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Posted: 20 years ago
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it was too good eshika, I wait until then. I have a lot of patience. 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: happe

it was too good eshika, I wait until then. I have a lot of patience. 😆

but i don't!!!😡😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
Wow so good. Continue Plz.👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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like i said b4 i DON'T HAV PATIENCE!!!!!!!!!!😡
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
Just read the last two parts. Great job👏 You're a great writer. Please continue.😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thank u soo much guyz.... but i am really sorry.. i gotta work on my term paper... so a bit bg.... but i promise i will continue after few days... pakka promise..😃

lots of love

take care...

have fun

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Its ok eshika. we understand. we'll b waiting though.😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28

please continue sooon!!!!!

u doin a fine job

lov ur workk

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 4

As kripa leaves the place angad keeps lookin at her with all da pain in his eyes…..just then prithvi comes and calls angad

P: kyaa huwa angad???? Janab yaha aakele kyaaa karrahe hai???? Sab log tumhara ander intezaar kar rahehai…. Chalo……

Prithvi takes him inside….

As they enter da party hall…. They see misthy announcing some thing

M: ladies and gentlemen….may I have ur attention plzzzz…. Aaj hum sab logo k beech ek khas insaan hai.. woh insaan jiske aawaj mein jadooo hai…. Woh aawaj jo kahi kho gayee thi…….

Everybody looks surpised…..

M: yes u guessed it right!!!! He is none other than Angad Khanna……

Angad is all shocked but has a fake smile on his face…..he does not want 2 but is forced 2 sing a song……

Angad's song…

Aur ish dil main kyaaa rakha hai

Aur ish dil main kyaaa rakha hai….

Tera hi dard chupa rakhaa hai

Tera hi dard chupa raakha hai…..

Chir ke dekho dil mera toh..

Chir ke dheko dil mera toh…..

Tera hi naam likha rakhha hai

Tera hi naam likha rakhaa hai…..

While singing this song he keeps on glancing at kripa…… who is trying hard 2 ignore angad's presence but can't…..

After angad completes his song.. everybody starts 2 leave….. and so is angad….

A: it was a lovely party prithvi….. tum nahi jante aaja tumne mujhe kitni khusi dee hai…. Ish party ne aaj meri zindagi badaldi….

P: angad r u all rite?????? Tum itna emotional kuyn ho raheho? It was a simple party man…..

A: nahi prithvi aaj ka din main kabhi nahi bhoolunga….. khair jane doo… tum nahi samjhoge…..

P: aacha baba it's okay… mere dost ki khusi main meri khusi….

A: okay then I'll catch u tomorrow….bye

Just b4 he gets inside his car…. He quickly glances at the window only 2 see kripa standing there…..lookin at him

A smile spreads over angad's face

Angad(2 himself): bhale tum mujhse chahe kitni bhi nafrat karo kripa… main janta hoon ish nafrat main kahi na khai pyaar chupa hai…. Wohi pyaar jisse pahechane ne main maine der lagadie…lekin aab bas aur nahi…!!!!!! mai tumhe yakeen dilaunga ki main badal gaya hoon…. Sayin these words 2 himself he moves on……

In kripa's Room:

Kripa remembers angad's words…. What he had said in the party….

"Plzz kripa bas ek bar meri aakho mein jhak kar dekho …..tumhe wohi angad nazar aayega jisse tumne kabhi pyaar kiya tha…..jo aaj tumhe ussi tarah se pyaar karta hai jis tarah se kabhi tumne usse kiya tha…."

Kripa: kyun angad kyun?????? Kyun tum bar bar mere samane aajate ho…. Jab bhi mujhe lagta hai ki maine aapne aap ko samal liya hai… kyun tum phir se mere sammne aake mujhe kamzoor banate ho??? Why angad why??? Why do u alwaz do this 2 me….

Ek woh din tha jab tumhare ek jhalak dekhne ko main sab kuch bhoola k tumhare paas daud k aati thi…. Lekin aaj … aaj tumhari parcahyee se bhi nafrat ho gayee hai angad….. kitna pyaar karthi main tumse angad…… dil aur jaan se chahati thi main tumhe…mere din ke har suruwat tumse hoti thi… aapna sab kuch toh tumhe de diya tha maine…. Lekin tumne ….tumne sirf aur sirf….. aasu diye mujhko… mere jasbato ka mazak banadiya…. U played with my feelings angad….. I will never 4 give u never ever!!!!!!!!!!!!I HATE U ANGAD I HATE U !!!!!!!!

While kripa is sayin all these words… angad is in his room….

Angad's room:

He is in his bed thinking about kripa…. He keeps on turning da light on n off ……he remembers all kripa's words….…??? "Angad khanna jiske liye pyaar sirf ek commodity hai.. a waste of time…. Mujse pyaar karta hai?????? Tum sayed woh sab bhool gaye ho angad….. lekin main nahi bhooli…. Aaur kabhi bhoolungi bhi nahi…".

….. ..there r all kripa's pictures on his wall…. He goes 2 one of the picture n says…

I am sorry kripa… I am sorry 4 everything…. I need u … I love u kripa I love u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Then he closes his eyes n has flashbacks of the times spent with kripa…. .

Okay guyz now da story goes ahead with all the flashbacks….angad remembers all da old days…… now da story will tell u what actually had happened between angad n kripa…..

Okay bye 4 now…

I'll continue very soon….

Love u all

Take care

Have lots of fun😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30

thanks alot

that was a very very good part

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