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awesome wonderful superb update

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WONDERFUL UPDATE

GEET IS SO SCARED AND IN PAIN
HOPE MAAN IS ABLE TO HELP HER
THEIR INTERACTIONS EARLIER WERE SO CUTE




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yes she is
i am sure maan will help her

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Thank u so much for liking my Updates and pressing the like buttons. I know i have been not updating lately but i am not at my home so its kind of hard to update from other place as they all are around me all the time, so hope u understand my situation.
some confusion are still their Khushi and Maan relation, Khushi is Maan real daughter its just that Maan never Married Sameera but she did gave birth to khushi and the reast you will know when she will be in the story. so i hope for now the relations between Khushi and Maan is been clear.
any way here is the update
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-Unforgettable Memories Part 12-

"I think we should inform the Handas about Geet" Dadi said as she sipped her tea

Maan- Dadi I will talk to Geet about this then i will inform them, I don't want to put her or any family member of her in trouble.

DM- par at least let them know na that she is with us safe, they probably be worried for her

Maan- i will tell Geet to call them

DM- theek hai

Maan- I will be back

"Dada"
Khushi calls him, Maan turns to face Khushi who was sitting on the couch like an angel

Khushi- Dada now
can i go and see Mama" before Maan could say something Khushi interrupts saying "Dada promise I won't do any badmashi"

Maan- NO

"PLZ"
Khushi innocently says

Maan- NO

Khushi stood up on the couch and said "YES"

Maan- NO

Khushi- YES" by now she was really getting cranky and upset as Maan has been telling her she can't Geet right now with saying her last "YES" to Maan she ran to the stair, Maan went blank for few second, then he also ran behind her saying "Khushi stop you can't go in now" while Khushi also shouts back saying "i am going and you can't stop" before she could have finished her sentence Maan picked her in his arm and puts her on his shoulder saying "we'll see how you go in now" Khushi just got so mad at him she just started to him saying "Bad Dada...chodo mujhe...Mama...bad Dada chodo" and started screaming everyone name to get help from them but the nose distracted Geet who was sleeping when she heard the baby voice saying "Dada chodo mujhe, mujhe Mama se milna hai" then she heard Maan saying "No"
"Veer ji kya kar rahe hoon use neeche utaro" NT said coming out of the kitchen

Maan- NT if i put her down she will run inside the room

NT- Khushi listen to Dada na and come down to me I will" NT voice faded away as Khushi started shouting at her "Bad choti Ma" and started crying hearing Khushi cry Geet comes out of her room and sees Maan holding a girl on his shoulder crying and hitting him...Vicky and Dev also come out hearing Khushi crying but as soon Vicky sees Geet he hides behind Dev remembering she almost killed him

Dev- Vicky kya kar rahe ho

Vicky- wo Bhabhi

Dev looks at NT and says "NT ko kya huwa"

Vicky- NT bhabhi ko nahi wo " and gestures him to look at Geet

Dev- Vicky are you out of ur mind wo Bhabhi nahi Geet hai Bro ki friend

Vicky- wo are bro ki dost kabhi nahi aur agar Bhabhi nahi hai tu kya huwa BHABHI ban bhi tu sakti hai na" Maan hears the last line Vicky said.

"kaun kya ban sakti hai"
Maan asked looking at Vicky

Dev- kuch nahi bro and gestures him to look at the door, Maan turns around to find Geet standing their trying to see who is he girl

Maan- Geet tu...tum yeha kya kar rahi ho

Geet- wo main" just then Khushi turns looking at Geet with a big smile "Khushi" Geet said while Dev & Vicky looked at each other in shock Maan and NT also looked at each-other with the same expression as the other two, Geet knowing about Khushi. Geet cont "Maan ye yeha, i mean aap ke pass" now it was turn for geet to be shock

Maan- Geet ye Khushi hai My daughter". Khushi with a big smile on her face says "MAMA" hawa tez, bijli ka karakna, zoro ki barish, nothing like this happens but after hearing Khushi calling Geet, she just faint at the spot, everyone eyes widen seeing Geet faint, Maan quickly pits Khushi down and goes to Geet he scooped her in his arm and brings her to the bed "Dev call kiran"

