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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25
poor nandu!1 abhi kept her far away no one can reach there
thnak god she din't married to abhi n she had miscariage
how much she going to suffer
y din't abhishek understand tht she don't love him
pratima is hope for nandini's scape
how rude n lifeless prithvi became
hehehe its true angad its diff to shop with girls

part 26
wow pratima had made way to nandini's escape
but her fate is not tht good but its good that she got successful to contact richa although prithvi wouldn't listen to her.
awe richa missing college days we too missing them.
sneha piyush not going to change
oh god nandu jump in big river n prithvi had bad dream abt her
hope anagd will get contact with prithvi
n prithvi will save her

love these lines
he had buried his past within him but the ashes could still be seen on his face.
waiting for next update
Edited by shruja - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..but why nandini have to suffer from all this...wow pratima help her in escap frm that hell...bt as usual her bad luck came infront of her...atleast she made contact to richa...thank god..nw plz plz plz angad find prithvi nd let him knw abt his luv...oh prithvi plz she need u a lot...she luves u sooo much...plz save her...oh god nandu u jumpe in river...i hope she will be alright...update soon..luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally...hopeful turn of events😊...

thank god... angad & richa know the truth...hope they will tell prithvi soon...

but nandini...omg😲...she jumped into river...what will happen to her?...

plz plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting for PriNi reunion😊...


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome parts 
srry for late comment 
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear for the update poor nandini  make them together plz soon update soon 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Friends
I am so happy to read  all your comments, thank you so much for your love and appreciation. I may not get time to update on the weekend so i might update 2 parts together, cause will be off at the beach.

Pls do comment if you like the updates 😃

Love you all
Dhanvi
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Posted: 12 years ago


Part 27


6 months later...

Sneha "when are we getting married ??"

Piyush "soon...but first let me enjoy my friend's marriage"


Angad and Richa were getting married and this was the biggest day of their lives...Richa took blessings from her parents in law...Richa's mother was happy to have a son in law like Angad...


Sneha "so Richa you will move to Delhi now??"

Richa "yes...why?"

Sneha "well I feel lonely..."

Richa "why? But we have finished our studies and you will also go back to Mumbai"

Sneha "no its not about place...but about friends...i can never forget the time we had spent in college.

Richa "yes, it was our most wonderful time" then felt sad...

Sneha " long time back Nandini left us...and now you are leaving..."

Richa thought about Nandini and felt terribly sad '.Sneha touched her shoulder

Sneha "don't worry she will come back to us"

Richa wiped off the tear from her face and happily looked at Sneha...

Richa "well I have a idea...why don't you and Piyush get married?"

Sneha "hmmm not a bad idea...don't worry will give you this news soon"

Richa "by the way, where is he?"

Sneha glanced around the crowd and saw him talking to a girl "i will go and hit him now" angrily walked off the stage towards Piyush.

Richa smiled and suddenly her smile got vanished...Angad looked at her...

Angad "what are you thinking Richa??"

Richa "thinking about Nandini...i hope she's alright...you know Angad if anything happens to her..."

Angad "don't worry nothing will happen...i am trying my best to find Prithvi...i have got to know he's in U.S"

Richa smiled as the photographer was asking them to...


All the ceremonies were carried out nicely...and the couple took blessings from all the elders in the house...


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It was a small house near the river...the people in the house were very poor and could hardly manage to survive their daily needs...

Parvati "see if that girl is alright?"

Bhola "i am doing her bandage since last 6 months ...i think she can walk now..."

Parvati "can you ask her who she is and how she fell in the river??...may be she speaks something now..."

Bhola "i have tried so many times...but she doesn't say anything"

Parvati "ok let me talk to her again"


Nandini was lying down and still thinking about her past...she was traumatized by what all happened with her...


Parvati "oh so you are awake?...how are you feeling today??"

Nandini nodded her head but didn't say anything to her...

Parvati "i think you are fine now...you can tell us where you came from and my husband can help you to reach outside the jungle"

Nandini thought about her home...she doesn't have anybody...her eyes were moist...

Parvati "oh...you don't have a house...do you know anyone where we can drop you?"

Nandini wiped her tears "can I stay here for some more time please??"


Parvati "yes sure..."


Nandini thought where can she go...if she goes out of this jungle Abhishek will surely get her...she wasn't safe anywhere...but how long can she stay here...

She remembered...her leg was badly injured and she could hardly walk few months ago...while jumping into the river she was hit by a sharp rock on her leg...she was saved by this family who lives on the side of the river In a huge jungle...God knows where her fate will take her...but she will protect herself from Abhishek...


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2 months later...


