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LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

I enjoyed the use of movie Dilse and the parallel b/w the reel and real life...Geet is indeed an enigma. Waiting to read further

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Well, if interested here is the tamil song that made me write this update, despite the disappointing number of comments.

Maalai Mangum Neram

A big THANK YOU to all those who do care to comment.

And as for those who don't, ...

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

love the update finally maan push her past the comfort zone she scared and she is still a kid in many ways love all the update promise to comment

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Singh Khurana performing Tai Chai

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

So sensuous. You have a way with mature writing. We read a lot of stories, but the thing I like about your writing is that despite words, there are so many things left to imagination... The wet day, the cold hard floor... I could feel the tension in the air. My my, I have goosebumps.

Well, yes, she needed the ultimatum and a sense of insecurity of loosing him to act upon it. Now I cannot wait to see what she does about it. I trust you won't make me wait too long 😛

Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 13 years ago

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

I just finished all the updates of this SS and get treated to another update, wow...

Finally, the most awaited moment arrived...there was so much sexual tension in the room, it can be cut with a knife. Poor Maan, his frustration with Geet is rightfully placed. Will Geet be bold and take this relationship further, waiting to find out.

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

She pushed him to the edge and look what happened...he's willing to take the risk, but she's not.

THAT was one powerful whip of an update.

All that was running in my head through the entire update (and I kid you not on this) was...Kuch kuch hota hai...😍

Why? I dont know! 😕

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Hasini,

How are you doing off lately ??

I've been away from commenting since a long time and one of the reasons is exams once again...I would read but then commenting would require so much so much that the miniscule amount of time wouldn't have permitted me and I didn't want to do injustice to something so exceptionally beautiful and sensuous in a way!

You've got a way with words lady the way you mould them and use them to your advantage is simply creative and artistic and I wouldn't want to believe you now when you say NYT was the first expt. you ever had because the journey since then has been exhilarating...you put soul in your words you know :)

Coming to the update, it was a mixture of everything..loved the subtle tension in them and the anger too that Maan is filled with that somehow obscures his coherency but then it is something that has been going for long..Geet here seems more like the one who has a lot of expectations and wishes for things to move forward the way she wishes for shy in a sense yet bold enough and very different for the NYT Geet well not that different also there was a part of her that did reflect this one !

One thing that din quite go down with me was Maan and smoking frankly speaking I do not like people who smoke it kinda irks me like hell...though the description and the imagery created was nice yet the smokey thing spoiled it from me...

Now its like crucial for Geet to look beyond and understand the unspoken, read the unread and get to the depth of his love this hide and seek has to stop but then Maan should also come forward a bit more...someone has to take the initiative and I guess now its her turn he's done a lot of indirect stuff :)

Loving the way it is moving ahead and dunno why I get lost in your updates now-a-days, something seems like it is there but hard to catch...nothing to worry about but :D

Cheers,
Fatima

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

love da update very much...

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shmhetras

@shmhetras

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#390

I read both the updates, and they were awesome. The whole interplay of words/actions/thoughts have been so delectably woven, and a true pleasure to read. Great going Hasini. :) )

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