Vicky- Bro ye ladki hai ya hawa ka jhoka jab deakho tu fain hi ho jati hai" Maan gave him a glare which was enough to shut him up

Maan- Geet open your eyes, geet aankhe kholo,

Soon Dadi and Kiran came, kiran goes and check Geet pulse

Kiran- kya huwa ise

"Bro told her Kushi is his daughter, and Khushi called her mama and she fainted "
Vicky
said it one go

Kiran- Maan kya zarorat thi ise abhi ye bata ne ka ki Khushi is your daughter" before
Maan could have answer her Khushi innocently says "kyun"

Vicky- kyun ki backi" Maan gave him glare "sorry mera matlab Bro ki backi tujhe kya zarorat thi shor macha ne ki"

Khushi- Mujhe kuch mat bolo sab Dada ki galti hai" and points at Maan, everyone eye on maan

Maan- tum log mujhe aise kya deakh rahe ho main kya kiya"

"MAAN"
Geet said as she tried to open her eyes, and soon all eyes were on her, she slowly open her eyes and sees all wroroed face, she slowly treis to get up and before she could sid Khushi goes and hugs her saying "Meri Mama ko hosh a gaya" Maan just closes his fearing her reaction

Vicky- Bro you know you can open your eyes wo faint nahi huwi hai" Listening to this
Geet and Maan both looked at Vicky giving him galre, Vicky gulped saying "arre yaar sab mujhe ho kyun galre de rahe hai"

Dadi ignored all this talk and goes and sit next to geet "Geet beta aap theek tu ho na"

Geet- Ji aunty Ji" khushi giggles

Khushi- Mama ye anty ji nahi ye tu Dadi ma hai" geet looked at Maan

Maan- Khushi let Mama rest now

Khushi- NO and hugs Geet tight

Dm- Maan ise thodi deer rah ne do Geet ke pass

Maan-par dadi


Dm- Maan...then to Khushi "Khushi you can stay with Geet but zidya padishan mat
karna"
khushi nods in yes then everyone leaves leaving Maan Geet and Khushi


Maan- Geet wo...Khushi...wo


Geet- koi baat nahi Maan, bachi hai


Maan- I am sorry" saying this he walks out the room


"Mama aap itne din kaha thi" Khushi asked as she played with Geet duppata

Geet- wo...main


Khuhis- aap ko meri bulkul bhi yaad nahi aai


Geet went silent as she didn't had any answer to her questions


Khushi- mama aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi


Geet- aise hi...acha aap hamein ye bato ke who told you i am your Mama


"Dada ne"
Khushi said as she placed her head on her chest, Geet got angry hearing that Maan told Khushi that she is her mother (st) "ye maan bhi na kya zarorat thi choti bachi se jhoot bolne ki, kya beete gi is par jab use pata chale ga ki main uski Ma nahi hoon"

Khushi looekd at Geet and found her lost "Mama aap kya soch rahe ho"

Geet- Kuch hai


"Khushi"
NT called as she came in the room Khushi got up and went to NT godi


NT- Khushi chalo Dinner kar lo


Khushi making a baby face says "Mama ke saath plzz"


NT- Nahi unhe aram karne do


Khushi- Plz chot ma


NT- acha tell me one thing you want your Mama to be well soon na" Khushi nods in yes
"then let her rest"


Khushi- Ok" and went with NT


after a while Dadi Ma comes with Geet dinner

DM- Geet beta dinner kar lo


Geet- Dadi Ma...sorry i mean aunty ji


Dadi places her food on the table, sat next to her and says "koi baat nahi beta aap hamein Dadi kah sakti hai, after all hum sab ki dadi hi hai"


Geet- Thank u


Dadi places her palm on her cheeks "welcome beta" then she get her food plate and gives it to her saying "Geet have you informed your family ke aap hamare saath hai, or else they would be worried for you"


Geet- ye tu main bhol hi gai thi, Veer ji tu bauth padishan honge, pata nahi un pe kya beet rahi hogi, Dadi if you don't mind can i borrow ur cell


Dm- of course beta here" giving Geet her cell Dadi left from their soon she left Geet called brij

Ring...RIng...Ring...

