Hum Aapke Hain Kaun (3) [Epi. Pg.124]

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What can I say about this fan fic?

This is the story of Maan and Geet. Maan's betrayal to Geet...crushing her hopes, dreams, trust in one moment over ego. This is the story of Geet coping with her past with her son Ayushman (Ayush). He is her savior, her life, her only will to live. What happened in the past? What Maan did? Well read the previous chapters to find out. 😆😆
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Chapter 27

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Geet turns around and begins walking away from him. She hugged herself tighter trying to keep her emotions in.
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
She turns around to look at him. He smiles and walks toward her with a smile. He holds her hand and twirls her toward him. She bangs against his chest and looks at him...He moves the hair strand from her face...
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
She comes out of his hug and begins walking away. Maan comes and stands in front of her..he goes down on his knee and holds her hand.
Meri jaan mere dilbar,
mera aitbaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
He pulls her down
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo

He places her hand on his heart...both look at each other...Ayush comes from behind..she falls on his lap. Ayush claps his hands. Geet gets up from his lap and holds Ayush's hand before walking away from him. Maan gets up and follows her holding a flower. They all sat down on the blanket as Geet serves Ayush. She looks at Maan who was staring at her. She turns away...trying to focus her mind on Ayush. She looks down when she felt a weight on her lap. She saw Maan putting his head on her lap...as Ayush feeds him. Maan takes one bite from his hand and brings it toward Geet. He sits in front of her holding the food. She slowly comes near him taking the bite.

Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Aa aa aa aa aa...
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
Aa aa aa aa aa...
Meri jaan mere dilbar,
mera aitbaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo
Aa aa aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa aa - 2
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse

She gets up and walks away as Ayush plays by himself. Maan comes and holds the flower in his hand in front of her. She looks at him and then the flowers. Slowly she brings out her hand to reach for the flower but Maan caught her hand and twirled her toward him.

Tum jo kehdo to chaand taron
ko tod laaoonga main
In hawaaon ko, in ghataaon
ko mod laaoonga main

He holds her face with his hands..and wipes away the tears from her eyes...she moves his hands and walks away holding the flower tightly.
Ho, tum jo kehdo to chaand taron
ko tod laaoonga main
In hawaaon ko, in ghataaon
ko mod laaoonga main

She turns around to look at Maan and then at Ayush playing happily.
Kaisa manzar hai meri aankhon mein,
kaisa ehsaas hai
Paas darya hai door sehra hai,
phir bhi kyoon pyaas hai

Maan hugs her from the back. She looks at him...and was about to walk away but he holds her arm. He looks at her with anger and love in his eyes. He wanted her...he was trying..he just needed one more chance. He wanted to make it up to her for everything. He kisses her lightly on her lips...She comes out of his grip and runs away.
Kadmon mein jahan yeh rakhdoon,
mujhse aankhen chaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo

Aa aa aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa aa
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat ho gayi hai tum se

(Hey, hey hey hey, aah ha haa ha ha haa
Hey, hey hey hey, aah ha haaa)

She runs on top of the hill as fast as she could. Her marriage, her past, her kid everything came in front of her eyes. She wanted to forget but couldn't. She wanted to forgive but couldn't. She wanted to be happy but couldn't. What was she here for? Her happiness, her life, trust, everything was snatched away from her. She sits on her knee thinking about Maan. She smiles thinking about their happy moments soon it vanished. She looks toward Maan who was walking toward her...

Meri yaadon mein,
mere khwaabon mein roz aate ho tum
Is tarah bhalaa meri jaan mujhe kyoon sataate ho tum
Aa haa haa aa aa ha haa haa -
Ho..meri yaadon mein,
mere khwaabon mein roz aate ho tum
Is tarah bhalaa meri jaan mujhe kyoon sataate ho tum

Maan stands in front of her. He pulls her up...he spins her around...he holds both of her hands pulling her toward him...she wanted to get out of his grip...he hugs her tightly...she just looks at him. He gets down on his knee and hugs her holding her stomach. He hides his face gently kissing her stomach. She closes her eyes. Lightly, touching his head...feelign him...she opens her eyes when she felt something went...she sits on her knee...looking at Maan. She saw tears in his eyes...

Teri baahon se,
teri raahon se yun na jaaoonga main
Yeh iraada hai,
mera waada hai laut aaoonga main
Duniya se tujhe churaloon,
thoda intezaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo
Tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo

She looks at his face...and brings out her hand to wipe the tears away. Maan looks at her with a sad smile. She looks at the tear drop in her hand. Maan hugs her hiding her face in her neck...
Kaise aankhen chaar karloon,
kaise aitbaar karloon
Apni dhadkano ko kaise,
itna beqaraar karloon
Kaise tujhko dil main dedoon,
kaise tujhse pyaar karloon

Geet was about to hug him when Ayush face flashed before her face. No...she can't be doing this again...can she trust him again? Can she? She pushes him a little and begins walking away...Maan follows her...
Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
Meri jaan mere dilbar, mera aitbaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main, khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho, tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo
Tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo

He holds her face and kisses her on her lips with full force...she opens her eyes and looks at him shocked. She pushes him away a little...Maan brings out his hand toward her...but she stops him...

"Don't...for how long do I have to go through this pain? It hurts whenever you are near me. Your presence bring back all the memories that I want to forget. I can't do this anymore. I sacrificed so much already. What more do you want? I don't have it in me anymore to fight...I am tired..I just want to rest...she runs away from him leaving Maan confused and shocked...
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The next day Geet saw Maan holding his luggage...he puts it in front of her and him. He goes past her toward Ayush...

Ayush: Papa are you going somewhere?

Maan: Yeah I am going on a business tour for a month or so. I hope you won't have any problems while I am away. (Geet looks at him. She knew that he was hinting toward her...)

Ayush: Bring me back some gifts

Maan (smiles and kisses him) Okay I will. I promise. (He looks at Geet before walking away with his suitcase. She wanted to stop him but couldn't. She watched him leave without looking back once...)

Note: Okay guys am confused as to where to take the story forward. Any ideas?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTERS:

Thread 1

Thread 2

Current: Thread 3
Chapter 27 (above)
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread




wonderful part 27

me love this song & this movie

& it suited with maneet's current situation 👏

am feeling bad for both maan n geet 😒

want geet to give chance to maan but remembering the things he did to geet want him suffer
more
am confused what i want 😕

Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz for the new thread.
Woah the song matches a lot :D
Poor Geet she doesnt know what to do :o
Maan going away :(
Cant wait for more :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on your new thread simi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updt
just luvd it
omg they kissed awww
maan is trying so hard
but geet too cant cum out of her past due to the fear
luvd each of their scene together
wat a choice of song yaar just luvd it totally matching to d situation
i hope geet stops him
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats!!! maan has to keep on trying :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats

See Geet just have two choice either give maan second chance or go away from him n move ahead ... Will she able to see maan with someone else? If yes than she shouldn't have problem with maan presence ... But if no then she should give maan second if not for her then for Ayush... Am I making sense? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great ! .. mila do in dono ko
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo shongo my dear on the new thread.

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