NEWFF MAANEET MERE HUMSAFAR THRD 7 Upd pt69 pg127 - Page 44

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

awesome update..

luved the way maan's taking care of geet..
awww poor geet is in shock...
hope she gets well..
continue soon

She will b fine Shwetha Maan haina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

awesome n outstanding part!!

😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maan_geet1

Awesome maaneet ke majbut dor.waiting 4 next

Yes maaneet ki mazboot dor

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Can't see Geet like this dear😭 she is completely shattered and not even responding to anyone other than Maan...please usse jaldi teek kardo

She will b fine yaar don't worry

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Loved the update Piya.

So sweet and tender.
Geet in shock and reacting only to Maan.
Hope he succeeds in bringing Geet back to normal
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm dear..

He will be successful in getting back Geet Mehek

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the updates...

omg so many updates that i missed in 2 weeks...
finally the way they have accepted their feelings and then their marriage omg dreamy...
but this accident probably this will get them closer...
waiting for the next

Thanks Preeti was missing u dear. Yes this incident will bring them closer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

amazing update😛 i hope geet thik ho jaye.

thanks for pm😃...and continue soon😊...

thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. There was some internet problem hence could not post the update on time.
Abgina and Abi dearies will try and update TJP as well par agar aaj na ho sahe toh mujhe maaf kar dena
love-Piya
PART 66

Maan was trying his level best to make Geet speak but this one kiss of Geet gave him a new confidence he was now sure that he would be successful in getting his Geet back the Geet who belonged to him only to him

Pls listen to this song to get the feel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DM9AAtrEHvA&feature=related

Music

While Maan was promising himself that he will get back his original Geet, Geet placed a second kiss on his cheek and slowly lowered her gaze she was not smiling nor shying but her expressionless face was also conveying the grand ocean of love that she possesses for Maan

kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Maan gently lifted her face by holding her chin and tried to read her emotions. Geet looked at him and this one look of Geet was enough to boost his confidence

kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj humein maaloom hua kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj humein maaloom hua

He touched her face with utmost love and tried to convey his feelings through his eyes. Maan's one touch brought a beautiful glow on Geet's pale face


jeete nahin tumpar marte hain aaj hamein maaloom hua

None of them uttered a single word but their bond was such that their eyes were enough to convey their feelings




kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj humein maaloom hua kitna pyaar tumhein karate hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Geet rested her head on Maan's chest and kissed him near his heart as if telling him that u r the king of my heart and I am indeed lucky to have u in my life


jeete nahin tum par marte hain aaj humein maaloom hua

She hugged him. She was speaking through her actions and it wasn't difficult for Maan to understand the meaning of her unsaid words




kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Maan kissed her ear and told her I understand what u want to say don't worry I m not going anywhere u will always be secure in my embrace till my last breath

Music

Maan started feeding Geet. Both of them have their dinner. More than the food Maan's love filled gestures were giving Geet a new strength.

The light of the moon was giving a beautiful feeling to this atmosphere. She was feeling blessed to have found someone like Maan. She was feeling so secure and safe in his embrace

Maan noticed the blood stains on her clothes he carried her in his arms and started walking towards their room



He placed her on the bed and opened the wardrobe and removed a night suit for Geet. He closed the door of their room and then his hands automatically shifted towards the switch board he switched off the lights.

The only source of light in the room was that from the moon giving the atmosphere a romantic feel


idhar aao ki diwaana tumhaara humko banna hai

Maan moved towards Geet and took her in his embrace as if asking her do I have this right?

idhar aao ki diwaana tumhaara humko banna hai

Geet assured him by hugging him back. Maan slowly removed her duppatta from her shoulders.


Hum in baanhon mein kho jaaein humaari bhi tamanna hai

Geet moved more close their lips were just an inch away.

