Thank you for the constant encouragement and support. I am really sorry this time I couldn't reply to your comments.
Here is the next update and this update has a mini SR of Maaneet well I am not good in such scenes and this is the first time that I am writing a SR scene so please do let me know what do u feel about the update so that I can rectify my mistakes in the actual SR which would be after the marriage
This time I have given a simple explanation but in the actual SR I would be using a song sequence as well
Any type of critisism or suggestion is always welcome
Love- Piya
PART 50
Director: Cut...cut...
Maan gets up
Maan: Chup bilkul chup ab koi kuch nahi bolega
Director: Kyun nahi bolega?
Maan gives the director his typical MSK look
The director starts trembling
Maan starts walking towards the stage
Rohit was still holding Geet's hand
Maan gave him a killer look
He immediately left her hand and moved aside
Geet was trying to make Maan jealous but she never expected him to come on the stage
She very well knew his anger. He was Maan only for his closed ones but for the rest of the world he was MSK and no one dared to cross his path
Rohit was already on the verge of fainting and from the director's face it was evident that he could get a heart attack at any moment
She was just amazed by Maan's personality...
But right now she herself was confused what would be Maan's next move.
By that time Maan comes and holds her hand and gently caresses it
Geet gives him a questioning look but Maan only smiled in return
Maan: Aaj main tumse apni zindagi ka sabse bada sach kehne jaa raha hoon...main nahi jaanta k tum meri baat ka yakeen karogi bhi ya nahi
Maan kisses her hand
Maan: Main ek maamuli insaan hoon isliye chand taare todne ki baate nahi karunga...kyunki mera maanna hai jo logh aapke dil par hukumat karte hai unse koi bhi jhooth nahi kehna chahiye
While saying this he places her hand near his heart
Maan: Iss dil par toh humesha se hi tum hi tum samayi hui thi aur aaj tumhe apne dil k itne kareeb paakar mere dil ki dhadkane aur bhi tez ho gayi hai
He kisses the fingertips of her hand and moves closer
Maan: Main nahi jaanta k mujhe dekhkar tumhari dhadkano par bhi yahi asar hotha hai k nahi par aaj main ye haqeekat tumhe batana chahtha hoon
He caresses her face and gently bends her head a little and places it on his chest so that she could hear his heartbeats
Maan: K meri har dhadkan bus tumhara hi naam lethi hai...
Geet starts smiling
He lifts her face and places a kiss on her forehead
Maan: Main wo parwana nahi hoon jo k tumhari mohabat mein fanna ho jaaye...haan aaj iss baat ka ikrar karta hoon mujhe maut se darr lagta hai
Geet looks at him lovingly
Maan kisses those magical eyes of hers
Maan: Kyunki agar mujhe maut k panah mein jana pade toh main tumse humesha k liye dur ho jaayunga... aur tumse judaa hona mujhe dawara nahi
He goes and stands behind her and kisses her earlobe
Maan: Haan main darta hoon tumhe khone se... main darta hoon k tum kahi meri aakhon se itni dur na chali jau k main roshni mein bhi tumhe dhoond na saku...
Maan: Main wo parwana nahi jo k ye dawe kare k hum falak par apna aashiyaan banayenge
He hugs her passionately from behind and placed his head on her shoulder
Maan: Ye sab toh dhikawe ki baate hai aur mera pyar koi dhikhawa nahi hai... mera pyar mere liye kisi ibadat se kum nahi...
