FF raya.. journey of love. up 43.pg 144 (14.1.13)

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Ram nearing to priya :blush:' when he is about to touch her his phone beeps.( a message has been received). Priya shocked and turn around and finds ram pulling off his hands back from priya . both share and eye lock . both are driven hard in awakwardness .

P: aap .. yeha ..!!! kya kar rahi ho!!!

R: ram gets embarrassed and doesn't have an answer " mein .!!!! yeha .. bas aise aya☺️

P: kya matlab???

R: kuch nahi yar' bar bar sawal pe sawal puchna jaroori hai kya?? Ill change and come and he leave

P: (priya sensed the embarrassed ram) :embarassed:

ajeb hai !!!! yeah Mr. Kapoor bhi na !! and continues folding her cloths.

R: checks his phone , there was a message from vikram😡 "all the best ram" ram thinks yeah vikram bhi na galth timing hai uska '. Oh god don't knw what priya is thinking !!!

😳Ram comes out and search for priya by the time she is in living ram enter the living and see priya in the couch reading (waiting for him ) then the bell ring.

R: lagtha hai kahna agaye . mein dektha hu .. open the door and waiter brings food inside .

Priya serves the food to ram . while ram steal glance at priya. And thinks yeah kya ho raha hai mujhe . mein inkeliye kuch karna chati hu and vikram ne kaha ki wo sab'. Nahi kuch aur soch the hai ❤️

P : (ram lost in his world and was interrupted by priya) kaha kho gaye .?? ho kya gaye aap ko ? yelo kahna khaligiye

(While both eating ram steals glances at priya thinks) what should I do now yar. And he thinks of going out with priya in night . and soon finishes his food

R: priya mein abhi atha hu kuch imp calls karna hai . and goes out to arrange a car for their long drive..

P: k Mr. kapoor jaldhi ana akhele dar lagtha hai innocently reminds of the story he told the night before and about the sounds in the night 😊

R: (smiling naughty) ha tik hai abhi aatha hu ☺️

( he thinks yeah sahi hoga just priya and me with smile he returns to room )

R: tum taayar ho jao hum baahar chalthe hai..

P:confused :hmm: and say s Abhi !! ha par kaha jana hai . itni rath ko ' aap ko ho kya gaye ? were u not tiered?? Subha se bhar hi tho hai !!!!

R: priya plz sawal math pucho' tum mera sath ana hai ya nahi'( comes close to her and takes her hands into his, look straight into eyes )tumare sath kuch accha waqth bithana chatha hu priya .will u come with me madam 😊

P: (priya lost in his eyes felt moved by rams words) ha mein aap ka sath hi hu . waise mujhe acha lagtha hai aap ki company mein 😊

R: mujhe bhi .. patha nahi kab se aisa honelagha par acha laghta hai. Jaa change kar ke ah na

P: aap aise kurthe mein. waise ap ka suit s se accha par aap THE RAM KAPOOR HAI NA' :wink:

apabhi change kar ligiye

Both get ready in no time. Priya came out in a beautiful red sari, ram lost in her beauty he moves towards her

R: ur so simple yet beautiful. And extends his hand to her..chale ...❤️

P: 😳priya says thanks Mr. kapoor and holds his hand ha chaliye

😕priya is confused of rams behaviour and she is liking this from ram . ram here is exited. By the time they reach the reception of the hotel they staying a man walked towards ram and hand over keys and a huge white flowers boquet.

P: ram aap aur phool !!!! appa na allergic pills hai na ap ki pas '.😛

R: nahi tho kya hua tum ho na mera sath and gives the boquet priya and say this is for my wife. Tume white colour pasandh hai na. thanks priya for being with me and pauses share an eye lock

P:Mr . kapoor yeah sab (blushing) 'thanks for the flowers.

And moves towards car and ram open s her door and make her comfortable

P: inside the car looking at the flowers , yeah kya hogaya Mr . kapoor ko aaj , flowers ' and smell the flowers . shes enjoying thoroughly. Ram moves towards driving seat . starts the car and offer her chocklet. Both take chocklet and starts to drive. ' kya hai yeah subharambh hai kya "
😊
R: aise kuch samjhligiye madam
😊
both simles and there was silence b/n them

R: priya r u k ?
😕
P : ha mein tik hu . looking at flowers , well aap ko kya hogaye? Yeah flowers , drive, '. Kya hai mr. kapoor

R: kuch nahi priya waise hum ne socha ki hum tv deke room pe kuch wqath bitane keliye .. yeah bhi aise kuch hi tha. Phark yeah ki hum bahar agaye .. with naughty smile " kyu tume aise nahi lagtha hai kya"

P: no ☺️.. kuch nahi and smiles and look outside. Suddenly looks at flowers and keeps them in the back seat

R: yeah kya hai '

P: aap ko allergy hai na flowers se. isliye

R: tum bauth sochthe hai mere bare mein and gives a sheepish look.

