SURROGATE RELATIONS #5 part 39 updated(20/11) - Page 56

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bindu not fair..yaar y r u teasing? plzzz update na 😍
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Wow wat a awesome teaser...

Now waiting for an update..
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wow maan is making her crave for him intentionally 😉 😛
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Bindu - page 100 aya aur chala gaya but update abhi tak nahi aaya... kyon??? please update karo na
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sorry the net was acting up...and the power too was off ...give me another 15 mts...updating 🤗
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Originally posted by: bangalores

sorry the net was acting up...and the power too was off ...give me another 15 mts...updating 🤗


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PART 37

38. Tactics

The kiss became a burning memory in her thoughts in the days that followed. She remembered how hot and passionate yet tender his lips had felt against hers and how her whole body had tingled with reaction. It was a bold and thrilling experience, something she had never felt before, yet something in his kiss spoke of tenderness even vulnerability. Was it his words, seeking her permission? She wouldn't have denied him anything even if she had been able to talk because nothing had mattered but the need that the earth shattering experience should go on. When he drew away and thanked her, her eyes had turned moist with the profoundness of it.

As days passed to weeks she began to wonder it all that was just her imagination. Her body tingled in anticipation each time he came near her, each time his eyes focused on her lips. Yet he would just shift his eyes away whenever she caught his eyes on he. Why didn't he kiss her again? Had she disappointed him that he didn't want to repeat the experience?

But she so wanted to know if the memory of what she had felt were real or just a figment of her imagination...would she feel the same way if he kissed her again? It disappointed her that he didn't mean to kiss her. Yet how could she ask him if he could kiss her again? How do you hint to someone that she would like him to kiss her? She wished she could be like those bold heroines who featured in the romantic novels she had started to read for inspiration. Maan insisted that she take the afternoons off now that she was growing big with the baby. She often felt tired in the afternoons. But she didn't think she had that guts, how could she when she hid even the books from him.

She lay still not wanting to disturb his sleep, but the nagging ache in her back demanded that she adjust herself to a more comfortable position. It was sheer stupidity on her part, trying to move the chair by herself. She tried to move gently but couldn't control the moan that slipped by her. Maan woke up immediately.

"What happened?" concern etching his voice

" Nothing to worry about, it's just that my back is aching a bit." She added immediately in case Maan ferreted the truth out of her, "doctor said it is common since the baby is growing."

"Did she prescribe any medicine?" Maan moved to switch on the bedside lamp, leaving Geet relieved that she wouldn't get to hear an earful regarding her irresponsibility. Just the other day he had reprimanded her for running. She was grateful the semi darkness and the averted face had hidden the guilty color that stained her cheeks.

Maan came back with the ointment that she had been prescribed. But to her mortification he insisted on applying it for her.

"But Maan..."

"It will be easier if I do this, less strain on your back too. I will keep my eyes closed, all right?" he said in a voice that brooked no argument.his hands were gentle on her back. But he could feel the tension in her and decided to distract.

"I've been thinking Geet. I'm sure the baby is going to be sona."

"Oh! Why is that?" This topic always managed to draw Geet into an argument with him, he smiled.

"You said Shona is happy to hear my voice. Do you know why?"

"Why?"

" Because papa is the only one to recognize her. The whole day mamma addresses her as a boy, so my little angel is relieved that at least papa knows that she is a girl!"

His hands slowly warmed up her skin, as it rubbed down her back. He felt the tension leave her and her body relaxing under his hand. Her skin felt like silk, so smooth and warm. He pulled back his thoughts and concentrated on the task at hand.

He had magical hands, Geet thought as she leaned into his hands the pain was starting to ease and she was beginning to feel a different type of tingling in her nerves. Trying hard to distract herself, she pondered on his words. He seemed right. But she was not going to agree that aloud any way. " You know what Maan, I think you got that wrong. I feel Sonu is protesting with his kicks that his papa calls him a girl."

Now, that was a perfect explanation, Geet thought happily.

She heard Maan's chuckle and turned her head slightly to look at him to find his eyes closed. His care and consideration for her made her heart ache. She drew in a deep breath, fighting to control her impulse to declare her love for him.

"What happened Geet? Does it pain still?" He had felt her stiffen again.

His eyes fluttered as if he wished to open his eyes yet kept them closed because of his word to her.

"No, the pain has lessened. You can open your eyes Maan."

"Why?" he asked as he looked at her.

"You can stop now and because I trust you." she turned to place her hand on his cheek, "thank you Maan."

He turned his face slightly to press his lips on her palm in an open mouthed kiss. She drew in a breath again and tried to pull her hand away only to have him take hold it. His eyes held hers captive as he tickled her palm with his tongue. The feel of his caressing tongue send a shiver down her spine. An answering fire lighted in his eyes. His eyes never leaving hers, he trailed his mouth down to the pulse at the base of her hand. He nipped at the he gently nipped at the point and then proceeded to sooth the bite with caressing with his tongue and sucking gently creating a curling sensation at the pit of her stomach. She gasped, not entirely sure or confident about the sensations unfolding in her. his gaze shifted to her lips, making them burn as if he touched them. Thrilled to see the intention in his eyes and relieved that her wait was finally over, she swayed closer, her eyes closed in submission. But to her disappointment he moved away saying something about needing to wash his hand and bringing her hot water bag. The fact that his sound had turned uniquely husky, completely went unnoticed by her in her shock.

