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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Piya maan ka anjane me ya jane geet ko patni maake use wo har khushi dena acha laga

😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Precap se bahut sare expectation hi piya

Will try to live upto ur expectaions
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Piya i must say the way their relation is growing nicely yaar pehle me kitne lade phir itna paas agye ki gusse me bi ek dossre ka takleef nahi dek sakthe next ab pyaar nice continue👏👏👏👏👏

ab ye relationship aur strong hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zunaiba5

thnx 4 pm



Maan is a caring lover ...yes ...arjun is on the road n he'll not seperate them again


do continue

Yes Arjun ka permanent ilaz ho gaya hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow!just awesme update di..i just just lovd it.
I lovd the way he pamperd hs love,he helpd her in dressng by blindfoldng hmself,the way he helpd her in walkng by makng her stand on hs feet..awww..i lovd everythng.
And the diamond chain he gave stole my heart too along with geet.
The way he prepard soup 4 her,ordered paratas and fed her,the way he pamperd her shw hw much he loves her..precap seems excitng i hope maan proposes her in party.
And wow update ended with a kiss and finally sng was just awesme.
Thank u di 4 gvng mindblowng awesme update..waitng 4 next part.
Love u di:-)

This is called true unconditional love
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: krati5

so dreamy... bs aab maan ko bliondfold karna band karo... get into some actions😉

Actions sahi waqt aane pe hoga😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

well u make me more crazy day by day...me pehle kam crazy thi jo apne muje aur crazy bana diya..😆

This maan is so sweet...i know pehle se hi sweet tha but now aur bi...I love his all gestures...
Pehle to muje laga tha ke geet apni maang nahi dekegi but me to wrong thi ..she see it and maan lisen her convo😳...
Geet ne jab parothe expect kia to soap mila aur jab soap to parothe😆...Maan tum bahot bure ho...lol..
Most beautiful part of this update is jab maan geet ke paar apne paro par rakhke uske saath chalta hai😳..that is just too dreamy...
unexpected thing in this update...vo locket...jisme maaneet ki pic thi aur vo geet ko pehnata hai ..mene sapne me bi ye nahi socha tha...To ab humare maaneet ki engagement ho hi gai...well done maan..
And i appreciate ur hard work shona...u r too good..and this for u for a special part
Ab ap soch rahi hogi ke kon se special part ke lia..to me hi bata deti ho vo maaneet ki dreamy walk ke lia...
Cont soon...
eagerlt waiting for more...kyuki ye dil mange more
Love u alot shona
Ur's khushi

This maan will always do unexpected things for his geet khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

wow awsome update piggy...

sorry reserve kerke bhag gayee...
actually the update is so nice that I thought kee aram se comment doon...
So Maan himself made soup for Geet...Wow... he can do anything for his mishty... and Geet... she doesn't like soup but Maan ne banaya aone haathon se to itnee khas cheeze kaise na accept kare woh...
The moment without Maan she feels upset... always wants him near her.. great
Then she sees her Maang and just like Man she also feels happy... she feels blessed but does not want to force herself on him as she knows he does not beleive in marraige but Maan listens to her and knows her wish... he himself wishes same... he will make her wait till Delhi...
Maan is working on fixing Arjun and he won't spare him as he has tried to put hands on his Mishty... Arjun you are gone
Wow Maan wake Geet up and prepares a rose water bath for her...
I loved whole romantic part... it was awsome... Maan blindfolded doing dressing her... loved it
Great Update Piggy
luv u
--urs Anu Di

Di perfect and wonderful analysis issliye maine kaha tha k main aapka comment miss nahi karna chahthi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and encouragement. Here is the next part I hope each one of you will enjoy reading it.
I dedicate this part to my dearest friend Zahra. Shehzadi I hope u like your surprise
love-Piya
PART 61

Geet had tears in her eyes and she couldn't find any words to express her feelings in front of Maan. She slowly placed her lips on top of his as if making Maan realize the depth of her untold emotions

After a while they broke the kiss

Geet was too shy to face Maan

Maan: Geet jab tum sharmathi ho toh bilkul wo dikthi ho

Geet: Maan aap humesha aisa hi kehthe ho par aapne kabhi nahi bataya k "Wo" kya hai?

Maan smiled and touched her bracelet where the hidden word was engraved lovingly

Maan: Sahi waqt par bataunga Geet pehle tum ye batau k tumhe mera gift kaise laga?

Geet: Bahut hi khoobsurat hai Maan par yun achanak ye sab kyun?

Maan kissed her hand

Maan: Achanak nahi Geet ye toh mujhe bahut pehle hi kar lena chahiye tha ye gift toh uss khushi k saamne kuch bhi nahi hai jo tumne mujhe di hai apni zindagi mein mujhe shaamil karke tumne mujhe meri sabse badi daulat gift kar di hai aur maine jobhi kiya wo toh tumhare di hui gift k aaspaas bhi mandara nahi saktha

Geet: Maan aapne ye pendant mein humara photo kab lagwaya?

