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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

awww.😍.that was so simple but so...romantic.😳😳.yaar neetu kya scene hain!!..awesome👏👏 lved it lved it...🤗🤗

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Very nice Neetu... Simple cute and romantic... I liked the PH dinning area scene that u included... Beautiful scene...awesome ending too 😉 loved it 👏

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Contd...

In last FF naina disturbs daksh's client call aur daksh kp banjaata hain..naina feels bad and she says sorry to daksh...

Saying this she starts going away..daksh uske saamne aajata hain..

Naina; daksh hato mere raaste se..ab kya? sry kehdiyana..disturb karne ke liye tumhare client call ko..

Daksh; client ki baat kaun kar raha hain?..naina question mark face'😲.(.comes closer); main tho apni baat kar raha tha...😉.

Naina; matlab??😲

Daksh(puts hands around her shoulder)and says; iss tarah disturb karke chale jaana teek hain kya.😛.disturb karna hain tho poori tarah se kardona.😉.aise adha adhoore karke chod doge..tho ye bahut galat baat hain na swt hr8😉( strokes her cheek)

Naina;( gussa)tho phir KP ka chehra kyu banaya?😡..javo tum...mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni.jaakar apne client se baatein karo.😡...( takes off his hands , goes and sits on bed)

Daksh sits besides her ; naaraz ho mujhse? sry swt hr8.sry..dekho kaan pakad ke maafi mangta hoon( holds his both ears)/.pls meri jaan..pls maaf kardo apne daksh ko...( cute baby face banata hain)

Naina shows lil atttude first but daksh goes on with his maafi session.😛...finally naina melts 😛

Naina;its ok...(rolling her eyes)

Daksh;sach!..naraz nahi hona mujhse😛

Naina;(smiles) nahi...

.Daksh ki chehre par smile aajati hain and he hugs her..🤗🤗and naina puts her arms around him and they stay in embrace for few min..😛

In hug

.Naina;.( after few min) imp client hain kya?..koi prblem tho nahi hogana??

Daksh; (stroking her hair) Important client hi tha...lekin tum ye jaanti ho na ki mere liye tumse jyada important kuch bhi nahi😛..aur ek client kya?. meri pyaari naina par aise hazaaro clients kurbaan kardoo.😳..(kiss on fore head)

Lifts up her face..(naughty look)...aur jab meri patni subha subha itni romantic ho jaye tho phir...😳. ( lil husky low tone)...

.naina lil embarssed.☺️...gets back into his arms...🤗

After few min

Daksh; waise tumhara mood teek haina.??

Naina; haan...

Daksh tho phir..shuru karo poora disturb karne ka kaam😆

.naina hits him..' daksh..😛

Daksh; acha phir se client ko call karu? tab jaake maam ko disturb karne ka mood aayega..teek hain phir takes mobile...starts to get up.😆😆

.naina holds him backand says' uski koi zaroorat nahi..😳.

daksh; acha!( naughty smile)😛😉

Naina nods her head( yes) and hugs him,both fall onto bed.😳...scene fades

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

So so so sweet.😉... yaar ye rotna manana was really too good😳.... loved it till infinty😊 Superb Lucky 👏 it seems like aur ek part wait karna padega Naina ke doubts ke liye 😍 ... Thank u Thank u Thank u for such a beautiful scene 🤗🤗🤗🤗

A tightwali jadu ki jappi for u dear for bringing a smile on my face 🤗🤗🤗

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

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Afternoon..dakshna room...On couch...