P: smiles and look at him starts playing with her mangalasutr , waise Mr. kapoor hum kaha jaa rahai ho..

R: smiles'. We r no our way priya . thodi dher inti zar karo na..

Priya looks at ram and sees out side the window while playing with her mangalsutr . ram notice priya's nervousness and lost in her wifes beauty. ram enjoys priya's presence n his feelings for priya😳

to be continued...

precap :

p: sach mein M r. Kapoor kamaal hai aap . aap yeha i mean yeah jag ... aap ko acha lagthe hai kya .. im suprised.. are u sure mr. kapoor.!!!!!!!!!❤️



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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb start and nicely written
pls continue soon
thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb!!!!!

very nice...👍🏼

Update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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my my yaar... this is too good👏 i wish Ram had seriously approached in this way in the show.. but he seems lyk he's got back to square one lovely FF yaar... waiting for the next update😳
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so awesome. lovely keep updating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such a wonderful update. Please write more. I like your take on it a lot more than the show.pl continue
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Great start...liked it... Keep updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
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☺️thanks every one i am really worried because this is my first FF and first thing i ever started writing.i was bitterly worried . plz tell me if there are any mistakes . im not that well with hindhi...
ur comments are really supporting and like strenght to me ill surely come soon with new update soon ... i will add some bits of cv too... and make sure that my FF will be intresting ..
🤗thanks again for ur warm comments

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😳❤️Update 2

Recap:

Ram identifies his feelings for priya . and gets embaressd wen his phone beeps while priya is confused. Ram want to plan something for priya in fact to spend some quality time with her. Ram gives white flowers to priya and starts driving towards the place . priya was confused of where is she going and do not have any real idea of ram's sudden change. She ask ram where r they going ram keeps it a suspence.ram observes priyas nervousness and enjoys his feelings for her in her presence

Update

There was silence in between ram and priya

P: ram plz bathayi na !! kaha jar aha hai hum .😕

R: (ram looks at priya and grins) arey tum itna nervous kyu hai. Trust me priya u ill love the place .

P:😉 mein nervous nahi hu!!. Just a bit eager to know where my husband is taking me for the first time aur wo bhi d'.( was about t say date and stops ) uhh wo bhi itna raath ko .

R : hmmm !! toda sabar karo madam .we r near . kyu tume mere saath accha nahi lagtha hai kya?

P: nahi aise baath nahi hai mr . kapoor. Mujhe aap ke saath acha lagtha hai . ( and thinks . bahut acha lagtha hai aap ke saath . aap ki saath bithaya har pal mere liye bahut special hai aap hai itna special mr. polar bear.)

Priya simles shyly

R: arey yeah kya hai jara mujhe bhi baathayi ki yeah hasi ka raaz !! waise bhi u looking different and beautiful wen u smile.😳

( jindagi bar aise hasthi rehana priya , 😳mera sara problems aap ki sweet smile ko dek kar gayeb hojatha hai.)

P: priya blushes and says thanku Mr kapoor.😳

Ram park the car and get down and take off his shoes , while priya is watching him sitting in the car . he comes and opens door for priya .😲

P: yeah kya hai Mr. kapoor yeah kaun si jagha hai .

R: we need to walk now chalo . chup chap.

They walk a while while ram steals glances at priya they reach the beach. Priya is happy seeing beach😳

P: Mr. kapoor do u really wanted to come here again. !!! kamal hai mr. kapoor aap ko yeah jaga acha lagtha hai kay?? Am surprised ' sach mein bathayi ye na aap ko yeah jaga acha lagtha hai ??😲

R: mujhe beach jada pasand nahi tha par ab acha lagraha hai , and more over aap ko bahut pasand hai na subha bhi aap itna exited ho. Mein enjoy nahi kiya dhoop ki waje se aur mujhe pata hai hi tum subha mere wajese yaha se jane keliye kaha tha?😊

Ab dhoop nahi hai . tho chale.

P : thanks Mr . kapoor'. (thinks meri pasandh na pasandh ko aap itna dhyan dete hai. ????) par mein bauth tak gaye subha se . aur aap bhi.

R: ab hum ahya tho todi dher ruk ke chalthe hai.walk pe chalthe hai

P: aap tik tho hai na .??

R: haan mujhe kya hua..

(Yeah kya ho gaye golu ji ko. Flowers , beach , ab walk '' )

While walking in the sand ram starts enjoying the cool breeze both enjoys each other's company '. There was silence b /n them

Ram initiates

R : priya yek baat kahu..

P : ji kahiye..