She night's incident confused Geet to no end. So when Maan decided that she was taking the day off, she wanted to argue at his high handedness.

"Why should I take a leave, today?" she glared.

"Didn't you have back ache at night?" he glared right back.

"So? It's gone now."

"You are still not coming."

"Maan...!"

"I can't stand to see you in discomfort!" She felt herself mellowing a bit at his words.

"But I take the afternoon off. I don't feel any pain now."

"I told you, na. You take rest."

"Can't I decide what I want to do?" The urge to stamp her foot was so great. "No, not this time. But I do give you the chance!" his voice turned mysterious.

"What?'

"Nothing, just thinking aloud." He bend to scoop her up in his arms and carried her back to bed.

"Maan..!"

"Now be a good girl and say bye."

"I will be so bored, Daadi too has some other plan." She knew she sounded like a petulant child.

"So read the book you have been hiding under the pillow."

"Oh!"

He reached over to take the book from under her pillow. "'She let out an exaggerated sigh. " I can do this the hard way or the easy way..." Geet scrambled on her knees to grab the book from him. He just deflected and read on. "... With your cooperation or without it. Either way I have no doubt I will get what we both want." She raised her hand and placed them on his bare chest.'" Maan looked at her mortified face, "I didn't know you read such stuff Geet."

" I ...I ..."

"Don't you know you have to be careful about what you read at this time? What will happen if our daughter gets influenced with such stuff? As it is I am sure I will have difficulty keeping the Romeos away." She raised her head to glare at him when he placed the book on the side table.

It's all your fault she wanted to scream.

"No come backs?" he teased. He tilted her head up to brush his thumb over her lips.

She closed her eyes as he moved closer anticipating his lips. But he just pressed one on her cheek and moved away. While she was still recovering from yet another disappointment, he called back from the door.

"Geet, can I borrow the book after I come back? I would like to know if she got what she wanted."

He chuckled and ducked as the pillow came zooming at him. She fumed as she could still hear his laughter as he went out of the room.

She was certainly displeased with her husband. Insensitive arrogant fool! Couldn't he even take the hint? What kind of a shrewd businessman was he? Couldn't he understand that she wanted him to kiss her? Hadn't she moved forward and offered herself for the kiss? There was that look in his eyes, that glint that came into them when he did something naughty. The one that made her pulse raise. Now what was she supposed to do? Did he expect her to do something? She had never expected to feel this way when she had got married. It was hardly a couple of months and she wished for a real marriage. Oh! How she wanted him to kiss her, to caress her...but ...a flash of an experienced pain interfered, the shock, the humiliation... no she could never...she ran her hand over her face, and bit her knuckles to hold back a sob... She wouldn't remember, she didn't want to...

She stood up, needing distraction.

"Come on, Sonu. Let's go find Rudr maamu.."

here is a song to go with Maan's mood...hey, Aashu another one of urs

Mm hmm hmm hmm, eh hey, la la la
Mujhe raat din, bas mujhe chaahti ho - 2
Kaho na kaho mujhko sab kuch pataa hai
Haan, karoon kya mujhe tum bataati nahin ho
Chhupaati ho mujhse yeh tumhaari khataa hai
Aa mujhe raat din, bas mujhe chaahti ho

Meri beqaraari ko had se badhaana
Tumhe khoob aata hai baatein banaana
Nigaahein milaake yun mera chain lena
Sataake mohabbat mein yun dard dena
Mujhe dekhke aise palkein jhukaana
Sharaarat nahin hai to phir aur kya hai
Aa mujhe raat din, bas mujhe chaahti ho

Tumhe neend aayegi ab na mere bin
Mujhe hai yakeen aisa aayega ek din
Khuli teri zulfon mein soya rahoonga
Tere hi khayaalon mein khoya rahoonga
Kabhi gaur se meri aankhon mein dekho
Meri jaan tumhaara hi chehraa chhupaa hai
Aa mujhe raat din, bas mujhe chaahti ho
Kaho na kaho mujhko sab kuch pataa hai
Haan, karoon kya mujhe tum bataati nahin ho
Chhupaati ho mujhse yeh tumhaari khataa hai
Aa mujhe raat din, bas mujhe chaahti ho
Mm, hmm hmm hmm, eh hey, la la la

https://www.raaga.com/play/?id=717


PART 39 on Pg119

sorry for the delay ...as i said the net and the power supply was conspiring against me😭...just hope i can post this without further ado...😃 PMs at night😊
so how was it? ur comments...suggestions...😃😃


Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part bindu dee... so maans tricks are working on her...poor geet... this maan is really naughty... continue soon pls... and yay am the first here today😊
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab kya hoga??
go geet go take initiative urself.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update!!!

This was more of the inner conflict and desire of Geet...

Totally loved it... omg.. she is actually reading romeo story... 😆 and the massage scene... 😳😳😳😳...

Maan has become totally naughty... uff he is making her yearn for a kiss...

and iam loving their fight over the gender of the baby...

they are so cute...

and the song from sangharsh is one of my all time favorites... beautiful lyrics... thanks to u and ashu for suggesting it

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