Daksh sleeping on couch ..with ..naina in arms

http://www.flickr.com/photos/34987761@N05/3247934169/

Naina; daksh..pokes him...😛

Daksh( lazy tone)..kaho meri jaan..(opens eyes)🥱

Naina;(gets up ) jab hum wapas jayenge sab ye poochengi ki humne kya kya dekha darjeeling main, kya jawab denge?..😲

Daksh; koi nahi poochega..aur poochenge tho kahunga..main darjeeling ghoome nahi.(.pulls her on to him..stroking her cheek;) honey moon manane aaya tha apni khoobsurat biwi ke saath...bas..😆😉

Naina; daksh tum samaj nahi rahe ho..hume yaha aaye huye ek mahine se jyada hogaya..aur😕

Daksh; (surprised)😲..kya keh rahi ho tum..ek mahina??mujhe tho lag raha hain hum kal hi aaye hain yaha..(smiles looking at her).tumhare saath rehta hoon tho din raat..mahina, saal ..kisi ka pata nahi chalta..😆

Naina; tumhe pata hain hum bas teen din room se bahar gaye ek baar dinner ke lie( counting with fingers)..phir woh train waala din aur phir shopping..baaki..27 days..hum yahi par..(pauses)😳😳

Daksh; oh really!.sirf 3 din room se bahar?? tho phir baaki 27 din hum kar kya rahethe?( winks at her with naughty smile)😉

Naina; chup karo..besharam (after few smiles)...kahi bahar chalte hain daksh ..ghoomne..

Daksh;.haan haan kyu nahi...aaj se hum tumhe darjeeling ki sher karate hain..jab tak tum khud nahi kehti ki bas ab aur nahi ghoomna mujhe.

Naina; really!..oh daksh tum kitne ache ho( drops few kisses on his face quickies)..

Looks at daksh; kya hua? aise kyu dekh rahe ho?

Daksh; ye achi baat hain..bahar jaane ka plan banati ho phir aisa kuch kardeti ho ki plan cancel ho jaata hain( referring to her quickies).. .

Naina lil shy.gets up and sits on couch..daksh smiles..gets up..gets his laptop and settles on couch besides his love...naina rests her head on his shoulder..

http://www.dreamstime.com/stock-photo-couple-laying-on-couch-with-laptop-image9098760

http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-75897697/stock-photo-couple-sitting-in-couch-with-laptop-computer.html

Both look for sight seeing places;.

Daksh; waise naina tum yahi se ho..tho tumhe ache se pata hona chahiye iss jagah ki baare main..

Naina; woh actually ..dad ke jaane ke baad..mamma ne hostel bej diya thana..iss liye( lil change of mood)

Daksh notices this;(puts his arms around her) nahi..iss liye taaki tum apne handsome pati ke saath apne hnymoon par dekh sako...kyu?

Naina; smiles ; sirf handsome nahi..bhaut pyaara , smart aur cute pati hain mera( pulls his nose)...hugs him;; love u daksh..😛

Daksh love u too acha tho phir aaj hum..rock garden jaayenge..uske baad..chunnu summerfalls aur ganga maya park..ek doose ki bahut aas paas hain ye teen places..tho..kya khayal hain aap ka? chale..long drive aur site seeing par..

Naina; haan..chalo..uto..ready ho jaate hain..warna laute the bahut raat ho jayega..gets down from couch..daksh pulls her back..

Eye lock..faces come closer... both share a short and sweet kiss..aur phir?

PS; Dnt wry programme cancel nahi hua...dakshna are getting ready...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: lucky.m
PS; Dnt wry programme cancel nahi hua...dakshna are getting ready...

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oh...for a moment i thot😲...😆😆😆😆

lucky thanku darling🤗🤗🤗...so simpl, sweet nd cute😍... watermark hai tera😛...loved it dear🤗🤗🤗...

