My first SS:Jihne mera dil lutiya TEASER pg69 - Page 28

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Originally posted by: maaniqra

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thanks dear for ur precious comment😊Edited by -knirwal- - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

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Thanks dear for ur precious comment

        PART -6

Thanks for ur all encourage.I replied to ur all comments individually this time.Solly for late.And thanks for bearing with me

They reach at geet place.She comes out.

Geet-Hmm so thanku ji.

MSK-Koi baat nahi ji.Wase ab to apko punjabi ladke FUKRe nahi lagte ?

Geet-Punjabi ladke hote to fukre hi hai but[with smile] saath me sweet bi hote hai.

MSK-Jyada sweet bi nahi kehte Punjabio ko agar peeche pad gai to peecha nahi chodege.

Geet-O really.

They both start laughing.

Geet-Ab ghar tak to APP a hi gaye hai to ek cup coffee bi peke hi jayega.

MSK-Itne pyaar se to chahe jaher bi pila degi to bi muskra kar pee lenge.

MSK see at the time

MSK-Par apne bahot galat time pe pucha hai.

Geet-Kyu kya hua?

MSK-MK ko tution dene ka time ho gaya hai.Jab tak vo khud nahi padega to dusre bacho ko kase padayega.Aur wase bi hum ek cup coffee ke lia uska future to karab nahi kar sakte.

Geet-Oh ya right hum ek cup coffee ke lia uska future to karab nahi kar sakte.Ok next time pakka.

MSK-Sure ji.

He leaves from their.Geet go in side.See his father laughing with one Person.she goes and give side hug to his dad.

Geet-Hi dad.How r u?

Arnav-Hi mera bacha.Me theek ho.Beta inhe milia ye hai Brij.

Geet-Hi uncle

Arnav-aur ye hai meri beti Geet

Brij-Hello beti.

Arnav-Jo project hum jaha punjab me lagane ja rahe hai Brij ji us par bahot time se kaam kar rahe hai.

Geet-Oh thats great.

Geet-Uncle ap yaha har roj aya karia.Mane ajj dad ko kitne hi dinno baad khul kar haste hua deekha hai.

Brij-Agar beta asi baat hai to me to har roj yaha a jaya karoga.

Brij-Ayea me apko apne bete se milata ho.

Their one guy is sitting facing his back to them.He is eating eating eating something.

Brij-Vikram Bete.

He get up while something eating.Arnav and geet see him like that.

Brij-Geet beti ye hai ji mera Beta Vikram.Apke colllege me hi padta hai.

Geet-oh thats great Me in english dipartment and u?

Vikram[while eating]-kokose

Geet-Kya?

Vikrant[finish his eating stuf]Comerse.

Arnav[smiles]-Oh comerse good very good.Acha hai tume age jakar apne papa ka business bi to samalna hai.

Arnav-Now excuse me Mr.Brij ji me abi ata ho.

Arnav-chal bete muje tujse baat karni hai.

Arnav and geet leave and go upstairs.

Brij-Mr.Arnav Handa mera beta mere business ke saath saath apka bi business sambaal lega.Kyu Beta kasi lagi ladki.

Vikram-Sorry to say dad but Ladki to item bomb hai.

Brij-To fir patalo use.

Vikram-Dad agar mere aur geet ke beech koi aya to uska me sir dhad se alag kar duga.

Brij-Acha hai bete asa hi karna.

Vikram-Dad ap to serious hi le gaye mene to majak kia tha.

Geet comes in mansion with ekam.

Ekam-Mom muje age ki story bi sunayia na.

Geet-Abi nahi pehle jakar ap fresh ho jaia me baad me sunnaogi.

Savitri-Kya baate ho rahi hai maa bete ke beech jara hume bi pata chale.

Geet-Kuch nahi maa vo me apke is Shehjazde ko apni shaadi ki khani sunna rahi thi.To mene kaha pehle jakar fresh ho jao baki ki baadme suna dungi.

Savitri-Chalo me apne shehzade ki madat karti ho ap bi jakar fresh ho jayea.

Geet-Ji maa.

Savitri-Chale beta.

Ekam-Ji dadi ji.

