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Originally posted by: jannuabmslover
wah yaar awesome update!!!!!jus cant wait for ur next updt!!!i bet its gonna rock!!!😃ur ff's r simply superb!!!!the way rey asked for a date!!!!hayeee😳loving every bit of it!!!plzz updt soon!!nd thnx a ton for d pm!!!😊
Originally posted by: pallavi.sood89
pls pls pls update soon .
i cannt wait to read nxt part
update soon
nd pm me.
Originally posted by: Dancedevil
It's srsly rockin!!! Luvd it!!! Swaron!! Eeep!! Dey r sooo cute!! Swayam fought for Sharon nd now both of them together alone!!! Yesss!!!!! Just fallin in luv wid it!! Kriyansh was also cute..!! Unki first date.. Woww!! Awesum wrk!!! plzzz update soon nd thnks fr d pm!!
Very nice. Kriyaansh ka scene bahuth chotta hey😭
Just read all the parts in one go... and loved it!!! ❤️
I wish you were writing the script as well, it was thaaat good!! Kriyaansh's little make-out session was soo sensual! 😳Eagerly waiting for the next part and Kriyaansh's date!!Thanx soo much!!!! 😊
Rey and kria come near a street… a moonlite night!! Perfect romantic nite…
There was small mobile Ice cream shop whick was open till late nite..
Rey nd kria comes running (very tired) they reach that stall (ya fir yeh kaho ki 'chalte firthe gaadi..!)
Kria was tired nd breathing fast holding her one hand on her waist and the other on the handle of the stall!
Rey too was tired but he kept starring at kria… her innocent eyes her cute si face had different glow..
Ohooo hooo starts wen kria too starts starring at rey!
The come face to face lost in each other's eyes..
Kria broke the eye lock… (looking here and there blushing..)
Rey: " chalo icecream khaate hai…"
Kria: "hmmm"
Rey orders for a ice cream…
The both enjoy the icecream nd move forward…
They reach a small park near by nd ther was a bench… (the same place where rey danced for LOVE THE WAY U LIE)
Kria finished her ice cream and rey too.. rey looked at her nd found a small melted drop of ice cream was still near her lips..
Rey came closer.. kria again lost in his eyes…. He came still more closer … slowly bringing his fingers near lips… and then slowly wipes it off… nd then plants a sweet kiss on tat place…. kria sharam ke maare baag jaati hai.. (inside the park..)
SWARON
Swayam nd Sharon wer still on the road behind her car facing back to each other!
Suddenly there is sound of thunder giving the hint of RAIN…
Swayam turns towards Sharon who was starring at him!
Sw: "Sharon I think humei… (notices she was in some deep thinking realises its him but again angry look look) Sharon?? Sharon???"
Sh: "haan bolo….. (sweetely)"
Sw: (feels weird of her being soo sweet towards him) " Sharon?????? R u ok??"
Sharon comes back to her senses from her dreamland….
Sh: "haan?? Haan kya hua?? Chilla kyun rahe ho??? Im fine!! Muje kya hua hai!! Ku kuch b tho nhi!!"
Sw: "really Sharon?? R u fine??"
Sh: "wat do u mean??"
Sw: "hmm (uff) anywzz mei yeh keh raha tha ki shayad bearish aanewaali hai soo we need to find a place!!"
Sh: "matlab ??"
Sw: "(taking a deep breathe) "Sharon humein aaj ki raat yahi beetani padegi..!!"
Sh: "wat???????????????? tumein pata b hai ki Tum kya keh rahe ho?? Hum hum iss sadak pe??"
Sw: "Oh god Sharon!!!! Tum kabhi puri baat kyun nhi sunti ho!!?? Mere kehne ki matlab yeh thi ki yeh jungle mei hi raat bitaane ki jagah doondthe hai!! Waise tumare car tho khol nhi raha hai warna wahi bait jaate!!"
Sh: "wat?? iss Jungle mei???? NO WAYS!!! 😡"
Sw: "hmmm ok as u wish!! Mei toh jaa raha hoon!! Jungle ke andar!! Shayad rehne ke liye kuch jagah mila jaye?"
He moves inside the jungle….
Sharon no choice follows him!
[guyzz don warry ki how stupid it is!! I mean sab jungle se bahar baagthe hai and thse are moving inside!! U can compare this to a kind off park.. or just a sunsaan place with all around trees nd one or two house or hut old broken! U all want an intense scene if them na?? toh u hav to take this way.. hehehe I just wanted a date bw both couples soo I thought abt this!]
Swayam went few steps inside the jungle and found a worn out house which was enough for them both to give protection from the rain!
Nd once again thunder sounded!
