Keep the Faith-A Maan and Geet story-upd 5 02/12

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Hi guys!

I've been a silent reader of a lot of Maan and Geet Fanfictions for quite some time now. I just never thought i would be able to write one of my own after reading so many wonderful works. The emotions and the story lines in most of the FFs really make me feel that a wrong set of people serve as the story writers of the actual show, right now. So after nearly a year of reading FF after FF sometimes throughout the night, I gathered the courage to finally start one.

I hope you guys like it and even if you don't please do let me know, i'm open to criticism.

Thanks.

So here goes. *deep breaths*


They met, two most unlikely souls to do so
No one ever thought they were right together, neither did they themselves
Yet, they fit ; two lost jigsaw pieces of a bigger puzzle


Chapter one: A late night call

(Mumbai, 2011)

Rinnng'rinnng'.rinnng'.

Rinnng'rinnng'.rinnng'..

"Hello?"

Meera Malhotra forced herself to get off bed and answer her phone which had been ringing on and off for the last half hour. Clearing her throat she repeated the hello, this time louder.

"Where in god's name have you been? I've been trying to call you for a good half hour. What if I was dying or already dead? How would you have felt if you hadn't answered your best friend's last call? Huh? Huh?"

The caller shrieked causing her to move the receiver a good distance away from her ear.

"It's four in the morning. I fell asleep only three hours ago after talking to whom? To you. And you certainly seemed nowhere close to dying. If you had indeed suffered a heart attack or if someone had managed to murder you, no one would have found your body until tomorrow and hence I would have got no call until after that plus I'm not that lucky."

Meera answered, ready to slam the phone right back down.

"Okay fine, I'm just going to ignore your little rant as a consequence of being woken up this early. I might as well get to the point. What do I wear?" the caller desperately asked.

"Wear where?"

"What do I wear for the thing'the THING? The life changing presentation tomorrow."

"I thought we had already discussed this like only a million times. Did you burn something the blazer?" she asked fully well knowing what her friend was capable of doing

"Meeera. I didn't burn anything, nor did I tear anything and I certainly didn't lose anything. What or who do you think I am? I'm 25 years old, mature and smart. I certainly won't do any such thing'.at least not anymore, I guess."

"So the clothes are fine?"

"ye-"

"Good so you are wearing them. That's decided and that's final. Or else, I most certainly will drop off both the kids at your place for the weekend and take off with Yash."

"O babaji! Nahin! Not those monsters. I swear Meer, you haven't given birth to children. They are monsters who when unleashed are no less than the creatures from the lord of the rings. I know I'm their godmother but I'd rather appreciate them from afar"

"That's a nice way to talk about your godchildren. I don't blame you actually." She added looking to the door behind which the monsters in question lay sound asleep, hopefully.

"Anyway, get to bed you. If you don't, your eyes will get puffy and red and imagine you'll probably keep yawning away at the meeting. Get to sleep. I'll wake you up. I promise."

"Okay 'Mumma' you're right, as always. I'm actually exhausted; today has been a long day." She said as she stifled a yawn

After a slight pause she couldn't help but add

"I'm going to be okay tomorrow, right?"

"Of course you are. You may be a kid to me but at work you actually are smart, mature, effective and efficient. You're going to get the promotion. You deserve the post , if not you, then no one else does- Vice president of the Asset Management Department .We'll be ready to pop the champagne."

"Promise?"

"Promise"

Meera couldn't help but smile at the childish innocence of the girl who was vying for the a top job at a multinational

"Thanks Meer. I just needed to hear that."

"The treat is most certainly on you, goodnight bubba and sweet dreams, I love you."

"I love you. 'Night"

The caller finally put the phone down and got into bed. It had been a long day, an exciting one but long. Three years after joining the firm, she was tipped off to become the youngest VP of the biggest department. A feat she had once thought was impossible but with support from her friends and family, she had managed alright. The three years had included living away from home, sometimes living in the office itself, dealing with stubborn juniors and old fashioned seniors, working fifteen hours a day minimum and going through several sleepless nights. And tomorrow was to be the culmination of all her hard work. One presentation and it would be decided. The butterflies in her stomach returned and she nearly pressed the redial button on her phone but managed to stop herself. Meera was right. She needed to sleep. She couldn't bungle anything. Everything had to go perfectly.