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: sweetaish

oh...for a moment i thot😲...😆

lucky thanku darling🤗🤗🤗...so simpl, sweet nd cute😍... watermark hai tera😛...loved it dear🤗🤗🤗...

ditto ditto😊

for a sec even i thought lo ji phir se programme cancel ho gaya...😆😆..😆.

chalo accha hai finally after 27 days ghar ke bahar tho nikale..😍...

loved it dear.🤗🤗🤗 ... too cute😳... thank u dear..🤗🤗🤗

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

@ rupu & aish

Thanks buddies..thanks a lot..🤗🤗

Ab thoda bahar bhi ghooma ne ka soch rahi thi dakshna ko.😆.SSBN main nahi hua tho FF main tho ho sakta hain😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ rupu & aish

Thanks buddies..thanks a lot..🤗🤗

Ab thoda bahar bhi ghooma ne ka soch rahi thi dakshna ko.😆.SSBN main nahi hua tho FF main tho ho sakta hain😉

right u r👍🏼...lucky thnku phirse dear🤗🤗...tera HM series nai hota tho ham kya karte...

vaise...i 4got 2 say this pehle...lekin 27 days🤔...umm...ok,i'l b wise n keep my mouth shut😉

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

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Dakshna on drajeeling trip...Dakshna get ready..no badmaashi frm both sides this time😆.😳they lock the door and start out their trip.😛.

In car

Daksh; naina..Apna...

Naina; pata hain.seat belt lagana hain..( puts up seat belt)..ab khush😊

Daksh gives a smile as😊 answer and they start off

http://www.visualphotos.com/image/2x4760485/hispanic_couple_driving_in_car

Naina; yaha se kitna door hain?😲

Daksh;; bas 10 15 km..jyada waqt nahi lagega...waise tumne camera apne hand bag main rakha ya bhool gayi?😲

Naina' jee nahi..aisa kaise bhool javungi..ghar jaane ke baad sab ko dikhana hain na ki darjeeling kitni achi tourist spot hain..aur.😛

Daksh; aur..ye bhi ki hum kabhi kabhi apne bed room se bahar bhi gaye hain😆.😆.kyu?( Winks at her)...😉

Naina; smiles)Very smart.Mr. DP..lekin bas unke liye nahi.( holds his hand) mujhe tumhare saath ghoomna hain...😛

Daksh' Pata hain swt hrt..iss liye tho hum jaa rahe hain...

Naina; waise darjeeeling mere liye bahut special hain..mera darjeeling

Daksh;(lil frown and smile))😊 tumhara darjeeling? woh kab se ?

Naina; kab se matlab..jab se main iss duniya main ayi hoon tab se...darjeeling ke saath mere bahut saare yaadein judi huyi hain...mera bachpan papa ke saath.( becomes lil emotional remembering all moments with her dad)😕😭

Daksh; waise sirf tumhare liye nahi ye jagah mere liye bhi bahut special hain..kyunki..

Naina; hmm kyunki?😛

Daksh; Ye batavo ki Mr daksh patwrdan..miss naina bharadwaaj se pehli baar kab kaha mile??😲

Naina; toy train..darjeeling( li,excited remembering their first meet)😛

Daksh; phir doosri baar?😲

Naina; akshay jiju aur shristi shaadi..darjeeling main..( flsh back..memories).

Daksh; tum naina baharadwaj se naina patwardhan kaha bani..matlab hamari shaadi kaha huyi?

Naina; darjeeling..😛..

Daksh; phir..mere zindagi ki sabse khoobsurat din... matlab HM pe😳 hum kaha aaye?

Naina smilng shy;😳 darjeeling

Daksh stops the car..looks at naina...

Daksh; ye jagah mere liye iss liye itni special hain.kyuki mujhe mere zinadgi ki sabse badi khusi mere pehla aur aakhri pyar..yahi mila...holds naina's hand kisses it and says; tum naina..ILU naina❤️

Naina; Luv u too daksh.aur sach darjeeling hamare liye bahut khaas hain aur hamesha rahega...puts a hand on his hand..both lost as usual.😍.😆after some time both come into real world...

Daksh; ek kaam karte hain pehle kuch khaalenge phir.ghoome jayenge..kyu? ok..

Naina; haan..tho chalo..both xchange smiles..aur gaadi start kiya daksh ne..

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