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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alice54

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What a beautiful date!!!!!
and Arnav admitting that he was not a virgin😲😲
its good that they dont have any truth hidden between and understand each other well...
and "shona"😛😛...very cute one...
continue soon...



Thanks Alice. . . . 😊

Originally posted by: anita_21492

Wheb arnav thought that his world revolves around khushi I went awww... This update was hot and very cute... Please update soon



I know!!! So sweet na?? 😍

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose

Oh wow...

Thatl wasl fatabouous and most beautiful first date...He even confesses that he is not "virgin" and "Shona" oh god i just swooned over those lines
oh my god this was so sweet and it was literaly like an addictive and tastyd wine!!!!
I am down on my knees beggnig for more...please update please update soon please update
Acauly ihave half mind to ask you about the marriage and then their SR...in which ii guess their love and understanding for each other will reach more heights but then guess the story may end then and there right...me patiently waiting to see how the plot devlops at the same time want more arhi momens totally romantic and exoctic and hey do send them to honeymoon to some exoctic place and yup i want them all alone in an islenad or someplace like that!!!!
Superb update...update soon



Thank you.. thank you.. thank you...
😊
And as for the honeymoon and all. . . You've got to wait!!! 😉 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Nice update!

I was waiting for your PM from yesterday.. If I didn't have received one today I would have messaged you!! But you are early in that!!

With update!! Loved their love..! And it was hot☺️!!
I loved Kushi as well as Arnav's self control when they decided a No!!
The dress part and her makeup was explained beautifully!!
Thanks for the PM buddy!! Update soon!



Thanks a lot Siva. . . 😳
Aww... That was so sweet of you!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lyraa99

That was sooo cuuuttteee. was dying to read this...the way u have described their luv thruout is jz amazing.. i love this FF... awesome !!!!!!



Thanks a lot, hun!!!

Originally posted by: blah_blah03

AWWW I absolutely loved it👏 How the hell does she have so much self control! Who says no to Arnav Singh Raizada lol 😳 and the way he actually listens to her! Too cute, absolutely adorable. My personal stress reliever from all the studying! Thanks so much Harsh... honestly it helps so much after an entire day of being buried in the books.



Amy!! So nice of you!!
And your sweet comments is my personal stress buster 😳

Originally posted by: devisridhar

absolutely loving update

making up for my comments earlier
here u it was an amazing update and a really long one too👏
the way khushi handles arnav is adorable she commands him in every way...too lousy 😆
the word shona was cute for arnav i really liked it
the way he confessed he is not a first timer is really justified ...i liked for his frankness and guilt⭐️
khushi is really a beauty at heart and a dazzling star in arnav's life...😃
update soon dear harshi and thanks for the pm
by the way when r u planning for arhi wedding????? can't wait for it...😍



Thanks Sri...
And as for Khushi commanding Arnav, Its more like Arnav lets her do it!! 😳

Originally posted by: magi11

hey harshi sorry for commenting late...

loved the update...
n arnav admitted that he is not virgin... i never expected this...
but happy that he found his true love...
cant wait for the next update... update as early as possible...



Its okay Mahi. . . .
And thanks too. . . 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Smashing update Harshi!

Very romantic.
The mood and setting were simply perfect.
Thanks for the PM sugar.
Looking forward to the next part.
⭐️



Thanks a lot Zeba. . . . 😳

Originally posted by: -Dee-

That was umm.. something(??) 😉



I'll take that as a good something. . . . 😉 😆

Originally posted by: sushipie01

Aww she called him Shona!! How cute and adorable! I loved this one Arsh! :D



Thanks Shre, hun!! 😳

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

OMFGGG 🤪 😳 If This Is The Beginning Then I Can't Wait For After Marriage ☺️ & Arnav Better Be Careful Coz It's Her First Tym Naa 🤣



Hehehe. . . . 😆
Don't worry. . . . . 😉

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

fantastic update...really really loved it...love how they are coming closer step by step...and when she called him "shona", hayyee that was so cute...waiting for the next part...thanks for the pm



Thanks a lot, sweetie. . . . 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rozinab

Kya baat hain harshuuu very romantoc shomantic update! Not that I'm complaining! Harshu you can write a 10 page update and it will be awesome so you don't have to warn us because its 4 pages long!

Aey shona aey shona is what I've been singing in my head all day after reading your update! Totally loved khushi calling arnav shona, so cute!

The update was very hot again harshu, khushi feeding arnav then dancing to one of the best songs ever was just amazing! Hahaha I can't say I'm surprised that arnav isn't a virgin but we know he will be faithfull to khushi.

Really like how your showing there relationship is developing! They understand each other so well. Beautifully written and I can't wait to for the next part! Hope I don't have to wait too long!

I've gone totally latoo over your FF

Xxx
Rozi



Thanks Rozi. . . .
Thanks a lot!!!

Lotsa love and a big 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Harshi!!

Super super loved the last update!! very romantic & totally worth a wait & total romance teaser!!

