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Posted: 13 years ago
Must Say Gunjan Is Very Softspoken ๐Ÿ˜ณ Coz If Other People Had Their Feelings Flowing Then They Had Sreamed ;) ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey S3J Soham Swati Sonia Joseph๐Ÿค—...Congratulations 4 the New thread...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ. . And SORRY sorry my dearest friends 4 replying so late ,for keeping u waiting and for being Extremely late again in posting my feedback...Sorry friends....... ๐Ÿ˜ณ...

The update part - 35 was simply fabulous , awesome , fantastic and Out standing everything from scenes, dialogues every part was excellent...U superbly described and showed each characters emotions, feeling and thoughts...Mind blowing update part-35th ...loved reading it very very much...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...superb work ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

the start was amazing and awesome..
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...monish busy in call and gunjan lost in thoughts ...U showed Gunjan's nervousness very well..though Gunjan was worried about the meeting also but not as worried as she was about meeting samrat as she knew he would be there and she kept on thinking about samrat and was feeling nervous ...U showed her worried thoughts and nervousness excellently S3J...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..and the way she hid her feelings from Monish and didnt let him guess the real reason 4 her nervousness was also superbly shown..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...Monish thought she was nervous about the meeting and the way he talked 2 gunjan sweetly and tried 2 calm her down by saying not 2 worry as he was there was very sweet of Monish...๐Ÿ˜Š.though now monish is remaining calm and talking sweetly 2 gunjan and handling everything calmly and patiently trying 2 get gunjan in his life But 4 how long will he remain like this??๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...as he also noticed Gunjan feels uncomfortable with and around him and he didnt like it and is getting irritated but is holding his irritation ...So I am wondering that 4 how long will monish remain this sweet Monish ...?? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•let's see when Monish will show his true nature 2 gunjan....though Monish is Not negative still and only wants happiness in life But He can and has the power 2 become Negative totally 2 get Gunjan in his life...As he wants Gunjan By hook or crook ...thats what I feel ...lets see what happens...๐Ÿ˜•...every action of Gunjan around monish letting go of his hand after getting out of the car , removing his hand from her shoulder , moving a little away when she was sitting & monish came and sat closely 2 her and her wondering why she felt so comfortable around samrat and not monish each thought and action of Gunjan showed her nervousness around Monish.... S3J u superbly described and showed Gunjan's nervousness and feeling uncomfortable around monish...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..Gunjan's mind may think Monish as a sweet person who is like a family But her heart has guessed the real monish Thats why she feels uncomfortable around Monish...I hope Gunjan listens 2 her heart then about Monish then she will understand her reason for being uncomfortable around monish and secure around Samrat...And Gunjan's confusion was also awesomely described ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..she was confused why did she still feel Comfortable and secure when samrat was around even when he had hurt her badly and said bad words 2 her about her n her family and when she thought he didnt feel anything 4 her and she was noone 2 him then also still she was feeling secure around him and even when she has decided 2 move on in life and forget everything but still she kept on thinking about Samrat only...and what will he think about her working with Monish and he may not like it ...these thoughts about samrat made her more confused and S3J u showed this Confusion of Gunjan superbly๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...and Samrats behavior in the hall constantly looking at her with love and then being angry with her for being there with Monish these actions of samrat made her more confused and made her think why was samrat behaving this way when he didnt like her ....Sweet Gunjan didnt knew he was behaving this way because he was in Love with her and jealous of seeing her with Monish...๐Ÿ˜Š...Sweet gunjan was also not able 2 understand that even though she has decided 2 move on But She was still in love with samrat and to forget someone you love with whole heart is not easy ...as feelings are still in your heart as that love is true ...Nicely shown Gunjan's feelings thoughts and confusion S3J๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.
And this part was also sweet When Gunjan and samrat both felt each other presence without even meeting each other...and The way U showed this part was BEAUTIFUL S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...loved it totally....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