After simply lying in bed thinking of the next day, she found herself drifting off to sleep. She eventually did fall asleep with a smile on her face, one which lit up her delicate features, at the thought of

Geet Handa, Vice President of the Asset Management Department.

It certainly had a good ring to it.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2:

(Home in Mumbai)

'Congraaatulations!' the entire living room erupted as soon as Geet entered her apartment. She looked around beaming at the small but the loudest bunch of people she knew best and loved most. She should have known, they wouldn't have missed it for the world. Meera and Yash, the first friends she had ever had; Pinky, the vivacious foodie and her best friend from work, Tej and Lucky, her older cousins and their wives Pammi amd Preeto; Rajji, her little cousin and even Meera's monsters. They were all there. As always. And leading the group were the people she loved, respected and cared for the most, her mother Rano and father Mohinder Handa. The pride and tears in their eyes were clearly visible and so she couldn't help but engulf the two of them in a giant hug and start bawling herself.

The day had gone perfectly, after a grueling two hour presentation with the top brass executives and a bunch of senior officers, not a single soul doubted her ability to guide the department well. She had answered all their questions and showed them the ideas she had for the future of the department, she was different than the others. She was smart and confident. Young, yes but with that she brought a certain level of vibrancy to the firm and a bunch of ideas which none of the grey haired executives could ever bring to the table. She had joined the company as a junior analyst, with frizzy hair and an almost tom boyish sense of dressing and style. As her role in the firm grew and changed, so did her style, her confidence and her personality. She morphed into a young gorgeous woman who presented herself in the most professional and impressive manner, she started carrying herself better than she ever had. She was looked up to and people respected her. She was one of those who no one could ever gossip about, she never involved herself in office affairs and politics, and she simply did her job. She was tough but not cut throat. She mingled with everyone but stuck to only a few closest friends. She had struggled more than anyone for a good three years, changing a whole lot in the process and today she had finally achieved what she had set her eyes on.

For 25 year old Geet Handa, life so far had pretty much been perfect. A loving and tight knit family, A few close friends, a Masters degree from a leading management University and a job profile many would kill for. As a child and a teenager, she had been shy, introverted and lacking in self-confidence. As a result she was often taken for granted and left hurt by several who she had considered as friends. Yet through all those years she never felt alone, her family had always been by her side as well as Meera, a friend she had met when they were five, who was like an older sister in many ways.

The Handa family had once been one of the most popular and well to do families in the community. Despite much of the family wealth having been squandered away, donated or taken away by greedy relatives, the family name still commanded respect amongst society.

Brought up as an only child in a middle class family, Geet had all the values, ethics and kindness of heart that was expected of a Handa. She was adored by adults, pampered by her older cousins and loved by the younger ones. She cared for animals just as much as she did for humans. There would be days when she would pick up a whole litter of kittens from the street, bring them home and hide them in her room until her mother found them and sent them to new homes. In words she was pretty much the perfect girl.

As she cut her chocolate mousse cake, and as her father popped the champagne while everyone clapped and whooped, she couldn't help but send a silent prayer to her Babaji.

"Please Babaji, don't let anything ever change. Let things always remain just the way they are."

Little did she know just how much things were going to change and that the day's events were just the first in a series of changes that were yet to come


(An office in South Mumbai)


Accused of trespassing, robbery, physical assault and lastly murder, a witness and ….yet something was amiss.

He had spent the last twenty hours poring over document after document and report after report. For most other lawyers, the case was clear and taking up the defendant's case would mean definite loss of the case and their reputation.

But then he wasn't like other lawyers. Taking such cases not only gave him a high but had made him the highly sought over lawyer with a formidable reputation. Almost every case of his in the past had been ones which no lawyer would even touch with a barge-pole – poor and destitute accused of heinous crimes by rich, famous and powerful, sure shot death penalty or life imprisonment, pleaded innocence and inability to pay the fee of the best lawyers.

He had never once lost a case, losing was never an option. Not ever, not when they were innocent lives on the line. He had not lost one yet and neither would he lose this next one.

After all he was Maan Singh Khurana


I've tried to make this part all about them, their lives, their work.