KRIYAANSH
Kria stood as she heard the sound of thunder! Turned to wards rey was standing right behind her!! Rey understood wat she wanted to say…
R: "kria… sshh daro mat! Mei hoona Tumhaare Saath??"
She hugged him
K: "rey! This is d best day of my life!"😳
R: "mine too!!"😳
Rey breaking the hug…
R: "u knw wat???"
R: "u are mine and only mine my silly baatcutter!!!" ☺️
Kria had a broad smile in her face nd few drops of tears…. She couldnot utter a word for what he said!
R: "and u knw we complete each other!! Hum dono ek doosre ke bager adore hai!! We are just made of each other!"😉
K: "rey mei…"
R: "(holding his fingers on her lips)kria this is Destiny!!!"
They both stare in each others eyes and suddenly it starts raining nd they are unware of it!!!
SWARON
Sharon was two to three steps away from swayam!! Nd swayam was two steps away from the house..
Sees Sharon struggling…
Baarish aane se pehle aati hena the looong coool sweeet romantic breeze…. Bas wo agayi!! Hehehe finally this Hawa swayam ko angry young man se lover boy bana diya :p he was looking same old cute swayam (before their break same old majnu bhai!)
He was starring at Sharon who was struggling to get down (there was a small piece of wood blocking the way)..
Swayam could not control himself moves towards her….. strches his hand..!
Sharon looks into his eyes automatically her hand touches his hands….
He pulls her to his side.. she slips nd falls on holding him!! He too fell along wid her! Rolling over the ground! Stopped by hitting a tree infront of the house…
Deep intense eye lock- LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA!!! Sharon was lying down nd swayam upon her keeping his both hands on the ground for support..! Sharon held his collor for her support (both her hands)…
Few strips of her hair was near her eyes…. Swayam slowly moves it back…. Sharon is so lost in him!! Their eye lock was there for a long time… thn suddenly one more thunder sounds and eye lock breakes..
Sh: "sw swayam!! HOW dare you~~~????? MOVE!!!!"
Sw: "(angry waala swayam back) hmmm (gave an angry look on her and felt guilty for wat he went do..) im sorry!"
Sh: "behre hogaye ho?? Suna nahi meine kya kaha ??? move away!!!"
Our sweet Sharon forgot she was still holding her hands on his collors…. :p
Swayam shows her hands..!!
Sharon suddenly removes back her hand back nd they get up!!
Nd it starts raining!!!! Sharon suddenly runs towards the house… but..
Swayam stops!
He starts enjoying rain!! (sharon had never seen swayam's this act!! She dint knw that he loves rain!!)
[twist 😆 kabhi kabhi ladkon ko b ladkiyon se zyada baarish accha lagtha esply wen they are in love no matter wat has happnd!]
Must say tat he was looking freaking hot!!! In his wet hairs nd shaking his head to clear rain!! His wet body attracted Sharon..!
Sharon comes out(note: swayam's back was facing her) …. She dint knw wat she was doing…. But she could not help herself move back!
She comes near him… by that time he removes his jackect off… he has wore a white T-shirt with small sleeves showing his shoulders arms…. nd water on it making it too HOT!!!
Sharon slowly comes closer!! Swayam realises her presense … he feels her… he is motionless dunno wat to react thinks…
Sharon slowly touches his back thn his shoulders… comes to the arms… he looks at her from side (side wala look) … Sharon unware of it!!
But then swayam holds her hand from moving further turns towards her… he couldnot control himself too keeps his hands on he cheeks…. She feels good nd then notices the Wound in his arms!! which had gone deep nd was bleeding!
Sh: "swayam!!!!!!! Tumei tumei chot lagi hai!!!"
Sw: "(Comes back to senses sees his hands) chot??"
Sharon comes closer holds his arms…
Sh: " OH god!!! Kitni gehri hogayi hai yeh ab!!! Swayam tumei dard nhi ho raha hai?? Nd yahan oe tho first aid b nhi milega!!! OH god!! aB kya karu!!"
Swayam was astonished too see so much of care for him in Sharon's eyes and her words….
Sw: "Sharon relax!!! Im fine!! Muje dard nhi ho raha hai!! waise dil pe jo chot lagi uski dard ke saamne yeh tho kuch b nhi! soo forget it!"
Again eye lock! But swayam breaks it this time (angry look)
Sw: "waise b mere chot hai tumei fikar karne ki koyi zaroorat nhi hai!! Nd tumei itna farak kyun pad raha hai??? U don love me right??? We don't have chemistry right?? (he stops himself nd moves inside the house)"
Sharon stood in the rain! Dumbstruck!! She was thinking wat was wrong!!!!
She finally realises kria's words….