Loved the cutie pie, shy, cute but still in control of the situation & slowly but surely falling completely for her prince charming.. KHUSHI!! 😳😳 Btw.. the black gown was gorgeous (pic was in the previous update but if I forgot to mention.. it was a total Awww..)

Arnav!! what do I say abut him.. My love for the Arnav u have created.. increased by leaps and bouds by the update.. one definitely bcoz of his love and the fact that he doesn't mind expressing it for her and making her feel the most special person in the best way possible.. but also bcoz of the fact that he's being totally caring and more than caring, truthful in this relationship.. Loved his guilt here for accepting that he's not a virgin but pressing the fact that he never really thought they were relationships at all & never ever fell in love with anyone before but HER!! Also, loved Khushi's maturity but possessiveness her by accepting the fact but making sure to remind him that she would hate any of his old flings return back or even been seen around her!! 😆😆 That was Bold & much required!! 👏

In all... I really really loved this update!! Romance, love, purity showing in their relationship, caring, possessiveness, guilt, past revelation, acceptance!! pretty much everything was there!! 👏

lastly, really sorry for not commenting on the previous update!! Exams u see!! have one tomorrow.. I wish u would have updated another one today!! sighhh... But will make it up to u by giving longgg comments once I'm done & over with this books for the time being!!
Awesome job again.. thoroughly enjoyed it!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Alright. . . .
This is just a teaser/ trailer, or whatever you want to call. . . . . 😛
I'm here with so many twists this time!!! 😉
At least 3 bombs, that I've dropped in this!!!
Lets see if you can catch 'em all!!! 😆

Khushi came out of her reverie when Aditya snapped his fingers in front of her face, asking with his signature grin on his boyish face, "Uffo ma'm. . . . Not again! The way you stare blankly, I should think you have had a love failure or something. BUT. I know that's not the case. Because. I dunno why, but I have a feeling you're way too strong to bend in front of love."

'Huh?! How I wish I could tell you, that you're BANG on this time!!!'
Khushi thought, as she gave him a small smile, thinking how similar Aditya Singh Raizada was to his cousin, Arnav Singh Raizada. But the similarities ended right there. Yes. The only similarity among them was the lethal good looks that seemed to run in the blood of Raizada men.

"Its your class, Di. Are you coming or shall I give some fake assignments to the class??" Aditya questioned, his voice full of concern. He knew she hated it when he called her Di when they were in college. But he somehow couldn't stop himself from comparing her to his Anjali Di. Both limped, for one. Though Khushi Di's limp only showed when she would work her butt out, which happened to be most of the time.

Khushi looked around the staff room. Nobody were there except her and her favorite student/ brother, though they didn't share the same blood/ confidant. No. Not confidant. There was one thing she hid even from him. Her identity. "Sit down Aditya. . . . . ." She said.

"Ms. Khushi Singh Raizada. Each time I call you by that name, it makes me wonder about 2 things. One. Whether we're somehow related. And, two. Okay. I don't wonder about this one, coz I know this one for sure." Aditya stopped at that.

"What??" Khushi asked.

"I know that this isn't your real name. . . . ." He replied, his eyes getting that grown-up look which was very rarely seen on his face.

Khushi lowered her eyes, not having the strength to face him. He held her hand in his, as he reassured her, "Its okay, Di. We won't talk about anything that you don't want to. . . But. . . Just have it in your mind, that I'll always be there. You're not alone. . . . . ."

Khushi used all her self control to stop herself from breaking down. It was when he spoke like this, that he reminded her of Arnav. "Aditya. . . . ." Khushi started, and he looked at her expectantly, thinking she might tell him anything about her past, which he was sure, was very painful. "Lets go to class..." she said with a fake grin.

Aditya sighed as her fake grin didn't deceive him, but smiled when she playfully hit his arm, telling him not to call her Di in the college premises. He knew her since almost a year now, and she had to be the toughest woman that he had ever seen in his 20 year old life. . . . . . . . . . . . .

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PS: This was just a random thought and I haven't written further, as such. . . .
PPS: If you liked this update, hit 'LIKE' and comment pwease!!! 😳
New readers who'd like PM for my further updates, Buddy me...
PPPS: If you want to throw chappals at me, make sure you throw 'em in pairs!!! 😉
Edited by harsh42 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was set sometime in the future right?! Arnav and Khushi split up? and she's a teacher? OMG! I am so confused 😔

I just read that again cause I was confused! 😳 Ms. Khushi Raizada, that means the two of them were married? or well are? But Arnav's cousin doesn't know who she is? Please continue soon! This is gonan bug me now
Edited by blah_blah03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
No juttis or chappals, this is your FF, you can write whatever you want. We'll just tag along.😛


OK
So I tried very hard to spot those bombs you were alluding to😕
And here I go:

[1] There's been a one year leap
[2] Khushi and Arnav have probably broken up
[3] Third I couldn't spot


So, am I right?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
What an update!!!!!
Waiting to read what happened between Arnav and Kushi...
And is kushi limp now????😕😕😕
waiting for the next update...
continue soon...

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