Angad "i think these clothes will be ok...i won't need these jackets"

Richa "ok...i will pack this one for you..." Angad came closer and embraced her tightly...and kissed her on the cheek...

Richa "we are getting late...lets go..."

Angad "can't I spend some time with my wife??"

Richa "you can '.but now its not the right time...everyone's waiting downstairs"


Angad "well my sister will surely like you...she's in Chicago since last eight years but she's very homely and she preferred a nice homely girl for me...which you are already"

Richa "really...hmmm and what did you prefer?"

Angad "let me think...i use to like one sensible girl in my college who always helped everyone and I am lucky to have her as my wife"

Richa smiled...and both hugged each other...


After some time


Angad "yes Dad...i will call you once we reach...bye"

Richa and Angad waved their parents while flying off to US.

Richa "Angad, how long does it take to reach Chicago?"

Angad " hmmm its a direct flight takes approximately 16 hours"


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Esha "where's Prtihvi??" she asked Angel

Angel "sorry maam Prithvi sir is busy...he doesn't want to be interrupted"

Esha "tell him that Esha has come"

Angel "Ok maam"

Angel dialed Prithvi's no "Sir Esha maam wants to see you"

Prithvi "i told you not to disturb me" and cancelled the call

Angel "i am sorry maam..."

Esha got furious and went straight towards his cabin...Angel tried to stop but Esha didn't listen to her.

She opened the door "Prithvi..."

Prithvi glared at her "i told my PA not to let anyone in...i am doing something important...why the hell don't you understand this?"

Esha "i am understanding you very well Prithvi...do you know I have kept a small concert today..."

Prithvi "how many times should I tell you that I am not interested in any of your concerts...now let me finish my work.." he started working on his laptop...while Esha annoyingly went away...


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Prithvi came home late...he was very tired to even eat anything...his parents had gone to New York for some urgent meeting...he walked towards his bedroom and saw his room decorated with flowers...he saw the decoration and then saw Esha

Esha happily looked at him "hey its midnight ...happy birthday" and hugged him...

Prithvi didn't even knew it was his birthday...he didn't hug her but pulled her back...

he said "well thanks Esha ...but I don't want to celebrate anything"

Esha "why not Prithvi...its your birthday..."

Prithvi thought two years back...when Nandini had made cake for him...he remembered how they celebrated his birthday... and again his eyes filled with remorse...

Esha "answer me Prithvi...what are you thinking??"

Prithvi "i want to sleep '.." while still thinking about Nandini...

Esha gazed at his handsome face...she admired his black hair...his muscular physique...his attractive features...she came near a strong frame...she touched his shoulder and gazed lovingly at him...she came in front of him...looked up at his face and a deep frown on his forehead... "forget everything Prithvi..." and gazed up at him...she came closer and stroked his chest with her fingers... he was thinking about Nandini when he saw Esha coming closer to him "what is this??"

Esha "believe me Prithvi...i...i really want to make you happy, you are the most handsome man I have ever seen in my life"

She came closer towards his lips...she tried to kiss him but he turned his face...

Esha "why Prithvi...can't you..."

Prithvi "leave...just leave Esha" he shouted violently...

Esha couldn't understand and felt bad...

She annoyingly left the room...


Prithvi thought about Nandini...he took off his shirt while still remembered the night when he was with her...they made love...the more he thought the more angry it made him...deep inside his heart there was that hidden love but he never let the feeling overcome him...

He gazed at her anklet for long time before sleeping...


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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part... hope tey wil meet each other soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor nandini and prithvi so uncomplete with out each other waiting to see them together  soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Friends

As i said i will update 2 parts today. Here is the next part. Enjoy😊


Part 28


Nandini was thinking while sitting near the river when Parvati came and asked her

"i think you belong to a rich family...your parents must be worried for you"

Nandini never spoke much but this time she said "i don't have anyone..." and thought about what her Father did to her...and how she escaped from everyone...

Parvati "don't be sad...everything will be alright..."

Nandini "i will soon find my way to go...i hope I am not bothering you"

Parvati "oh no...its alright...you are like my daughter"

Nandini "thanks"


The jungle was huge and wide and many hunters were often seen around.


One day


One of the hunters approached Bhola and asked for some water...

bhola "its almost evening...where do you stay sir?"

Bhima "just a small cottage very near...actually I was thirsty and there isn't a single drop in my bottle"

Bhola "sure sir...let me fill your bottle"

Bhima saw a beautiful girl sitting near the river...he kept on gazing at the delicate beauty with lusty eyes ... "is she your daughter??"

Bhola "she's like my daughter"

Bhima "hmmm...thank you" and took his bottle...