" ek baat bolo aap ko acche lage ya na lage..! jab b confusion hoti hai tab sirf humara dil ki sunni chahiye coz dil se kabhi galat jawab nhi aati nd usse aapko khushi b milti hai"
Sharon: "Dil?? Kya kehtha hai meri dil??"
SWAYAM!!!
Sharon: "swayam??? Swayam?? Matlab?? Mei sach mei usse??? Pyaaar?? No no no nhai ! god! Tum b kiski baato mei aarahi ho?? Uss kripa ki!!! Leave it Sharon!!"
Sharon: "toh fir mei yahan kar kya rahi hoon??? Drive kar rhi hoon lekin pata nhi kaha jaa rhi hoon!! Sab ki number nhi mili lekin haan swayam ka number mil gaya!! Ab ab mei uske saat yeh gatiyaan jagah mei?? Aur wo mere liye un Gundon se lada??? Aur kya chahiyiye muje?? He iss soo damn perfect!! Upar se he loves like no one else!!!!"
Sharon: "NO NOOO!!! Stop it!! jus jus stop it!!! uss kripa ke baato ne tumei pagal kar diya hai!! Now jus leave it!!!"
She goes inside…
KRIYAANSH
IN THE PARK…
Rey chases her…
He dint find!!!
Kria was hiding behind a tree…. It was raining heavily…. Kria behind a tree was taking a deep breaths.. drops of water was falling down her face … her neck… her hands!! Ultimately she was Looking HAWT!!!!!!!
Kria slowly peeps out….
Rey was standing calling out her name..
R: "kria????"
R: "kria?? Kaha ho tum!!?"
She smiles behind the tree.
Rey moving his hand over his stylish hair and looking around!!
R: "kria!! Plzzz aao na!! kaho ho tum??!!"
Kria laughs….😆 Still hiding behind the tree…!
R: "bas! Ab agar meine tumei doond liya!! Tho tumei bahut badi kimaat chukaani padegi!! Im telling u!!!"
He finds no answer and starts searching!!
Kria again peeps..!!
Rey was not thr!!! She again peeps still doesnot find him!!
She was about to move suddenly!! Rey keeps his hand on the tree blocking her way
She was shocked!!!😲 (starts breathing very fast)..
K: "r r rey!?? ….."
R: "sshhh!!! Kaha tha na meine agar mei doondloonga tho tumei badi kimaat chukani padegi…"
K: "k k kyaaa??"
R: "(comes close to her ears nd wispers) Kiss…!"
Kria opening her eyes wide!!! Pushes him and moves away blushing!!!
It was raining heavily!! Nd again thunder and lightening…!!
He comes front of her…!!
Nd she suddenly SNEEZESS!!!
R: "kria?????????????????"
She lifts her face and again SNEEZESES!!
R: "kria c'mon hum kahi chalthe hai!!! Aise toh tum bimaar pad jaogi!!!"
K: "rey nhi its ok wo wo wo mei (again sneezeses)"
R: "bas!!! Kuch nhi kahoge tum chalo!!!!!"
K: "par rey….! (he pulls her)"
Running off rey takes her near his car…!
Rey starts driving…
K: "rey rey yeh kaha leke jaa rahe ho??? Muje gar nhi jaana plzzz rey (sneezeses)!"
R: "kria chup!!! Dun worry gar nhi leke jaaonga abi!! Ok??? Aftr all itz our date remember??"
K: "date??'
R: "tumei kya laga ek icecream se date katham hogayi!! Abi toh puri raat baaki hai… (giggles and smiles evilly)."
Kria blushes…
Rey takes her to his farm house… (near to kria's house so that itzz easy to run bak home lol!!!)
Kria: "rey yeh kaha leke aye muje???"
R: "yeh humara farm house hai!! Actually itzz quite old!! Bachpan mei aaya kartha tha!! But ab bahut saal hogayi yahan aake…. Dad isse abi acche condition mei rakte coozz itzz one of my favourite u knw… meine apne dostn ko aaj tak yahn nhi leke aya hoon!! ur the first one! 😳 nd tum thodi na dost ho ab... (they stare at each other kria blushes)"
They get down of car… there was a beautiful garden (wid a small waterfall)…. Completely looking like a heaven on earth…. the big beautiful megical garden.. the pool on the other side.. a big mansion ... perfect farm house for party date nd hangout!!!!...
Kria goes to the garden..
Rey behind her smilling….
Kria is impressed by the beauty of the place… it was still raining..
Rey realised it nd pulled her inside the house…
K: "rey kya kar rhe ho?? (he pulls her inside).."
Inside the house…
A big mansion.. … there was a big tv on the living room nd round sofa.. thn forward to it a dinning table… nd kitchen and bedroom at one view of living room nd stairs on the other side..
