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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 lucky... Superb scene 😛 thank u thank u so much 🤗 naina tho naraaz hogayi yaar... Next Part will be more interesting dakshu jho manayega ma'am ko... Aur naina ke doubts ka kya hua... Woh kab clear honge yaar... 😍
Loved it 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Neetu

Superb FF on Future track yaar... Amazing story line... Hope something like this happens in real SSBN ... Want the toy train scene once again ... And some good moments at the house they had shown in the earlier episodes... And a perfect way to a Beautiful ending too 😳 Loved it 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lucky.. you gave a new angle in Naina's side... very nice..!! waiting for next part..

Rupali,

Thanks yaar... actually, i was in too hurry in writing the previous FF. so i skipped some scenes while writing. Actually i thought of a different ending while i was about to write it... anyway, I will continue it and try to include the skipped parts in next FF. i will write whenever I get time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@neetu

Thanks yaar..and Ur future FF too good as usual👏 👏 Kaash sach hota..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

[guess b4 going naina and Daksh tried to talk to ayi to infor that they are going to darjeeling.. but since ayi is not ready to listen, they couldn't tell]

it is winter rite? they are in Darjeeling too.. cool breez pats them... They are lost in each other's eyes... Naina's hair flies on her foreheard and tryig to disturd their eyelock... ;) Daksh is about to stop her hair from stealing is sweet heart's eyes from him. he lifts his hand and.. they hear somebody knocks the door. They wake up... they come out of from each other's arm and look at the door.

N: ji.. ayiye...

Door opens and Radha aunty comes in.

R: beta... khana ready hai (sorry u all know my hindi is not good... pls forgive)

Naina looks at Daksh.. then

N: Ji hum ate hai..

They both come down... and Daksh gets a call

D: Oh anh Akruthi...

Mean while in PN.

All are around the table. guess Aku is not there. Baba looks at Dakshna's table and doubtfully thinks"kaham hai yeh dono..". Ayi is also in confusion.. she looks at their table and withdraws her eyes.. you know eventhough she is angry with them and not speaking to them, they were in front of her eyes rite? today she does not see them which makes her a little bit embarassed. anyways it is her son and his wife rite? Everybody except Rohini siting around the table look sad internally in not seeing them on their table. but Rohini looks tremendously happy. At lst Kaka opens up his mouth in usual style,

Kaka: Kaham gaye ye Ram aur Sita? dikhayi nahi de rahe hai...

Ayi is serving the food with a doubtful face.

R: Kaka, lagta hai ve khar chodkar hi gaye.. samach gaye hoge hum aise mannewale nahi hai..

A thunder happened in Ayi's mind and she turns towards kitchen...

R: yeh to khushi ki bat hai... ayi zara meeta layiye na..

All look at her with a irritating face... even Kaka too.. but Rohini is very happy..

Aku is coming to the table.. she is on the phone..

A: OK dada.. mein phone rakhthi hoom..

She cuts the call and sits on the chair. all look at her. She feels why all look at me like this... may be it is becoz she called daksh...she is a little bit afraid. Vedanth looks at her and asks

V: tai... yeh dada aur naina kaham gaye?

Ayi turns towards and eager to hear her..

A: Voh.. darjeeling gaye hai.. vaha Naina ko ek wedding ki arrangement karni thi..

hearing this Ayi has gr8 relief and goes to the kitchen. others also felt better..

Back to BV

Dakshna cominf down.. they hear a sound of car..

N: mamma aa gayi.

They hear.. door bell rings and Anjali comes in and enqurire abt Dakshna..

A: Daksh aya hai kya,,?

R: ji madam..

A: dinner mein special arrange kiya hai na?

R: ji.. sab arrange kiya...

Anjali comes in and Dakshna approach her. Daksh takes blessing from anjali and they go near table.. a small chat with Daksh and Anjali.

hey sit.. the servants brings each items. Randha aunt puts it on the table..

Daksh is a little bit surprised in seeing the variety of food on the table..

D: oh.. yeh sab kya hai?

A: tum shaadi ke baad pehli bar khar ate hai na..?

Naina and Daksh smiles..

Naina stands and take the vessel fro radha aunt and abt to serve to Daksh..

A: beta tum bhi baido... mein serve karthi hoom. yeh mera haq hai.. ki mere beti aur bete ko treat karna..

everybody smiles.. after sometimes.. naina puts one more roti in Daksh plate...

D: oh.. bas bas... bohot khaya aaj.. ped bhar gaya..