Maan: Geet ye chain aur ye ring dono hi maine Mr. Maalik k shop se khareede hai maine unhe hum dono ka phono e mail kar diya tha aur unke website par jaakar maine designs select kar liye the tumhe ye design pasand aaye k nahi?

Geet: Aapki di hui kar ek cheez iss duniya ka sabse anmol khazana hai mujhe bahut pasand aaya aapka gift

Maan: Jaanti ho Geet Mr. Maalik ne hume aaj ek party mein invite kiya hai unka koi new project tha jo k kahi successful hua hai toh ussi ki success party hai

Geet gets excited

Geet: Wow Maan hum party mein jaayenge bada maza aayega aur waise bhi 2 dino se iss kamre mein baithe baithe main bor ho rahi hoon

Maan: Achhaji toh meri company mein aap bor ho rahi thi

Geet: Maine aisa kab kaha Maan aap saath ho toh har bejaan se lamhe mein ek jaan aa jaathi hai

Maan: Hmm... toh tumhe baate banana bhi aata hai

Geet: Aap hi ki sangathi ka asar hai toh hum party mein jaa rahe haina?

Maan: Haan jaayenge agar doctor ne permission di toh?

Geet: Maan ab ye doctor kaha beech mein aa gaye?

Maan: Geet tumhari health se important mere liye aur kuch nahi jab tak doctor mujhse ye nahi keh dethe k ab tum bilkul theek ho tab tak main tumhari ek bhi nahi sununga

Geet: Maan main ab wakai mein thik hoon dekhiye main chal bhi sakthi hoon rukhiye main aapko chalkar bathathi hoon

Maan: Khabardaar Geet agar chalne ki koshish bhi kitoh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

Geet: Maan ye kaisi zidd hai ab chalungi nahi toh aapko yakeen kaise dilaungi ki mujhse ab koi takleef nahi hai

Maan: Tumhe yakeen dilane ki zarurat nahi hai Geet doctor kahenge toh main maan lunga

Geet: Toh chale

Maan: Kaha?

Geet: Doctor k paas ab kamre mein baitkar toh koi solution nahi niklegana

Maan: Thik hai chalo

Maan carries her in his arms

Geet: Maan aap ek number k ziddi ho ab aap kya yuhi mujhe hospital tak leke jaaoge

Maan: Haan issmein koi bhi shakh nahi hona chahiye tumhe

He places her carefully in the car and both of them leave for the hospital

Hospital

He again carries her in his arms

Geet: Maan sab dekh rahe hai

Maan: Toh dekhne doh

Geet: Mujhe sharm aa rahi hai

Maan: Geet iss waqt tumhare sharmane se zyadaa important tumhari tabiyat hai aur issmein main compromise nahi kar saktha

Geet: Aap pure dhusht danav ho

Maan: Jo bhi hoon sirf tumhara hoon

Geet hides her face in his chest after listening this

Maan: Doctor hum andar aa sakthe hai

Doctor: Ji Mr. Khurana aayiye

He places Geet carefully on the chair

Doctor: Ab kaisi tabiyat hai aapki?

Geet: Main bilkul theek hoon doctor par ye hai k maanthe nahi

Maan: Tum thik nahi ho main jaanta hoon tumhe party mein jaana hai issliye theek hone ki zabardasti koshish kar rahi ho par main nahi maanewala jab tak tum theek nahi hothi hum kahi bhi nahi jaayenge

Geet: Maan aap bhi na kuch samajne ko taiyaar hi nahi ho

Doctor : Ek minute kya main kuch kahu?

Maan: Kya hua Doctor Geet ko koi complications toh nahi?

Geet: Hey Babaji ab mujhe aisa kya hua hai k jo complications honge?

Maan: Geet tum chup raho Doctor aap bataiye meri Geet thik toh haina

Doctor: Relax Mr. Khurana mujhe pehle check toh kar lene dijiye aap toh yuhi ghabrarahe ho

Geet: Suna aapne

Maan: Geet tumhe apni fikr nahi toh mujhe toh tumhari fikr hai aur tum mujhe apni fikr karne se rokh nahi sakthi kyunki mujhe haq hai

They share an eyelock

Doctor: Are waah Geet aapke saare zakhm bhar chuke hai infact mere expectations se bhi jaldi thik ho gaye hai

Geet: Jab koi apne pyar k malham se kisi k saare dukh dard le le toh bahla zakhm ki kya mazaal jo wo uss pyar k saamne thik sake

Maan smiled at her reply

Maan: Matlab Doctor Geet ab chal sakthi hai?

Doctor: Sirf chal hi nahi balki daud bhi sakthi hai naach bhi sakthi hai she is perfectly alright Mr.Khurana

Maan was satisfied now

Doctor: Waise ek baat toh hai Mrs. Khurana k aapke pati aapse bahut pyar karte hai

Geet: Nahi doctor wo'

Maan stops her by holding her hand

Maan: Doctor ab Geet ko koi problem toh nahi hogina?