Samrats each actions and thoughts and feelings and pain was superbly shown...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘......his feeling Gunjan's presence His thoughts of monish his jealousy towards him and his realising and accepting that he had been rude 2 Gunjan a lott and shouldn't have behaved badly and thrown her Mobile and deciding 2 make it up 2 her everything each scene was SUPERB soham sonia swati joseph S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...and this part when he decided 2 gift Gunjan a mobile and keep just 2 exclusive sets for Him n her so that only they should have it was a superb scene WOW!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...this showed she is special 2 him and his deciding 2 say SORRY and then thinking 2 himself can't she guess his feelings that he was sorry 4 what he did ..This thought was OMG!!๐Ÿ˜†...I wanted 2 say how can she guess samrat when ur behavior is still so rude and everytime feelings can't be guessed sometimes U have 2 say the words...๐Ÿ˜Š...and his decision that he will say SORRY was awesome I loved it BUT BUT knowing Samrat Will he be able 2 say SORRY will his nature and EGO let Him apologise????๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...and his decision 2 meet Gunjan's uncle Aunt was wow !! and when he started thinking what will he say 2 them as he doesnt know how 2 have family conversation and he didnt have a family and home His each thought about family his mom his pain bought tears 2 my eyes๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...I could feel how much pain samrat was in ...๐Ÿ˜ญ...and U showed each feeling of samrat superbly S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...His jealousy at seeing Gunjan with monish was superbly shown...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ loved it fully......when he saw Gunjan when she entered the hall that time his thoughts his actions his lost in her beauty everything was beautiful ..U excellently showed samrats each feeling...when gunjan refused 2 meet him and returned the chit and said leave me alone 2 him and samrat action was man OMG!! it was like he was thinking how could she say no 2 me ... he was so angry I just could imagine the scene I could feel how the pindrop type silence must have fallen in the hall Excellently shown scene SOHAM Sonai Swati Joseph S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...Superbly shown samrats thoughts feelings jealousy pain and love anger everything was awesome ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...I loved Samrats jealousy and possessive behavior towards Gunjan a lottt...
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Elevator scene was WOW!! superb...๐Ÿ‘...the way samrat entered and then stopped the elevator and when Gunjan objected the way he said
Kyun jaane doon tumhein...? Kyun manoon main,tumhaari baat...? Kya tum mujhe jaanti ho...?? Kya hum ek dusre ko jaante hain...? Tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho...? Main... ....wow!! these words what powerful words ...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...and each word of samrat in this part in starting showed samrats hurt at seeing Gunjan with monish and joining his company and not wanting 2 meet him ...it showed his hurt and pain and u showed samrat hurt superbly...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...and Gunjans pain bought tears 2 my eyes also๐Ÿ˜ญ...Finally Gunjan did what I have been waiting 4 her 2 do ...Show her feelings her hurt her pain ...even though rahul knew Samrat had been rude 2 gunjan that night but even he didn't knew what exactly had happened as Gunjan had never told him also..only samrat knew and Gunjan knew but samrat didnt realize how bad he had been and Today each words Gunjan spoke It felt like she was pouring out her heart her hurt 2 samrat ...This hurt this pain was torturing her each day she couldnt stop thinking about it and was in deep pain each day because she had not shown her feelings and shared her hurt her pain fully with even rahul or anyone else thats why she was in deep pain but now as she poured her heart her pain out at samrat I think now this pain will lessen a bit though it won't disappear but it will diminish little bit...4 this pain 2 vanish samrat has 2 apologize 2 her and give her lotss of love...Loved The way u showed S3J Gunjan pouring out her pain at samrat at what he did that night...and the way u showed it was superb ...Gunjan showed her pain 2 samrat but softly calmly and didn't even raise her voice ..WOW!! excellently way๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...Gunjan's pain and her each word bought tears 2 my eyes...๐Ÿ˜ญ...I could feel pain in her each word ...๐Ÿ˜ญ...excellently shown gunjan's pain S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘... u Excellenyly showed S3J that Samrat could feel Gunjan's pain her hurt in her every word..her pain her tears were piercing his heart and her deep pain made him realize completely how badly and 2 what extent he had hurt Gunjan and he finally knew what all he had said and how wrong he had been ...He could feel her pain in her every word...her pain was tearing his heart he wanted 2 hug her but His deep guilt wouldn't let him speak a word He couldn't say SORRY...it was not his ego that was stopping him saying sorry but as he was not in the habit of apologizing 2 anyone and saying Sorry and his deep guilt was stopping him saying sorry and WHEN Gunjan uttered Monish name then his EGO and jealousy stopped him from apologizing ...Thats why he threatened her But I felt It was more of POSSESSIVENESS then anger or threat which was making him say these words 2 gunjan... as he wanted her back in his life by hook or crook....SOHAM SONIA SWATI JOSEPH U Excellently wrote and showed Gunjan's pain samrats pain then jealousy anger possessiveness towards gunjan...MIND BLOWING SCENE very emotional and superbly shown both Samrat gunjan's emotions and feelings AWESOME PART 35 E..loved it very very very much S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...Gunjan also felt samrats feelings 4 her had changed and his possessiveness but couldn't understand reason 4 it and it made her more confused.though she had realized it in his heart but didn't want 2 accept as she had been hurt once and didnt want 2 travel the same path ...but it was making her confused ...excellently shown Gunjan's confusion๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘... SUPERB part ...loved it completely๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...