N: ek aur kha sakta hai.. [with lov]

Daksh loks at her lovingly and start to have it.. anjali look both of them and admires... she is very happy 2day..


After the dinner Daksh and Anjali had some times for talk..

In the room Naina.. wind blows from window and it is too cool atmosphere.. Naina goes near the window and tries to close the window.. she is trying.. [rem the window closing scene.] this time Daksh comes into the room and sees his wife is struggling.. you know he cannot stand looking at this. he calmly comes near her and stretches the hand and holds the hook of the window along with Naina's hand.. naina looks at him with love.. her hair flies on his face and he starts to loose his mind.. he looks at naina's eyes.. slowly he loosen his hold on the window and holds her shoulder... Naina also turns towards him and silently looks at him.. he makes her support on the wall... intense eye lock.. he comes closer to her and closer... still her hair flies and he tries to stop it.. [you can rem the KKHH scene also]

as usual... naina senses wht they are going to do.. she pushes him and abt to run.. still daksh turns towards the wall closing his eyes.. no.. this time Daksh can not let her go... his love towards her wife is above all.. he held her hand... in the wind the shawl flies on Daksh face and he turns towards her and looks at her passionately.. naina's breath comes faster.. and looks at him.. no.. this time Naina also cannot stop herself.. when daksh pulls her towards him slowly.. she just obeys... slowly... slowly.. the breez still blows on them. now they are in inch distance and full in both's arms.. Daksh bends towards her forehead and places a warm kiss.. naina pulls him towards her more.. he kisses on her eyes... then cheeks.. Naina is fully lost.. she surrendered in all means... hugs him warmly.. Daksh takes her in his arm and takes to the bed.. Naina looks at him warmly.. Daksh is in full of passion of love.. he comes closer to her .. Naina closes her eyes... tightens her hold on his Daksh's shirt.. her lips parts a bit... yah.. that is an invitation to Daksh and he bends towards her soft lips slowly.. slowly.. the cool wind still smiles at them..😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww.😍.that was so simple but so...romantic.😳😳.yaar neetu kya scene hain!!..awesome👏👏 lved it lved it...🤗🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice Neetu... Simple cute and romantic... I liked the PH dinning area scene that u included... Beautiful scene...awesome ending too 😉 loved it 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

In last FF naina disturbs daksh's client call aur daksh kp banjaata hain..naina feels bad and she says sorry to daksh...

Saying this she starts going away..daksh uske saamne aajata hain..

Naina; daksh hato mere raaste se..ab kya? sry kehdiyana..disturb karne ke liye tumhare client call ko..

Daksh; client ki baat kaun kar raha hain?..naina question mark face'😲.(.comes closer); main tho apni baat kar raha tha...😉.

Naina; matlab??😲

Daksh(puts hands around her shoulder)and says; iss tarah disturb karke chale jaana teek hain kya.😛.disturb karna hain tho poori tarah se kardona.😉.aise adha adhoore karke chod doge..tho ye bahut galat baat hain na swt hr8😉( strokes her cheek)

Naina;( gussa)tho phir KP ka chehra kyu banaya?😡..javo tum...mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni.jaakar apne client se baatein karo.😡...( takes off his hands , goes and sits on bed)

Daksh sits besides her ; naaraz ho mujhse? sry swt hr8.sry..dekho kaan pakad ke maafi mangta hoon( holds his both ears)/.pls meri jaan..pls maaf kardo apne daksh ko...( cute baby face banata hain)

Naina shows lil atttude first but daksh goes on with his maafi session.😛...finally naina melts 😛

Naina;its ok...(rolling her eyes)
Daksh;sach!..naraz nahi hona mujhse😛
Naina;(smiles) nahi...
.Daksh ki chehre par smile aajati hain and he hugs her..🤗🤗and naina puts her arms around him and they stay in embrace for few min..😛

In hug

.Naina;.( after few min) imp client hain kya?..koi prblem tho nahi hogana??

Daksh; (stroking her hair) Important client hi tha...lekin tum ye jaanti ho na ki mere liye tumse jyada important kuch bhi nahi😛..aur ek client kya?. meri pyaari naina par aise hazaaro clients kurbaan kardoo.😳..(kiss on fore head)

Lifts up her face..(naughty look)...aur jab meri patni subha subha itni romantic ho jaye tho phir...😳. ( lil husky low tone)...