Maan undid the dori of her kurti


kiske liye ab tak tarase hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Maan knew the effect that his touch had on Geet he wanted her to react. He carefully unzipped her dress and purposely trailed his fingers on her back

kitna pyaar tumhein karate hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Geet reacted instantly and hugged him passionately


jeete nahin tum par marte hain aaj hamein maaloom hua

But their love was not mere a physical necessity their bond was an emotional one. There was no lust in their relationship hence it was not at all difficult for Maan to control his desires. He slowly slid the kurti from Geet's body



kitna pyaar tumhein karte hain aaj hamein maaloom hua

He placed a kiss on her shoulder and moved ahead to get hold of her night suit

Music
He goes and stands behind her and kisses her cheek and lovingly dresses her up

Once he was done Maan starts moving towards the switch board but Geet holds his hand and stops him

Maan started kissing her hand Geet immediately closed her eyes to live this moment. This one touch of his was healing all her pains slowly



Maan stopped as he approached her face he caressed her face as if trying to tell her that he will b right back there is absolutely no need to worry


wahi tum ho magar kyun tumpe itna humko pyaar aaya

Geet finally allowed him to go. Maan switched on the lights. He turned around and his eyes automatically fall on Geet

wahi tum ho magar kyun tumpe itna humko pyaar aaya

Geet was holding the photo frame which had Maaneet's photograph close to her heart


tumhaare paas main bhi aaj kitna beqaraar aaya

Maan goes and hugs her from behind as if assuring her we will always be together


Kiske liye maare phirte hain aaj humein maaluum hua

Maan placed the frame on the table and carried Geet in his arms and placed her carefully on the bed

kitna pyaar tumhein karate hain aaj humein maaloom hua

He caressed her face lovingly and asked her to take rest

kitna pyaar tumhein karate hain aaj humein maaloom hua

She looked at him lovingly she finally confessed her true feelings for Maan through her eyes. Maan I love u


jeete nahin tum par marate hain aaj humein maaloom hua

Maan also replied immediately through his eyes I love u too Geet and to engrave these words permanently in her heart he placed a small peck on her lips. A beautiful smile made way on her face she closed her eyes in satisfaction and slept peacefully




Music

Maan kept on admiring her and promised himself that he will shower her with so much love that all her fear and insecurities will disappear one day

Maan: I love u Geet

Geet's smile widened in her sleep

After a while Maan placed Geet's head on his chest and he too rested in peace

PRECAP: Maan takes Geet to a doctor

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Love - Piya

Thanks for ur love and support. I am really happy that i crossed 160 in the last update

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

am first...yet again...hehe...thnxxx piyaaa...i mean pihu...hihi..


update first...usse pehle...lemme tell u...actually now i remember k there was more than 1 kiss...last time made a mistake...lol...today am defo gonna count...let's c if am right though...


the first one doesnt count...as it was in the last one..thik hain...so the first one is by geet on cheek...then one on chest...one by maan on the ear...one on shoulder...1 on cheek...on hand...a small one on lip...so total hua...7...geet's 2 n maan gave 5...meaning maan won this time...rofl...seriously i cant believe i just counted their kisses...lol...


bak to update now...it seems ke geet is still under the trauma... my poor baby :(((am missing her chirpiness...how she used to "fight" with maan...tease him n all...i hope maan will brng her older self back soon...waise bhi I TRUST YOU MAAN(i hope u r not reading this piya...hehe...)...am sure u will soon do it...


but still she is responding to maan...it seems...well actually their love is bigger than anything else...issiliye to even in this state she can resist herself from not responding to her cutie maan...maan IS THE BEST...i mean he can really read her...he understands all that she wants to convey without her even opening her mouth...that's it...i love u maan...u r just awesome n so caring...


and then u used those lillah pics...u know how i loved that sequence...n lilaah...remember all that we had discussed on seeing the precap...mujhe to sab yaad hain...n i loved the fact that u used them here...


and then they both drifted into a peaceful sleep while being into each other's arms...chooo chweeettt...


continue soon pihuuu...love u...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantabulous. So serene. Luved it.
Edited by Ambibamby - 13 years ago

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