Maan: maine jab kabhi bhi apna sar jhuka ke rab se koi dua ki hai toh uss dua mein bus tumhi ko maanga hai...tumhari khushiyoon ko maanga hai
He kissed her shoulder and held her waist tightly
Maan: Main nahi jaanta k meri aashiqui ko tum kya naam dogi... ek paagal samajkar tum mujhe bhool sakthi ho par agar ek baar bhi main tumhare dil par dastak de paaya toh uss khushi mein main apni puri zindagi bita saktha hoon
He rubbed his face on her face
Maan: Main jaanta hoon k meri aukaad nahi k main tumhe paa saku par phir bhi aaj ye gustaki kar raha hoon shayad iss batkismat ki zindagi ko uski kismat mil jaaye
Maan once again comes and stands in front of her and looks directly into her eyes
Maan: Bus ek haan keh dho dubara tumse koi farmaaish nahi karunga puri zindagi tumhara gulam bankar bitadunga par mere jazbaatho ko ek mazak samajkar hawa mein uda mat dena
Maan: Iss dil k hazar tukde ho jaayenge aur unn tukdo mein bhi bus tumhari hi parchahi nazar aayegi jo k mujhe ye ehsaas dila degi k main tumhare layak kabhi tha hi nahi
Maan: Bus ek baar haan kehdo bhale hi wo jhooth hi kyun na ho kum se kum ye tasali toh rahegi k ek jannat ki pari ne kuch pal k liye hi sahi mujh jaise mamuli insaan k baare mein socha toh sahi
By this time Geet had tears in her eyes
Maan: Shayad mera pyar iss duniya k liye koi mayane na rakhe ...shayad tum bhi mujhe thukradho par aaj main tumse ye baat zarur kahunga...
Mohabbat k har rang mein tumhari hi jhalak hai
Fizayon k har andaaz mein bus tumhari hi adaa hai
Jasbaatho k har aaiyne mein bus tumhari hi parchayi hai
Saso ki har behti leh mein bus tumhari hi khushboo hai
Dhadkano k har lahu mein bus tumhari hi chap hai
Zindagi k har khatte meethe pal mein bus tumhara hi sahara hai
Tumhare bagair naa hi main kuch tha aur naa hi kuch ban saktha hoon
Aaj main tumhe apne liye maang raha hoon jaanta hoon khudgarz hoon par aaj apni kismat ko aazma raha hoon
Maan kneels down and takes her hand in his and kisses it
Maan: I love u
Geet immediately hugs him and they get lost in each other's embrace
They come out of the hug after hearing the applauding sound. All the artists including the director were praising their love
The director comes on the stage
Director: Ab agar aapki ijazat ho toh main kuch kahu?
Maan nodded his head in approval
Director: Kya aap iss play mein hero ka role play karenge?
Maan: Jaha bhi Geet hogi uska hero sirf aur sirf MSK hi hoga main ye play zarur karunga par filhaal main Geet ko lekar jaa raha hoon
Director: Ji sure par kal zarur aa jaiyega rehersal k liye
Maan: Sure
Saying so he takes Geet and goes away
Maan was sitting silently throughout the ride
Geet noticed that Maan was still upset but she decided to talk to him once they reach KM
Khurana Mansion
Geet: Maan aap naaraz ho
Maan did not say anything he walked to his room
Geet: Maan kya hua kuch toh bataiye abhi toh itne romantic the aur abhi phir se gussa dikh rahe ho mujhse koi galthi ho gayi kya?
Maan: Tumne ye jaanbujhkar kiyana?
Geet: Kya?
Maan: Wahi mujhe jealous feel karwane ki koshish
Geet: hmm...toh janab ko jealousy ho rahi thi ofho Maan wo toh bus ek play tha wo thodina mujhe real mein propose kar raha tha
Maan held her tightly by her shoulder
Maan:Natak ho ya haqeekat main tumhe kabhi bhi kisi aur k saath nahi dekh saktha tum yahi sunna chahthi thina toh haan ye sach hai k main tumhe lekar possessive hoon...tum mera junoon ho aur tumpar sirf mera haq hai samjhi tum
Geet encircled her arms around his neck
Geet: Nahi samjhi par samajna chahthi hoon
Maan did not understand what she wanted to say
Geet looked at him lovingly
Geet: Aaj mujhe humeasha k liye apna bana dijiye Maan kuch aisa kijiye k chahkar bhi hume koi judaa na kar sake
Geet: Mark me with your love today...claim me forever
Maan: Par Geet...
