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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
curious to know
what will happen in next meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan o maan... rofl...
jealous of geet and karan when he himself is wid prachi... ufff yeh ladka
awesome update muski... so maan createf MU between geet and prachi and also has a MU but geet and karan
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Posted: 13 years ago

Maan was still very irritated not knowing why did he hate the thought of her going to the party. Thats her life.. her BF.. dam the thought of Karan her BF..pinched him deep somewhere he just couldn't explain. To add to his misery, he saw her stepping into Karan's car from the glass wall of the restaurant.
He turned his face away agonized.
He didn't even talk a word more. He just left from there continuing his upset stomach drama.

Next day when Geet came to office at her usual time.. yash stopped her.
Yash ' kal tumhara bday tha
she sweetly nodded
yash ' why didn't u tell me
she shied ..& a vague thought.. bikul maan sir ki tarah gussa hoten hain
then shook her head.. why r u even thinking abt him..
yash ' itna formally kyun behave karthi ho. U know u r like my daughter to me.
She chuckled .it was really special to her.. she always admired yash .. & he treating her like his daughter was definitely a grt deal.
They had the celebration like they have for their staff members.. & after the cake cut.. yash went into his cabin. The office assistant.. cut the cake into small pieces & gave it to every one at their desk.

Later on Geet came into yash's cabin with some files.. she was taken a back
sir aap ne cake nahi khaya?
he smiled
she felt odd.. & turned to leave
yash ' ek min.. tumhara bday cake hain, u should be feeding me..
she looked at him in shock.. hearing those words again.. almost in the same manner.. actually exactly same words.. same tantrums.. nahi nahi.. yash sir tantruns.. nahi.. she tried to reassure herself..

yash ' umm??
she snapped out of her thoughts & fed him nervously..
he grinned exactly like Maan & took the plate from her hand & relished it ..like it was the most amazing dessert he has ever had.
Geet ' sir main aur lavoon?
He smiled cutely ' I don't mind.
She went out.. cursing herself.. tu jab se usse Maan sir se milli hain.. pagal hi hogayen hain.. tujhe yash sir bhi uski tarah lag rahen hain.. she shook her head & hurriedly got another piece of cake for yash.


She knocked the door carefully & walked in with fresh piece of cake.. still confused at her own thoughts.
Yash sweetly presented her the bracelet
Geet ' wat is this sir?
Yash ' open it & see it for urself
Geet ' thanks ...sir I will open it at home
yash ' nahi ..open it now.. I want to see if u like it
Geet ' I will definitely like it.
Yash ' mujhe phen ke dikavo
Geet smiled & opened it.. she just loved the bracelet. Her eyes twinkled in awe.
Yash was happy she liked it so much... she didn't even have to say.. her expression said it all.
Yash ' glad u liked it
actually main ne cheating ki
Geet giggled at his cute talks
yash ' this was ur gift for topping... aur mujhe abhi pata challa ki tumhara bday hain
I didn't know wat to give
..
Geet ' thanks a lot sir..
main issen dono ke liyen smajh ke rahk longi
yash ' nahi aisen thodi .. I will definitely get u a different bday gift.
Geet ' nahi sir uski koi zarorat nahi, this itself is too much
yash snapped ' kaha na zarorat hain tho hain
she gulped. Hard.. yeh tho bilkul hi Maan sir ki tarah behave karten.. hain.. how can that be even possible.. she fluttered her lashes.. & looked down.
Lekin yash sir cares for me.. but that stupid idiot Maan sir.. hates me.. he can't even stand me..
she sat in her cabin.. whining.. why does he hate me so much.

Geet was leaving early today since Dev had asked for a bday treat. She managed to get NT for him.. so the trio planned to meet up in a restaurant for dinner. Dev had a meeting & he promised to join them directly in the chines restaurant. Geet dragged Nt & rushed to the lift. It was the usual evening office rush .. the whole lift was packed.. & suddenly the lift got stuck & stopped at a floor & the doors didn't open.. & light went off
Geet held nt's hand tightly.. giggling in fear..
his heart thudded anticipating .. he reached out, brushing a hand to her cheek...yet there was fear in his movements... no deceit in his desire. .. just an uncertainty.. wat if it is not.. The tempo of her heartbeat increased beneath his fingers the feel was sweet warm like the woman she is .. he knew . .. he knows

He beat back his intention to scream.. out for her, mistimia he said voicing the only word that came to mind. .. it was a whimper.. full of hope.. she was baffled.. unsure.. it was a kiosk in.. with every one panicking.. & screaming.. banging the walls of the lift.. someone trying to press the lift button. Maan tried to reach her.. again.. as her hand slipped away..he reached out for his phone.. he told every one to splash their phone.. so that it not pitch dark.. people tried to relax.. & followed his advice.. just then the lift person managed to open the lift door.. & people began to rush out..
he stood their trying to see each & every person closely.. Geet & Nt went out.. almost pushed out right at the begging. Geet stood their for sometime.. waiting to see every one who came out... she was not sure.. did she hear him .. even after the last person came out he didn't... her eyes scanned every person.. & left from there disappointed... may be she was wrong..
After she left.. the lift assistant looked at Maan... who was still standing lost in the corner ..sir
Maan sunk to the floor.. banging his head hard to the walls.. wat is it abt her..
why does he feel her near him..
dam.. he hated this restlessness that he suddenly feels from no where..this was maddening...paining..

precap
movie with prachi.. oops Geet tagged along
-PREV PART 61 NEXT PART 63-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
part 61:-

maan's jealousness is creating difference between two friends why can't he see that
but i like this cute naughty maan 😉

part 62:-

at last geet got the gift maan selected for her
i love how she was comparing yash with maan sir
& manage to set a dinner with NT & Dev
maan can only recognize his misthimia in dark
but whenever they are face to face they would
movie date with maan & prachi well geet

update

waiting for more

Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cant waiting for nxt part...pls update nxt part as soon as possibole...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loving it! Seriously can't get enough of this FF!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
office ka face off kab hoga muski
waiting for their nok jhok in off
you said it is a slow pace ff
seriously ur taking it slowly , turtle cn also b considerd to b faster than ur moving speed ( just joking this ff shold b slow pace)
looking ahead for next part
gn forr all ff readers

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dupate dear
loved it
OMG don't tell me yash also waited for geet to fed him the cake
plzzz update the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...loved it...waiting for new update... 😊

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