Mayur FF : The perfect couple lastpart pg29 edited - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
i hv read ur full ff its amazing... i loved it.. pls add me in ur pm list.. waiting 4 the next update may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

part 9

Next day morning he wakes up gets fresh and comes out he finds his things on the bed

M-is nupur ki bachi ne toh mujhe mental hospital bhejne ka puraa plan banaya hain

N-mujhe miss kar rahe ho

She was standing with coffee she comes inside and gives it to him

M-yeh kya hain

N-coffee hain

M-(he smiles sarcastically)main iski nahin uski baat kar rahaan hun

N-i think tumhari memory chali gayi woh bed hain aur woh dress hain woh wallet hain aur

M-nupur

She smiles and keeps hand on his shoulder and looks into his eyes with full nautanki

He hugs her shocking her she smiles and hugs him back

N-mayu saade aat baj rahe hain

M-shut I am late

He breaks hug and gets ready in rush and leaves

He comes back kisses her cheek

M-hug you later bye

Don't expect nupur to blush she was planning something mischievous

In car

M-shut my book

N-yeh lo

M-nupur seedi tarah batao majra kya hain

N-what majra its 9

They leave to college they reach late

Shukla 'aaj kaksha main itni der kaise aaye

M-sorry sir

They go inside sorry sir

All smile they don't feel any change

In lunch

Su-kya baat hain aaj hamare naye couple itna late

N-sab kuch iski wajah se isne hi stupid harqato se late kiya

M-tumne jo kiya uska kya kal raat se tum itne wierdly behave kar rahi ho jiski wajah se mujhe aise react karna pada(all were giggling)shaadhi ho gayi iska matlab yeh nahin tum who sab karo tumhari wajah se padai pe bhi concentrate nahin kar paa raha

N-mayank maine aise kya kiya

M-tumne

D-stop it guys sab ke saamne

M-toh tumhein kya problem hain main nupur se baat kar raha hun tumse nahin

D-guys I think we need to leave

B-sharukh ki nayi movie aaj hi release hui hain chale dekhne

M-ek minute ab samja tum subah se mere saare kaam isliye kar rahi thi

N'nahin toh kya main bewajah tumhare kaam karke apna time waste nahin karti

Dia-tum dono tab se iske baare main baat kar rahe the

M-nahin toh kya baat karoonga nupur hum kahin nahin jaane waale exams hone tak

N-mayank please

M-kahaana na nahin

She leaves from there in anger

In the night she was fuming with anger she decides to take revenge

N-tumne apne stupid exams ke liye mujhe film leke nahin gaye na main bhi dekhti hun tum kaise padoge

He comes to room and sits for studying

N-mayu kya kar rahe ho(with sweet voice)

M-dikhai nahin de raha pad raha hun

She hugs him from back and kisses his cheek

M-kya kar rahi ho

N-(full nautanki)tumhein nahin pata

M-tum dur raho mujhse jab tak exams ho nahin jayenge tab tak tum dus feet ki distance maintain karogi

N-main tumhare dil main hun na tumse dur kaise rahungi

Hesmiles and brings her front and makes her sit on him

M-meri achi nupur hona final sem hain na agar padai nahin karenge toh dono fail ho jayenga so exams hone tak no masti

N(in fake anger) tumhein exams important hain ya main

M(he kissesher cheek and smiles)exams hi important hain

She gets up

N-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni main jaa rahi hun

He gets up holds her from waist removes hair on her face in her ear

M-sweetu darwaaza idar nahin udar hain (pointing to door with eyes)

She pushes him and leaves

M-subah aath baje tak aajana warna mujhe akele jaana hoga

She leaves

He completes his chapter and goes down he doesn't find her anywhere in house

M-kahin mobie dekhne toh nahin gayi par is waqt koi show nahin hota

he takes car and goes to her favourite place . he finds her there enjoying paanipuri

she wakes up panipuri stall person and was eating paanipuri

he goes near her and asks her what she was doing there with hands

she shows paanipuri saying she was enjoying paanipuri

before he could say anything she puts paanipuri in his mouth and runs from there and sits on bench he sits beside her

paune bara baje

dono ghar se chale

whats going on ' 2

he points to his watch

soye hain raaste

yeh kaha ham chale

whats going on ' 2

she gets up and walkshe follows her

bulaya kisine tumhein kya

yaha jo tum lehrake aaye

kare ham jo chahe tumhein kya

jo aaye hamko samjhane

ham toh chale

pitche tum ho pade

whats going on ' 2

she turns towards him and pushes him in water by the way they were on beech

paune bara baje

dono ghar se chale

whats goin on - 2

hey hey hey - 2

he runs to catch her atlast catches her

she leaves his grip and goes to icecream person

chalo chodo nakhre dikhana

duniya ka na koi thikana

she gives one to him and leaves

kaha seekha baatein yeh banana banana

duniya se hamko yu bachana bachana

he follows her

ladki ho tum dekh na patchtaaogi

bandhi hui laut ke phir aaogi

she stops answers him and leaves

seekha hamne jaakar phir na wapas aana

ham toh chale

pitche tum ho pade

whats going on ' 2

paune bara baje

dono ghar se chale

whats going on - 2

he sits there only catching his head she comes and sits beside her

chalo hamein itna batao batao

parwaah tumhein kyon yeh sunaioo sunaao

parwaah kise hain jaao jaao ha jaao

reh lo akeli jo reh paao reh paao

rehna pade toh chalo reh jaayenge

thodi kami yeh chalo seh jaayenge

he gets up and leaves

toh fir jao rehlo sehlo phir batlaao

she pats him dances and smiles

ham toh chale

pitche tum ho pade

whats going on - 2

bulaya kisine tumhein kya yaha jo tum lehrake aaye

kare ham jo chahe tumhein kya jo aaye hamko samjhane

ham toh chale

pitche tum ho pade

whats going on ' 2

he takes her in arms

paune bara baje

dono ghar se chale

whats going on ' 2

both were looking in each ther eyes leave home

soye hain raaste yeh kaha ham chale

whats going on - 2

paune bara baje dono ghar se chale

whats going on - 2

next day mayank convinces nupur to study for exems jiske badle use ek hafte nupur ke saath bait ke sharukh ke movies dekhne hain

so sad bechara buri tarah fas gaya

precap -exams and mayanks romantic
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
fantastic update
loved it so much
awesome job dear

keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -Faria-

fantastic update
loved it so much
awesome job dear

keep it up

thank you

many happy returns of the day
i was quite busy
so i didnt post
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Beautiful update...
loved it lodsss...
waiting for d next part...
love ya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
nice update dear ab mujhe apna naam bata hi do kab tak inknown rahogi madam...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome updt dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
vryyy nic update
precap seems intersting
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
song sequence was really amazing...
bechara mayank...waiting for next part, continue soon...

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