-dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 9 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG wat an update earl morning refresh start and raj is on cloud 9 i must say😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
cngrts fr d new thread...superb update,it wz so cute...loved evry bit of it...bechara raj to phas hi gaya tha...pls pls pls give us d nxt part...love u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

I was looking for u..
u weren't online..
so here it goes.. umma..
& all the best for ur work..
btw wat happened to the thing u were writing..
I mean some assgt u said..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan and geet both are really same type...
Jhalle...bindas...

Loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 91

raj ' seriously... wo nahi hota tho tumse baat kaisen hoti
She laughed.. good night raj.
Raj teased aab neid kisen aaygi
her laughter filled the empty house. She cut the call & went to check on Maan once before leaving, even the watch man had left the house to get back to his duty.
She looked at Maan.. he was restless, looking for something in the bed.. she smiled.. may be he also used to tucking a pillow like she does with puchki. She looked for another pillow to give him. She went around the bed, she leaned to take the pillow.. he just grabbed her hand. She looked at him in shock.. his eyes were still closed. ..then she rolled her eyes, uff.. soten waqt bhi inhe masti soojhi hain..
He smiled mischievously. She for a moment doubted if he was a sleep at all.
She tried slowly freeing her hand. He rolled the other side.. she sighed in relief.. he was a sleep. She came around & tucked the pillow next to him.
She couldn't take her eyes off his face... she kept looking at him..she didn't know whether it was just an attraction, or if it was more. She didn't even know what more was. Feelings? Like ? She was sure she didn't know wat it is' yet, but whether she was in some kind of liking with him or not was another question. A harder question, because she didn't really know the answer.
Though.. that is just not possible.. or is it just him.. him being wat he is.. or just wat he always make her feel. But then.. he is not doing or saying anything now.. still she is going so crazily nuts.. standing there leaning so close to him ..& admiring him. She would say anything to any one.. they will definitely term her mad.

Are you just gonna stare at me & hope I will tuck u in my embrace
He asked, bringing her back to reality & surprising, actually making her tremble back ward, suddenly
she frowned.. u really think that
he had one of that typical grin.. I thought I was dreaming... then saw ur face.. it became a night mare. She snorted moving away. Good night.. she tried to leave.
Maan just caught around her waist, pulling her on to him.. making her heart miss a beat.. feeling his arm around her.. & then a million of the beats.. feeling his body all below her back as he landed almost on him. He cutely closed his eyes with a smirk in his lips.
Maan aap mujhe chodiyen plz
she tried to wiggle away.
U know u want to lye down with me. He said in a teasing tone.. still holding on to her from behind the typical contentment evident in his voice.
She turned around, looking at him disbelievingly.
Aap pagal ho kya
umm
he said pulling her cutely back in the bed.
She looked over her shoulder at him with an annoyed expression on her face, cursing herself for even coming back in this room.
Itna kyun naraz rahti ho mujhse.. he complained sweetly.. snuggling close to her
she almost forgot to breath.. she softly.. moaned.. Maan mujhe chodiyen na plz..
he softly released her waist ..& entrangled his fingers with hers.. & guided her hand on her chest just next to her heart..
pucho aapne dil se..
she closed her eyes..she could hear his heart whisper
You mean my world to me,
Strange, but my mind just refuses to believe!
You are mine is all I know,
Yet why do I mind is what I fail to show!
How do I show it when I don't know?
Don't know why do I hate you, yet don't do...
Why do I want you, yet don't do...
Why do your eyes just pull me to you?
Why does your fragrance make me crazy for you?
You are a drug, I seem addicted,
Without you, the world can't seem to have existed!
Why are you doing this to me?
How are you taking over my dreams?
You are wrong-thats what I want to believe,
Yet a word against you, why can't I let anyone speak?
A scratch to you will make my heart stop,
I don't know why, but you are my life, with this truth I have to cope!
Behind the dhundhala aks, I wanna see,
In your cocoon just let me be...
by
SWATI
her heart just cried out.. to be in his arms.. wanted to feel him in every forbidden thought!!! passion.. longing, ache.. all ran in that very moment
she snapped open her eyes & pushed him.. away.. not my head.. not my heart.. nothing wants to be here just leave me she snapped.. he tucked her closer
tumhe pata hain.. its never the head that wants
she inhaled sharply not wanting to hear any of his talks that only confuses her.
She managed to get up from the bed & walk a step away.. his grip on her fingers.. tightened.. sometimes u don't know.. its always ur heart...he said it so softly.. drifting into a sleep..
She stopped right.. longing to hear wat he was saying she turned to look at him... she kneed down next to him facing him, their faces only inches apart.
She looked at his face quiet.. eyes closed sleeping peacefully tucking her hand close to his cheek. She pulled the spread on him with other hand & slowly tried to take her hand with out disturbing him..
mat javo he said it like a baby holding her hand
she sunk down on the floor helplessly still studying her feeling on his face. Hating why she gets so helpless infront of him. Why she feels its right to do or say things he says.. or is it wat she wants to do.. or hear from him. Oh god.. !!! this is so dam difficult. Why her heart feels so weak & vulnerable to him..when she has been a person in control always, but now she seems to lose it all. .. worst she wants to lose it all. How she gets nervous infront of him, gets emotional .. tears don't seem to stop... she felt choked with emotions.. why is it only when she is around him. Still feels it hard to tell him how it feels, understanding betrayed her long back, all she is left with is confusion a dhundlae se aks of hr own self.

precap
naughty naughty Maan
-PREV PART 90 NEXT PART 92-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god...kya baat ki hai dono ne...maza aa gaya...loved it...dey r so good...in dis story i loved armaan, maan just when he was puchki, raj...geet is but natural...all r very good...

prachi is not a good human...friend n gf to jane he do...

pls update soon and more of der conversation...veer bolega to wo samajh jayegi ki who he is...love it

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Posted: 13 years ago

After so long.. am commenting just after you updated...

jumping with joy...
awesome update... i just loved it... are yaar.. maan is so cute when he drinks and blabbers his heart felt feelings... so much puchki... adding on to Geet's already confused state...
and more naughtiness... omg... how am i going to wait for the next update...
continue soon...
Geet struggling to find out her feelings... me cant wait at all for the next
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats for the new thread 🥳
Awesome update :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

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