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👏👏👏good going wow this is amazing

amazing story yaar. I am loving it. Keep going.

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Part 3

Misty: thank god light aagayee…. By da way have u guys met each other?????

Both angad n kripa look into each others eyes…..

M: anywaz… angad this is my best fren kripa…. N kripa this is angad the greatest rockstar angad khanna…… surprised naa???? Yehh bhai bhi na…. hamesha surprises deta rehta hai….

Kripa who is feeling a bit uncomfortable totally ignores angad and excuses herself

M: aarey aab isse kya huwa??????? Ufffffffff yeh kripa bhi na …… don't mind her haan….angad yeh kabhi kabhi yesi hi behave karti hai…..

Angad who just can't believe his eyes.. is continuously lookin at kripa… who is now going outside….

Kripa(to herself): angad … angad … yaha????? Itne saalo k baad phir se….. jis insaan k parchaeee se bhi main nafrat karti hoon woh … who aaaj mere samane…. …

She remembers all da old days spend with angad…… she is lost in her own thoughts and memories….. when some 1 calls her name….

It's prithvi….

P: kripa tum yaha aakele kyaa kar rahi ho? Sab kuch thik toh hai naa.???

K: nahi prthivi yesi koi baat nahi nai.. I'm fine…

P: toh ander chalein……

Kripa nods her head n goes with prithvi…

Inside da party angad n misthy r dancing……angad hardly wants 2 dance….it's just misthy who is makin him 2 dance….

Prithvi to kripa

P: may I have da honour 2 dance with u kripa…

K: ummm woh prithvi …. Actually….

P: kyaaa kripa tum mera dil tod na chahati ho….?it's just a dance…

K: okay….

Everyone is dancing….. angad-misthy prithvi- kripa

Now it is da turn 2 switch their partners….(typical ekta style)

It's angad- kripa …misthy with some 1 else and prithvi with some other gal…..

Prithvi can't stop lookin at kripa… he is lost in his own thoughts while dancing….

Now it's angad and kripa( da song is tumhe aapna bananeki kasam khaee hai…. Khaee hai.. 4rm movie Sadak)

Kripa just ignores da fact that she is dancing with angad…. She does not even looks at his face… she has no expressions… she is neither sad nor happy…..

Angad (who is really hurted by kripa's behavoiur says): mujhe itna paraya banadiya kripa ki ek bar meri taraf dekha bhi nahi….. mujhe hie bhi nahi kaha….. kyaa main itna gair ho gaya hoon tumhare liye….?????

Kripa then looks in his eyes and without sayin anything just leaves da dance floor….

Angad follows her outside…. He catches her hand 4rm back……n says- I wana talk 2 u …

Kripa does not says anything just tries 2 free her hand 4rm angad

A: plzz kripa ek baar meri taraf dekho toh saahi….main janta hoon ki tum mujse baat nahi karna chahati…. meri shakal bhi dekhna nehi chahati…. mere ehsaas….aur yaha tak ki mere naam tak se tum nafrat karti hooo…. Mujhe jo saja dena chahati ho tum de sakti hoo par plzzzz yese chup mat raho kripa…. Tumhare chupi mujhe pagal kardalegi kripa…. Plzzzzzz 4 god sake talk 2 mee…..

Angad has soo much pain in his eyes….he is cryin 4rm his heart…..

Plzz kripa bas ek bar meri aakho mein jhak kar dekho …..tumhe wohi angad nazar aayega jisse tumne kabhi pyaar kiya tha…..jo aaj tumhe ussi tarah se pyaar karta hai jis tarah se kabhi tumne usse kiya tha….

K: pyaar!!!!…… did I hear it right????? Tum mujsee pyaar karte ho…??? Angad khanna jiske liye pyaar sirf ek commodity hai.. a waste of time…. Mujse pyaar karta hai?????? Tum sayed yeh sab woh sab bhool gaye ho angad….. lekin main nahi bhooli…. Aaur kabhi bhoolungi bhi nahi….

Saying these words kripa just walks ahead leaving angad in tears……

Okay guyz that's 4 2 day….

I will be continuing after few days….

It's not as gud as da other stories but still I hope u all like it…

Love u all

Take care

Have fun…

its very very good

please continue

Awesome.👏👏👏
Did I read it rite, you will continue after few days. That is unfair. Few hours is acceptable 😃

oh its soo good and cool please post next part.

hey thank u so much guyz 4 ur awesome response.... but i will continue tomorrow may be.... sorry 4 keep u all waiting

love u all

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have fun