Brij- hello


Geet- Veer Ji and started crying


Brij- Gudiya kaha hai tu kaise hi tu, pata hum sab kitna padishan hai, mama tujhe kab
se call kar rahi hai par tera phone out of reachable hai


Geet- Veer ji Sob wo Sob mujhe


Brij- Gudiya your first stop crying and then tell me where are you


Geet- Veer ji wo yehan bhi a gaya hai, wo mujhe aab nahi chode ga


Brij- Geet ye tu kya bol rahi, how is that possible, wo tu Hp ke jail main hai


Geet- nahi veer ji, wo yeha Delhi main hai...usne Jarinder uncle ko bhi mara and she
tells him the whole story "aur isi tarha Maan hamein apne saath apne ghar le aie"


Brij was just totally blank how could that be possible, when he told the jailer that he should not come out of the jail, then how come he is in Delhi he didn't knew what to do now, he was in Bangalore and from their he can't do anything, his mind wasn't working for now "Gudiya tu abhi unke hi saath rah soon i come from Bangalore i will come to Delhi and then we'll see what to do,hmm"


Geet- hmm


Brij- acha sun when you get time tu meri Mr. Khurana se baat kara dena, acha aab tu
aram kar aur haan

Geet- ji veer ji

Brij- aur sun zidya stress mat lena tujhe pata hai ne stress is not good for u, hmm

Geet- ji

Brij- theek hai gudiya, you take rest i call Mama telling ur fine

Geet- Ji, bye

Brij- Bye

Geet sat their alone hugging her self crying

Na jane kis mor pe le aai hai ye zindagi mujhe
apne se dor gairon ke kareeb hoon aab
dar ta hai aab dil un galiyon main jane se
Jahan bachpan betaya tha apno ke sang

She sat their like this for don't know how long and sob turned into silent siskiyan, she didn't even bother to look at the food that was next to her nor her medicine

Na jane ye kaun si duniya main a gai tho wo
Jaha sirf aanson aur dard ka basera tha...

Maan came around 1 and saw Geet sitting resting her head on her knees and saw she hasn't eat anything
"Geet" Maan called

G-------

Maan- Geet

G-------

Seeing no reactions from her Maan goes and sits facing her, then puts his hand on her, and soon Geet felt the touch she looked up to only meat his gaze with teary eyes and before she could have hide those tears from him Maan saw those tears "Geet" and a tear escaped from her eyes, Maan wiped her tears and said "Geet tumne dinner kyun nahi ki" Geet kept silent, Maan didn't wanted to make her uncomfortable so he just took the food and when to warm it...by the time he return to his room he found Geet sleeping cuddle, Maan came in shaking his head in denial went to her pulled the spread and was about to turn off the light wen he saw the tears still escaping from her eyes "Kya karo main is pagli ka" and wiped the tears and left the room closing the door...later in the night Khushi sneaked in Maan room, came and slept next to Geet and soon they both were cuddle in sleeping peacefully.
"Mama uto dekho Dada is going to office" Khushi said as she waled back and forth on the bed

Geet- mmm

Maan- Khushi let her sleep

Khushi- Then you don't go to office

Maan- par kyun, I have meeting lined up, i can't stay with u

"Kati"
khushi said turning her face back to Maan crossing her hand

Maan puts his file back on the table and came to Khushi turning her face to him "what is
this yaar, har baat pe kati"
and Maan picks her in his arm "what will you do if dada kati ho gaye tu"

Khushi- main dada ko mana lungi

Maan- hmm kaise,

Khushi kisses on him cheeks "Aise"

"ok now enough of all this I have to go now"
Maan said as he put Khushi back on the
bed, Khushi stood their crossing her hand on her chest and says "If you step out of this room I will tell Mama you didn't Feed me my breakfast: and pointed toward her breakfast tray

"That's not gonna work"
Maan said as he picked his file

Khushi- It will" and stamped her feet on the bed and Geet wakes up, "Mama your
awake"
Khushi said

Maan(st) ye ladki bhi na apne age kisi ki bhi nahi sunti hai...Khushi, fine I'll go office later but you are not bothering Geet samjhi tum" Maan said putting his files back on the table

Khushi- Dada you go to office, aur waise bhi meri Mama hai na mere pass" this time hearing Mama from Khushi mouth Geet looks at Maan angrily

Geet- Khushi aap thodi deer ke liye Choti Ma ke pass jao" looks at Maan "mujhe aap ke Dada se kuch baat karni hai