RAHUL MAN I was missing rahul ...๐Ÿ˜Š...Welcome back 2 The FF rahul๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š...Rahul part was amazing ..his thought during press conference were OMG!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Hilarious ...loved it fully ...enjoyed it when he said 2 himself these reporters eyes kitni small hain pata nahi whether they were awake or asleep ๐Ÿคฃ...and his thought about mobile and room sey kidnap ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Loved this funny rahul๐Ÿ˜†...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...It showed fully he was missing Gunjan and was getting bored there...๐Ÿ˜Š...and This part OMG was shocking and made me curious WHO IS ALISHA RASTOGI????๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...whats her connection with Rahul and Gunjan?? what did rahul mean when he said Gunja has not mentioned that night and he wont let rastogi come between him n gunjan?and why does he hate this girl??๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...I think she is connected 2 rahul's past ..and that night when something happened to change rahul's view about manythings...But what happened???? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...

1st look scene of part 36th was awesome and Samrat in Gunjan home and his room wow!! and teaser was also superb ..it shows many twist and turns are about 2 come in your FF and sajan life ..but What twists??๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...Very curious 2 know what will happen next S3J Plsss update soonnn...

and Once again SORRY 4 late reply...๐Ÿ˜ณ...and Plss add me 2 ur new PM LIST ...and Awesome Update part 35th soham swati sonia joseph S3J๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...

Love your good friend
Gunjan๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome updates
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

wao what a post it was so cool๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ but adi adori kahani kyu sunati hu hm bechara readers koa๐Ÿ˜ณ and 8 and 9 parts bhi post karti tu koi bbt nai thi hm kushi kushi aur maza sah parhata kyu kah bore huna kah tu koi swaal he nai banta ๐Ÿ˜‰and plzzz kal matlb kal post hu jahna chaiya nai tu khair nai ๐Ÿ˜‰and congragulation that u are gona complete one more thread thats great great news for all of us yeh tu treat dena wali bbt hai ๐Ÿ˜‰detail comment about post full story parna kah bbd๐Ÿ˜›



Thank You Arzoo. The post has been updated. Waiting for your precious feedback.๐Ÿ˜Š

We were planning to post 9 parts, but decided against it as the precap and teasers were to be posted too. We are overwhelmed to read that our readers would love to read longer updates...maybe in the next thread.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by SwaNia_2 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

part 35 is really amazingg i like it very much



Thank You Shafoo for liking this update.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part๐Ÿ˜ƒ part 35 is ๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธgr8 jobโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

I'm SOOO Happy For You All :) ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿค— && Yeahhh, I'm BIGGG Fan For This For Sure ๐Ÿ˜†



Thanks SANZZ !!๐Ÿ˜ณ I know ,U R BIG FAN...๐Ÿ˜†


Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saduf

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First of all sorry for late comment...and secondly your update was awesome and mind blowing...
love the part where samrat was thinking that gunjan had came in meeting for him and that scene when samrat cornered gunjan in lift...wow that was wonderfully written...
i totally love the angry side of samrat and his concern and love for gunjan at the same time...
and mohnish is so despo to win gunjan that he is making her uncomfortable and wow i loved it when gunjan felt the possesiveness in his words for her...all in all the entire update was the best update...
and yes! the precap...Oh God what is samrat upto man...i was quite scared after reading it that what is he gonna do to her...though i have already read the teaser befor but i read it again...i m so addicted to your FF that i dont mind reading new updates twice...anyways...

you guys write so well and beautifully that i can even imagine the scene in front of my eyes... so...
Keep It Up &
Keet Writing

Best Wishes and Regards

Saduf (Sadaf)



Thank U SADAF for your lovely comment on the last update of this thread.V R really glad that U liked whole parts n that particular sequences.

Finally, SAMRAT is giving in to his heart's demand, much to the discomfort of his mind. He is possessive about her, hates it when anyone misbehaves with her like GAUTAM did in 'THE AMBASSADOR'. but, also hates it when anyone else is overtly nice with her, like MONiSH is. He is yet to know about RAHUL.

The Precap scene is main high point of Next Part...so,this time...little wait๐Ÿ˜ณ. Thank U so much for liking this FF and also our way of writing. It is a best compliment any writer can receive when readers feel they are able to visualize the scenes... Appreciation of Characterization is really big things for us..b'coz,here all Characters...(especially,all 3 male leads) R so much complicated n difficult...obviously SAMRAT is more difficult then other๐Ÿ˜ณ.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic part lovd the part wen samrat was thinking to gift a mobile to gunjan n say sory to her sometimes he is so sweet n sometimes so rude n precap is also so gud waiting for ur next update
Edited by Shreya30456 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahha ๐Ÿ˜† You Guyss Know That I'm BIGGG Fan Trought My Comments ;) Atleast We Can Get One Update Like Our Christmas Gift Naa ?! ๐Ÿค— & January Is TOOO Long To Come :X :((( ๐Ÿฅบ We Will Get The Other FF " Aur Pyaar Hogaya " Update First Naa ?! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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