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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 23 - Radhika getting along with her family

Radhika after spending some good time with her family, they all went off hoping her to rest. Asmitha stayed up on the request of Radhika. Radhika opened the laptop which she got on her request and logged on into her FB ID.

Radhika's eyes were searching for one person. Luckily she was online, Radhika immediately opened the chat window and wished her.

Radhika:"Hello, cute princess."

Cute princess:"Hey Radhs,
Whats up with u yaar, why aren't u available from last one week"

Radhika:That was a long story to go

Cuteprincess:What did u get any proposal from ur Dev

Radhika:Hahahahha

Cuteprincess:what hahahah, say yaar

Radhika:Nothing like that dear, it was just like I found my family

Cuteprincess:Ur family?????? U already had one na

Radhika:Yeah that's my family, but these people are saying its my family

Cuteprincess:Are u okay. What that family, this family

Radhika:erm I found my real father, he said I had a brother, and a sister too who dies recently

Cuteprincess:Ohh so party time... When will u give a treat to me

Radhika:Hmmm

Cuteprincess:what yaar when will u give me that treat

Radhika:First let me adjust here

Cuteprincess:What yaar, why y can't adjust there.

Radhika:every thing is new to me, these servants this queen ness, every thing. I am finding my self strange

Cuteprincess:U were new to there but ur families love on u will definitely change u

Radhika:Hope so

Cuteprincess:hmmm

Radhika:okay bye baby

Cute princess:U came now only na

Radhika:yeah but i came just to share it wiht u , I am leaving

Cuteprincess:Okay bye

Radhika off line.

Geet closed her laptop in her room. Maan who was doing on with some files asked geet what happened.

Geet:"maan , Radhika was not convinced with us."

Maan:Kya hua, why are u saying like that

Geet: Nahi Maan , she was finding her self strange here.

Maan:Yaani vusko hum pasand nahi aaya

Geet:NO she like us , but she was finding all this enjoyments life less

Maan smiling "she was new here, we are new to her. She never knows us and she had her world for 23 yers,now from some where we came and says that we are her blood relatives and she belongs to us. How can she digest? huh.

Let her take her time"

Geet accepted and silently sat there looking at radh's pic in her lap top.

Maan:Geet, ab ye kya hua tumhe \

Get:Kya main iss raat ke liye Radh se so sakti hun

Maan:Kyun

Geet:Kuch nahi maan,thinking in her mind 'u never now maan, she a=came out in which circumstances. she was married maan'

Maan:ab kya hua, tu radhika ke saath rehna chahti hain, vutna hi na, vus se pooch do aur agar vusne haan kiya, wahi karo.

Geet standign up "sachi, thank u maan love uuu"

Maan:Lekin vo tumko kal meeting hain yaad hain na, preparation ho gaya

Geet:Kal hi kyun

Maaan:Tum ek haftah se office nahi aaya tha, vo jo tender hain vusko kal hi submit karna hain yaad hain na, is liye

Geet:ummm Okay main aavungi kal offic ko.

Maan:Ok go.

Radhika was in her room standing at the door,

Asmi came there changing into night dress. seeing Radhika standing there gloomily, asmi came near Radhika and kept a hand on her shoulder asking "kya hua Radhika"

Radhika not turning back said to Asmi:"ye soch rahi ki mera parivaar kaisi huyi hogi"

Asmi:Radhika ek baat poocho

Radhika:hmmm

Asmi:Tum iss parivaar ko apna parivaar nahi maana na

Radhika giving a smile "tum mere baarein mein sab kuch jaanti hun, jo shayad mrinalini didi bhi nahi jaanti phir bhi tum mujhse ye sawal pooch rahi ho. Jo sawaal tum ne poocha vusmein hi jawab bhi hain"