Geet: Nahi Maan aaj na aap khud ko rokhenge aur naahi main apne aapko...
She took his lips within hers and started kissing it passionately. Maan too responded to the kiss very soon. He entered her mouth and started relishing it. He was exploring every corner of her mouth and very soon their tongues were enjoying a battle that ended in a draw since both of them were gasping for air
But it was not long before Maan once again captured her lips and started nibbling it and biting it. He once again demanded an entry which Geet happily allowed
Without breaking the kiss Maan scooped Geet in his arms and placed her on the bed
He continued kissing and adjusted himself properly on top of her
His one hand went underneath her top and started massaging her br***t
Geet moaned his name in pleasure and this further increased his passion
He left her lips and started licking her neck with his tongue
Geet moved her head to give him better access
His lips started showering her with kisses on her shoulder and her neck while his hand were busy fondling her curves
He could not take it any longer and slowly his teeth made way to her shirt and started unbuttoning it
As he was unbuttoning her shirt he started relishing her back with his second hand while with the other he continued playing with her ni****s
Geet was already wet and the passion that Maan was generating was taking her to a completly new world
She pulled him more closer but by that time Maan's hand had reached the hook of her bra
He lifted her slightly and removed her shirt and threw it on the floor
Geet hugged him tightly and started biting him on his shoulder
Maan could feel her softness and since she was breathing heavily her chest was moving in a rhythmic fashion which was making it more difficult for Maan
He pines her to the bed again and started observing her beautiful form carefully
Geet could not meet his burning gaze and just closed her eyes in response
Maan started trailing his fingers... he started with her face... from there he reached her neck he played with the hollow of her neck for a while giving her a tickling sensation
He then moved to her shoulder and slid the strap of her bra and sensually started touching her bare hand. He repeated this with the other hand as well
Geet was breathing heavily
Maan was observing the rhythmic patterns of her chest shamelessly
He touched the valley of her chest passionately sending shivers throughout her body
His hands now started moving towards her br***ts. He touched her ni***e which made Geet to moan his name
This moaning of hers added fuel to the fire and he pinced her nipple Geet curled her toes in response
He then squeezed her br***ts Geet could not take it any longer and she tored his shirt with her hands and pulled him closer and turned him so that now she was on top of Maan
She started kissing him madly all over his face and started biting him on his shoulder and his chest
While Geet was torturing Maan... his hands reached the hook of her bra once again and he unclasped the hook in one go and with a single move he once again trapped geet underneath him
He took her lips within his and started kissing her passionately
He then left her lips and very soon his lips followed the same path that his fingers had followed few moments back
He kissed her neck...and licked the hollow in between her collarbones and then her shoulder...and her chest.
His tongue made way to the valley of her chest and he bit her just above her cleavage
He cupped her br****s with his hands but did not remove her bra.
He started licking her ni****s which were now erect due to his touch
Geet pulled him more closer demanding more. She was digging her nails on his back
Maan finally decided to remove the hurdle that was stopping him to examine her beauty fully
He threw the bra on the floor and then suddenly his eyes lits up
Geet closed her eyes once again but her cheeks were completly red
Maan once again took her curves within his mouth and slightly pinched the area lying close to her belly button
After a while his lips travelled down to her waist and he started showering her with his love in the form of kisses... he gently bit the area near her belly button
He then turned her around and started relishing her back. He kissed every part of her exposed back while with his other hand he continued massaging her br****s
Both of them were completly drowned in passion but somewhere or the other Maan knew that he had to stop they just could not cross their limits
He turned her around and kissed her passionately once again...
The kiss only deepened with every passing moment.
Finally they ended the kiss and Maan kissed Geet on her forehead and eyes and took her in his embrace
Maan: U r beautiful Mishty. I love U
Geet: I love u too my Possesive lover
There was a smile on their face and they rested in peace in each other's embrace
Finally completed this part. So how was it guys was it worth the 50th part? I am really sorry if I could not live upto ur expectations I will be waiting for your comments do let me know what do u feel abt today's update
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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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