Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 32

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
so finally she escaped n told the truth 2 Richa
oh no wat's this??? Nandini jumped into the river???
what will happen now?
Aargh! that moron in abroad having nightmares now.
Do something soon or u'll loss her forever.
really impatient 2 read further
plzzz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved this part...i hope pri*ni ll b together soon...lov u sweets ...waiting for next.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dhanvi!!!! i loved it!😃

thank god now i can see some signs of her escape. but she jumped into the river?😲
i hope she is safe...

plzz let prithvi know the truth soon...😭

update soon sweetie!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 25
poor nandu!1 abhi kept her far away no one can reach there
thnak god she din't married to abhi n she had miscariage
how much she going to suffer
y din't abhishek understand tht she don't love him
pratima is hope for nandini's scape
how rude n lifeless prithvi became
hehehe its true angad its diff to shop with girls

part 26
wow pratima had made way to nandini's escape
but her fate is not tht good but its good that she got successful to contact richa although prithvi wouldn't listen to her.
awe richa missing college days we too missing them.
sneha piyush not going to change
oh god nandu jump in big river n prithvi had bad dream abt her
hope anagd will get contact with prithvi
n prithvi will save her

love these lines
he had buried his past within him but the ashes could still be seen on his face.
waiting for next update
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update..but why nandini have to suffer from all this...wow pratima help her in escap frm that hell...bt as usual her bad luck came infront of her...atleast she made contact to richa...thank god..nw plz plz plz angad find prithvi nd let him knw abt his luv...oh prithvi plz she need u a lot...she luves u sooo much...plz save her...oh god nandu u jumpe in river...i hope she will be alright...update soon..luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally...hopeful turn of events😊...

thank god... angad & richa know the truth...hope they will tell prithvi soon...

but nandini...omg😲...she jumped into river...what will happen to her?...

plz plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting for PriNi reunion😊...


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts
srry for late comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear for the update poor nandini make them together plz soon update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Friends
I am so happy to read all your comments, thank you so much for your love and appreciation. I may not get time to update on the weekend so i might update 2 parts together, cause will be off at the beach.

Pls do comment if you like the updates 😃

Love you all
Dhanvi
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 27


6 months later...

Sneha "when are we getting married ??"

Piyush "soon...but first let me enjoy my friend's marriage"


Angad and Richa were getting married and this was the biggest day of their lives...Richa took blessings from her parents in law...Richa's mother was happy to have a son in law like Angad...


Sneha "so Richa you will move to Delhi now??"

Richa "yes...why?"

Sneha "well I feel lonely..."

Richa "why? But we have finished our studies and you will also go back to Mumbai"

Sneha "no its not about place...but about friends...i can never forget the time we had spent in college.

Richa "yes, it was our most wonderful time" then felt sad...

Sneha " long time back Nandini left us...and now you are leaving..."

Richa thought about Nandini and felt terribly sad '.Sneha touched her shoulder

Sneha "don't worry she will come back to us"

Richa wiped off the tear from her face and happily looked at Sneha...

Richa "well I have a idea...why don't you and Piyush get married?"

Sneha "hmmm not a bad idea...don't worry will give you this news soon"

Richa "by the way, where is he?"

Sneha glanced around the crowd and saw him talking to a girl "i will go and hit him now" angrily walked off the stage towards Piyush.

Richa smiled and suddenly her smile got vanished...Angad looked at her...

Angad "what are you thinking Richa??"

Richa "thinking about Nandini...i hope she's alright...you know Angad if anything happens to her..."

Angad "don't worry nothing will happen...i am trying my best to find Prithvi...i have got to know he's in U.S"

Richa smiled as the photographer was asking them to...


All the ceremonies were carried out nicely...and the couple took blessings from all the elders in the house...


____************


It was a small house near the river...the people in the house were very poor and could hardly manage to survive their daily needs...

Parvati "see if that girl is alright?"

Bhola "i am doing her bandage since last 6 months ...i think she can walk now..."

Parvati "can you ask her who she is and how she fell in the river??...may be she speaks something now..."

Bhola "i have tried so many times...but she doesn't say anything"

Parvati "ok let me talk to her again"


Nandini was lying down and still thinking about her past...she was traumatized by what all happened with her...


Parvati "oh so you are awake?...how are you feeling today??"

