Gum hai kissi ke pyar mein... pt 1

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Bani cries trying to express her emotion to Jai in a state of MADHOSHI…….

Jai stands there, staring at Bani, as she cries and declares her jealousy.

Unbeknown, to Bani how much she had said, no way in control of her feelings or emotion.

Jai, finding it hard to control his self, puts his finger to her lips to silence her .

Bani takes a hold of his hand, which is on her lips, and kisses it gently and puts it to her cheek.

Jai stunned at what she had just done, stares at her and gets his other had and runs it through bani's hair and gently pulls her head closer to him.

Bani lets go of Jai's hand and glances into his eyes.

The moon reflects of her , soft , teary, brown eyes as Jai slowly pulls his hand from her hair to her cheek.

He can now feel her warm breath on his face and is still staring into her eyes.

Her gaze driving him crazy ,

Jai thinks: why have I never noticed how beautiful you are, all this time I spent around you , how did you manage to hide yourself from my eyes.

He takes his both hands and puts them through banis hair and slowly kisses her on the cheek .

She still standing with moist eyes, pulls back a little.

Jai: bani…

And pulls her forward from her waist and the feel of his hands on her bare waist makes a shiver run down her spine.

He stares at her, now so close that their noses slowly brush against each other.

Jai puts his ands to the back of bani's neck and removes her necklace and slowly kisses the front of her neck.

He slowly removes all her jewellery and kisses everywhere he has just removed it from.

She, suddenly turns around, now not facing him, and he moves closer to her back and pulls aside her hair and kisses her back several times and undoes the dori of her blouse and slowly starts to kiss the back of her neck.

She takes a deep breath as his lips make there way the side of her neck.

He puts his hands around her waist, from the back and she drapes her arms over his.

He puts his arm across the front of her chest on to her heart, it is beating outta control.

( jiya dharak dharak plays in the back ground)

Jai smiles at himself

He slowly turns her around and , her eyes are closed.

Jai kisses her eyes and stares at her lips, so soft .

He slowly pulls her closer and kisses her , she suddenly opens her eyes and notices that Jai has them closed , stares at him for a second and closes hers again

Now they are both unaware of where tey are , the wind , the moon the night means nothing, they both just exist within their embrace.

He pulls back form her lips and bend s downs and picks her up in his arms.

Bani draoes her arms around his neck and kisses his neck,

Bani thinks: Yeh main kya kar rahi hoon, kyun main apne ap ko rok nahin par rahi hoon?

He lies her down on the bed and sits next to her, staring at her.

He brushes her hair to the side, and kisses her again.

He sits up and pulls her sari , which is over her stomach, to the side and kisses her bare stomach.

He slowly moves closer to her………..

They are no longer apart, their souls have met and that's all they are aware of.

They are now one.

This is my first attempt at this please let me know what you think, and I might just carry on to the nex day.

I guess that depends on wht you guys think. LET ME KNOW….😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! that is awesome! had me blushing 😳 😳

Yeh you definately need to continue - will be waiting!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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definatly contine!...its gud! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part...must keep writting... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!
I HAVE A SOFT spot for romantic , intense passion filled scenes...omg that rrocked pls continue soon omg it was awesome!!
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!
I HAVE A SOFT spot for romantic , intense passion filled scenes...omg that rrocked pls continue soon omg it was awesome!!
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh my god.... this was aaawwwwsome.... 😳 😳 😳
please continue sooooooooooooooooon.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh my god.... this was aaawwwwsome.... 😳 😳 😳
please continue sooooooooooooooooon.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
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rockin fanfic 👏 👏 simply enjoyed it...do continue 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woah.. had me glued to the screen!! continue soon!! loved it!

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