.naina lil embarssed.☺️...gets back into his arms...🤗

After few min

Daksh; waise tumhara mood teek haina.??
Naina; haan...
Daksh tho phir..shuru karo poora disturb karne ka kaam😆
.naina hits him..' daksh..😛
Daksh; acha phir se client ko call karu? tab jaake maam ko disturb karne ka mood aayega..teek hain phir takes mobile...starts to get up.😆😆

.naina holds him backand says' uski koi zaroorat nahi..😳.
daksh; acha!( naughty smile)😛😉

Naina nods her head( yes) and hugs him,both fall onto bed.😳...scene fades


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Posted: 13 years ago
So so so sweet.😉... yaar ye rotna manana was really too good😳.... loved it till infinty😊 Superb Lucky 👏 it seems like aur ek part wait karna padega Naina ke doubts ke liye 😍 ... Thank u Thank u Thank u for such a beautiful scene 🤗🤗🤗🤗
A tightwali jadu ki jappi for u dear for bringing a smile on my face 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONTD...


Afternoon..dakshna room...On couch...

Daksh sleeping on couch ..with ..naina in arms

http://www.flickr.com/photos/34987761@N05/3247934169/

Naina; daksh..pokes him...😛
Daksh( lazy tone)..kaho meri jaan..(opens eyes)🥱
Naina;(gets up ) jab hum wapas jayenge sab ye poochengi ki humne kya kya dekha darjeeling main, kya jawab denge?..😲
Daksh; koi nahi poochega..aur poochenge tho kahunga..main darjeeling ghoome nahi.(.pulls her on to him..stroking her cheek;) honey moon manane aaya tha apni khoobsurat biwi ke saath...bas..😆😉
Naina; daksh tum samaj nahi rahe ho..hume yaha aaye huye ek mahine se jyada hogaya..aur😕
Daksh; (surprised)😲..kya keh rahi ho tum..ek mahina??mujhe tho lag raha hain hum kal hi aaye hain yaha..(smiles looking at her).tumhare saath rehta hoon tho din raat..mahina, saal ..kisi ka pata nahi chalta..😆
Naina; tumhe pata hain hum bas teen din room se bahar gaye ek baar dinner ke lie( counting with fingers)..phir woh train waala din aur phir shopping..baaki..27 days..hum yahi par..(pauses)😳😳
Daksh; oh really!.sirf 3 din room se bahar?? tho phir baaki 27 din hum kar kya rahethe?( winks at her with naughty smile)😉
Naina; chup karo..besharam (after few smiles)...kahi bahar chalte hain daksh ..ghoomne..
Daksh;.haan haan kyu nahi...aaj se hum tumhe darjeeling ki sher karate hain..jab tak tum khud nahi kehti ki bas ab aur nahi ghoomna mujhe.
Naina; really!..oh daksh tum kitne ache ho( drops few kisses on his face quickies)..
Looks at daksh; kya hua? aise kyu dekh rahe ho?
Daksh; ye achi baat hain..bahar jaane ka plan banati ho phir aisa kuch kardeti ho ki plan cancel ho jaata hain( referring to her quickies).. .
Naina lil shy.gets up and sits on couch..daksh smiles..gets up..gets his laptop and settles on couch besides his love...naina rests her head on his shoulder..

http://www.dreamstime.com/stock-photo-couple-laying-on-couch-with-laptop-image9098760
http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-75897697/stock-photo-couple-sitting-in-couch-with-laptop-computer.html

Both look for sight seeing places;.

Daksh; waise naina tum yahi se ho..tho tumhe ache se pata hona chahiye iss jagah ki baare main..
Naina; woh actually ..dad ke jaane ke baad..mamma ne hostel bej diya thana..iss liye( lil change of mood)
Daksh notices this;(puts his arms around her) nahi..iss liye taaki tum apne handsome pati ke saath apne hnymoon par dekh sako...kyu?
Naina; smiles ; sirf handsome nahi..bhaut pyaara , smart aur cute pati hain mera( pulls his nose)...hugs him;; love u daksh..😛
Daksh love u too acha tho phir aaj hum..rock garden jaayenge..uske baad..chunnu summerfalls aur ganga maya park..ek doose ki bahut aas paas hain ye teen places..tho..kya khayal hain aap ka? chale..long drive aur site seeing par..

Naina; haan..chalo..uto..ready ho jaate hain..warna laute the bahut raat ho jayega..gets down from couch..daksh pulls her back..

Eye lock..faces come closer... both share a short and sweet kiss..aur phir?

PS; Dnt wry programme cancel nahi hua...dakshna are getting ready...

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