Hope you liked it! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.seems interestng..waitng 4 next part.
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Quite interesting.
Plz continue next part, eagerly waiting for next part.
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heey nice start...
interesting...
do continue soon...
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Nice one.do continue the next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys! Here is Chapter Three. Hope you enjoy it😊
A BIG thank you to everyone who has commented and liked the posts so far!😊


Chapter 3: A Mother's dilemma

(Handa Haveli, Delhi)

Three months after the promotion'.

Rano Handa was distraught. Her only child had just gotten a promotion, she was doing exceedingly well, and another milestone in her career didn't seem to be too far into the future. Oh yes! Rano was happy, she had always told Geet to stay focused on her education and work, marriage and a family would follow, eventually. But right now she was starting to fear for the work obsessed and alone child of hers. A senior vice president of a department that large would mean she would be working extra hard and extra-long. She hardly even had enough time to talk to her parents. Rano doubted that she even slept and ate well.

Now, Rano knew Geet had never had any real romantic inclinations, except for a few crushes here and there; Geet had never gotten into a relationship calling such things, frivolous. From the time she had started university she had been so focussed on getting ahead, that 'love' or anything remotely along the lines of the same had taken a backseat.

Oh yes, she knew Geet had plans of marrying since she had once asked her outright if marriage would ever be on the cards and her daughter had simply replied with 'of course..at some point'. She had been relieved. To the mother, that 'some point' had always seemed to be twenty-seven but to the daughter 'some point' had meant thirty five. Thus the cause for worry.

Geet had not found herself a prospective boy and neither were there any boys Rano thought appropriate from her daughter's little group. Add to it the pressures of the new position she held and the extra work load, and Rano doubted her daughter would ever find one. Now Rano was not one of those obsessive traditional mothers, she herself had married at twenty seven, nearly thirty years earlier. She had studied and worked, made something out of herself and then met Mohinder and fallen in love with him. Her family had accepted him with open arms. She being the youngest had never been pressurised into marrying early and she had promised herself to never force her Geet either. But now things were changing, her twenty-two year old niece was gearing up for an engagement to a boy from an illustrious and well known family. Her sister, Parneet had called early morning to convey the good news in the guise of warning her of how 'good boys' from 'good families' wanted younger girls and not girls who were nearing middle age even if they did have tons of degrees and excellent work credentials. She knew her sister tended to exaggerate but she also knew a good family would want a younger girl, someone whose biological clock was not ticking away. Her sister had even dropped the bomb of how relatives and friends in their village, Hoshiarpur had started talking and Geet's living alone and working late routine was being whispered about.

By the end of the conversation, Rano had made up her mind ' Geet would marry. Soon. She was out to get Geet to wear at least an engagement ring at Rajji's wedding even if not a Mangalsutra. The boy they would find would be a jewel, a gem of a person, someone Geet just wouldn't be able to decline. Yes that's what they would do, ask their closest friends and family to keep their eyes open for prospective grooms and then take it from there.

(Five hours later)

Rano Handa was on the phone, speaking with her sister, again. Apparently there was a boy, in search of a bride. He was perfect, 27 years old, living in Mumbai, from a family as well known as the Handas and in charge of the family's thriving business. Rano's sister seemed almost wistful as she spoke of the boy and his family, she would have done anything to make him her own son in law but he was in search of someone more mature than twenty-two and instead of letting him go, why not propose an alliance for her niece?

The sisters after nearly an hour of deliberation and discussion decided to invite the boy and his family to their home in Delhi. The place, his family lived. Parneet would serve as the intermediary, getting the family to meet Geet and fixing things up. So now that things were set, Rano was left to deal with Mohinder who would definitely put up a fight on behalf of his 'princess'.

As Parneet ended the call she stated the most pressing issue of all, one which Rano had tried to ignore

"Let Jiju be. How are you going to deal with Geet?"

That was a question, Rano had no answer to.


Edited by hedge1404 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fabulous update
portrayed the dilemma dfaced by geet';s mom well...
loved it
keep writing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

fabulous update
portrayed the dilemma dfaced by geet';s mom well...
loved it
keep writing



Thank you so much, I just tried to depict how most mothers of today, however much they may try end up getting caught in the usual social stigmas...Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luved the updates
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