-Dhundlae aks- MaaneetFF THREAD5 - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
maan is so naughty!
precap???...I just that misunderstanding will not be in between maan and geet!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love all your ff's// their amazing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute... 😊 i still do not like Prachi...hate her..!! And hate is a very strong emotion!! Waiting for the next Puchki Di!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz no mu bet maan n geet n agar mu ho toh it should b only related to love n bring dem closer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh...yaay!!! Waiting.. [:D/] 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoem udpate di
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet glared him.. for putting in such a spot.. & upper se grinning.. also making all that innocent innocent faces. GRRR .. she could just pounce at him.. & scratch his face. She looked at prachi & controlled her urge to strangle in.
their food order was ready.. prachi & Geet went to collect forgetting her phone on the table. her phone began to vibrate. Maan ignored the first few rings then.. well that was naughty Maan. He couldn't stop himself from peeping into the screen.. after all it was GEETS phone.. his curiosity increased .. seeing the caller named as hotty .. his eyes widened in shock,, he wanted to see more .. probably answer to know who the hell she named as hotty. His restlessness only multiplied.. seeing it vibrate again & again. He even reached the phone.. then looked up to be sure no one was watching.. only to meet a pair of eyes drilling at him.
He immediately looked at prachi .. nice phone na prachi
prachi smiled ' yah she has the thing for phones..
Maan gave another wicked grin to Geet .. chor bazar se le
prachi was taken a back with his question.. he thought that was rude..
immediately Maan corrected himself.. I mean iphone4 ka yel wala version india main nahi milta na
prachi was so now impressed with his general knowledge.. while Geet knew exactly wat he meant..

Geet snapped her phone from his hand when prachi didn't notice.
He resisted ..there was there little cat fight between them.. which prachi was oblivious to.


Geets phone vibrated again.. Geet immediately answered it.. haan karan
Maans face was worth looking at.. it turned all red & pissed !!! he crushed the drink glass in his hand & threw it away..
prachi jumped up.. wat happened.. ?
Maan didn't look up at her.. wo sorry.. it slipped from my hand.. he managed to say in composed tone
prachi passed his tray to him after calling the staff to clean it..
She began to eat her burger.. maans eyes where glued at Geet.. the way she was talking to him.. the smile on her face..
first she said no probably.. then looked at the watch..
then she took a deep breath & accepted.
She cut the call & checked something again in the phone walking back towards them.. she slowly spoke something in prachi's ears.. Maan immediately pretended not interested
prachi ' lekin yaar..aapne burger tho khalen
Geet glared at Maan.. let him have it.. waisen bhi he didn't get the cake
he gritted his teeth angrily
Geet said bye .. thanks for this lovely celebration
his eyes was blood red when he looked back at her.. for a min her steps froze .. was he angry again abt something. .. aab main ne kya galat kiya
where r u going? He asked in an authoritative voice..
prachi looked at up him.. he turned to look at prachi.. I mean where is she going?
Geet was already late.. she just left prachi to answer him
prachi ' she had to go
Maan clinched his fist ' tumse zaroori kya kaam hain
u did so much for her
u both r bestfrds for so many years
who is more impt than u?
Prachi ' aisen koi baat nahi Maan
Maan was not convinced.. he was dam pissed.. - this is so disrespectful. Wo tumhe samjthen kya hain
prachi had never seen him getting angry.. she didn't know whether to feel happy that he is concerned abt her.. or be scared.. that itni choti si baat ka he is creating a fuss.
Maan ' tum bahut bholi ho
I know where exactly she is going.

Prachi rolled her eyes ' where?
Maan ' I am sure she going to her BF wala Bday party
prachi ' BF???
Maan ' don't tell me u don't know?
Prachi ' no .. & how do u know
well that was smart question Maan thought.. but then this was Maan that too jealous & frustrated Maan.
I know Karan..
he has thrown a party for Geet
prachi ' & why didn't u tell me that before. I would have not planned all this
Maan - I didn't know that Geet & ur best friend Geet r the same
prachi was little taken a back.. why didn't Geet her abt this party thing
Maan rubbed it in further ' I am sure she gone to that party.. the whole college will be there.. its a big thing.. why would she like to be with us.. I mean u
prachi felt little hurt
Maan was still very irritated not knowing why did he hate the thought of her going to the party. Thats her life.. her BF.. dam the thought of Karan her BF..pinched him deep somewhere he just couldn't explain the feel. To add to his misery, he saw her stepping into Karan's car from the glass wall of the restaurant.
He turned his face away agonized.
precap
geets belated bday celebration in office.
-PREV PART 60 NEXT PART 62-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first,
too good muski
maan is upset that geet left
feeling j when she entered in karans car
and now started to poison prachis mind
will he come to know that geet is mistimia by coming to office
anyways geet will come to know that her future booss is jr khurana so he is her puchki
but waiting to see the expression of seeing maan as jr. khurana
go ahead fast


Edited by mishtib - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it dee..waiting for more...
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago

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