Asmi:Maaloom hain, lekin tere hi muh se sun na chahti hun

Radhika:Main ek wajah se mein hi mere dunia, jis mein mein 23 saal se judi ho, vusko chod kar aaya tha. Lekin yaha ek aur nayi duniyaan mujhe apna rahe hain, jisko main kabhi dekha bh nahi.Ab mein kis duniya ko apnavo. Ye furniture, ye gehna, ye dresses ye sab mujhe naye lag rahe hain. Main kabhi ek maharaani banana nahi chahi thi, lekin ek achi si parivaar ka hhissa banana chahi thi

asmi:ye bhi ek acha parivaar hain Radhika, Ye parivaar bhi wahi parivaar ke tarah hain, lekin tumhe yaha sab naya lag raha hain, aur yaha thoda sa comforts jyaada hain. Lekin Radhika tum inlogon se mrng, achi tarah baat kiya na

Radhika:Mujhe aisa lag raha ki main iss parivaar se judi ho. nahut gehna sambandh hain, shayad in logon mera blood relatives hain na

Asmi:Radhika tum ek haftah iss parivaar mein raho, agar tabhi tumhe aisa hir aha toh, tab mujhe bolo mein tumhe yeha se door le javungi.

Radhika nodded her head and Geet who was standing there out sode the door, wiping off her tears came in saying "chalo chalo chalo main aagaya"

Radhika looked at her and asmi smiling said "Kya hua Bhabhi kyun yaha aagaya"

Geet:"is liye kyun ki mein tere brains kahna chahti hun"

Asmi:Ohh toh kya hum apna brains bahar nikhal ke aapko de do.

Geet:haan tum apna brain nikhal ke de do khavungi.

Radhika smiled and Geet and Asmi sighing said "Huh finally u did laugh"

Radhika smiling said "Kya hua geet ji, mujhse kuch kaam hain aapko"

Geet:Haan maine bola na , tere brains khane ke liye aaya.

Radhika :"Ohhh acha, toh kya main bhi tere brain kha sakthi hun"

Geet surprising said "wow Radhika tum iti achi tarah bhi comments maar sakt ho. I thought u was more of reserved type"

Asmi:Aisa kuch nahi Bhabhi, ye toh bahut open hain

Geet:ohhh, Lekin radhu, tum mujhe bhabhi bolo, ye ji, geet ji aisa mat bolo.

Radhika nodded and after Geet said :"kya main Raat ke liye aapse reh sakti hun"

Asmi looked at Radhika and Radhika said"Aisi kya baat hain bhabhi, ye bhi kuch poochne wali baat hain kya."

Geet:Aisa nahi Radhika, man to kar raha ki aap donom se time spend karo, lekin yehi soch raha ki kya tum kuh personnel baat karoge asmitha ke saath

Radhika:Aisa kuch nahi Bhabhi, itni personal baat kuch bhi nahi

Asmi:Okay aap doom yaha sovo, main vo doosri room mein javungi

Geet:Kyun yaha nahi so sakti hain kya, it will be comfortable even if three people sleep.

Asmi:Nahi bhabhi, tum he hi takleef hogi

Radhika looked at Geet and she said "Ye kab se start hua, tum toh jaantein hain na main shaadi ke pehle kaise rehne waali hun. Mein kuch maharaani nahi bangayi."

Asmi smiled and they both sat on bed. Radhika asked Asmi "Arshad kaise hain Asmi"

Asmi :"Radhuuu"

Geet:"ye Arshad kaun hain"

Radhiak understood and said 'Vo humari friend hain college mein aur family friend bhi hain mujhe, bhaiyya bolti hun vusko, is liye poocha tha"

Geet:ohhh

Radhika:Haan Asmi bolo sab kaise hain

Asmi:Sab tumhe lekhar pareshaan hain, they are not knowing where u are and ghar mein toh poocho mat. sab log toh apni kaam bhi chodkar tumhaare liye search kar rahe hain. Aur Dev vusko poochna hi mat, vo toh shayad lhana peena bhi bhulgaya hain

Geet:Ye Dev koun hain Radhika

Radhika looked at Geet and unable to say answer looked down.

Geet and Asmi sighed to each other and were looking at Radhika.

Radhika in mind 'Kanha mein kya bolo, mein vuski patni hun lekin vo kaise boo. Mein era mangal sutra bhi hide karne ke liye bahut kosish ker rahi hun. Ab mein kya bolo Kanha'

Asmi:Bhabhi vo ek baar shayad uncle ne aapko bola hogi, Radhika ki best friends

Geet:Haan haan vo hain kya DEv

Radhika:Haan bhabhi vahi hain.