Savitri and ekam left.She too go upstair into her room at the very time she receive a msg.She see the name and an atomastic smile comes on her lips

Msg[from maan]-Zindagi Bhar Nahi Bulenge Wo Pehli Mulakaat.Jab Hui Thi Nazre Hamari Aapse

Chaar Yakin Hi Nahi Hua Ki Yeh Sach Hai Ya Sapna Sukriya Us Rab Ka Jisne

Milaaya Hume Aapse Kabool Ki Hamari Dua Usne Chahe Kaafi Intzaar Ke

Baad Hume Milaaya Apne Meet Ke Saath Isliye To Hum Kehte Hain Ki Itni

Shiddat Se Maine Tume Pane Ki Koshish Ki Hai Ki Har Zarre Ne Mujhe Tumse

Milane Ki Koshish Ki Hai

She message him.

Geet[msg]E Mere Humsafar, Tumse Itna Pyar Karne Lagi Hu,
Har Pal Me Tera Saath Chahne Lagi Hu,
E Dost Tumse Itne Sapne Sajaye Baithi Hu,
In Sapno Ko Tum Tutne Mat Dena,
Har Kadam Par Tum Mere Sath Nibhana,
Galti Hone Par Tum Muje Daant Lena,
Par Tanha Hume Na Tum Chhod Jana,
E Mere Humsafar, Tumse Itna Pyar Karne Lagi Hu,
Mere Is Pyar Ko Kbhi Tum Kum Mat Hone Dena,
Gam Me Sahi Par Khushi Me Rone Mat Dena,
Kaunsa Dard Liye Baithi Hu Kisise Na Kehna,
Kyoki Khud Se Bhi Jyada Tumhe Pyar Krne Lagi Hu'.

Maan[msg]-Apni Shoni Ki Ek Hansi Aur Deedar Ko Tarsa Karte Hai Hum,
Suraj Ki Dhoop Me Chandni Raat Ka Intejaar Karte Hain Hum,
Ishq Ka Andaj Hume Lafajo Me Bayan Karna Nahi Aata,
Warna Hum Bhi Batate Ki Apni Shoni Ko Kitna Pyar Karte Hai Hum'

Geet[msg]-Suraj Ki Tapish Aajkal Mehsoos Nahi Hoti,
Uske Khyalon Mei Hum Is Kadar Khoye Rehte Hain,
Madhoshi Ka Aisa Aalam Har Pal Chhaya Rehta Hai,
Har Mod Pe Girte Hain, Kuch-Kuch Soye Se Rehte Hain,
Usse Haseen Ab Is Zamane Mein Kuch Aur Nahin Lagta,
Isiliye To Apne Gam Ko Uski Khushi Se Sanjoye Rehte Hain'.

Maan[msg]-Giraftaar Huye Hain Jabse Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Akhiyon Ko Kuch Aur Raas Na Aata Hai,
Jata Hu Mei Jab Kahi Dekheta Hun Kisi Ajnabi Ko,
Us Me Aksar Tera Haseen Chehra Dikh Jata Hai,
Haal-E-Dil Ko Kaise Lafzon Mei Byaan Karun,
Madhosh Yeh Dil Aksar Armaano Mei Jo Kho Jata Hai'.

Geet[msg]-Ye Pyari Si Baate Teri,
Ye Pyari Si Aawaz Teri,

Ye Pyari Si Muskan Teri,
Mujhe Pagal He Bana Gayi,

Ye Pyara Sa Ehesas Tera,
Mujko Mujhi Se Chura Le Gaya,

Mera Dil, Churakar Le Jana Tera,
Isi Tarah Has-Has Kar Baate Krna Tera,

Chhoti Chhoti Bato Pe Pareshan Ho Jana Tera,
Or Mujhe Dekhte Hi Khushi Se Muskurana Tera,

Mujse Gale Milkar Mujme Hi Kho Jana Tera,
Meri God Me Sar Rakhkar So Jana Tera,

Pyar Or Dosti Ko Sath Me Tumne Bakhubi Se Nibhaya Hai,
Isi Dilkash Baato Se To Mujhe Pagal Tumne Banaya Hai'

Maan[msg]-Ae Khuda Nazro Ko Aisi Khudai De
Jidhar Dekhun Udhar Vo Dikhai De
Kar De Aisi Meherbani Aaj Hawa Mein
Unko Pukaron Bas Unhi Ko Sunayi De'

Geet[msg]-Khabi Koi Dil Me Jagah Bana Saka Na Tere Shiva
Es Dil Ne Kisi Or Ko Chaha Hi Nahi Tere Shiva
Hr Pal Tujhko Hi Yaad Karta Hai Ye Dil
Is Dil Ko Or Khuch Yaad Hi Nahi Tere Shiva'

JAAN I Miss You...

