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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends,,this is my first attempt..hope u all will like it...Read it just for fun..As m not a good writer and new member IF so m very nervous and😳

Everyone in the hall planing the marriage of Payal and Akash..When Arnav got home. He was quite disturbed cause he didn't see Khushi last 2 days..he was hoping to catch her at home so he came home early today.but no! she is not present while whole Gupta's are present..Nani invited them for dinner and also to discuss something about the marriage PA (Payal and Akash).. " Where the hell is she?? How dare she didn't come when Nani invite each and everybody of her family"..he thought when Anjali saw him and said "chote tum itne jaldi ghar aaye ?'' "why di i can't come home early?' Anjali smiled and said 'No u can brother..Do u want to sit with us? Actually we are discussing about Khus..." Arnav stopped her and said "No di i cant sit with u all now. I have very important meeting tomorrow so need to finish all my work by today"

He went to his room with mixture of feelings..Thousands of question was arising in his mind.."Why she is not coming home? Is she mad at me? No she didn't look mad that day. What she is up to?? I need to Know ..Yes i need to know right now !!" He took his mobile and call her at land line..His heart start beating fast as the ring continues..but no one answered the phone..he called again and then after few rings he heard the voice,the voice which makes him crazy,the voice he was craving to hear..he began listening the sweet sound coming from the other side."Hello,,helloo kaun hai?? Dhekheya phone bate karne ke liye hote hai, chup rehneke liya nahi..helloo..hellooo""

"What the hell !! why couldn't i even speak to her !! i have forgotten all what i wanted to tell her,,what's wrong with me??"
He changed his clothes, took the laptop and went to the study room to work..But he was not able to concerntred to his work when everythought of him captured by Khushi..He remembered the last day he saw Khushi.. She was wearing a deep green Saree..Though he doesn't like green colour much but she was looking stunning on that..he couldn't stop staring..she looked hot..it was the day of Akash's engagement. the hall was full of guest but he was lost in her..After the party Akash took his car to drop the Gupta's when Anjali insists Khushi to stay with her for while. ..And she also assured that she will send Khushi as early as possible..Anajli actualy didn't know about Payal's liking much so she wanted to show Khushi the gift first..And after 1 hour Anjali told Arnav to drop Khushi home..Khushi hasitate didn't want to be alone with him...She knew that one pair of eyes followed her whole evening...
"Bhaiya every one is calling u for dinner" said OP.."OK, Tell di m coming"..He closed the laptop and came down for dinner..He was missing Khushi like hell in the dining table .."Everyone was present why not u Khushi??" he thought " do i have say sorry now?? but why did i say sorry when i didn't even shout with u!!" "Ka baat hai chote kis khayal main ho??" asked Nani.."Khushi.." he said when everyone stare at him with surprise.." Khushi ???" asked Anjali "u r thinking about Khushi??" "No di.. m just asking that why didn't she come today??"
"She didn't want to leave babuji alone at home with servent so that is why she din come" said Payal to Arnav..Everybody was eating when Anjali was observing Arnav..She could understand that something was bothering her brother.."Is that Khushi?? or his work?? i need to know""
she though.
Arnav finished his food and went to his room..he was really mad at Khushi now..And also was mad at himself..why he was restless?? He is Arnav Sing Raizada..he can't be crazy for any girl..and how dare she avoids him !! she is just a normal girl..'she is not a normal girl any more, she is the reason i breath now" he said to himself ..then Anjali came to his room and said " kya for whome u breathe chote?" "what !! di !!" " dont look at me like that di!!" what's wrong with u chote ,i think u need to see a doctor .." di,, please stop this nonsence"" nothing happen to me..i m fine. let me work di..its important." "ok.. i wont disturb u now.just have this sugar free laddu.Khushiji made it for u""he ate the laddu after di left the room..he was admairing the laddu as it made khushi..he pour the laddu in his mouth as if he was kissing her lips.." what !! what i am thinking ! i never thought this girl will drive me this much crazy""
he thought after that night everything has changed in him..whatever had happened between us was not only my fault..it was just a kiss..why did she respond if she doesn't like when i kissed her..she also kissed me back!!
To be continued...
please like and comment and guess how the kiss took place and how he is gonna propose to marry her!!
part 2- page -2
part 3- page-3
part 4- page - 4
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Great start!

Just letting you know that there was no link in your PM and also when you first start an OS or an FF you can post it in the IPKKND Forum that will help get you more readers since the Fanfiction Forum is so clogged up it's hard to find new stuff.

When your thread gets to 15 pages or more the MODs automatically move the thread for you anyway :)
Edited by nayika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u sooo much Nayika.. this was helpful..Actually i wrote through my iphone..so had a lot of problems 😳...hope u all will understand...will continue as soon as i reached home..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Friends add me in ur buddy list if u want the updates..I will PM u sooon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one..great start..liked it..plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great... !
Liked it... pls pm for next parts too *with the link 😉* 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends I am back with my story..I hope u ll like it..
Part 2

"Yea,she kissed me back.. Actually it was she who approached first."