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Richa and Angad reached Chicago to meet Angad's sister...


Angad saw her at the airport "hi Di..." and hugged his sister...


Di "hey Richa ...you are so pretty..." while hugging her... "well I must say...your choice is too good Angad"

Angad "So you are happy to meet Richa...what about your brother??"


Di "i am equally happy to see you...well you have lost some weight" she helped them put the luggage in the car... "my husband is at work...but we will have dinner together"


Angad "no problem di...and mom has sent lots of stuff for you"


Di "lets go home...i am desperate to see"


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Esha "i can help aunty but he never listens to me, he always ignores me.

Renuka "don't worry Esha, I will talk to Prithvi"

Esha thought she will have to do something to make Prithvi come near her...

meanwhile Renuka called her husband Rajveer...

"i don't know anything...you have to reach on time" she said

Rajveer "don't worry...i will talk to him...he's a strong boy...please don't ask him anything now..."

Renuka "ok I will wait for you"


After some time


Prithvi "where is the other file I asked for ??" he said annoyingly

Angel "sir...sir..."

Prithvi got furious "will you speak up???"

Angel "yes sir...its with Rahul...he's working on that"

Prithvi "still working...send him in my room...quick"

Angel "yes sir"

Angel went running towards Rahul "go Sir is calling you...he's in a bad mood...he's asking about the finance file"

Rahul nervously "when is he in a happy mood??...i have almost completed..."

Angel "then go...he will throw me out otherwise"

Rahul quickly went towards Prithvi's room and knocked to enter

Prithvi "come...give me the file" he said firmly

Rahul "sir...i have done...but just"

Prithvi "but...what???? I need results..."

Rahul "yes sir..." handed the file

Prithvi went through the file and threw it on the floor "what the hell is this ???"

Rahul "sorry sir I was about to tell you that last page is incomplete"

Prithvi "no excuses Rahul...just leave right now"

Rahul "sorry sir...i will complete it right now"

Prithvi "i don't want lazy people in my office...get out"

Rajveer entered the office and heard Prithvi shouting at his employee "Prithvi" he said calmly

and asked Rahul to complete the file...

Prithvi "dad he's lazy...i am tired of these people"

Rajveer "Prithvi please calm down...i have never seen you so aggressive over little things...what is causing you so much trouble?

Prithvi "nothing dad...i am fine" while not looking at his dad

Rajveer "look at me Prithvi...i know my Son, he's so strong to handle every situation in his life."

Rajveer looked at Prithvi...

Rajveer "tell me Prithvi...I am asking as a friend, not as a Father"

Prithvi looked at his dad "i can't forget someone...who cheated me"

Rajveer "i don't want to know who cheated you but I can only say one thing...always forgive Prithvi...until when will you carry this load of anger against someone...its time to move on..."

Prithvi hugged his Father...


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Few Days Later...


Richa "it's so beautiful Angad"

Angad "i know... we need to catch this train...come fast"

Richa "ok wait..." while holding his hand...


Richa "i liked Chicago museum of contemporary art...its simply amazing"

Angad "we have to go to Chicago theatre now...its located in the loop"

Richa "interesting...but I was thinking to go to Hyde park first"

Angad "ok what is there??

Richa "no...no i want to see the science industry museum...please Angad"

Angad "hmmm I will fulfill all your demands my dear wife"


Richa "so sweet...ok first lets have some coffee"

Angad "ok...lets go to that cafe" while pointing straight

Richa "hmmm I will have one hot chocolate, thanks"

Angad "right away sweetheart"

Angad went towards the counter, while searching his wallet he suddenly glanced at a handsome man sitting on the corner table reading newspaper.

"Prithvi!!!!" he shouted

Prithvi looked up to see and saw Angad coming closer to him

Angad ran towards Prithvi and hugged him... "hey...finally found you" Angad was happy while Prithvi smiled after such a long time "hey Angad"

Angad "come I will introduce you to my wife …."

Prithvi saw Richa and was amazed "congratulations...i am happy to see you together...you two gave little shock"

Richa smiled a little while she was annoyed at him "well Prithvi you too gave a big shock"

Angad "quiet Richa...please" and looked smilingly at Prithvi "come lets have some coffee together"

Prithvi thought for a while "sure"

Richa stared at Angad while sitting on the opposite side...

Angad "so Prithvi...how's work?? ...first how are you...?? you know Sneha still beats Piyush...both are in Delhi"

Prithvi smiled as he thought about his old friends...Angad was looking at Richa indirectly telling her not to get angry... all three were quiet for sometime...Richa couldn't resist her anger and asked Prithvi "So Prithvi...where is Nandini ???"


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