Maan immidately call her.

Maan-Abi abi tumne kya kaha?

Geet[confused]-Maan abi to me kuch bolli bi nahi?

Maan-Nahi tumne msg me kya likha tha.

Geet-Shayri apki yaad me.

Maan-Last me kya likha tha vo bolo...

Geet[Now she understand what he mean but still predend that she doesnot understand]-I miss u

Maan-Nahi usse pehle...

Geet-Is Dil Ko Or Khuch Yaad Hi Nahi Tere Shiva'

Maan-Nahi iske baad..

Geet[try not to laugh]-Ap kya bool rahe ho muje kuch samj nahi a raha?

Maan-Tum ache se janti ho me kis ke bare baat kar rahe ho.

Geet-Sachi muje nahi pata.

Maan-Geet

Geet-Maan

Maan-Plz bola na sirf ek baar.

Geet-Nahi

Maaan-Plzzz

Geet[she doesnot deny his plz]-Ok but ek sharat pe...

Maan-Kasi sharat?

Geet-apko bi bolna hoga...

Maan-Nahi me nahi bologa.

Geet-To fir bhool jayea me nahi bolne wali.

Maan-Naraj kyu hoti ho.Thee k hai me bologa but pehle tum bollo.

Geet-JAAN I missing u so much

Maan just close his eyes to feel her word and close it forever it in his heart.

Maan[demanding]-ek bar fir bolna...

Geet[in vvery low tune]-JAAN

Maan-Ek bar fir

Geet[sweetly]-JAAN

Maan[his demand now increasing]-Fir se...

Geet-JAAN ab bus bi kijea...

Maan-Tum ache se janti ho jab tum muje Jaan keh kar bulati ho to ye dil bar bar sunne ko bekaraar ho jata hai.

Geet-Acha ji ab ap bol jo mene kaha tha.

Maan[with Smirk]-Ok bye Darling.

With that he cut the call.Geet make a big O shape mouth.she call him again but he cut the call.

Precap-☺️☺️☺️

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Edited by -knirwal- - 12 years ago

beautiful update yaar gudiya tu to kamaal ki shayar nikli yaar...brilliant job dear...
luved deir msg covo haye n maan demanding for JAAN more n more was really cute but ye geet ko cheat kar liya usne nai bola dats bad maan aur phir bechari ka fon bhi cut kar diya hawww...
precap sounds gud...
really amazing update gudiya...
luvya...muah...

we got an update...yippee...hehe...

MSK is asking geet about fukre...

seems he is hell bent on improving his image and impressing geet...hehe...

and it seems woh kaamyab bhi hogaya...

tabhi toh geet ne usse sweet bhi kaha... :)))

i loved how he said ke it's time to teach MK else he wont be able to teach other children...geet ke saamne MK ki image ki watt laga raha hain...hehe...poor MK...kitni mushkil se geet ko impress kiya tha...aur yeh MSK toh...hehe...

oh toh woh teesra ladka Vickram hain...

hehe...like they say never two without three...hehe

poor maanS...ab they will have to deal with another guy geet ke chakkar mein...

back to present...i was kinda missing ekaam...hehe...geet is already maan...but we dunno which one...i guess it will remain as a suspense...hehe...i really hope it's MK though... :)))...i really loved how they were texting poems to each other...all were just awesome...loved them all...

i loved that JAAN part...

that was so sweet...

and then maan...he didnt say the same to her...hehe...

continue soon n thnx for the pm...

r
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loved it khushi
ye MK and MSK kya kamm the jo vikram bhi aa gaya..
Waise i loved the txting wala part
kya shayari likhi beta tune...ekdum mast
i always tell u ur best at it...awesomr

all in all a very nice update
continue soon

luv uEdited by minnie_tweetie - 12 years ago

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