Radhika:Asmi Abhi kaise ho. vo shayad ab tak apni camp se waapas aaya hoga

Asmi:vusko toh pooch mat, mrinalini didi ne vus se nahi seh paakar vusko hostel mein join kiya hain.

Radhika:ye didi ne kya kiya, vusko toh khana khud khana bhi achi tarah nahi aati hain, vo aise kaise kar sakti hain.

Asmi:Mrinalini didi toh poori tarah pagal ho gayi hain

Radhika:Asmi mera phone kaha hain

Asmi:Kya phone karogi

Radhika:haan lekin ab nahi kal subah.

Asmi taking radh bag :ye lo tera bag, aur ismein tere kanha ki moorthi bhi hain

Radhika:Bhabhi

Geet:haan

Radhika:Kya mein iss moorthi ko mandir mein rakh sakti hun

Geet:Iss ghar mein pooja mandir nahi ho Radhika

Radhika:aise kaise ho sakte hain, kis ghar mein nahi hogi.kya aap log nastik hain

Geet:Aisa kuch nahi, mere aane se pehle sirf Maan , dad aur Imarti rehne waale hain. Imarti toh bahut bubly hain vusko ye pooja karna hai aati, aur dad aur maan vun donom ko apne business hi sab kuch ahin.Mein aane ke baad soch tha lekin imarti mar gayi, vuske baad shayad kisi ki man mein ye soch nahi aaya tha.Aur main toh vuske baad office ki kaam mein busy hogayi ki in sab ke baarein mein sochne ka waqt bhi nahi mil raha tha, s liye har din morning hum sab mandir jaavoge

Radhika:Kya mein Mandir banwao. I mean mujhe pooja karn ahain har din subah

Geet:Ye bhi kuch poochne wali baat hain kya, ye tera hi ghar hain.

Radhika smiled and was really amused by the affetion shown by her in the very one day. she started to like her and that family too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay friends, here is my 23rd Part and yaa I gave some colours in thsi part that for differentiation sake and the blue oen states the chatting and green one states for self thinking. Hope u don't get confused.

Finally I wanna spend some time with Radhika coping up with ehr family,. she got it after 23 years, they were all new to ehr even thoguh they are her blood relatives. she need that time and its not easy for her too./ So I am sorry tp say that u have to wiat for Dev for one more episode. But when The pf reurns in story the circumstances between Radev will be lovley I promiise it, indeed I am also waiting for it.

Hope u keep on continued.

loves

Harianjana😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

beautiful n awesome part
continue soon

thank u didi. thanks a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maia22

very nice update waiting to see radev meeting in the next one and a long one wish it went on and on

sorry dear. u need some tiume to complete ur wish, but very son they will meet, please waittt
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ushasri

awsome ff hari waiting for the next part

thank u dear. and what to do I am also waitign for next one. but not egtt9ng time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Thnx for a lovely update. Loved the way Radhika getting along with her family.Waiting for the next part.

Thanks a lot dear, and yes Radhika did bt she is not yet completely convinced she need soem more time. But thanks yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chayya55

so asmi is radhikas sister as she call geet bhabi and maan is radhikas brother but wasnt radhikas siser a twin imarti who died or lost and the mother was the one who died

no yaar asmi is radhika's fathers friends daughter. he and his wife growed radhika's siblings when radhika's fatehr was on buisness. so she was more attatched, but radh's sister and asmi's parents died at a time in an accident
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Babbar_Avina

beautifull part!!!! Rads get her family back...and hop asmi will find dev...and know that how much dev will love rads...and asmi tell this 2 rads...and waited 4 rad-dev reunion...

Thank u dear, and no need for asmi to find Dev just there wil be some depart but they will get back again. And yeah it is soon yaar. please be patiens
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part. Hope Dev finds his Radhika soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hari, i sincerely liked it dear,my comment it wasnt sarcastic,when i say smth i mean it!! This part was short but cute,tnx 4 pm

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