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Posted: 13 years ago
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The wind whispered through the trees
Filling my ears with words I did not want to hear
Bringing images to my mind that i did not want to see.
The hurt, the pain in my true love's eyes
The loneliness that he has to bear
The tears he will shed
Knowing that I shall no longer be of this earth
To take my place in heaven and wait for my rebirth.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Xarina

The wind whispered through the trees
Filling my ears with words I did not want to hear
Bringing images to my mind that i did not want to see.
The hurt, the pain in my true love's eyes
The loneliness that he has to bear
The tears he will shed
Knowing that I shall no longer be of this earth
To take my place in heaven and wait for my rebirth.






OK. So it's not a Gohem poem. But it is the first thing in my mind that made sense.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I think the chalenge was to answer in poetic form but i am not sure it is running that way hence here is a lil something from me,

I yearn for my love to look my way,

I yearn for my love to hear what i say,

I yearn for my love to stand by me today,

I yearn for my love to join me when i pray,

I yearn for my love to hold my hand if he may,

I yearn for my love oh i yearn for my love in so many ways,

But most of all I yearn for my love to love me for always.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tangam

I think the chalenge was to answer in poetic form but i am not sure it is running that way hence here is a lil something from me,

I yearn for my love to look my way,

I yearn for my love to hear what i say,

I yearn for my love to stand by me today,

I yearn for my love to join me when i pray,

I yearn for my love to hold my hand if he may,

I yearn for my love oh i yearn for my love in so many ways,

But most of all I yearn for my love to love me for always.

lol you are right 😆

i was thought they will right a 2 lines and another person will come and write a poem as an answer to the previous writer ok may be i didn't say it clearly

any way we got a few poem writer here will g in this flow 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
your voice like rain shower, i see a sunshine in your glance
where will i exist? without you my day light...

Edited by Abiya07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm not good at it...but thought of giving it a try

My day is prolonging
With me longing to see u
(suits Both Ahem and Gopi)

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