And now she is feeling shy to come in front of me !!! if it is like that I should make her comfortable ..but how???

Next Morning

Payal : "Khushi wake up,,it's too late we have to go for shopping u remember??"

Khushi : 'Jiji 5 minutes please..."

Payal : U slept last 20 hours so now get up or I ll call Arnavji !!

Khushi jumped from the bed and screamed

"Arnavji... No..."

Payal giggled and she realised that Payal was teasing her..

Kushi : " Jiji...u pleases stop teasing me like that ! I shouldn't have tell u about that night"

Payal : " Bye the way he was asking about you.. and u know everyone was stunned . I controlled myself laughing in front of him"

Khushi : "thank god u have controlled otherwise he would have kill u there.. u know him !!"

Khushi smiled and went to the bathroom. She thought" it's good not to go in front of him.. I can at least forget everything.. but no I can't..I was totally unable to come out of that night. It was really embarrassing.. how could i kiss him like that.. I shouldn't have come with him in his car. She remembered everything.

For the first time I saw him wearing black Sharwani..He looked tremendous.. He is hot no doubt but that day he looked out of the world.. I was wondering how can a man look this much good.. Everything was perfect..His hair, his smile and his looks..Yea,, his looks..A look which can kill people..And the look he gave me that day was different. I was losing myself. I was drowned in him.. I felt as if I am incomplete without him.. I tried hard to controlled my thoughts and succeed.. but only until i was alone with him in his car.. I remember when he start the car I was praying and telling Devi Maiya to keep my thoughts away..And drop me home as soon as possible.. but no Devi Maiya will never listen to me when he is with me...Suddenly the car jerked and stopped. and i thought i was home but no it was middle of the way of our house..

Kushi : why did u stopped the car??

Arnav : To dance with u middle of the road !!

Khushi : What !!!!

Arnav : " there is a technical problem in my car. I have to leave the car here."

Khushi : What !!

Arnav : What ,,, U really thought i wanna dance with u here..m not crazy like u madam..

He smiled and got down from the car. I realized not only his looks, his smile also making me crazy..We were walking to find taxi or auto rickshaw..but it was 11: 45 pm.. the roads were almost empty and dark. The strange part was that he was not irritated or angry about the situation .. I was really enjoying his calm and sweet company. I was feeling that he is not the same person with whom I fight every moment. We saw one car was coming so told him to stop that car and ask for lift. As the car stopped we saw a lady and her husband was driving back home..the lady called out "Khushi and Arnavji you are here?? " I was blanked ..how come she know our names..who was she?? He asked them to drop me home.. they said they will drop me with pleasure. He came to me and said

Arnav :" Go with them, they will drop you home safely."

Khushi : " And u??? "

Arnav : "I will take a taxi and go back."

Khushi : " But you ll not get any taxi here, lets go with us !!

Arnav : "No need to think about me.. i can manage .. u should go now."

I was not feeling to leave him. Something was tearing me from inside. But i had to sit in the car. I had to listen to him. The car start moving and i was looking back through the window. Something was really happening to me..As if someone was digging a hole through my chest. As if this is the last time i am watching him. All of a sudden i shout "stop the car pleasee..." the car stopped and i told them i can't go with u all, thanks for the lift.. i got down from the car and ran back to him.. he was stunned.. i ran back to him and hugged him tight.. i was crying..

Arnav : " Khushi what happen ??" 'please don't cry .. I am right here with you!!"

His voice made me realise that he was also holding me tight.. I heard a sound of a car horn and came back to reality.. As we were hugging middle of the road the driver shouted with us and leave. We start walking holding each other's hand..i was unable to leave his hand . i was unable to leave his hand and didn't want him to leave my hand either..We walked for while and the suddenly he asked

Arnav : " Khushi why did u cry??"

Khushi : I don't know.. I was just...mmm...not...fee...

Arnav : shhh...

He put his finger on my lips to make me stop.. he was staring at me and touching my face .. and i was also looking at his eyes and took my hand up to hold his face..i cought his face and wipe his lips with my thumb..his lips shivered, moved down.. i closed my eyes moved up and found his lips.. we were kissing like we got water after thousand years.. we almost forgot that we were standing on the road..he was holding my waist tightly and i was pulling his hair from the root..his hand pulled me too tight against his body but i felt it was not tight enough for me ! i needed more..and then his phone rang.. we stopped. He received the call and i turned my face back..

ok friends this much for today...
please like and comment.. i will be vry glad.. and also tell me if you didn't like 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great, thanks for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thts really nyc..sent u a buddy request..pm me plz...who were thr in d car
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_1234

thts really nyc..sent u a buddy request..pm me plz...who were thr in d car

thank u sooo much...i ll send u pm..
and yes,, u ll come to know about the person of the car in my next part..Khushi even didn't recognised them😉

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