Nandini nodded her head but didn't say anything to her...

Parvati "i think you are fine now...you can tell us where you came from and my husband can help you to reach outside the jungle"

Nandini thought about her home...she doesn't have anybody...her eyes were moist...

Parvati "oh...you don't have a house...do you know anyone where we can drop you?"

Nandini wiped her tears "can I stay here for some more time please??"


Parvati "yes sure..."


Nandini thought where can she go...if she goes out of this jungle Abhishek will surely get her...she wasn't safe anywhere...but how long can she stay here...

She remembered...her leg was badly injured and she could hardly walk few months ago...while jumping into the river she was hit by a sharp rock on her leg...she was saved by this family who lives on the side of the river In a huge jungle...God knows where her fate will take her...but she will protect herself from Abhishek...


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2 months later...


Angad "i think these clothes will be ok...i won't need these jackets"

Richa "ok...i will pack this one for you..." Angad came closer and embraced her tightly...and kissed her on the cheek...

Richa "we are getting late...lets go..."

Angad "can't I spend some time with my wife??"

Richa "you can '.but now its not the right time...everyone's waiting downstairs"


Angad "well my sister will surely like you...she's in Chicago since last eight years but she's very homely and she preferred a nice homely girl for me...which you are already"

Richa "really...hmmm and what did you prefer?"

Angad "let me think...i use to like one sensible girl in my college who always helped everyone and I am lucky to have her as my wife"

Richa smiled...and both hugged each other...


After some time


Angad "yes Dad...i will call you once we reach...bye"

Richa and Angad waved their parents while flying off to US.

Richa "Angad, how long does it take to reach Chicago?"

Angad " hmmm its a direct flight takes approximately 16 hours"


_____************


Esha "where's Prtihvi??" she asked Angel

Angel "sorry maam Prithvi sir is busy...he doesn't want to be interrupted"

Esha "tell him that Esha has come"

Angel "Ok maam"

Angel dialed Prithvi's no "Sir Esha maam wants to see you"

Prithvi "i told you not to disturb me" and cancelled the call

Angel "i am sorry maam..."

Esha got furious and went straight towards his cabin...Angel tried to stop but Esha didn't listen to her.

She opened the door "Prithvi..."

Prithvi glared at her "i told my PA not to let anyone in...i am doing something important...why the hell don't you understand this?"

Esha "i am understanding you very well Prithvi...do you know I have kept a small concert today..."

Prithvi "how many times should I tell you that I am not interested in any of your concerts...now let me finish my work.." he started working on his laptop...while Esha annoyingly went away...


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Prithvi came home late...he was very tired to even eat anything...his parents had gone to New York for some urgent meeting...he walked towards his bedroom and saw his room decorated with flowers...he saw the decoration and then saw Esha

Esha happily looked at him "hey its midnight ...happy birthday" and hugged him...

Prithvi didn't even knew it was his birthday...he didn't hug her but pulled her back...

he said "well thanks Esha ...but I don't want to celebrate anything"

Esha "why not Prithvi...its your birthday..."

Prithvi thought two years back...when Nandini had made cake for him...he remembered how they celebrated his birthday... and again his eyes filled with remorse...

Esha "answer me Prithvi...what are you thinking??"

Prithvi "i want to sleep '.." while still thinking about Nandini...

Esha gazed at his handsome face...she admired his black hair...his muscular physique...his attractive features...she came near a strong frame...she touched his shoulder and gazed lovingly at him...she came in front of him...looked up at his face and a deep frown on his forehead... "forget everything Prithvi..." and gazed up at him...she came closer and stroked his chest with her fingers... he was thinking about Nandini when he saw Esha coming closer to him "what is this??"

Esha "believe me Prithvi...i...i really want to make you happy, you are the most handsome man I have ever seen in my life"

She came closer towards his lips...she tried to kiss him but he turned his face...

Esha "why Prithvi...can't you..."

Prithvi "leave...just leave Esha" he shouted violently...

Esha couldn't understand and felt bad...

She annoyingly left the room...


Prithvi thought about Nandini...he took off his shirt while still remembered the night when he was with her...they made love...the more he thought the more angry it made him...deep inside his heart there was that hidden love but he never let the feeling overcome him...

He gazed at her anklet for long time before sleeping...


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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago

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