R: aaj app bahut s..'(stops the word s**y in the middle.) sensuous hai.( embaressed ram looks at priya for the reply) red colour compliments you so well ki

P: priya immediately interrupts and say "Thanks"" ..thinks mujhe patha hai aap kya word use karna chathe hai. ' they share a eye lock

😳

While they both looking at each other priya steps onto the stone and trip then ram holds her waist.. priya could feel the rams hand on her waist and looks up and identifies that she was in ram's arms❤️

R: tum tik tho hai na.

P: ( as ram s hand is stil on her waist he could not speak as she got the nerve) in alow voice says "" ha"'. Ab mein apni perope khadi hu . tho.. aap and looks at his hand on her waist '😳😳

R: he immediately flinches back and point to a place to sit. Chalo priya waha baithe hai.

The place he showed is very small for both of them ram goes and sit and make himself comfortable and showed priya place to sit. Ram want her to be in his proximity.priya sit in the place ram gave her. Priya could feel the warmth of ram so close to her on one side and also the cool breeze😳.❤️

R: tum sach kehathe ho priya . yeah jaga bauth acha hai .

P: hai na yah aa kar kuch ajeb sa sukun miljatha hai. Ab mujhe lag raha hai ki ap bhi normal hu'😊

Subha Mein soch raha ki duniya mein 😆aap yek hi hai inko beach pasandh nahi hai.

R: phir se suru hogaye. Aap ki tane'😃

P: app ne aj drink nahi li ' kyu.

R: drinks aaj jaroorath nahi hai. (❤️thinks arey yar drink nahi kiya tho kya mein ab aap ki nashe mein hu this feeling is tickiling mee)

P: kya mathlab 😕

R: mein ab tak mera jindagi mein bahuth busy hu priya ,bussines ka pressure tensions sab kuch so bhul ne keliye drink karna suru kiya. Apna akhela pan duur karne keliye mein apne app ko yek busy business banaya. Rahi baath ajj ki mujhe koi tension nahi hai aur mein is waqth bahut kush hai.😔

P:aap aise kabhi nahi sochi ye ga . ki aap akhela hu . mein hu na aap ki ssath . aap kuch bhi mujhe share kar sakthe ho.😳

Both look deep to each others eyes and priya shyly lowers her eyes realising what she just said😳

Ram thinks priya aap mere sath hu.mera paas hi rehana humesha keliye'itna paas ki koi tume mujhse dur na kar sako.😳

R:aap ko kabi akhelapan mehasus nahi kiya .?

P: lagtha tha. Par mein na books se company mil jatha tha .aur ab akhela pan ki savali nahi hai.( thinks aap hai na mere liye hamesha)☺️

R: looks at her sheepishly .😉

P: its really cold here. Rubbing her hands. Shayad aap ko tand nahi lagtha hogha

R: kyu ha tandh hai par bahut accha hai.

P: suddenly says polar bear ko thand tho din a lagtha hai na. and starts laughing😛😆

Ram looks at her and lost in her smiles ''after

Both were very silent.as priya is very tiered she is sleepy and rest her head on ram shoulders as she feel s cold she rubs her hand for warmth, ramlooks at her holds her in one arm and make her comfortable. Looking at her he thinks . im lucky to have u . I wish aap humesha mera ppas hi raho . I wish this moment last forever priya. Priya feel s good in rams arms unknowingly she cuddles ram.slowly looking at priya ram also sleep . priya wakes up see she cuddle ram and remove her hand around him she slowly move her head and without disturbing ram she make his head on her shoulder. Ram adjust himself and hug priya tightly . his position of head is such a way that priya could feel ram's breath on her neck. She feels nuzzled.she feels jittery😳..n thinks "Ram aap humesha mera paas hi rehana. I wish this moment last forever."when she is about to keep her hand on rams head he wakes up and realises he is 🤗 hugging priya and breaks the hug.

Both get☺️ embarrassed and look down to the sand. Moves their hand in the sand.

P: its too late Mr. kapoor will make a move now .

R: han chalo and make their way back to hotel.

They stand and look back and see what they did in sand and identifies priya write "ram" And ram write "priya" . both look at each other and share a look and start walking toward's car coyly😳

IN THE HOTEL

Both change and come ready to sleep

P: thank s Mr. kapoor.u made my day 😳 '(thinks aaj job hi hua na ..it was special to me humari first date jaisa hu ' aaj apne job hi quality waqth hum ne bitaya na there is no price tag for it.. )

R: who understands priyas feeling .. say 😊 pleasure is all mine madam'( thinks mera first date acha tha priya I wish hum dono ki beech ki yeah duriya khatam ho jayegha)😳

Ram wishes her good night and sleep'''''''..

😳

Priya looks at the flowers he gave her blushes, thinks aap wo nahi hai .. jis insan se mera shadhi ho gaye aap wo nahi hai . mein na aap ko galth samaj gaye aap bahut sweet hai . soon she listens his kharate looks at him and smiles '.

Says good night mr kharate'😛
Edited by luvblah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update loved it
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