Kria comes inside and glares at the house..
K: "rey itz beautifull!!"
R: "u liked it??"
K: "loved it!!!"
R: "accha chalo fresh hojao… tum puri tarah se beeg gayi ho!! Nd cheek b rhi hoo soo goo!!"
K: "haan ja rahi hoona..!!"
She goes up nd then turns back comes near rey..!
K: "rey !!!"
R: "what??"
K: "tum b beeg gaye ho!! Soo tum b jaake fresh hojao!! Warna tum b tho bimaar pad jaoge!!"
Rey and kria eye lock!! Rey breaks the eye lock…
R: "haan haan teek hai! Jaa raha hoon! K tum b jao.."
K: "fine!"
They both go to their respective rooms (kria goes upstairs nd rey downstairs)
Kria comes down drying her hair…. And finds rey has still not come out..
Kria goes inside the room… nd thn dumbstruck!
Y???? (guess**??)😉
Rey was standing there selecting his dress!!
Heheh not simply standing!! He was looking freaking hawt!!
IMAGINE REY IN DIL SE RE SEQUENCE… widout shirt!!!! 😲😆
Kria stands ther widout moving!!!😳😆 starring at him!😲
and his hotness~ 😲
R: "GOSH!!! Yeh saari dresses kitne puarane hai!! Koi b fit nahi ho raha hai!! Huh!!! Ab kya pehnoonga!!!"
Kria walks in closer to him…. Completely drooling over him!!!!
Rey feels kria coming behind!!
He turns!!
Now his turn to b dumstruck!!! U knw y????
Kria was wearing a T-shirt and pant (like how boys wear during nite times -tat was d only thing she could find there)
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA
Throughout we could find kria simply drooling over him than him drooling over her!!!
She comes closer…
Touches his cheeks… nd slowly brings down her hand near his shoulders nd thn to arm…. Her eyes were moving in the direction of her hand..!
She looks into his eyes and takes her hand back… rey pulls her close to him holding her hand…
Kria's bdoy temp has raised to extreme level!!!
Must say kria was looking smoking hot!! Nd neither rey was less!!!
Rey slowly moves his fingers on her lips….
Kria couldnot stop him from doing anythn!! As she was completely lost in him!!
rey: "kria tum tum bahut (bursts out of laughing!)"
kria gets angry (sweet wala)
kria: "accha apne aap ko deka hai aadhe nange ho (she too laughs)"
rey: "oh really tho mei funny lag rha hoon!!"
kria: "aur nhi tho kya!!"
rey comes more closer
rey: "agar itna hi funny lag rha tho tumare nazar mujse hat kyun nhi raha hai!!?"
kria blushes nd
kria: "tum b tho muje ..."
again eye lock as they both felt they wer looking hot!
Rey comes still more closer bends a little kiss…. Kria too comes forward …
BUT jus thn LIGHT goes off!!
Rey: "kria wait mei abi candle laata hoon!"
Kria: "hmmm" (she dint wanted him to go but he had to..)
Rey picks up one of the dress and moves off to find a candle..
Aftr a long time kria couldnot find him she went in search of him from bedroom to living room..
It was a complete surprise for her!!!!!
Whole house was lighted in candle!! It was not less than the heaven neither than a beautiful dream!
Her mout nd eyes open wide .. rey comes front to her (she dint notice as she was busy looking into the beauty if the house).. rey keeps a candle infront of her..
Rey: "kria.."
She looks at him!
Rey: "our first date..?"
Kria feels really happy.. he blows the candle off and puts forward his hand towards her… she keeps her hand on his nd they move towards to the dining table..!
It was already 12.30am!
They really dint have anythn instead both of them wer busy starring at each others eyes..!
After a long eye lock and kuch kuch pyaari pyaari romantic baatein (ofcourz I cant explain every thn wich can b acted this was the best I cud say for their candle nite dinner!)
Rey: "kria movie??"
Kria: "kya?? Abi bahut raat .."
Rey: "hmm k.."
Kria: "its k chalo dekte hai..!"
Rey nd kria both sit in a couch and strt watching the movie…. Slowly kria sleeps on his arms nd rey to keeps his head on hers and both go asleep..!
NEXT PART HAS MORE OF SWARON ND MISCHIVIOUS KRIYAANSH
Kria nd rey climbing through the pipe…
Sharon sleeping on swayams arms…
Swayam goes bac to normal majnu (his attitude gets the break)..
Sharon realises her love!
PROMO:
big party… all couples in the party.. few go
drunk nd watch out wats gonna happn wen
they go drunk!
Book cover by @ExoticDisaster Thanks a lot for this brilliant book cover Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @SarafWasima in Submit Writing...
Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with
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