. And just when she was going to turn around to run out without saying anything, virat held her hand..
The girl virat was going to get married to, her parents said
" yeh Saabh kya horahahe vedera Sabh?" Iss ka matlab kya hai?
Now dadaji had enough and shouted at virat and asked him what was happening! Virat was silent as he wanted manvi to confess her love for him.. Dadaji asked again but no reply.. Swamini bua was very angry and as usual passed her not - needed - insultive comment, She said " bauji, yeh sabh iss manvi ka hi kiya hua hoga, zaroor isne hi virat to ulti-seedhi baat kehi hogi" manvi was totally shocked one side virat holding on tight to her hands looking straight into her eyes ignoring those present and the other side swamini bua's anger.. The first thing that came to her mind was what swamini said to her about her jeevika Di's future, that if she told virat that she loved him or accepted virat's love, she will make jeevika's life a living hell and this was not at all bearable for manvi..
Manvi immediately snapped out of that thought and realized what was happening.. She made virat let go of her hand and slapped virat! Awww :((
By now the tension there was at it's peak... The slap made virat come back to his senses as he was lost in manvi's eyes... He was in a shock, he never saw this coming.. Everyone was shocked by manvi's behavior and BG went to manvi to raise her hands but before that, Virat stopped BG and said " BG please yeh mere aur manvi ke beech ki baat hai aap isme kuch mat boliye, jisko Bol na tha usne Bol liya " and looked at swamini bua, dadaji who was beside swamini in ANGER! He knew that If he said anything to them, it was of no use so he ignored all te nasty comments they made... But BG was going to slap manvi so he had to react..
Manvi could not control her tears any longer now, and virat knew that she was going to break down any moment and say her heart out so he waited there, not allowing anyone to go to manvi as she went on her knees and cried inconsolably ..
It was killing virat from inside, but he wanted Manvi to say it, confess to him in front of everyone and inorder for that, he had to give her tears... But He also promised himself to punish him for these precious tears of her's that he was giving...
About 3-5 minutes later, seeing her not stopping, virat shouted - MANVI!! Chup kyu ho? Maine sunliya tha timhe terrace pe taaro ke saath baat karte... Aur mujhe saabh malum hai.. Aur yeh bhi ke kiske kehne pe tumne Mera pyaar thukraya!! Hearing this manvi came back to senses stopped crying and looked up at Virat's red eyes and face full of anger..
Hearing what virat said, swamini lost her anger and went to manvi made her stand up and told her manvi, maine kaha thane ke virat ko isske baare mein kuch bhi mat bolna warna enjam Bura hoga!! Toh tumhe sidhi baat samaj mein nahi aayi kya!! Now it was it for virat, he had enough of swamini bua, and said BUAJI, manvi ne mujhe kuch nahi kaha, issko yeh bhi nahi bata ke Maine usski baat sune thi! Aur enjam? Aap dhamki kabhse dene lagi aur wo bhi itni ghatya!!! Swamini's anger arose, she was about to slap him when dadaji came and held her hand mid way.. And asked virat to say everything out clearly!
Swamini tried to defend herself but failed, even viren and vanshika ma asked viren to say everything clearly while BG, chachu, and jeevika asked manvi to tell what happened.. By this time jeevika was beside manvi holding her with her shoulders.. Manvi felt comfort beside jeevika and gave a BIG hug to jeevika and said
" Di, mein virat se Bohot pyaar karti hoon, aapne aap se bhi zyada aur virat bhi mujhe pyaar karts hai...usne mujhe propose bhi kiya tha lekin... " she stopped realizing what she just said still crying...
"bhabhi lekin usne Mera pyaar thukra diya kyunki swamini bua ne usko kaha tha ke agar wo mere pyaar ko kabul karegi Toh bua aapki life living hell kardete" saying this, virat TEARED :(( and seeing virat cry, viren and vanshika ma came to virat and hugged him...
Dadaji was not able to digest what saw just said and asked swamini " yeh sabh kya hai? Meine Jo suna wo Saab sach hai Kya?" swamini had nothing to say and lowered her eyes. Dadaji said mujhe bata tha ke tumko manvi Pasand nahi hai lekin Tum iss haad tak girjaongi wo Maine sapne mein nahi socha tha!
Seeing all this, jeevika said mannu, tu mere liye aapna pyaar kisi aur ko dene wali thi? Meri khusiyo keliye aapni saari kuchi mitane wali thi? Aur mere liye tumne itna Sara dard sehen (tolerate) kiya? Jeevika crying.. Manvi turned to jeevika and said Di, yeh kuch nahi hai, aapkeliye mein apni zindagi bhi de sakti hoon.. Yeh kuch nahi hai aapke samne..
Everyone in tears seeing this sisterly love when virat looks at manvi and said Abhi tumne kaha ke bhabhi keliye Tum sapni zindagi de sakti hoon Toh Mera kya hoga bandariya? Tum meri zindagi ho, Tumhare bina mein maar... He could not continue as manvi placed her hand across his lips.. And said maarne ki baat mat karna, phirse karoge Toh mein baat nahi karungi Tumse.. And Hugged him, virat was eatatic and hugged her back!! :))
While they were still hugging, viren and jeevika interfere and say shadi karni hai yah hug kafi hai? Devarji aur saali sahiba? Everyone laugh and swamini had no other choice but to walk away as her ego came her way and no one not even viren or dadaji once stopped her... And they proceed with manvi and virat's marriage :)while it was taking place, the girl virat was gonna get married to, her family and relatives left...
After marriage, virat could not wait for his suhagraat as he had a lot to do ALOT of answers to get and give and also the bed was waiting her them so eagerly *wink*...
~~ THE END ~~
Phew!! Okay I'm done with my OS personally I don't think it's good... Criticisms, likes, comments, chappals, everything is welcome! And pls give your most truthful comments, both positive or negative :) as this is my first time writing, I'm really looking forward from hearing from all of you! Thank you for bearing this pain! :)
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