Khushi- ok and she left

Geet got off the bed and come to Maan "Maan ye sab kya hai

Maan- Geet I am sorry

Geet- Sorry for what, for lying to her and telling her that i am her mother

Maan- Geet jaisa tum soch rahi hon waise kuch bhi nahi hai, main ne"

Geet-yeahi to main poch rahi hoon ke aap ne jhot kyun bola use ke main uski Ma hoon, Aap jante bhi hai ki jab use pata chale ga ki main uski Ma nahi hoon tu us pe kya bete gi, uske nanhe dil pe kitne chot lage gi" her voice became heavey as she said the last words

Maan- geet plz meri puri baat tu suno

"nahi sunni mujhe aap ki koi bhi jhooti baat,samjhe aap nahi sunni mujhe koi jhoti baat"
Geet snaped and with her teray eyes she says "you are same just as the others, mujhe jhote rishte main badhne wale"

"Geeet"
Maan snaped

Geet- aap abhi aur is waqt use ja kar bol de ke main uski Ma nahi hoon, nahi hoon main uski Ma"

Maan- mujhe tu laga tum auron so alag ho par i was wrong your just same as other girls, jinhe sirf apni khushiyon se matalb hoti hai, sirf apni" with that saying Maan left the room while geet just watched him going, "Maan jiske pass khud dard ke ilawa kuch aur nahi hai tu wo dard ke ilawa kya kisi ko khushiyan de gi, Geet tera yehan rukna theek nahi hoga, till you are here it will be difficult for you and for Maan, main aaj hi yehan se chali jaungi, main maan ko boldeti hoon ke main ja rahi hoon" and as she turn to go she stops "Geet Maan tujhe aysi halat main kahi nahi jane denge, just leave the house without telling them, yes this will be right" Just then Dadi comes in

DM- Geet beta

Geet- ji Dadi

DM- Beta you quickly go and get ready, hamein hospital jana hai na, yaad hai na kiran
ne aaj bolya hai aap ko

Geet- ji dadi, then she looks at her clothes, "par dadi ma main" Dadi understood what she was trying to say and says "Geet i tell NT she will get you some dress"
Geet- Ji" after a while NT came in with few Sari

NT- sorry Geet ji hamare paas sirf sari's hai no salwar kameez, aap in main se choose kar le aur ready ho jaye

Geet just smile NT leaves and geet goes and gets freshen up, then after a while she cames down, Vicky looks at geet and starts to sing

"pari pari hai ek pari, aasmaan se aa giri
Saamne mere khadi, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya"

Everyone looket at Vicky and then followed his gaze which was on geet Maan also looked at her and after his eyes fell on her he couldn't remove his gaze from her which made geet uncomfortable

Vicky looked at Maan and says "haye koi tu rok lo" Geet looked here and there but Maan, Dadi goes to Geet and says "bauth pyari lag rahi hai" Geet just gives her a faint smile as she wasn't likeing all this, especially the way Maan was keep looking at her, there was once a day where she was dying for his one look (referring to the competition night) and here he is keep staring at her, but it wasn't the same feeling anymore for geet as he used to look up at her, now it was irratiting her, those dark eyes were burning her suffocating her
DM- lets have breakfast first, They all went and sat while Nakul served them and then everyone started eating, Geet eat 1 to 2 bites and started playing with er foods, Maan notices her playing with her food, he didn't wanted to say anything afteri their little talk but he also couldn't ignore the fact that she had not eaten last night either. Maan in cold voice says "Geet" Geet looked at him
"stop playing with your food and eat" Maan said, Geet looked at everyone and then at her plate and says "mujhe bhok nahi hai" and was about to get up when Maan said "Geet eat your breakfast" Geet just ignored his talk and left from ther, Dadi and NT understood her so they didn't mind her cold behavior toward them

Maan- Dadi main office ja raha hoon

DM- hmm

Maan- Dev are u ready

Dev- yes bro lets go

Precap: Geet trying to escape, will she succeced?"



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updated Dany
so sorry for updating this late i had my Bahbhi mom and brother coming so was busy with preparation
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lovely story...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome upd8.
Didn't understand why khushi lied 2 geet?
Waiting 4 next upd8.


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