OS:Destined to meet.Part 3&4 page 7

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Hey kmhains u know me as florine_20.
well my name is Florine. i hv bn reading works of lot of u these days.so jst thought of trying my hand on an os.
This is the first tym m writing smthing so apologies 4 mistakes.
DESTINED TO MEET


She took one last look at the hills and valleys around her. The morning dew just adding the beauty of the place. She boarded the train to mumbai with heavy steps with a new ray of hope.She was born and brought up here.Her friends at anath ashram were her only family to her.Sister Gloria had brought her there.She was her only guardian and mentor.She had no idea of her family and siblings.But astha (orphange) had become everything to her now.it was by the guidance of sister Gloria that she got inspiration to go to a city like mumbai to showcase her talent.
'SHE' , she is Arohi Sharma.Her name is the only thing she has of her parents.It was written on the letter which was placed in her little fingers,which was placed in her little fingures when sister found her outside 'Astha'.She was going to mumbai and sister had arranged for her stay at an hostel.She had applied for a job and soon had received a call for approval.She was on cloud nine.She shared her news with her besties sur and anthra.She was going to mumbai the city of dreams.She fell asleep there until the train at last came tn an halt.

She took her steps forward as she came out of the station lost in her dreamland. but before she came to reality, she felt someone snatch her hand purse& then the realization struck her that she was robbed.she could do nothing but shout for help & rum behind the robber. But as she was running she felt a hand on her shoulder and then heard the words,"I will bring it back". Just hearing the sweet melodious voice fastened the heart beat. But before she could see who it is, the guy was running behind the robber. She was super worried now. Her job appoint ment letter was in it,her sole reason to stay here.She felt tears build in her eyes now.

As the first drop of tear rolled down her cheek,he held his hand forward and took the drop on his finger.Arohi raised her gaze up and the most beautiful eyes were staring at her and giving a reassuring smile. She felt herself losing in whatever spell his fragnance cast on her. But then his words brought her back to reality. "Here's your purse mam." don't waste your tears. They are too precious. And do take care of your self.There are to many pickpoketers roaming around these days. And he turned his back to go but not before giving her one of his most dimpled smiles.

That night lying on her bed arohi just couldn't help but think about that guy. What was it that left her speechless.His voice, his looks or just 'HIM'.
She couldn't find the reason but even couldn't help think about him. That night she had the most beautiful and peaceful sleep and the reason she didn't know why but she had a beautiful smile on her lips even in her sleep.

Thank you guys for reading. do press the like button and leave your precious comments.


INDEX

Part 1: page 1

Part 2: page 4

Part 3 & 4: page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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do continue yar!

i wuld lovee to read it!

and add me to ur pm list! :D
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continue n add me ur pm list :)
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Wao florine cngrtz for ur os. Plz cntinue n pm me.
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hey florine - congratulations on your first OS
we will be happy to read it - pls continue sooonn
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Congo for your OS...
Amazing Start... Do Continue and add me to your PM list...
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wow
super start
hahah hope tht stranger is arjun !!!!
want to know more :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Florieee Janaaa ur first ever ff is really good...Contiue :) And pm me the link!
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amazing...loved the beginning..very very interesting start..even I am dreaming about the man..plzzz continue soon and add me to your list
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hey Florine...its very nice yar..
do continue want to read more..
add me to ur pm list..:) :)

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