Doctor: Don't worry Mr. Khurana ab koi problem nahi hogi

Geet: Toh chale?

Maan nods his head and once again lifts her in his arms

Geet: Maan aapne suna nahi k doctor ne kya kaha ab main bilkul theek hoon aap mujhe neeche utar sakthe ho

Maan: Kya ye zaruri hai?

Geet: Maan aapko meri baat maanni hogi chaliye utariye mujhe neeche abhi issi waqt

Geet: Aise kya dekh rahe hai chaliye utariye mujhe neeche

Maan places her down

Geet: Chaliye ab chalthe hai

Both of the come out of the cabin

Maan: Geet tumne mujhe doctor k saamne data

Geet: Kyun aapko bura laga?

Maan: (smiles) Bilkul bhi nahi jab tum yun dadagiri dhikhathi ho na toh bahut achha lagta hai ek bus tumhi toh ho jo MSK k saath itne haq se baat kar sakthi ho warna kisi aur ki itni himmat kabhi ho hi nahi sakthi

Geet: Ab baate banana bannd kijiye aur jaldi se hotel chaliye party k liye bhi toh jaana haina

Maan: Haan wo toh hai par'

Geet: Par kya Maan?

Without any warning he lifts her in his arms once again

Maan: Tumne mujhe doctor k saamne data na ab iski saza ye hai k main tumhe car tak apni baho mein lekar jaaunga

Geet: Maan aap'

Maan :Ab galti ki hai toh saza bhi milegi

He carries her to the car and then both of them return to their hotel

Their room

Geet: Party k liye main kya pehnu?

Maan comes and hugs her from behind and places a gift in front of her

She opens it. It was a beautiful black coloured net saree

Geet: Maan aapne ye kab khareeda?

Maan: Geet jab hum Golden temple jaa rahe the toh ek shop mein maine ye saree dekh lithi aur mujhe ye kafi pasand aayi aur issi wajah se main wapas gaya tha taaki main ye tumhare liye kareed saku

Geet: Maan aap mere liye kitna kuch karte ho aur main'

Maan :Bus Geet ab kuch nahi kahogi tum tum mere saath ho mujhe isse zyada aur kuch nahi chahiye chalo ab ye tai raha k shaam ki party mein tum yahi pehnogi

Geet nodded her head

Evening

Geet gets ready. This is the saree that Maan had gifted her

She complimented her look with matching earrings.

Maan also selected a black coloured suit

Both of them were looking like a perfect couple

Maan placed a kiss on her forehead

Maan : Geet tum iss saree mein bahut pyari lag rahi ho

Geet: Aapki di hui sare hai toh achhi toh lagungi hi na

Maan: Galat meri di hui cheez tab achhi bun jaathi hai jab wo tumhare paas aajathi hai

Geet: Toh Mr. Khurana ab party mein chale

Maan: Jaisi aapki khwaish madam

Both of them leave for the party

Mr. Maalik welcomes both of them. Maan was grabbing the attention of every girl and Geet was the center of attraction for the boys. But Maaneet were lost in their own world

Maan like a true gentleman offers a seat to his ladylove. He makes her comfortable

Maan gets a call from Adi and he excuses himself for 5 minutes as there was some signal problem

As soon as Maan left a man comes and requests Geet to dance with him. Geet politely declines his request. Some other men also try their luck but Geet goes on declining their request.

Finally someone places his hand in front of her eyes it was Maan

Maan: Can I have the pleasure to dance with the most beautiful girl of this world?

Geet started smiling and gives her hand in his. Maan kisses her hand and guides her to the dance floor

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2c4bB_sMCZY

MUSIC

Sholon si sholon si tere ankhon ki yeh roshni kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

chandni chandni, tere chere ki yeh chandni kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana

mere liye hai bas mere liye hai

sholon si sholon si tere ankhon ki yeh roshni kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

chandni chandni tere chere ki yeh chandini kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

Music

samjho mera joh ishara hai joh bhi hai mera woh tumhara hai

samjho mera joh ishara hai joh bhi hai mera woh tumhara hai

lehar mein koi hoon khoyi manzil toh hai tu kinara hai

yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein

tujhko pata hai sabh tere liye hai

sholon si sholon si meri ankhon ki yeh roshni tere liye hai tere liye hai

chandni chandni mere chere ki yeh chandni tere liye hai tere liye hai

MUSIC

haske dikha do deewane ko joh ho raha hai ho jane do

haske dikha do deewane ko joh ho raha hai ho jane do

dil ke uljhan zubaan pe ati hai toh aajane do

yeh hoton ki narmi yeh sanson ki garmi yeh hoton ki narmi yeh sanson ki garmi

mere liye hai bas mere liye hai

sholon si sholon si teri ankhon ki yeh roshni kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

chandni chandni tere chere ki yeh chandni kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana

mere liye hai bas mere liye hai

Everyone starts applauding

PRECAP: Maaneet leave for Delhi

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