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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

hahahaha!!!! this was crazily amazing!!

Edited by -vrshn- - 14 years ago

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

what a briliant OS...

very very well written..the suspense was well maintained and I liked the way you dropped hints about them being known to her...I love the cacophonous feel to the story with things...and the ending was superb...

The kiss was awsome and I am sure you have added in later on ..but loved the chemistry and the temp of passion..exactly as it should be...as for a school assignment ..the poor teacher!!!!!must have had a shock while reading the kiss...

Overall it was a perfect combo ...you have all your ingredients perfect...

A complete A+ to you...

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey what wa that movie?...umm the aishwarya n abhishek movie where they used to say this 'u scream,i scream and we all scream for...ICE CREAM' pretty often??

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupa28
what a briliant OS...

very very well written..the suspense was well maintained and I liked the way you dropped hints about them being known to her...I love the cacophonous feel to the story with things...and the ending was superb...

The kiss was awsome and I am sure you have added in later on ..but loved the chemistry and the temp of passion..exactly as it should be...as for a school assignment ..the poor teacher!!!!!must have had a shock while reading the kiss...

Overall it was a perfect combo ...you have all your ingredients perfect...

A complete A+ to you...

thank you soo much!!

oww the kiss, it wasn't in my assignment, if it was i probably got the paper back to write a new one!😉

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -vrshn-
hey what wa that movie?...umm the aishwarya n abhishek movie where they used to say this 'u scream,i scream and we all scream for...ICE CREAM' pretty often??

owww i think i know.

isn't it 'kuch na kaho' ???

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Vedika

@veds_6791

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Wow... it was an amazing OS... Loved it..

Loved the way u described it...👏

Edited by veds_6791 - 14 years ago

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Vedika

@veds_6791

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -vrshn-
hey what wa that movie?...umm the aishwarya n abhishek movie where they used to say this 'u scream,i scream and we all scream for...ICE CREAM' pretty often??

Varsh it was Kuch Na Kaho...

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

it was really cute!

loved arjun's prank!

but arohi's kick was just mindblowing!

arjun is right his arohi is superb!

now you pm me whenever you write an os!

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Tia

@arohi_arjun

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Haha this was one of hilarious prank OS..While reading i just knew one of the Guy wud be Arjun... and u add scene from KMH2 from the first epi when he held her at knife point...

It was awesome OS thank for the pm...