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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 3

great opening...siddhi in pink saree with her hair falling on her shoulder😛

bed scene was a cute one...😛

pillows were thrown out of the bed and they slept closely hugging each other ...yeh hue na baarth😳

so she was staying with him for 2 months...isn't it too long?😕 but the narration of whole 2 month how they spent was very gud👏

the wayt kunalproposed her was excellent👏

yep agreed we hv to find our love in life its k love always comes r way bt we failed to recognize it...well said👏

thanks for ur excellent writing😃

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sonia

@sirjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

waooo awsum arsh4life gr88 piece of writin once again...waoo...

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Magical_KaSh

@Magical_KaSh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shumi.
sorry yaar...even though i was the first one to reserve ...i think last one to read......
no u r not d last one to read sirjee is after u n itsnot bout reading n commenting last nf rst its js u read dats al for me

well coming to When Love Comes Ur Way

shadi na karo toh problem shadi karli toh bhi problem ...i know right...let me add main bachche no ho tho problem...bachche ho thab hi problem...

😆dats ryt yahi toh rna hai sbka 😆

waise it was funny to see kunal was traped by his own drama...😆

usse toh trap hona hi tha after al he ws trpped by siddhi

kaisi ladki hain sirf ma baap ke pyar ke liye yeh ek anjaan ladke ke saat uske kamre main rehne ke liye taiyyar hain ....exactly...me too confused😕

confused toh maib b hoon issi confusion main story likhi hai

oh! siddhi don't know to wear saree! gud for kunal😉

yes good for kunal😳

when i read siddhi don't know how to wear saree i thought kunal will help her...but i was wrong...

great writing...enjoyed reading it...sorry for the late...and thanks for entertaining us😃

thnx alot for appreciatin my writi9ng m glad u liked it